Tuesday, July 30, 2013

The Tragic Intimacy

I learn alot from you Ma'am your poetic prose just...wow grab me all the time really it does...thank you so much for sharing your wonderful talent on this site.- Kaylanna George

It is always behind the mind that I see.- leafsailor

Sunday, July 28, 2013

Saturday, July 27, 2013

Friday, July 26, 2013

Catch a Butterfly

Very profound and full of imagery. Catching butterflies is useful : )- leopardmcewan

Thursday, July 25, 2013

ARTFUL PINCERS

This poem is an enticing fortress. Penetrable? Maybe after another go – or three.- Tyler E Stuart

Wednesday, July 24, 2013

Blind Walls

So much going on here, I wish I could decipher all this and put all the lines together to get the complete meaning.-LightH2O

Monday, July 22, 2013

SCHISM

THE STINK

Boy, this poem really STINKS, Satish !l o l! The stink and stench of eccentric , quality contemporary free-verse, that is...!Love the pomegranate blasts...Beyond creative- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR

Thursday, July 18, 2013

VIOLENCE UNKIND

So. Very. True. What a pity that humanity's greatest power & ability is hypocrisy, rather than choice. Well presented here.- Drake Eszes

MY QUESTIONS

Unproven auguries - nicely worded- Some Girl

Wednesday, July 17, 2013

SKY WEEPS

on a trajectory of truth within the eternity of larger boundary. ........................supplementary!- nimal p. dunuhinga

Monday, July 15, 2013

SCENT WILL BE BURIED

I have been reading quite a lot of your poems...and Ma'am you are a true poetess...you have inspired me... your writes...thank you Ma'am for your daily posting...I know I dont have to encourage you..you just do...hope you have a great day Ma'am.- Kaylanna George

INCONTINENCE

Always with such innovative and original ideas. You're an original and I appreciate you.- LightH2O

BETWEEN TWO CENTURIES

Amazing lines which challenge the mind. Have a wonderful day my dear friend.- LightH2O

Saturday, July 13, 2013

Thursday, July 11, 2013

Wednesday, July 10, 2013

JUXTAPOSED

To God all life is precious...surely He abhors bloody atrocities more than you or i can even fathom...these are man's choices. Those who truly follow Jesus would never shed blood, for God asks us to forgive and turn the other cheek. Not all men however choose God or His ways..

Your poem seems to depict those men who reject God.
I think your words make a good argument for embracing the Lord and His ways.
Excellent use of language and imagery...very effective and moving poetry.-Wide Awake

Tuesday, July 9, 2013

BLAST

Road is deserted. A white pigeon lies dead

inhuan act

A tragic tale
Our face turns pale
Many more deaths
With senseless blasts.-Hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

DISASTER AND AFTER

The fittest survive, that we know. Existential fight goes on. May be that man is cruel, but he has to exploit for his well being. And to dream too much about a distant future, el dorado, may not be practical. Then the ravages which we are destined to suffer.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur, Kerala

FACE TO FACE

From the economic point of view all disasters are the positive protective measure of Nature.To a thinking man a turning point.Nice poem. -P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala

Wednesday, July 3, 2013

TWILIGHT

You have this unique way of saying things that takes the readers on this ride of scenes that is recalling wonderful I love your last stanzas that was a great ending thanks for sharing.-Winter Goddess

OBLIVION

Very interesting and unique comparatives used between nature and man. You have a vivid imagination.- Kim van Breda

Tuesday, July 2, 2013

ON BURNING COALS

Sand in our eyes, we walked bare-foot on burning coals. Oh! the tough journey of life you stretched wonderfully!nimal p. dunuhinga


*On 100th Birthday of Alan Turing

good write, good tribute, thanks.
I invite you to read my poems and comment.-Gajanan Mishra

Monday, July 1, 2013

BURNT TASTE

Last stanza is so wise. Take care and see you in a week.- LightH2O