A Sunny Wait...

Satish the magnificence in your work is your capacity to, almost, put the reader in your shoes. To feel the "days of nostalgia" turn into "black" and "white", where the sinners devour the flesh of the earthly saints. I wish the sun could erase away the darkness of war and cruelty for you personally, and also for us that the world could live in harmony - as it should. Thank you Satish for your ever devoted work for peace.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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GRAMMAR

Lovely I must say.- Debs
Excellent! I see the Grammar of life!- nimal dunuhinga


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DEATH OF A SHADOW

Leading a life of "nothingness" is what many do or at least feel they do. It is nothing to be ashamed of as we all have purpose in God's eyes. Trying to accomplish something special in one's final years is crazy. Look at the people whom have been affected by knowing you. A meekness filled life is still a good life. "The Meek shall inherit the earth." Heroes come in many styles. The man who stays with his family, teaches them to love God and life, and never gives up on them is every bit the hero that a lifesaver is. Good poem- e. Gene Myers

Not sure what to say or express??- She Whispers

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BLAMELESS?

Another awesome write!!! You never comment on other poems I wonder why??-  She Whispers 

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THE MELTING

JUst don't understand your emotions I suppose a differnet world has something to do with it!!- She Whispers

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MEANINGLESS

Sometimes I Just don't understand you? Explain this poem!!

Punctuating the silence, words
again scream, fly like eagles
in the valley of wounds. How far
the fire will go engulfing the untouchable?- She Whispers

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ANNIHILATION

Your so far out there I have no idea what your talking about??? PLease explain!!-She Whispers

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MEANING BESIDE ME

Newborn roses and dahlias
speak through
the nothingness of fear.
I just saw the face of death
floating on a pond.
Ashes and bones out of the urn.- She Whispers

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A Rebel Being Born

And ardjurna does not want the war with his own family as KRISHNA explains what duty means - Thank GOD for peace- Danny Coon, USA

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AGEISM

The expressive phrasing in this piece is both intriguing and insightful. "Ageism" has been a blight in some countries for more than a long time and has demeaned the wisdom which often accompanies the older perceptive human. May age remain unchained for as long as it can in this age of little compassion. The final line in this compelling verse is its most brilliant and can be used as a mantra for whaever age we are. Thank you for this posting dear friend.- Fay Slimm


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Sinking boatman

Beautiful lines, and bewilderingly so, and beyond comprehension by my wooden brain and ungrasping grey matter. Satish Verma-ji, please have pity on the less imaginative readers like me, and explain the meaning at least once in a way. Thanking you and with regards.-Narasimha Sarma Rachakonda, Visakhapatnam

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In ring of fire

Dear poet, I will chase your poetry, To benefit my brain-tree, Whenever I am free,As I am in no hurry and this task I will sincerely carry as you poem is to me absolutely necessary, Hope with me you also agree. -
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THE TEAR OF THINGS

Satish "...The tears. Are they not sufficent to give the depth of immensity?", one would think! How soulful when others can not feel the tears of nations in unrest. As always, my admiration goes out to you and your constant battle with war and inhumanities in this world. Thank you my dear friend Satish.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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Blankscape

Dear poet, I scored in American literature just 18 marks. University cannot be wrong. You look like an American.I am awed by your thoughts. All the best. -mvvenkataraman, Chennai

Wonderful! Real poets write like this. What an imagery! Go on with this style, Sir.- U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payya

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WE WILL SCREAM TOGETHER

Tree was calling again / for immoralism of flowers, quashing / his life. ...The brave violence survives the mutilated / dreams. Fantastic the observation and its interpretation by the light of eternity. Sometimes our conscious acts as such mathematical accuracy to translate our inner vision. Logical poetry perhaps emerged from this urge of expressing our soul. Salute such skill of crafting the beauty mingled with intelligence. -Pranab k chakraborty

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Zero hour

Dear poet,A peculiar joy permeates my heart due to your poem's powerful flow.Thanks. - mvvenkataraman, Chennai

