STRANGE RELATIONSHIP
Great reading...quite intriguing
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Wednesday, October 31, 2007
Tuesday, October 30, 2007
Sunday, October 28, 2007
rizalbob
ON DUST I SIT FRIGHTENED
Yes indeed, where are we heading - with all the human sufferings, senseless killings and wars?
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Yes indeed, where are we heading - with all the human sufferings, senseless killings and wars?
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Goldy Locks
PATH OF DESTINY
Stellar: words, imagery. non-truth/false beacon ~ flaunt its devious exposure.
best care, sjg
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Stellar: words, imagery. non-truth/false beacon ~ flaunt its devious exposure.
best care, sjg
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Saturday, October 27, 2007
izzipoetry, sylvie
DEATH IS NOT A CEREMONY
izzipoetry
Deep and very powerful.""Slowly, dark breast of night will feed the moon' tell me more about thess lines.
sylvie
The inner workings of the mind are a mystery in a way. We are forever searching for the meanings of life, for the why of things, for the knowledge that will set us free. This is thought provoking, and has a lot of depth.
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izzipoetry
Deep and very powerful.""Slowly, dark breast of night will feed the moon' tell me more about thess lines.
sylvie
The inner workings of the mind are a mystery in a way. We are forever searching for the meanings of life, for the why of things, for the knowledge that will set us free. This is thought provoking, and has a lot of depth.
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sylvie
CANNOT FIND THE DOOR
Thought provoking ... again your inagery is so creative. Life can bem a hard judge ... great write.
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Thought provoking ... again your inagery is so creative. Life can bem a hard judge ... great write.
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sylvie
O GOD ARE YOU LISTENING?
I can really feel the strong emotions within these lines. Great rhythm and imagery brings this to life.
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I can really feel the strong emotions within these lines. Great rhythm and imagery brings this to life.
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Louie Limosani
VOYAGE
Good work here, like the images in this poem.
Cheers
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Good work here, like the images in this poem.
Cheers
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Thursday, October 25, 2007
Amita Singh
MISSING PORTRAIT
Wow, very capturing lines to describe the wrong the not so good things of life
My fingers are burnt, my poem bleeds
give me some water, some real cool.
Lake is on fire, god is on run.
Clouds are empty and sun is an abstract.
Frame is broken, portrait missing.
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Wow, very capturing lines to describe the wrong the not so good things of life
My fingers are burnt, my poem bleeds
give me some water, some real cool.
Lake is on fire, god is on run.
Clouds are empty and sun is an abstract.
Frame is broken, portrait missing.
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Earthborn
Message from Earthborn
going through your work. Amazing. I really need to concentrate on the totality. Amazing!
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going through your work. Amazing. I really need to concentrate on the totality. Amazing!
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Wednesday, October 24, 2007
Goldy Locks
WAYWARD SON
what description. what power. Nothing wayward about your poems. They are direct, wise, and billowing with awesome substance.
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what description. what power. Nothing wayward about your poems. They are direct, wise, and billowing with awesome substance.
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Goldy Locks
FEAR
you proceed logically and scientifically. with your thoughts, yes? But there's always a level of intuitiveness. Where your insight rests.
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you proceed logically and scientifically. with your thoughts, yes? But there's always a level of intuitiveness. Where your insight rests.
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Tuesday, October 23, 2007
Goldy Locks
EUTHANASIA
too much Nip/tuck?
The debt of ashes
was climbing up.
Clouds outside,
clouds inside. .. .. ... ....nice.
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too much Nip/tuck?
The debt of ashes
was climbing up.
Clouds outside,
clouds inside. .. .. ... ....nice.
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Goldy Locks
WAKING UP
Malibu is up in flames. Denver is getting snow. Crazy/mixed-up world. Insomnia feeds that [notion/delusion] with its removal from reality.
Heart will toss the words in silence
and I will lit the blue flame in stillness. .. ... . .. . . ... . enjoyed, sjg
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Malibu is up in flames. Denver is getting snow. Crazy/mixed-up world. Insomnia feeds that [notion/delusion] with its removal from reality.
