AGONY

everytime i see you…..everytime i feel it within…..things can be told in a way you do………..ahh……thanks for sharing sir……….accept my sincere vow……:)- Nitish shubhankar


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KISSING GODS

mismerising as ever……namaste and bow sirji-Nitish shubhankar


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UNEATEN FRUIT

A startling metaphor— . . . the everlasting sky/full of needles.” Instead of soft platitudes of dew and raindrops, needles! This is a powerful poem, Satish, full with the vicissitudes of life in this troubled age of the species, struggling to sort things out, amid chaos.Regards,- oxygon

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CIRCLING

I love the metaphoric hyperbole that opens this poem, moonlight upon the door depicted as—”A bucketful of moon/falls on my door”.
I see in this narrative the emotions of a battered soul arising out of suffering, and the speaker laments being battered and bruised, and in the end, he wishes for rain to fall into his cocktail of hope, his absinthe, his bane against pain! I will always look to your poetry, Satish, with the expectation of powerful words addressed to conflict, and human suffering on the singular existential plane, and for the whole of humanity. Thanks for the poem — oxygon


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SCRUTINY

atish: I did enjoy -- the title is perfect.
I do enjoy your writes here at Creative.- Lady Dragonwyck 

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BIRTHDAY

Very interesting, and original. I can't say more than I liked it, it captivated me.-Tina

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ALONG THE SORROW

Intelligent jerks of unexpected marchpast keeps the reader dumb to invent next. Great.- Pranab k chakraborty


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WINDOWS

Interesting thoughts that you have penned this morn..-Sara Kendrick

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UNBELIEF

These whirling images fascinate me. Like a dream that causes me to wake with a start and lay there pondering its meaning.- york2frisco

What a wonderful set of metaphors, that never come right out and say the things that they imply so strongly. So many of them, but I understand them well I too am moving in the dark corridor, afraid of the unending highways. That is so eloquent, and says it all. --Michael LP, Mr. Poet- poetwithcancer


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LINEAGE

When I read this, it was as if I was there. Nice job!- Westly Shaw, USA


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FIREFLIES

Like the way you ended this poem!- Westly Shaw, USA


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REMEMBERING

Beautiful Poetry my dear poet friend...- Michael J. Falotico

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AMEN!

Satish with anguish of the children of war and the sounds thereof, you leave the reader with what might have been a memory if we had been the victims of concentration camps or the humbling fear of death through streets of war. You chants of peace through poetry, I am forever in awe of your perseverance. Thank you.- Marcia Schechinger, USA


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Death of a protest

Very strong. I loved it!-Ritumonjori

The write is rhetoric and powerful. With regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma

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NO TELLING

Truth be told, Satish...i don't think their be a many naysayer after witnessing a severed head on a mudded floor...Abstractively intriguing...yet stanzas polarize, and present as if 3 seperate works...How does "NO TELLING TRINITY" sound ?-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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REMEMBERING

Not sure what all this means???- She Whispers

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From lids

Your poem is replete with strong imagery. I loved reading it. Regards,- Ritumonjori, Pune

It is an unusual write, which makes one think. With regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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Virulence

Awesome poem! With kind regards-Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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LISTENING

This work has a nexus that connects each stanza to the next...This i like, tho' i wish the Roman Catholic Church could receive the same respect that the many othger Creeds have been afforded when they too are involved in the same scandalous disgrace as the Catholic Church. There are Rabbi's, Ministers of many Protestant denominations, as well as self-professed clergyen who have tainted the sacred scriptures...yet it all comes back to Catholicism, The Vatican, and that is not fair. The Holy Roman Catholic Church is comprised of tens of thousands of clergy ,throughout 5 continents. It is the single largest Organized Religion in the World(Islam/Muslim, a very close 2nd) When you have 20 or 30 thousand people....there are going to be bad seeds....Since 1985, there have been approx, 200 law-suits faught against the Church for alleged SDexual misconduct...About 60 % were found to be true. These priests were immediately defrocked & many jailed , as well they should have been! Some got off too lightly & were re-located within the Church...This was WRONG ! However, that said...i'll take 125 bad seeds out of 30,000 anyday of the week ! But you will never here the media say that according to the final figures, that it appears that 29, 875 of the 30,000 Clergymen of the Holy Roman Catholic Church are good, pure, trusting & God-devoted workers.....Good poem, though...just venting my voice a might....Oh, yeah,almost forgot...you have a mis-spell... It is WHIPPED, not wipped....-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