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CORONA

Satish: I "felt" a lot from this write. Did enjoy...- Lady Dragonwyck

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STONING DARK

a nice and thought provoking write.- seema chowdhury


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LOVE & PAIN

Satish an emotional poem of truth and heart, with your magic for imagery you give the readers a poem of love, pain and the temptations of chemistry. "...Your eyes are unreadable, a watery grave of pain...", stark feelings of inner turmoil. As always you excel at bringing the reader in and holding them in thought pattern. Thank you Satish.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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HONEY MOONER

I have no idea what you are saying??please explain??- She Whispers

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YIN-YANG

Hello Satish ,Very powerful fill the void where heart once was ,I particularly like the last stanza and the expression .Thank you for sharing- Pattra Shuwaswat, Netherlands

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Strangers in sleep

If you write like Keats, Milton, Byron and K S Subramanian, really understanding is tough for my humble, small brain. - mvvenkataraman, Chennai

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LET ME GO INTO SNOW

A great write...you have a super talent for imagery in your writing.- Sandra Martyres


Satish this piece flows with innovation and inventiveness. Your talent for mesmerizing with word never fails. Another gem which will stay long after the reading. Thank you.- Fay Slimm


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AN AGONISED PRAYER

Satish. What an existentialist's lines you've got there. Nice.- Okolo Chinyereugo, Nigeria

Satish a strong and emotional poem of death, war and unanswered prayers. "...Don't choose the destiny. Don't commit the date. Anguish itself will find the path. What was wrong with the earth...", a question many of us wonder. "...Are you listening?", an excellent ending. Thank you Satish for giving all the emotional feelings of war and the Holocaust, that we might try to change the world through prayer and public votes. Your pen is mighty, admirably yours Marcia- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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I WANT NOTHING

You state it strongly and poetically just how it is Satish. Such is the mind of a sunken human to "talking primate" - - - destoying earth in the search for self.- Fay Slimm


excellent poem...so sad and true...what can we do?- Marieta Maglas

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CHEMISTRY ANYTIME

I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Satish. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love- Carol Brown

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PROMETHEUS? MON FRERE? ?

Satish a brilliant use of "Prometheus", the Titan from Greek mythology who taught mankind the use of fire although stealing it from heaven, as we replay the torture and violence of the holocaust and war. "...Where did the path betray us...", one can only wonder. Thank you Satish for your brilliant poetry and your constance in the fight for peace.- Marcia Schechinger

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POETRY

I don't get everything you're trying to say here, but I do like the lines"spilling out the anguish," and "looking through the remains of existence."- Susan Burch

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Blood Diary

Thorns must not go free. I love that line. There is some deep thought that is touching my heart!- 

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FRACTURED TIME

When truth is a capped fossil there will be no end to lies. Thanks for sharing.- George MacLean Akurunwa

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ANOTHER NAME

It's very beautifully written. I like it very much. -krysta mann

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OETICIDE

A display of good knowledge of anatomy, provocative insight.- George MacLean Akurunwa

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O LOVE

Thought provoking, this verse is both wistful and haunting. When the past becomes as a shackles it has no light to offer while the final stanza seeps a sadness with the moon walking away. An impressive write Satish.- Fay Slimm


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AFTER THE STORM

"I wanted a sunless garden to commit / the sin of forgetting you." Thats much from a reader of Satish verma.- Pranab k chakraborty


I cannot tell you how many times i will awaken, right before sunrise- with an entire composition manifesting and tumblinh 'round my nebulous Brainworks....It smacks of absud magnificence....and if only i could keep my 3rd Eye open long enough to awaken the rest of me so i may sit-up and reach-out for my trusty quill...I'd be a BLOODY GENIUS ...or something like that.....- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


A very deep and thought provoking write! Thanks for sharing! Love and Peace for always...- Romeo Della Valle


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BLAMELESS

Strong powerful write on life and to me future...- Michael J. Falotico

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THE WHEEL

Satish your ability to display emotions of an event and the event itself and still ask the question of afterlife is an amazing example of the extraordinary poet that you are. Your words stir the mind as we reflect on scenes of war, questions the whys of life and wonder of those who passed before us, "...cat walking on the spiky path of truth...". Thank you again Satish for sharing your talent, speaking the truth and asking all who read to seek for peace.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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HANDS OF ENEMY

Satish: I like the last sentence. Totally sums it all very well.- Lady Dragonwyck

