The Echo reaches the whole sky

Please call, shout, screech and the echo might just change the way we think about the world! The expanse of the poem cannot not touch! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Clashes and misunderstandings,
painful separations
lead to void and echo of voices

Maturity and thoughtfulness
forgiveness and openness
make better bondings in relations.-RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

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PARSING

Beautifully penned! Love it! Pandita Sanchez

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PARALYSED

Good imaginations and good poem.-Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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Gods Were Changing

a courageous poem from a good heart
The world will never be the same as they know the truth Thank you.-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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SHARED HEAVEN

A cascade of poetically sensuous words on which to feed - expressions both deep in meaning and powerfully arranged deserve to read again and again - your masterly verse as always is amazingly good my friend. Recommended.- Fay Slimm

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WORDS PLAY

You show great skill and promise.-Dan Reynolds 

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OLDIE

Wonderful turns of phrase with amazing imagery - a delight to read this verse of remembered "crystal midmoon" adventures dear poet-friend.- Fay Slimm

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I am burning my bridges

This is how deconstruction begins! Best.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

A very touching and aspirational poem from a great poet! Quite agree with Rajeshwari's comments.-Padmaja Iyengar, London, U K

Respected Sir, Your words of wisdom , are much much more inspiring !! Our lives till last breath are always worth living, Our remains after death are for Mother Nature,I feel so, Who nourishes our lives and never fails to do so !! She uses our ashes, only to create new beings!! Regards and Best wishes!! -RAJESHWARI SRINIVASAN, MUMBAI

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LAISSEZ-FAIRE

Satish, so interesting.. Would love to know more of your subject matter.-Lyric Man

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GENEROSITY

I agree. The last stanza really drove it home for me. A beautiful explosion.- Jeremy Martin

It has been such a long time since I have been here and read your poetry. Thank you for sharing this one. Love- Carol Sunshine Brown

I really like the last stanza.-Princess Xia

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Actualis

'I must speak of him in his absence'!!! Wonderful read! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

"An abnoxious presence of unbeings" - says it all about what ails this world. Yet the last line holds out some hope. A deep and profound poem as usual! -Padmaja Iyengar, London, U K

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PLASMA FLOATS

I am watching them also my friend.- David Wetzel

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WILL YOU MARRY ME?

I almost love all your writes, awesome job..keep writing.-Fa Ozay

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Straws

I know the feeling of exhaustionand permanence in this image - appropo for me - be well.- Stella

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Perversion

1 of the 9 muses believed to inpsire and nurture the arts; the Muse of choral songs and dance. I had to look it up - Thanks for the lesson. I always learn here. - Stella

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I AM BURNING MY BRIDGES

I like this. The progression from burning your wheels at the beginning to burning your bridges at the end is good and I like the ashes strewn on the path between.-VH42 

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No Malaise

Lovely liked it !!-Sagar D Rebel

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GIVING AWAY

very touching and strong words with sympathy I can find in your poem.- Dark Iris

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Other God was sleeping

Wonder if the other God is not shaken out of His slumber hearing all those deafening and disturbing sounds... A vivid and telling poem! Great write, Mr. Verma.-Padmaja Iyengar, London. U K

Accept it or not Atiyodi Sir, that is how it is! -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Vivid description of images of death! Learning experience! Warm regards,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Becoming is unbecoming, life is death, and light is darkness! Virtue is vice. all relative. Is it an acceptable philosophy? -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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BLOOD DRAPED

You possess a rare quality and one which is admirable, you are honest with your thoughts and this causes your poem to seem all the more raw and relevant to the human condition. Your style is similar to Bukowski's. Keep writing. - Narc Road Pie

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OUTPLAYING

This is a complex artsy poem well painted!-Lyric Man

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The Signs

This violently ignorant world we are mortal members of could certainly use a concourse of song birds in an effort to open the eyes of the masses whose mission of hate with their religious beliefs as the excuse for their abhorrent,murderous acts as these ignorants continue to scoff at the Moon that shines on every front porch by continuing to discharge their anathema (as you say), via the back door.- Frank James Ryan, Jr. / FjR 

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PAPYRUS

Hello, Satish Verma....
Your work was quite descriptive with the symbolic lines that you gifted us....Your world yearns for the oncoming promise...-Respectfully,-The Bag Lady

 

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Aloneness of fire

I see the fire as that of liberation, of enlightenment. Random cry is of course insanely in vain, but bold and firm. Passive euthanasia is certainly a poetic invention. - Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Effectively presents the hopelessness, helplessness and despair against the frenzy around us. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

One can feel the images move in this sombre poem!-Padmaja Iyengar, London, U K

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Asia at the Edge

Superbly expressed agony. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Every line in this poem comes as a wound as well as with a healing power. The action of the I is also a suggestion, but that of a doer, not as a preacher. Excellent! It is such a privilege to be member of YS that you get to read and learn from poems such as these! Wonderful choice of co-text! Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

This moving poem on war, violence, healing and peace took my breath away!
Amen to your prayers, Mr. Verma. Thanks for sharing this evocative poem.-Padmaja Iyengar, London, U K

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*IMPACT

A nice lovely write, no doubt unity is strength.-Akhtar Jawad

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SOME PRELUDE

Whoa........... Heavy!- Dave Wood

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