WHAT ENDING

Very good work, Satish-Paul Judges

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IN ABEYANCE

excellent - A PAX

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Mask unmasked

A well-inked verse on a profound theme with an impressive title.-Gita Ashok

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REMINDER

Amazing, incisive poem, Mr. Verma! Respects. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P

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WHO WAS FAITHFUL?

Wwo intense write..Eva

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PREDATORY

Wow! - Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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I CANNOT WEEP

This is sad and makes on think...Huggs- Eva

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CATASTROPHE

last poem of the night to read, only the sea really knows salt so we go ask- leafsailor

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LIBERATION

I wanted to scream. Seeking a freeze on past.Future was stretching its arms. A calling.Erratic explosions? What a storm..Hope it ends soon..Smiles-  Eva

That last line, amazing!-uncia2

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Ancestral Present

poets have tasted the bitternes of the truth and this beautiful that is confirmed again thank you-Twistedchild

because you were necessary for my existence. What a great line!-nimal dunuhinga

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PROZAC

You have such a way of making everything sound so beautiful, "A beautiful collection of anxieties adorned on the shelf of life." "A cuirse in veins..."-LightH2O

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A LIVING SOUL

This is just so amazing you have so many great lines on this one. "I am, what I am not"...love the last 2 ending lines also.LightH2O

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IN THE NAME OF ………

Such a sad write...Eva

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A SEARCH BEYOND QUEST

You go beyond the beyond... so deep!-LightH2O

To fin remaining life..... well said.-seema chowdhury

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FAIRY TALE

INTERESTING FAIRY TALE HERE..mAKES ONE THINK..HUGGGS -EVA

Something a little different from you. Loved the opening strophe.-uncia2

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CONFERRED GUILT

Liked the last line. Interesting write...Eva

A very delicate touch in this powerful poem.-uncia2

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THE FROST

Do you think the day will come, when people will see that there is no need to search from an empty table?
I like this poem, it makes me see the seed of change is moving.-Dolphine29

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FOR THE CLOTTING

So very deep and sad...I could feel this one. -Raggedyann

Indeed, a lot of depth to all your poems.- uncia2

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SCULPTURING

The river between your poetry and my understanding is raging and there's no bridge that can get me to the other side. -Ronald Hull

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NO COMPLAINT

A great poem, as usual Mr. Verma. Thanks for sharing. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P 

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MOLTEN ANGER

As always, a fascinating poem. "shadows were losing their skeletons" - a line to really think about.-uncia2

Wow an intense poem here..Great job..Hugggs-Raggedyann

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PARADIGMS OF PROGRESS

So gripping and deep as usual, best to you.-LightH2O

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RELIGION

Thought provoking!- uncia2

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Can die

Your profound poem has so many layers Mr. Verma. I read it several times. Thanks for sharing. - Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P 

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SOMALIA CALLING

A wonderfully strong poem SATISH. While I may not accurately interpret every line, I do appreciate the quality of the writing. Kind regards, -Linda Lee

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THE WHEELS

Satish, it's sad when religion is used as an excuse to cause fear and havoc. Your last phrase, 'Religion was a proxy to kill ...' got to me-Jacinta Ramayah

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Praying Hurriedly

Satish your stark and realistic poems of war and the Holocaust are true visions of a scene so graphic and sorrowful that one can relate, even for a moment, to such madness. As always I bow before your 'exposed heart' and thank you for opening the scenes that we might reflect on those who died needlessly. Humbly yours,-Marcia Schechinger

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DREAM LANDING

VEry nicely done, love how you put this one out there for the readers imagination to work on... -Felix Perry

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Non - ‘I’

Very expressive-seema chowdhury

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DIVING

The lilies must have been hippiastrums...they often have the colour of a blush about them. Smiles, love & blessings...-cherryk 

