Nikunj Sharma

SUN’S INHERITANCE
very thoughtful and sensitive poem, yes the world needs a burnout sun , not the cold fading moon that falls on many stars. good write.

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paul claxton

Prozac

different,but so good,u have a good collection of poems,interesting

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Sandra Martyres

SERENE REVENGE
This poem has so much philosophical depth to it - a provocative and thought provoking piece Satish...brilliant write thanks for sharing..10+++


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Kristin Reynolds

ANNIVERSARY
That was a very deep read, full of truth. The first 2 stanzas I understand very well - machine had failed me...3rd eye of the sun...key's chasing unbroken latches...yup...gotcha - awesome. Blessings, Kristin

Carol Brown - Satish Verma

Hi Satish....your fine poem can translate to many cultures with truth....I can see this to represent the plight of the Northern Plains "Sioux Nation" Native Americans who were rounded-up after the (so-called by the pale-faces) 'Sioux Uprising' and hung in Mankato towards the end of the 19th. Century....Jim

Martin Owens, Carolyn Devonshire

I enjoyed reading this..very nice...Marty

Great poem filled with unique and clever images. I especially like the way you describe the mushrooms popping up and wearing "white caps to see the game." Also, there is much truth in the way books can open "a museum" to the reader. Well done, Satish! Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Lovely poem, Verma. I especially enjoyed the third stanza. Hugs, Donna