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ANNIHILATION

I have stopped by to read your excellent poetry today Satish. I hope to be back soon to read more. I wish you the best with your writing always. Love- Carol Brown


Smile, *^_^* The Queen of gray grim gruesome, sweet Satish Verma. = But not today; for amid this Soulfully splashed poe in paintings I find, the fascinating colours as that of a pretty Peacocks spreading "Her," lovely wings ~ Such a beautiful sight to behold, is "She." == I took these sweetened hues, and dipped my hearts fingers into they, to brush upon the canvas blank, "Your Beauty." === love always- jl sadberry

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INTROSPECTION

Sir: very vivid; excellent imagery. I enjoy your work, as always.- Lady Dragonwyck

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A STAR PLUNGES

If When a garden is permeated by anything...it rarely comes out a virgin,...hmmmm......- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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ONE RUNAWAY RELIGION

This sounds sort of like somthing William S. Burroughs would have written: With impacts of images and with disconnected meanings loosely tied together. Yet this exceeds Burroughs with a Blake brightness. Even the first lines: "Ignite the barren clay, I need some rare elements to tie a thread to the moon." What, really, does this mean? What can it mean? It seems really to have no definite meaning. Yet it is a mannificent sentence. Because it has no real definite meaning, it is capable of many meanings, supplied by the imagination of the reader who is struck by the bright power of the phrasing, and the very striking image. // I like this poem. --Michael LP, Mr. Poet


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MEANINGLESS

Thank you for sharing your Awesome poetry Satish. I enjoyed reading it and hope to read more of it soon. May you always find the inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love- Carol Brown

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A TRUE DECEPTION

Satish your remarkable word usage to help the reader feel some of the emotions that are left in the spirit, after such inhumanity of war and loss is remarkable. I keep wanting to say 'I'm sorry', but then that isn't enough, we need to get that Peace going Now so as there is never a need to apologize to all who suffered and to all who must bear the memories. Thank you Satish for your constance in the fight for Peace!- Marcia Schechinger

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DISCLAIMER

Are you employing this "DISCLAIMER" because the title serendipitously permeated your Third-Eye while penning the above work... or because this is the 1st post in the past week that you haven't mentioned the planet, MOON, and by the time you realized your obvious literary "err"... you didn't have the time to go back & toss in the Lunar lamp, and so instead, you decided to opt-out of any astronomical accountablity via a "DISCLAIMER" ?!!!!!!LOL!- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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WORDLESS SILENCE

Sir: I get so much from your writes. I truly enjoy your daily writes. - Lady Dragonwyck

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GOD OF BLESSINGS

Some potent phrasing in here Satish - - I love that "moon-scented " walk and the "affectionate kill of lies" - your poetry never disappoints. A fine piece and a compelling read.-Fay Slimm


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Conferred guilty

Every poem you write is unusual and unique, where do you get inspiration from?With regards- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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TANTALUS

Satish an excellent title and always every line a mixture of the past and personal emotions, "...A future has been tied to my past...". The last stanza was excellent, your use of metaphors to display the horrors of war and the hauntings there after, always show us your genius as a writer. Thank you Satish, I am privileged to read your work.-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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UNDERSCORING

Diction makes the spirit high. We the reader as if feel the pronunciation o the poet. Nice. As if the poet talking with a clear voice. Synchronization of word choice, thoughts and expression... balanced. "Shades of lies haunt, in flames of faith."- Pranab k chakraborty


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THE PENULTIMATE DILEMMA

Wow, I mean really wow. This is great, how you bring yourself into the world.-Gerard Gauthier

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FOOD WAS LEFT ON THE PLATE

This is one of those deep, deep writes that has certain meanings, which elude me for now...and that is a good thing, requiring me to think, think, think. Thanks for the challenge. -D Johnson

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BLAZING TRAIL

"They swim like tadpoles. Thoughts!"-  George MacLean Akurunwa

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DENUDING

Goodness!!- She Whispers

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HAPPENINGS

such a deep poetry.. beautifully penned, sir..- smrityshakti


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Religion

Awesome write Mr. Verma. The images are superb. Loved it.- Tahera Mannan, Nagpur

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