AN AGONISED PRAYER

I can feel the despair...powerful language.- dzone

A thought provoking write- seema chowdhury

Yes, listening to you sharing your despair. Such a good line: "anguish itself will find the path" , so deeply true.- Mn. Rachel

yes I am listening- leafsailor

Stark, deep and vicious melancholy, Vermaji. An excellent write - I'd been trying to write something on this theme today; but it's just not the right day perhaps.- SnehaSK

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SHAMBHOOK...*

Thank you for sharing my dear friend.- LightH2O

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GOLDEN END

Such an interesting poem, well expressed. There is such a powerful depth of feeling in the experience of birthing described here.
Thanks for sharing- Morning Star

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INWARD ODYSSEY

just loveli-   the temp

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KISSING GODS

Puranas have symbolic characters And we are not expected to blame the writers of epics or puranas. better sense is expected from modern men to observe morality in accordance with the modern ideas. May be our forefathers incestuous for procreation. We are not expected to blame them for that. An enjoyable poem.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur 

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MUM IS THE WORD...

I love that last stanza it sums it up really good. Blessings to you.- LightH2O
In truth this is a poetic gem, that merits a re-read. Your stark ending says it all so succinctly!- Carrot
"The silence is ultimately the moment of/ truth. Truth erases the lie and seals a/ kiss of death. "Intense, thought-provoking lines in this sublime verse. The title is apt.-  Gita Ashok

I find your writing as poetic gems that has value more than gold, reading them is an experience in itself, and I savor each line as fine wine. This poem is excellent in form, style, content, and impact.- CynthiaBuhainBaello

It wanders around in my brain , making itself at home any place it likes ...peace- leafsailor

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WALKING TOELESS

Very powerful, Satish! You've come a long way, on a tortuous path, scalpels are meant to cut. Infant dying from freedom? Self? Other? In the end, becoming frozen sounds pretty good, to me. Guess we al-  Erin Kelly-Moen

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THE SWAN - SONG

Nostalgically beautiful, makes me wonder.- LightH2O
A deep, thought-provoking verse filled with mysticism, sadness and nostalgia.-  Gita Ashok

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POINT OF VIEW

Gripping!- LightH2O
Brilliant and eloquent portrayal of love in conflict in this incisive poem. Amazing lines.- CynthiaBuhainBaello
a heart-breaking song!-  nimal dunuhinga

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DESPERADO

These gripping lines make me think of all the imagery created here.-  LightH2O

Now the time has come. Everybody wants to commit suicide to become a saint. Great!- nimal dunuhinga

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Comfort in hobbling home

RDX is an annihilating thought that questions our civilization. And several types of bombs too. Good thoughts flow and a nice poem is born -U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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FIERCE MOONING

Sad and beautiful, simultaneously! Ahhh...the circle of life-  Shirley Houston

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Drowning

I like this poem thanks for sharing-  Kevin Clark

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THE GLASS HOUSE

Beautiful,... I felt the vibes in your words,.. Great ink, fav.. - Shaun Po 

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PROMETHEUS? MON FRERE? ?

Gripping!-  LightH2O

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UBIQUITOUS BEING

Sad reflections of a well weathered being.-  LightH2O

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SURVIVAL

I like the essence of emptiness in your last stanza. There is no void quite like the spiritual emptiness or shallows conveyed by the excellence of your hyperbole here. -  Roger Wayne Eberle

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GRAY HANDS

I take from this a humanitarian , spiritual cry.. a longing to find a peace in a hard world. Maybe I am reading too much into it. i shall have to read again. either way I do really enjoy it . always maggie-  maggie lopez sherry wilbur

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EVENING: A SELF EXPERIENCE

Enjoying your work as ever.-  LightH2O

Reflections on life portrayed vividly with effective use of imagery, metaphor and personification. Inclusion of one line in the opening stanza as the closing line reveals the intensity of emotions.-  Mountaineer

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DYING TO LIVE

Tonight the burning candle is going to live. Fantastic!- nimal dunuhinga

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THE DIFFERENCE

A giant wave to wash out traces just at death offers the final peace.- LightH2O

The death offers the final peace. Well done!- nimal dunuhinga

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OMAR-2

Lots to think about on this one.- LightH2O

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RETOLD JOURNEY

so powerful... i'm speechless-   distorted

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STUNNED

Wow you got me with that last stanza- George Carroll

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THE DIFFERENCE

The death offers the final peace. Well done!-  nimal dunuhinga

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THE WHEEL

My heart goes out to this man, I'm sure he's learned so much more than those who have it easier on this earth.- LightH2O
I will walk with you in this poem dear friend, just wait a moment for me-  leafsailor

Great job I enjoyed this! tfs-  abbylovesm

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IN PURGATORIO?

The freedom of your spirit is evident in this ethereal poem.-  LightH2O

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Isful ah-ness!

Nostalgic contemplations, of a wise poet.-  LightH2O

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Earth's Intelligence

nice one. good poem with beautiful meanings. feel free to comment my poems as well.thank you-  Alon Dy

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HYPNOSIS

The depth of this poem makes me wonder, beautifully written.- LightH2O
Rich in metaphor, profound in meaning and hypnotizing when one reads. A wonderfully inked verse.- Gita Ashok

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Battle For Madness

A very apt title.- Ronald Hull

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FROM LIDS

wow i really dont know wat to think it was throwing me this way and that. but i will say it had a deadly ending :]- sandman

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UNBELIEVING

very good short poem i really enjoyed it which is the point of poetry in the first place.-  ianhm

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‘...ROOTS THAT CLUTCH...’