Heart will toss the words in silence
and I will lit the blue flame in stillness. .. ... . .. . . ... . enjoyed, sjg
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Goldy Locks
LISTEN ………………………
start with a bang! finish with a bang! well conceived. ~~sjg
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start with a bang! finish with a bang! well conceived. ~~sjg
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Goldy Locks
THE KISS ……………….
Death is so sexy with its provoking green eyes!
Stellar lines, composed with care, temperance. ~
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Death is so sexy with its provoking green eyes!
Stellar lines, composed with care, temperance. ~
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Monday, October 22, 2007
Nelson Nieves
NATIVE TOUCH
Such command of the language, wonderful, write on
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Such command of the language, wonderful, write on
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Sunday, October 21, 2007
Thursday, October 18, 2007
meonomous , Earthborn
CHARITY
meonomous
It cuts to the very heart and marrow of this issue, and places sit in a context
Earthborn
brilliant.dialogue with death.verse two very interesting.
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meonomous
It cuts to the very heart and marrow of this issue, and places sit in a context
Earthborn
brilliant.dialogue with death.verse two very interesting.
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Buchi
CHARITY
This terrible life ejets you', and the rest of this poem brings to mind disturbing questions.
What really has life as we live it offered but trouble and i agree with; Dying is the appropriate thing; a festival of freedom for veils.
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This terrible life ejets you', and the rest of this poem brings to mind disturbing questions.
What really has life as we live it offered but trouble and i agree with; Dying is the appropriate thing; a festival of freedom for veils.
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Wednesday, October 17, 2007
Earthborn
DEMISE
be /beside you/ to watch the demise/.Such power compressed in these few words.The imagery is very carefully designed to ellicit from us the feelings of the poet. good write.
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be /beside you/ to watch the demise/.Such power compressed in these few words.The imagery is very carefully designed to ellicit from us the feelings of the poet. good write.
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POETICA
SELF ? PORTRAIT
A descriptive view of a contemplating mind in discord with itself and the effects of life. Great write!
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A descriptive view of a contemplating mind in discord with itself and the effects of life. Great write!
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Earthborn
DEMISE
poewhit
Stress can cause much, and may be a motivator or stimulus of the final outcome.
Earthborn
be /beside you/ to watch the demise/.Such power compressed in these few words.The imagery is very carefully designed to ellicit from us the feelings of the poet. good write.
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poewhit
Stress can cause much, and may be a motivator or stimulus of the final outcome.
Earthborn
be /beside you/ to watch the demise/.Such power compressed in these few words.The imagery is very carefully designed to ellicit from us the feelings of the poet. good write.
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Amita Singh
TO BE NOTHING
Very well written poem Satish, its a beautiful depiction of what a lot of us go through and the emotions which are very rarely shared.
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Very well written poem Satish, its a beautiful depiction of what a lot of us go through and the emotions which are very rarely shared.
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Goldy Locks
BROODING SILENTLY
a reflection. well-penned! Colors, imagery, insight... and that's what it's about.
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a reflection. well-penned! Colors, imagery, insight... and that's what it's about.
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Goldy Locks
BLACK WALLS
Amazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzing~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! To the astronomical power
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Amazzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzing~! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! To the astronomical power
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Goldy Locks
ANOTHER JOURNEY
wanted a couple more stanzas. loose ends, here. ~~sjg
Time avenges, burns the grass,
the lips, the retina,
the black walls and white numbers. .......| Great.
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wanted a couple more stanzas. loose ends, here. ~~sjg
Time avenges, burns the grass,
the lips, the retina,
the black walls and white numbers. .......| Great.
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Goldy Locks
ECLAMPSIA
Last stanza did it for me. Nah, the whole thing did.
best care,
sjg
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Last stanza did it for me. Nah, the whole thing did.
best care,
sjg
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Meriki Parkinson\fraser
…… OF HUMANITY
Very strong & thought provoking Satish.
I love the undertone of, 'spiritual warrior'.
Thanks for sharing,
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Very strong & thought provoking Satish.
I love the undertone of, 'spiritual warrior'.