This one scorched me and made me shrink from its description of brutal realities. A very powerful write!-vinita18

Ofcourse!!!U made me to listen...Horror pulls to it...-sugi

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THE LOST ONES

h, the end result of weakness and high crimes of the soul and the heart, methinks. Unlike society these days where owning up to your own mistakes, this has payback written all over it.- Jerry Bolton

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IN PURGATORIO?

i do like this one too wmh - poor richard

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MOON STRUCK...

i do like this and will read more as asap...wmh - poor richard

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DESPERADO

Powerfully conveyed, Satish- Paul Judges

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‘...ROOTS THAT CLUTCH...’

Hauntingly sad, as if written by a troubled soul. - Donna Chandler

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NINTH SYMPHONY

Nice writing... we must find wholeness and accept truth no matter how painful.-Lavendar Jazz

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LEAR AGAIN...

I really do relate to this... written with a delicate blend of openness and mystery!- Christine Tsen


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NO-MAN’S-LAND

Satish 'the path of truth' spoken in your biography is not always a comforting path when writing of personal experiences during war. "Sadness was invading my wounds again... The brain has an infidel tumor It fails to grow and erase you...", an emotional poem of scenes of death and destruction that can not be replaced in their entirety so as to leave you at peace. The brilliance of you is your survival to go on, knowing you lived so as to tell the tales of war as they truly were experienced. Thank you for your constant fight for peace my admirable friend-Marcia Schechinger


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A CLEAN MURDER

A grande potpouri of effulgent thought-waves...-Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR

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Dirty time

Sir, you have used the metaphor brilliantly. The last stanza was profound. With regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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INWARD ODYSSEY

Simply unique the masterpiece....Path meets to inward lake/where I will meet you/on the white beach...... Great poet, salute your wisdom you communicate with such economy of sound. Contaminate your creative fire.......-Pranab k chakraborty

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IN OUR BREASTS

Satish filled with emotions and imagery you give the readers a taste of the "snake", the "seductress", and the "egos" who promote war for profit and power. Searching through memories of the past, we wonder what was it all for and why is war and killing of those different than oneself so disposable. Fear is fear, and the killing of others will not take it away. Thank you for sharing Satish.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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WHY

Satish: very well written. I am moved by this write.- Lady Dragonwyck

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SOFTNESS

crips and clear as only you can create, satish... amazing stuff! :) hugggs- nette onclaud

This is quite good and filled with amazing imagery. Well done. Best wishes.- deb radke

Interesting thoughts penned..Float on the clouds above the earth's pain makes life more enjoyable..- Sara Kendrick

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COLLECTIVE GUILT

Very well penned Sir! With regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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QUEST

Satish: I enjoyed this write. A lot in few well-chosen words. Your usual excellent write.- Lady Dragonwyck

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EXPRESSIONLESS

Satish starting with an excellent title and descriptive content, the memories of war and the longing for peace is ever present in your talented poems. I thank you for sharing your knowledge of the past, that one day all of our futures will display the longings for peaceful nations. Thank you Satish.- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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Domain inveighed

Is Freud there inside the poem? Tanatos...Please tell-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

Sarracenia, your lip is too large. 

for a kiss of death. I am coming down the steps 

to drink the acid.

Dear Sir, The above lines are remarkable! With kind regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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A BONE-DEEP KNOWLEDGE

this speaks to me of tyranny The state refuses liberty. mubarak thought that way quite sure he'd never see the day. The people would force him to go The people have the strength to show. Dictators that their time is done. The burmese people aren't alone Perhaps the generals will decide they can no longer stem the tide.- poeticpiers


Dear Satish .. well done as per usual ... enjoyed. warmest regards. -rassool jibraeel snyman, south africa

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BLOOD DRAPED

great work.........- Aminath Agleema

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NINTH SYMPHONY

Nice writing... we must find wholeness and accept truth no matter how painful.- Lavendar Jazz

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IN CLOUDS

Whoa! This is sad..I hope just a topic and not a happening in your life..- Sara Kendrick

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WREATHS ON DOOR (for Suu Kyi)

nice.- narain, jay p.


