Standing In Ruins

This is a wonderful set of metaphors that speak to many deep issues. Well done.-soren Barrett

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Conflict Between Desires

I Felt
The last "poems of abdication." Turning over to the next younger great bard with an announting - uh huh. I heard that!-allets

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Going Incognito

Walking Stars Batman!
Great image like "tulip moons".-allets

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Heart-Wrenching

'where will truth, go?'
that's The question
of Modernity
when we cut ourselves
willingly
to inject our Arse's fat
into our hollow smiles
and evermore, distance
our future's from realising
reality's, True beauty
where do our dreams
phantom
our illusions of sincerity..
to what end, would future generations, bother
'try to find
yourself in the lies of society'

'Trembling, you open
the knots of entangled life,
to watch the baby sun.'
(a dwindling, self imploding
Sun!)-L. B. Mek

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In Temperature

Great poetry sir!-rileylyrics

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Parting Day

Inspired, but I hesitate
silenced birds, levitate
their destinations, feel innate

Guru's musings, whisper
comfort's to glib, starkness
of reincarnation, ambitions

typing, I decimate distance
to cross, a Poet's etiquette shadows
to ethylate that essential, exchange.-L. B. Mek

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Dark Ruins

or should that be:
'The Difference' between
life and death, festers
in that idolised: 'absent, Kiss'...
(just a privilege
to read your poetic genius)
thanks for sharing, Guru-L. B. Mek

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A Life's Worth

and from the fall, a new flower: Buds
and they shall name her, Addis Ababa
till, that next weed of destruction
finds her
that unamusing
cyclical duality, in Universe's callous Nature...-L. B. Mek

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Thinking Deep

oh wow, that was an amazing piece, very powerful. I think of the word Nihilism, and it freaks me out, great read!-knighngale

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Your Generosity

I can't relish tears in the eyes of poems!-Dr Dillip K Swain

Such a splendid write, Satish...Bernard F. Asuncion

The dead yellow jasmines will regain life and a long prose will be written. To see the beautiful veil first you have to girl the moon. Amazing imagination and brilliant expression make this poem special...10-Kumarmani Mahakul

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My Edge Appears

Death is the ultimate truth. " The Evil of evils is that you have been condemned to death! Since birth! " Says Umberto Eco in his novel ‘Queen Loana"…-Unnikrishnan E S

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Broken By Waves

such vivid imagery
imbued with insightful poetic brevity..
a joy to read and contemplate
thank you! Guru
'Noiselessly you step'
'to snub tentacles.'
'in my sleep and sit on brows
to count rolling tears.'
'The wind will start crying
touching the tender buds
you placed on snow.'
'and I will ask the sundew'
'Why, withering look'-L. B. Mek

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Still In Grief

This got me feeling uneasy.-Everlasting

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Unseen Tragedy

CONGRATULATIONS
SATISH VERMA

ON YOUR
5000th POST

ON POSTPOEMS
TRULY A MILESTONE-allets Stella L. Crews

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Forgetting Peace

Madonna said, "I bow down to pray!"-Pungus

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Becoming Whole

'Not galloping love.
A subdued undercurrent
flows in brown eyes.'
what a wording
of aged wisdom's
tender, hesitative states..
who needs pictures
when poetry, showcases
a movie's worth of insight
in just ten, choice
words...
*thank you, Guru)-L. B. Mek

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Forgotten Mantra

'Morning star
moves away
from the stranger, who
brought the silent pain.'
love this stanza/verse
thanks for sharing, Guru-L. B. Mek

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Not Taking Revenge

Oh! "To accommodate the venomous stings! , ? " But, sir, that is life. Stings galore, mostly venomous!-Unnikrishnan E S

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Valley Of Pain

Most Topical Write
It does me good to read this.-allets

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What Atrocities?

...and blood, will stain
humanity's path, once again!
(such a relatable wording of despair
thanks for sharing, Guru!)-L. B. Mek

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With-Beingness

what imagery! such an impactful read
thanks for sharing
(and yes, believing in anything
seems so hard
in the face of Nature's animalistic
need to whittle down its creations
by insuring, we are all challenged
continuously
for that Aurora gift of a new morning...)-L. B. Mek

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Changing World

'even Beast's'..
what cutting words
of arrowed commentary..
thank you!
for choosing to share: Guru.- L. B. Mek

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You Cannot Touch The Fogs

Yes, it's true. A brilliant poem dear poet...5 stars-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Nothing To Mend

Not sure why, and it might just be my mood, but the lines:

"When you sleep
in the virgin arms of
a terrorist,
the enemies go into a tizzy."

I like those a lot. There's something uncomfortably funny and yet strangely beautiful about the way that's worded.

Well done, and thanks for sharing your art.-Ookpik

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Changing World

'even Beast's'..
what cutting words
of arrowed commentary..
thank you!
for choosing to share: Guru-L. B. Mek

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Transcendence

beautiful and yet compelling, Dale Costello, Australia

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there will never be enough black holes

for the only thing infinite about humanity
lies in our fallibility and capacity
to destroy: exponentially...-L. B. Mek

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Basic Schooling

so clever, place isness next to invalley
and poetically, space the gap
between what is and isn't, at the same time..
(when we understand
the current 'schooling' system
was modelled on producing
a factory line of factory workers
we realise, just how impossible
those
life dreams and achievement, summits
truly were, for some
right from that first ding
of the school bell: outset)
Another glimpse
at your poetic genius
in this write: Guru
thank you!-L. B. Mek

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