Sunday, December 31, 2017

Turning To Dark

I loved this, I love nature and I wish more people wrote about it.-Yajaira Katzi 

Thursday, December 28, 2017

Light Luggage

Satish, such an interesting poem...10+++.-Bernard F. Asuncion

Stary Thoughts

All I can say as usual beautiful.-Dagmar Wilson

Honey Trap

This is just lovely, your visuals are breathtaking--Brenda

Beautiful.-Dagmar Wilson

Writing Furtively

No matter how unobtrusive you are, your irrelevant song will not have an effect on the inevitable disaster. Godd one Satish ji, -Supratik Sen

Saturday, December 23, 2017

Invisible Stains

Misty lips don't
leave the imprints on
the frozen face..... //.... There is something very special in your portrayal of emotions.-Rajnish Manga

Serendipity

i always hope it is Emmanuel in us that calls that shots ... you write such interesting poetry... may not comment much but that is because life is busy but I try not to miss what you post. happy holidays to you.-Debera

One Reality Show

Happy holidays. What a wonderful poetic weave. Interwoven within our time, Cosmos, and hearts with eloquence, while earthen, veraciously baying while meekly saying, we can but be like water. A few thoughts to close the New Year with :) An injustice to any is an injustice to all, and if it isn't addressed individually, it becomes a global injustice as well. "You can't struggle with the man's house (mansion) using the man's tools", Audrey Lourdes, "be the change you wish to see in the world", "the root of all oppression lies in (supposed) science", Gandhi. Remember, if responsibility isn't exercised, its Siamese twin sister, freedom, will wither, like an unused muscle as well; now, sadly, because of self-possession, it needs to be exorcised before it's exercised. No one must be conned by the corporate structure's convolution, divide and conquer only works on the divided, life is indivisible, as your potential is illimitable. If you will, please copy, share. Matutinally Yours, reality, james m nordlund.-reality1

Tribulations

I'll be honest, I never really understand your writes but I really enjoy reading them. This in no exception-it really is beautifully done-Brenda

Writing Furtively

No matter how unobtrusive you are, your irrelevant song will not have an effect on the inevitable disaster. Godd one Satish ji, -Supratik Sen

Thursday, December 21, 2017

The Clan

molarity without molars, good wordplay. enjoyed this.-poelove

Wednesday, December 20, 2017

The Shriek

Mute scars
Topically, of the abused. - well expressed concept. We hide our scars and their causes.-allets

Tuesday, December 19, 2017

The Gift Of Abandonment

While most of your recent poems have a moon in them, like this one, I am not sure if I could catch the intent here, unless it is talking about the confusing moonless night as a gift of abdonment.-Supratik Sen

Sunday, December 17, 2017

Friday, December 15, 2017

Thursday, December 14, 2017

Wednesday, December 13, 2017

Between The Accidents

Taking Sand Bath

Satish, each stanza a mystery to themselves. A fine write.-Robert Murray Smith

Parentheses

Yes, there is no point adding sugar to the sea.-Supratik Sen

"Adding sugar to sea", very nice Supratik. It added beauty to the poem.-R R Gandikota

Sunday, December 10, 2017

Renouncing

Questions that do not have answers, unless someone takes a plunge. -Supratik Sen

Saturday, December 9, 2017

Deterrence

I liked the image of caressing the mimosa, like a metaphor for vulnerable love? The third stanza 'The spontaneous probe will start the construct..' is very intriguing, but I wonder if it could be expressed more simply. I liked the abstract feel of this though. It feels like I am walking through time, touching and feeling.-monono 

Thursday, December 7, 2017

Let's Think

A philosophically analytical poem. Thanks for sharing. I quote:
a minimal existence.... and quantum pain,
Why there was war against the war.... when nobody wins?-Rajnish Manga

Ending Was A Ceremony

Yes and that becomes a ceremony... strange but true. The poem's quiet and firm tone is appealing.-
Supratik Sen

Wednesday, December 6, 2017

Disoriented

..."abduction-of a mystic"...was a great use with the former line. I understand that phrase on several levels. So much more to say, too little space to write.-Yahchanan AbiyaH

Tuesday, December 5, 2017

Monday, December 4, 2017

Tragedies

This reminds me of a few different pieces, such as the kidnap poem by Nikki Giovanni and the circus is cheaper when it rains by Iain S. Thomas.

It reminds me of kidnap because of the style, the flow, the swiftness and the subtlety of the words even though they carry intense power. And the circus is cheaper when it rains because of the emotion and the imagery and the uniqueness of the message being presented. I am in no way saying this is plagerism, I am simply appreciating the connection I was able to make, because in truth this is incredibly different from both, but has similar roots - if that makes sense.

I also really enjoy your voice here, and I'm eager to read more of your work in the future.-BlueJay

Icing

We'll never be able to control this planet, try though we might. I think as a race, we're incredibly arrogant to believe that we can. The earth is on a journey all of its own and was very busy with that long before humans popped up for the ride, and it will continue its journey long after we've self-destructed
I love this thought provoking piece :-)-Kitty Cat Lady

Saturday, December 2, 2017

Undressing

Nicely articulated poem with unique expressions. Thanks for sharing, Mr Verma.
when words start screaming. like howls of wolverines.-Rajnish Manga