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NO TELLING

nice poem…depicts the breaking up of the buddhist statues in afghistan by the talibans there some years ago, i think- renukakkar


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FACSIMILE

beautiful poem...deep and image-rich-Kesav V Easwaran


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SHIFTING PAIN

Satish wonderful metaphoric usage in this peace poem, "...the tongue triggers discontent for a riot of spawned hunger...". The truth told in "authenticity" that the true murderers might be revealed so innocents will not be the tokens taken by war, your words are stronger than any weapon. Thank you for your constant fight for peace Satish.- Marcia Schechinger


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AFTER SERIAL BLASTS TO MAKE A POINT

This piece is an emotional powerhouse that stuns the reader with the brutality of reality. Very well put together !-Sunny S.


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THE GLASS HOUSE

A very mature, though-provoking piece about a man's position vis-a-vis the many roles he plays in life. The word-imagery was unique and totally arresting!- vinita18

Beautifully written Satish.-Patrick McFarland

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TALKING TO A FRIEND

I love the thought process in the brilliant poem.....- She Whispers

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NEUTRAL

We all search for truth. To each of us truth is true only to us. To others it is up to them to decide. Trick is that we need to let the others believe in what they want even if it is wrong to us. God gave them the right to believe just as He gave us the same right. This, I have learned only with maturity and mine comes with age and within my "sliding years."
I like your poem.- e. Gene Myers

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THE ENVIABLE

Satish,
I found the imagery of the first three verses striking and fancy I find meaning in them at a personal level.
The end of the poem mystifies me.
Most of your work is indecipherable to me though I note the threading imagery of moon and lake in your recent posts.
There seems to be a certain leaping from thought to thought between verses in your style of writing.
Many times I find myself being pulled up by the striking imagery and power of words as I read them in your poetry even if I may not grasp your intent.
To the continuing read,
best regards- Gion Gion


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RAVAGED

a real treat to read from the content perspective, satish!! f=great, moving stuff..:) huggs- nette onclaud

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BROKEN DAM

Satish with anguish and pain the memories of war can not be 'washed' away and the 'wounds' can never be totally healed. My friends who have fought in war have never been quite the same, your poems help me see what they feel inside and for that; and also for your continuous fight for peace -through your words- I thank you.- Marcia Schechinger


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LISTENING

Satish,
the refrain forces an examination of the succeeding lines for the often ignored common denominator.
“who tasted the laughing moonlight.” – beautiful expression.

“Death makes a big hole
in a spooky silence!” – the words “silence” and “death” resonate for me – “The Silent People” Walter Macken (set in the Great Famine) and a description of Ireland I heard reported from a woman who had survived into post-famine times (a silence descended over the country) Fergus- Gion Gion

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I TRUST

good one poem – congrat-  Swayam Prabha Misra


“You stutter?
Speak not truth.”- Gion Gion


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A CLEAN MURDER

mesmerizing lines-siddha nath singh


Satish,
“holding a black dawn,
my phoenix roving on dark river.” – liked this image,- Gion Gion


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A CLEAN MURDER

mesmerizing lines- siddha nath singh

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LOFTY PEAKS

Satish: I like this. I feel the goodness in this write. Your usual lovely creativity.- Lady Dragonwyck

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Wanderer

It was a taxidermal view. Congratulations you have won the knightcall most original line of the night. I like the semi-narrative sound to this poem somewhat detached.- knightcall

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Death of a shadow

If a shadow dies, sure the object and the light will die. That is the law of Nature. Sir, your thoughts are different,

A Genius has the power to think differently from others and invent new ideas. Nice Sir - U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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FAITHLESS HANDS

"Hunger will decide the fate of the earth.
Man was playing with the sands."
And man through faith or lack thereof shall see his future.
Interesting poem sir. - Allen Wilson


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FROZEN

An interesting poem. The very compact language as well as the images are compelling. I think I need to read this a few more times to dig into the message. Nice job.- Lloyd Phillip Campbell


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FIREFLIES

A very enigmatic and quirky piece of writing that summons up myriad 'glimpses'....I LOVE the last line...such a clever and lovely way to end...
Hugs, Diana..  - Diana Wiles


