Pure As A Flame

Top notch!
I will look for that tree.-Lawless

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Blue Bloodspots

Wow the ending just amazing I love this.-Elizabethanne

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Not A Noble Thing

Very interesting. Can I ask what inspired this? Take care, - Yari Garcia 

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Calamity

The first ia first......absolute starting of the poem....and perfect matte finish...not too glossy to reflect nor too smooth to slip....as each line captures the eyes!!
Great read.-Tahsin.Z 

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On The Boil

A critical analysis. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Loss Of Identity

Love the imagery of colour.-Alice

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Will You Admit?

This one is now fascinating....enjoyed reading!
Thanks for sharing this thoughtful!-Tahsin.Z 

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Soaked In Glory

Beyond the dark is the light!-Laura

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The Living Death

Hard hitting! TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Left On The Dunes

Light is diminished by more powerful light, the peaceful lake did tell.-Lawless

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Smoking Candles

Interesting. It is like watching a clip of cellophane move down a film reel very slowly.-Sara Fielder

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Mask Unmasked

Eternally Cuddling Bones
What an idea.-allets

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Allusive Pain

Satish, such a great poem....10++++.-Bernard F. Asuncion

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Tones Of Beige

A dark path you're going with stuff like this.

Mikey no likey!

I believe that many poets are in tune with the vibrations surrounding them. Positive, negative and everything in between. You always write about nature, mostly human nature. That is our weakness. There is more to this place than us, as you know well.-Lawless

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Walking Down The Lane

Corruption=Reason-Laura

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In The Labyrinth

My son and I sometimes take walks and gather pebbles. Very nice. I like it much.-nicolibellamont

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Breathing Again

A thoughtful read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

For some writing or painting may be spontaneous or for others strenuous.It depends on inherent nature.Sir, you presented an issue beautifully.-P Nasrudheen, Kasaragod.Kerala

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Becoming A Recluse

Love the words the rock of salt good read.-Robin Carretti

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Because You Count

Satsih, your art is so bombastic. It's a fantastic time.-The Suspicious Oracle

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Lipreading

Very sad and nicely captured.-Kereen

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Graphics

I like the title and as it suggests the
poem is so vividly beautiful as well as
soothing...lovely.-Meena Krish

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Illicit Games

Wii you cheat me one
day by your sinful hands, I
ask the city in bloom.-Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

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Benevolence

A creative write thanks for sharing it. Excellent ending line.-Mark Heathcote

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The Assaulter

A very creative imaginative write thanks for sharing it.-Mark Heathcote

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Few Points

The bluebird a touch of sweet sentiment nice!-Mark Heathcote

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Humbling

This is beautiful:)-Brise

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No More, No Less

Intense and difficult to fathom the underlying meaning. TFS. - Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Drooping Lids

So much agony in few lines...the tormenter might be heart pricking!
Nice read.-Tahsin.Z 

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PLASMA FLOATS

Wow. It is very interesting....I don't quite understand it.-Cheeky Missy

I will always praise the sunrise and not get lost in the moon's deception.
Thank you for being here.-Lawless

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Frenetically

I enjoyed, as most often I do. Well done.-Nicholas Browning

Truth be known!-Laura

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Climacteric

Finding freedom within the written word. From this place one can reach out, beyond all barriers and make contact.-Mr. Darcy

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Rumblings

sinister - full of cloaked mystery.-Mr. Darcy

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Recollection

curious, and yet somehow familiar.-Mr. Darcy

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Some Glimpses

Plagiarism possibly, say it isn't so. I have been witness to it and have been guilty of borrowing a word or two. Another aspect of our plight. -Lawless

Why? Senseless!-Laura

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Head And Torso

Amazing finish. We are only temporary shells of the soul.
Once again, 3 min. to feel this one. I do not watch the clock as one might think. -Lawless

Outstanding!-Diamond

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An Opening

Astonishingly so!-Laura

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Yellow Roses

A thought provoking piece and enjoyable read.-Milly Hayward

The simile of fishing for words without a line is a good one. I liked the extended reference to water with the reflected moon and emptying hands.
The questions are mystfyingly thought provoking.-Mr. Darcy

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Obstinacy

A deep write of understanding.. Hug-Derena

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A scare comes back

An intense poem, touching upon the subtle line between secularism and fanaticism. TFS. -
Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

A well penned social criticism.-P Nasrudheen, Kasaragod.Kerala

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One Cold Morning

I decided to read each 1st/ 2nd and 3rd lines together and I found it interesting:
After a
dawn December
the dew drips

Good shower - moon was recently washed
trees getting ready
I collect the elixir

braiding the clouds
to drink the sun
to die again.-Mr. Darcy

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The Syntax

the only thing I can see is try.-onepauly

deep and mysterious as usual.-willyweedMay

Hearing in silence!-Laura

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On Unknown Track

Death is a certainty! -Laura

Beautiful expression.-supernaturallover

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What To Think

Great imagery. This Poem deserves contemplation from readers.-Terry L & Linda L Shuff 

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Ashes Of Hate

I love this poem great write.-LezLove

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Unjointed

"Sun had eloped with the moon "...!!!!!
Poetic .. -R R Gandikota , Kakinada

Satirical and foretelling. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Dismay

This really makes me think, it was written in such a way that it could be interpreted differently each time. I really enjoyed the flow of the poem and how it didn't tell us what we should be feeling but rather it hinted at possibilities. Great poem! -cjshadow21 

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Different Renderings

Seems to me like a discarded person looking for his lover. I like it.-Nicholas Browning

Love it!-Lawless

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Nowheres

The black and white magpie is always there.-Lawless

i'd like a few more days in the sun.-onepauly

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The Stinging Withdrawl

I like the neat little stanzas. The poem itself has lovely internal rhyme, like: suspense and intense. Also the imagery of rain/fire/clouds and my favourite - barefoot on grass, I mean, everyones got to feel that one.

I was confused the the odd placement of the question marks, perhaps that is the idea?

I feel this poem is about fuelled revenge. The poem ends well, with the sky falling onto roses and with it eyes blur and close - the end.

This poem could be a warning to the world that is so messed up and on its way to self-anihalation, or simply a more personal, individual write. Either way, I liked it.-Mr. Darcy

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