Monday, February 25, 2013

Sunday, February 24, 2013

WATCHING A GALAXY

a fantastic poem.- sammie bagley

Very thought provoking. I felt current and into the future with this. Your usual/always excellent inspiring write. - Lady Dragonwyck

CONSUMPTION

Hi Satish. I enjoy the subtle weaving of the tangible with the incoporeal, a carpetnas the exquisite corpse - I missed you and will catch up ~~ Blacpoet

Saturday, February 23, 2013

ONE SAINT WALKED OVER THE RIDGE


i liked your poem- sammie bagley

Morning Sir. I liked the first line. Very true. Very in-depth write as always.
Have a marvelous weekend.- Lady Dragonwyck

Wonderful write. - LindaM

STYES

Of course, as ever it requires more special concentration to get at the meaning of the poem. Smiles -Mangalaraj

NOTHING VERSE

Nice! Amazing words- Vitor Torre

Friday, February 22, 2013

MUTE DESIRE

It is guessed that most poems of the poet are vague and the meaning as understood by the reader is likely to differ from what the poet has had in mind. An uncommon write. Smiles-Mangalaraj

ASPHYXIA

I sense some rebelliousness in this write, "A neurotic dilemma to arrive or..." we shall all arrive one day, ready or not. Thank you for expressing from the depth of your being.- LightH2O

CLAUSES

Deep and in some lines painful. I like the ending stanza it shows resolution/determination, well penned.- LightH2O

MAGESTIC INNOCENCE

Much enjoyed, take care my dear friend.- LightH2O

very expressive beautiful write- aldous_hofmann

EXPERIMENTS

That final sentence wraps it up beautifully. "If the words had the answers..."- LightH2O

EXPLOSION

Unbelievable. Once again I find someone I know in your depiction of this complex personality . Like in Woe fom Wit of Fodor Dostoyevsky. Thanks for sharing- anaid

Within the bounds of time the day in Damascus was split into this poem in fragments- leafsailor

Thursday, February 21, 2013

PLEASE

Very coclorful terms and phrases in this art The poet extend outside the realm of norm- Alexander Coppedge

UNASKING

I have read so much poetry near and far, but I am at home with your mind~~ Blacpoet

FABRIC

very well written- thepoor

A DREAM AFTER THE DEMISE

Hello, Sir. I really felt this write. So much covered in your excellent write. As always, have a marvelous day.- Lady Dragonwyck

You are a very talented poet. Your work always amazes.- LindaM 

Wednesday, February 20, 2013

ANOTHER CREATION *

I like the positiveness of this poem. Have a marvelous day.........- Lady Dragonwyck

Monday, February 18, 2013

THE LOST GENERATION

A very powerful read.
Your poems are always provocative .- LindaM 

FURY OF JUGGLER *

Sir: very in-depth write. I felt so much. As always, I LOVE your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

I really enjoyed this powerful piece.- LindaM

RETOLD JOURNEY

I like this poem Satish. This is courage, not insanity. How often we forget the challenges that others face. I admire those who are content with much less than I myself have... ~-ouis gander

Sunday, February 17, 2013

Thursday, February 14, 2013

Tuesday, February 12, 2013

AFTER SERIAL BLASTS TO MAKE A POINT

Very touching and sensitiv ely penned poem!
Thanks for sharing.Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

Terrible poem! Terrorists shout and we shiver! Enjoyed
Culture cannot grow when scandals and bombs spread in a democracy. Degeneration indeed when violence creeps in.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala

Sunday, February 10, 2013

CREATIVE SHAME

"Neglecting the presence of choiceless pain.." very sad opening and closing lines. I heard we are all granted just a certain amount of heart beats and then our life is over. A fact we all have to come to terms with and accept. Just wish the wait was pain free. Take care my dear friend.- LightH2O

Age will undo the million dreams behind the creative shame. Sad indeed!- nimal p. dunuhinga

NEW KINGS

Corporates lacking in sympathy. Everything can be purchased. Strong images and synecdoche. Very nice and enjoyable-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala

Saturday, February 9, 2013

GEOMETRY

Wow just beautifully phrased and poetically written. Great- abbylovesf

GOLDEN LEAP

Awesome penetrating write to the bone of its marrow. wow.- shira

Friday, February 8, 2013

INVISIBLE PARTICLES

Wow. it is a powerful and thought creating write. It takes one places they may have not been before. always maggie.- maggie lopez sherry wilbur


I really liked the ending. Always enjoy your writes. - Lady Dragonwyck

GREEN VISION

Superb! Recommending this, what descriptions and imagery, fabulous!- Some Girl

FANTACIES

Satish libidinous encounter with a spark, what a creation. I envy your life. I don't wish to live it. I don't wish to feel it. But I want a part of it. I want to smell its aroma in the bosom of my fantasy, brilliant poem.- Hardik Vaidya

Nice poem! The use of imageries in this poem keeps the reader thinking deep. Pls read my poems and comment- Babatunde Aremu

Thursday, February 7, 2013

FIRST WORDS

You have my consent also I will not abandon you. "I cannot go back to my dilapidated house..." very touching poem.- LightH2O

STRAY COLORS

SUNBEAMS

Satish, I don't have the right bent of mind to dive into your creation, therefore I lie bereft of its smothering kiss. But I am touched, pushed, shoved, thrown, tossed and bitten by its raw power. I enjoyed reading it.- Hardik Vaidya

Wednesday, February 6, 2013

CLAWING NIGHT

Feels like a "reality check". Very in-depth. Your always interesting thought-provoking write. - Lady Dragonwyck

MEMORIZING

those who doused the flame should be punished! I hope there is no double meaning in this poem! if it is politically based I agree with you and both of us may be in the wanted list!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

Monday, February 4, 2013

DISTURBING

simlicity of the poem is the most sketching, I love this but I cant....I will try- Aftab Alam Khursheed


Friday, February 1, 2013

AGAIN FALLING IN LOVE

"This is for you my fellow-traveller, a beautiful sector of my hidden garden, where I have permitted you to come for a walk. " So beautiful and love the way you so softly end this poem, yes, you allow us to come to your hidden garden, thank you!- LightH2O

Beautifully written. Really lovely.- Some Girl