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FAILURE

The sun never said
I would shine down here
"I know the lines of truth"
and they don't live down here- Gerard Gauthier


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WISDOM

"The sky cracks open. One unreal moon slaps the dark clouds." This creates a beautiful picture.- Ajay, INDIA

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EVERLASTING

You are so gifted!!!- She Whispers

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LIKE A CHINESE LANTERN

Satish with your exquisite style and talent you have given the readers a view of what could have been lovely, if war had not come into play. With imagery and color that fades, the "moon" has no place in our lives when inhumanity exists except on the face of the people where tears blink "frozen". Thank you for sharing your spectacular works and your continuous fight for peace in all worlds- Marcia Schechinger


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COLOR CHANGE

Can you post Hindi version of this poem please ?- dp

“between the lips a word strieks, terror spills from a naked eye” – vivid, can see the face,- Gion Gion

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VIRULENCE

Are we talkin' Egypt here...or The South Bronx ?!!!!!!lol!- Frank James Ryan,Jr./FjR


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AFTERTASTE

Satish: I so believe this also. Very nicely worded.- Lady Dragonwyck

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AMBUSHED

Satish: Very nicely constructed write. I did enjoy. - Lady Dragonwyck

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PULSATING

please explain?? I  love it but what does it mean???- She Whispers

Satish: I like this write.  Very in-depth.  Your usual excellent write.-Lady Dragonwyck

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MORTAL BLUES

You are awesome...... Need I say more???- She Whispers

Satish: this is very thought-provoking. I do enjoy your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

your word choice is delicious,
This piece is deep.
Love this line. it seems to shout.

"That satanic streak
of tireless undressing
of a hapless monarch."- HollyBeth Bittick

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Blameless

Crops are sick. Insecticides and pesticides are dangerous. The soil is barren. Our minds are also like that. Poor Indians! -U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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HARVESTING

Satish: enjoyed this write. Your writes are very thought-provoking --- I do enjoy.- Lady Dragonwyck

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THIN VEIL

really a beautiful write. Remarkably vivid and flowing- NightOwl


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BEAUTIFUL

Hello Satish, A truly beautiful poem ! "Fear runs faster than discretion" wonderful words. Thank you Satish, God Bless, Richard- Richard Gildea, UK

Satish one of your best in imagery, internal emotions of war and savagery, and the "shrine" for the victims of persecution or death that must be constructed in this "garden" of "burnt embers". I am proud to be associated with such a fantastic poet as yourself. Thank you for the outstanding verse-Marcia Schechinger, USA

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Meaning beside me

Smooth, subtle and beautiful. With regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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Annihilation

What was left in our hands 
after risk and awards were given to seekers? 
Sign of grace at hairpin bends 
was absent.

Nobody was speaking..... abloute way of mind corrution. rationale poem

Nobody speaks in silence but their tongue

No one demands anything but truly due

Hands are still empty and await recognition

There is fire within without ignition

Highly stage managed emotional drama

We are dumb founded and gone into coma

Names may be announced and seekers may get

Opportunity is slipped out of hand or simply let - Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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BEAUTIFUL

Satish one of your best in imagery, internal emotions of war and savagery, and the "shrine" for the victims of persecution or death that must be constructed in this "garden" of "burnt embers". I am proud to be associated with such a fantastic poet as yourself. Thank you for the outstanding verse. - Marcia Schechinger, USA


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WORDS BEYOND

There had been a method in their madness in the standing crop of men ready to be genetically modified. so many ideas kept together ... one has to read many times to uderstand your intent...... wonderful poetic way ..... thank you- Genova Maaa


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RETURN OF THE POET

This is so heartfelt.....I love this poem...- She Whispers

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APPLE PICKING

Enjoyed reading! Look forward to reading more of your poems!- Westly Shaw, USA

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Meaningless

Really a poignant poem. With kind regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

Wonderful poem. Thanks for sharing, Sir.- Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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WATCHING A GALAXY

Thanks for sharing!- Westly Shaw, USA


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The melting

Dear Sir, I really admire your thoughts and poetry. With regards,- Shigufta Hena Uzma, Patna

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WORDS BEYOND

There had been a method in their madness in the standing crop of men ready to be genetically modified. so many ideas kept together ... one has to read many times to uderstand your intent...... wonderful poetic way ..... thank you- Genova Maaa

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