You're always able to express what the spirit feels in such amazing lines.-  LightH2O
Deeply powerful this verse raises more questions about the "truth of midnight sin" - - the penultimate stanza caught my attention with its sound leaving an echo - the "present redeems the past" is one of my truisms too. An engaging write Satish. Thank you.-  Fay Slimm

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BLUE DIVINITY

I really enjoy it, seem like this moment in time the new begining is already at our feet, starting to grow.-  Dolphine29

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Blind Encounter

Your poems are always edgy and interesting.
Vivid images, impresses the imagination.-   Captain Cur

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Climbing

Satish enjoyed...- David Williams

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ANSWERED...

It is as if you've become one with our mother Earth.- LightH2O
I am here to read these words-  leafsailor

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THE HYPHENATING

"The past presents a missing link..." and we all must have made wrong turns in the past, led or deceived by some "priest" but awareness and questions lead us finally to the truth we seek - if we seek it hard enough. I like this poem for its thought-provoking content, deep humanistic relevance, and challenge of the end lines.-  Cynthia
There are always two ways we can go by, and not all are lucky enough to be shown the right path.. An interesting in that sense.. thanks for sharing Sir..-  Prashant Shaurya

Very interesting poem to read...about indecision?-  Some Girl

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Falling Crumbs

Reminded me Spanish artist Salvador Dali. If you were a bit more explicit, readers will appreciate a little more. You kept it a bit hazy when you said "bent backward to wet the floor of glass". "crumbs fall from the table. It was not me, it was not me." Had you lifted the shroud, more people would appreciate. But, as I said, your poem reminded me of Salvador Dali.- Sharbaaniranjan Kundu

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Smiling Buddha

beautiful write :-)-  Kate Clifford

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NAILED

I identify with this poem from its beginning to its end.-  Kailashana

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FUGITIVE SWAN

How beautiful. Wonderfully expressed.
The last two verses are my favorites.
...so delicately versed it made my soul swoon-  Morning Star

I can see how that happened.-  Kailashana

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COLLECTIVE GUILT

I do so enjoy reading ... Very nice-  afallenangel/h...

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BELONGING

The spirit and mind knows no boundaries, well written!-  LightH2O
This jumps one quantum closer to verbal understanding with out eluding the inner mind, a fine transition of comprehension.always light behind my eyes-  leafsailor

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THE RED ROCK...

Agree with Gita, thanks for sharing, blessings to you.-  LightH2O

A deep, thought-provoking verse on reflection with effective use of metaphor. Ths closing stanza is powerfully expressed- Gita Ashok

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UNBELIEVING

very good short poem i really enjoyed it which is the point of poetry in the first place.- ianhm

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Silent Prayers

Very interesting piece here..enjoyed Satish!!-  Pace, G "INK-U-SCRIPT"

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REMEMBERING ADAM!

Interesting poem, if is the same Adam I'm thinking of, he won't be alone for ever. TFS-  LightH2O

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It Was Enough

This is hauntingly powerful and moving piece with an embedded unconventional triolet. An inspiration for budding poets to learn more about pouring the heart into different types of poetic form. Thank you-  Harriet James

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METAPHYSICAL

What exactly are you saying here?-  WILLIAM SEELY

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Issueless

A pleasure to read your poetry this evening Satish. I am happy I was able to read some poetry tonight and so glad yours was among the poems I am reading. Love,-  Carol Brown

Satish now I like this, a very sad issue....-  David Williams

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BRINGING DOWN

A green catastrophe tears a huge iceburg post-coitol emptiness. The sweet nothing lol loved much the inspiration and rhythm in this read:)- Poeticizer 

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MANIA

"My soul colours the half-black berries. The sum will not eat them. Father was beaten in war of tricks I still follow the laws of kindness in filling the extended empty cups." loved that end stanza, very nice write Satish.- bubble.Gutz.br... 

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RENAISSANCE

you're so good at what you're doing....- distorted 

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SMELL OF NOTHING

I love this one and I'm glad you're sharing your poems.-  distorted 

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SMOKING CANDLE

This is brilliant. The wording confuses me in some places, a little bit. However, this is the first poem that I've read on this site, excluding a few of your others, that really displays a talented writer.-  Benarnia 

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THE WALLS

when we cross that desert green smoke ain't the only thing that we will see and not see-  after vision 

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ALL THE GRIEFS

nicely done. Raging moon will rise again-  Keke

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A Big Idea?

Interesting question towards the end :-)-  Kate Clifford

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Ninth symphony

Beautiful lines. Leaves me wondering and imagining, wandering the scenes created by your words. Thanks for sharing.- Safiyyah , UK

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Confrontation

This is a refreshing - though thought-provoking - abstraction. That it's not straightforward narrative is helpful in that it invites closer inspection, provokes deeper thought.-   Kearns

Just discovered and enjoyed your poems.... Nice to find a pen that strikes all dementions and not round and round. Great scribs!!- KayinBH

The energy and definition from this piece is just so powerful and assiduous from beginning to finish. The world currently boasts of its unfathomable diversity, yet it's seen how it doesn't matter due to the corruption of many. "Earth, receive your sons in shame. " - Great piece.-  Tanosu

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Beauty Of Pain

Satish this has a good flow to it, I like it a lot...- David Williams

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NINTH SYMPHONY

Strong lines, each line carries a wise observation. Fascinating!-  LightH2O

A beautiful picture postcard painted with words. The last stanza: "Pull up the veil./ It separates the truth./ Do not filter the pain./ We may find a god." is thought-provoking and the title is brilliant.-  Gita Ashok

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