Thanks for sharing,
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Tuesday, October 16, 2007
esroddo
SELF ? PORTRAIT
Wow that was super powerful and intriguing write You are amazing writer. I really enjoyed this piece LISA
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Wow that was super powerful and intriguing write You are amazing writer. I really enjoyed this piece LISA
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Goldy Locks
I SEE MY OWN DEMISE
not an explanation of human sorrow, but rather a vigorously crafted embodiment of its existence. Well done,
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not an explanation of human sorrow, but rather a vigorously crafted embodiment of its existence. Well done,
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Goldy Locks
Satish's poems are loaded. They astound. Wrap your mind around his lines for this guy has lived intently, intensely and has much to share, teach.
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Monday, October 15, 2007
Earthborn
Message from Earthborn
your usual flowing style. the transient nature of life, regrets about ageing, all very poignantly out by imagery and very simple diction.
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your usual flowing style. the transient nature of life, regrets about ageing, all very poignantly out by imagery and very simple diction.
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expression
Message from expression
There is a very thin invisible line between sanity and insanity and those obsessed by self love and ego often trip over the dividing line and fall into insanity zone. Then there is no difference between the two, rest of the life they struggle to convince that their insanity is sanity but in vain!!!
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There is a very thin invisible line between sanity and insanity and those obsessed by self love and ego often trip over the dividing line and fall into insanity zone. Then there is no difference between the two, rest of the life they struggle to convince that their insanity is sanity but in vain!!!
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Genevieve
NO AND YES
When caught between truth and lies, but the former would hurt and the latter would make your world ---would you choose the latter at the expense of the former? A challenge to one's sensibility though. Nicely done!
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When caught between truth and lies, but the former would hurt and the latter would make your world ---would you choose the latter at the expense of the former? A challenge to one's sensibility though. Nicely done!
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Goldy Locks
ETERNAL CUDDLE
Age is abating, abattoir is empty.
[...]
I am afraid the flames will engulf,
the genius of pathways. ....| well said, keep on.
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Age is abating, abattoir is empty.
[...]
I am afraid the flames will engulf,
the genius of pathways. ....| well said, keep on.
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Goldy Locks
VALLEY OF TEARS
daring punctuation. i love it. your closing lines could be a little stronger, unless you're going for a reference/indication to the title. `where centuries throw the dust on your hallowed gifts.' excellent placement...
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daring punctuation. i love it. your closing lines could be a little stronger, unless you're going for a reference/indication to the title. `where centuries throw the dust on your hallowed gifts.' excellent placement...
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Goldy Locks
COUNTDOWN
better, actually. intriguing & perplexing. keep on, sjg
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better, actually. intriguing & perplexing. keep on, sjg
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Goldy Locks
SHOCK THE GARDEN
`Dark and eternal, in all its purity
punishment becomes an award for life.' .... blind truths, seldom seen, must unveil.
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`Dark and eternal, in all its purity
punishment becomes an award for life.' .... blind truths, seldom seen, must unveil.
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Wednesday, October 10, 2007
Kee Thampi
OF GODS AND VIRGINS
A pen of golden verse
Melting to start a romance
in the house of petals,
of fragrant pheromones
deluging the phoenix.
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A pen of golden verse
Melting to start a romance
in the house of petals,
of fragrant pheromones
deluging the phoenix.
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Tuesday, October 9, 2007
Sunday, October 7, 2007
Marilyn Lott
BELL’S PALSY
So many sad illness in the world and this is certainly one of them.
So well put. God bless you!
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So many sad illness in the world and this is certainly one of them.
So well put. God bless you!
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Saturday, October 6, 2007
Ariel Escalona
NO ANSWER
great...what question then will i ask...when even the sun cant tell where is the moon....
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great...what question then will i ask...when even the sun cant tell where is the moon....
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Friday, October 5, 2007
Kee Thampi
LONE JOURNEY
The real poems makes a transfix of love of soul..
here this poet really made it with a myriad power of writes
An owl on a branch
looks straight, flaps
flies away.
this is not a sexton and not his bells
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The real poems makes a transfix of love of soul..
here this poet really made it with a myriad power of writes
An owl on a branch
looks straight, flaps
flies away.
this is not a sexton and not his bells
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