SLASHED WOUND

deep and painful meditation... best regards to my dear Satish.- LightH2O

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What Went Wrong?

Beautiful poem...It' s really a private punishment...Beautiful lines...
Why did you write a
sanguinary poem for your savior today?- Geetha Jayakumar

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BLAST

Excellent write my dear friend. Hugs.- Sue_Pinkston

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AWAKENING

As I read your poem I find myself confronted by the impact of dark forebodings and strong statements powerfully penned.- eleanor prince

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DARTING FEAR

Yes we all do want go back to those dust filled roads, where everything was forgotten in a careless cloud of dust, kites ruled the sky, carefree echoes ruled where guns now reign ...a sensitive and relavant piece of poetry this. I like the expressions that are unique and grand.- Nikunj

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IMAGES RHYMED

Interesting title and an interesting write which has
got me thinking. There is a deeper meaning within these lines, one that involves nature, time and how we nurture it I suppose..all in all I like it.- Meena Krish

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DECEPTION

dark nature poetry! Great choice of words and theme.-Ray Blue

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ARTS

I agree with Ray Blue its an art piece! Excellent.-Meena Krish

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DISTURBING

Nicely penned. You got a vivid imagination!-Ray Blue

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RITE OF PASSAGE

You have some very interesting writes which entertains the reader with images has well has things to think about..liked this.

Any confession will
take away the mystry. Who killed
the nothing?- Meena Krish

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SMASH THE BOOK

Sounds like bureaucracy is showing its ugly head in your business. I may be way out off? Hope you will regain your peace this night.- LightH2O

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PINK CITY

excellent read my friend.-BellaTrix

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DARTING FEAR

Yes we all do want go back to those dust filled roads, where everything was forgotten in a careless cloud of dust, kites ruled the sky, carefree echoes ruled where guns now reign ...a sensitive and relavant piece of poetry this. I like the expressions that are unique and grand.- Nikunj

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NIHILITY

Like a passing from coma to non-existence...Yet, the query must still be adressed...Where will go the soul from there, or be all that moves with the wind a non-sequitur? - Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR

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LOCKED DOOR

all doors can be opened
by the Locksmith
-no-one believes Love is wrong for anyone
just that few do it in THIS life....- stranger

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Dirty mirrors

Dear Satish. I find your poem intriguing with a lot of thought provoking images.

I have been trying to contact you by email but it keeps coming back as undeliverable. Please would you

kindly send an email to my address. Thanks.-Avril Meallem, Jerusalem Israel

What a throw-up! The figures of speech it seems are thankful to be placed in the confessing lines and clear all the doubts of bad stinking weather! Warm regards.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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TRANSMIGRATION

Sir, very inspiring. I especially liked the last lines, very very true. Always inspiring reads.- Lady Dragonwyck

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MAN’S DESTINY

Your perceptions are timeless... "The longing for the other side,.." much depth in your lines.- LightH2O

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WEEPING GOD

Beautiful, I love poetry by more experienced poets. I love this and your poetry can teach us young guns about speaking to the heart.- ftjenk0819

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OF TIME AND CHAINS

God tells us all how to be happy
few yet listen
hardly God's fault we suffer then...- stranger

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ANOTHER STROKE

great piece I enjoyed it!! - naee hey check out my new poem oil down my body ( the life)- Le'yonnah Naee

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HALF – BEING

Thank you for sharing this beautiful write. Namaste.- Brandon S. W.

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HALF BY HALF

So poignant and beautiful!- Juniper Pickleweede

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SMOKING THE MIRROR

I like the way you treat a subject...especially the craft..and definitely images very unique...quiet away from downtrodden paths.- Syam Madappattu

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A FUTURE WAITS

I like this!!!!- Cat Sellers

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COLORED DESIGNS

in the jungle of sandal woods, good one sir..- Gajanan Mishra

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DECAYED CENTURY

Disturbing images... hope you are enjoying this new year. Hugs!.- LightH2O

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SLAUGHTERED DREAMS

Listening is a skill done with not only with ears and whispers ... we must tread very softly on our fingers and toes with our eyes and our foreheads and our noses ... Then we should ask ... why are we listening really ... We should look inside ourselves to find that answer.- Some Girl

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RAGING DEBATE

Existentialism personified - a good poem.- Some Girl

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THE BIRTH OF A PUBLIC STANCE

Well, you've survived to tell the story....Intriguing,.- Dean

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STAIRS

Beautiful.- Some Girl

Effective use of imagery in this nostalgic write.- Sandra Martyres

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CULTURAL DRIFT

You have the moon always.- Hannah's Heart

All things can last in this world not even our existence...the only consolation we have is to leave a mark of goodness for others to emulate!- marvinbrato

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LOVE & PAIN

Beautifully rendered love poem, though I didn't quite get the pain as it finished in mutualism, easing the pain meant to inflict sufferring to the lover.- Dean

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Dirty Mirrors

Dear Sir: Happy New Year 2014. I always enjoy your writes and find a lot in each write.- Lady Dragonwyck

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FAILED GOD

This was quite interesting.- Hannah's Heart

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A YEARNING

An excellent poem full of truth- Some Girl

You've painted a wonderful and original painting as usual... very beautiful last two paragraphs.- LightH2O

Wow! A deep and thought provoking write that clearly raised the poignant questions to be answered by the rest of the World with its unique interpretation! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! - Romeo Della Valle

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A FRIGHTENING DREAM

the poor mostly cannot survive without Love of one another
so some know God long before the rich destroy this earth for 'profit', thus destroying their evil...- stranger

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EUTHANASIA

Much to think about.... Happy New Year! your friend.- LightH2O

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CHESSBOARD

To me this poem is a way, releasing feelings: anger, depression or something else I can't discern. Anyway a nice poem. Keep it up.- chrisnewman

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