Very original and such a pleasure to read.-uncia2

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ON THIS SHORE OF LIFE

"Death will not wait... I want eternity" striking lines.-LightH2O

The world in a bright light, again behind the mind splendid-leafsailor

How far you will go? Earth was collapsing. Great!-nimal dunuhinga

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NEW GENERATION

Each becomes alien here, Sir. -P Nasrudheen, Kasaargod. Kerala
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REMEMBRANCE

Profound, insightful and thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing, Mr. Verma. -Padmama Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P

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THE TEAR OF THINGS

Tears say many things- Jvl narasimharao

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PERFECTION

I t is hard and impossible to reach that plato of perfection..Expecially in love...Nive write -Raggedyann

A stunning and memorable poem!-uncia2

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TEASING

Hauntingly beautiful and very ethereal.-uncia2

Very deep...Sensual and mysterious..-Raggedyann

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A SOUL DIES

This is truly beautiful. Thank you.-PegasusWhiteRose

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‘CROSSING THE BAR' ONCE AGAIN...

Oh a poignant write.-seema chowdhury

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TENDER RAGE

loved the oxymorons .... But always enjoy your reads-  afallenangel/h...

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GENEROSITY

Very well written, I enjoyed the read.
The last line pull it all together. -Adri

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A TREE WAS TALKING

DEEP POEM FOR A TREE TALKING..SMILES - Raggedyann

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TH REALITY SHOW

A gripping reality to ponder about.- LightH2O

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THE BIRTH OF A PUBLIC STANCE

I see and feel such oppressors and their dark power over humanity, a cry from an enlightened soul.- LightH2O

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2007! SO WHAT! !

"the freedom of anonymity" being thinking about these line for a while now. "Two thousand seven, and still our angular limbs cannot move the time." This last quote is so true and sad, it's sad to see such things go on.- LightH2O

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TENDER RAGE

This was a very deeep poem...Not sure I got the meaning out of it you wanted but none the less it took me to a place of bing lost..- Raggedyann

"waiting to cut the cord of resistence"..powerful-deep write...thank you for sharing-  seelie

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SHAMEFUL

Some very gripping imagery here, but I felt it was a bit disjointed. Still, I'm glad to have read it.
blessings,-  Sensual Sorceress 

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GYRATIONS

Makes me wonder what Buddha was reincarnated as? -Ronald Hull

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Breaking Dawn

is it an elegy? nice to read!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi


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Quenching

a lot of good message hidden as the seeds in the pomegranates. Good! I enjoyed reading this poem!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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Dirty Mirrors

so rebellious to issues- Nasarudheen.P.

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YIN-YANG

So true opposite forces at work and your sensitive spirit describing it so well in your fine crafted write.- LightH2O

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I V/S WE

Revealing last two lines, your words make me dig deep.- LightH2O
It seems you have exposed your wide philosophy in life by the poem. Like the imagery created here. Cheeres from Ceylon-  Punsara

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THE LOST ONES

Your spirit senses these low vibrations which you depict so well.- LightH2O
yes and the oceans were fresh water till they spoiled and made oil.- leafsailor

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INFERNO

Conflict, whether political or tribal, caused by border disputes or territorial claims, always result in tragedy and lost lives. Your poem lays out in gripping pain the mental anguish such conflicts bring forth and leave us the unanswered question "Why can't man talk it over and agree?" because no one ever wins a war.- CynthiaBuhainBaello 

Paints a very grisly picture, it always makes me think deeply.-LightH2O

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A LIVING SOUL

wonderful 10+++- Ashraful Musaddeq

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Flickering

Comment: A death wish of a mountain
flower was to shed the seeds
in the lap of a dandelion.
- marvelous-  Ashraful Musaddeq

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An Anticlimax

As it is a poem about the nature, what is there to hide! very beautiful!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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Swan Song

enjoyed reading your work again!!-  Doris Culverhouse

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MOON STRUCK...

Beautiful write.- Reaching4theTRUTH

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Unbecoming

Morning, Sir. Your usual indepth write. Have a Great Weekend.-  Lady Dragonwyck 

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