CHEMISTRY

Lovely write Sir.! :)- Mr. Frivolous

NICE.- SHALINI -the solitary star

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FREEDOM AT LAST

Such bold and prominent work. Very impressive as usual. Another great piece by one of my favorite poets.- Solomon

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THE ECHO REACHES THE WH

Your words created an incredible scene in my mind. As always, I so enjoy your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

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At Precipice

We are a strange race. slightly out of pace to our surroundings.-Gaffer

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Cocktail

This is way too deep for my understanding, im still new to poetry you see.-rian Jani

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ASHES OF HATE

Well penned Satish Sir. A nice end to the poem.- Jharna Choudhury

love it.- shay johnson

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PILL

Wow quite a mish mash of imagery and ideas,....a bit meta physical but maybe a bit sci-fi and apocalyptic to boot. Some write. - just Arun

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ANCIENT ADDRESS

loved the flow of it very much.- Neil Sarkar

Deep - samantha belfeld

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AGONY

First off, allow me to say that the first two opening lines are absolutely perfect. It truly sets the mood and a vague mental picture in mind. The next few verses give me the feeling of death and storm arising, agonizing the small voice of a frightened boy (the frightened choir becomes dumb). Then, the last two verses show that same boy in old age, agonized the same as ever before (the forgetful, yellow bones of a thin father). But, even though his youth was poor and crude, he still reaches to it as though it were somehow better (with a gift to fathom the flute, takes hold of the wind).
Maybe my interpretation is not nearly what you meant, but that is the sense I gather. Nevertheless, wonderful!- JLavender

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Genocide

Excellent write!
How can you acquiesce is the question and the wonder! A new model in the making as pointed out by the poet is because of a number of reasons, most of which I dare say are misguided and meaningless that turn the nature hostile, the sky guilty. Warm regards,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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RAINS ARE COMING

Sounds like a forewarning from cosmos itself. Intense and dramatic write...- rain ...

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Empty Dreams

good write well worded, have checked out the other poets on here?? -by Poetic T

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THE COMMITMENT

Love the last two stanzas of this poem. First because there is nothing more beautiful than the full moon and two because of its determination to face our trials head on. Nicely done!-  Colleen Courtney

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Shame and fear

It is a poem for deep reading. -P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala

A paragon of marvelous poetry...wonderful write,sir.- partha sarathi paul, guskara-burdwan

Absolutely without frontier... the poem travels limitlesss with examples beyond range and compare. Warm regards,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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RAINS ARE COMING

Sounds like a forewarning from cosmos itself. Intense and dramatic write..- rain ...

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Bleeding Heart

I enjoyed this... And as an unrelated side note, that is my favorite flower.- Sweet Zingiber

This is an interesting poem. It's easy to forget our own mortality, and lose sight of what's truly important. - Dan Kross

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It Was Pindrop Silence

A good poem though it is too brief and have such hidden meaning I think.-Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

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FAULT LINE

good one.- anush madhu

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MAKE BELIEVING

Excellent write, Satish! Well done! Kindest regards.- Pandita Sanchez

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THE ECHO REACHES THE WHOLE SKY

This is so quiet and as a reader gave me a solitary feeling, the ending snapping that for a second almost. I really enjoyed reading this. - Liquid Poetess

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The Buddha was going to weep

Let us see what is now done with the melted walls. Warm regrds,-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Very striking a feed thread you have given us! Sorrow is very much noted. I am glad I read this poignant work. Thanks you for sharing and congratulations on your win. Diane M Quinlan

Hi SATISH.. Just a quick note to congratulate you for having this impressive write posted on Soup's home page for the whole world to easily see.. Well, at least many poetry lovers will get to check it out. Blessings and keep writing wonderful works! -Lyric Man

SATISH, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT loveSKAT A 

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FALLING CRUMBS

'to wet the floor of grass, which stiches the earth' - neat line - I like it. - eleanor prince|

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DARK FEET

Very nice!- Truessence4u

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POINSETTIA

Awesome write. I truly enjoyed reading it. Thanks, for sharing.- Sue_Pinkston

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A SMILE WAS RAPED

.............a wonderful poem....enjoyed...- * Sunprincess *

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GO AWAY

I am not sure of all the meanings, but there is a powerful emotional connection in these words. Re-reading....-Don Bouchard

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PREPARING FOR NOTHINGNESS

Satish, as always, your poems have so much thought and power. "the inverted sea", caught my eye, we are a world of skeptics and worry of power. I, like yourself, continue to hope one day for peace. Life is short - why so many enemies?- Marcia Schechinger, USA

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HONEY TRAP

nice poem Satish - deep feelings and thoughts.- Mohan Chutani

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STARY THOUGHTS

Great write - I enjoyed reading this piece very much!- Pandita Sanchez

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A Very Hurt Poem

Share your sense of hurt, Mr. Verma! Indeed, casual, mindless violence causes so much damage.... -Padmajka Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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Anaphylactic Shock

With proper estimation of self, motorcyclists, both literal and figurative, can avoid accidents, bloodshed, and shocks for getting their breaths on track. The narration has a speed that muddles the reader. Warm regards, -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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MORSELS

Nice closing line.- Seema Chowdhury

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LONE JOURNEY

Great imagery.-just Arun

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…… STUNNED ME

A touching but truly sad poem....brilliant write sir.- Kaila George

Beautiful! as well as your present.-Light H2o

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YOU AND EVERYBODY

I am always awed by what you write sir thank you for sharing.- Kaila George

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…… Distant Shores

beautiful-samanyan

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WHAT ENDING?

Sounds a tad irreligionalistic, tho' being that my mortal fabric has no conception of the before me, and only faith in the after me, I am bound by my beliefs to respect your philosophics, here -Frank James Ryan,

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Anonymously

Profound in it's simplicity.-S34N

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Encircled GLOOM

Really cool write. Love the title too. :-)-Blessed614

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Encircled GLOOM

for it is written and it shall come to faith - i feel the age of your pen and it's wisdom.-after vision

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