Monday, September 30, 2019

When The Attack Comes

I have not read a lot of your work or even know the volumnity of it... but I really appreciate this piece the “tantra” allusion in the first stanza and the 100 lamp et al further along possibly from the gospel parables. Nice. High level stuff. This is New Yorker quality...-ishmael

There Was No Prelude

I detect a hint of Dylan Thomas here, but I need to linger on this awhile.. I am interested. This is good ...goood.-ishmael

I'm letting this one sink in more.-JacieStralkoDuca

Sunday, September 29, 2019

The Dirty Beliefs

Timely.-James Michae

Absolutely beautifully written.-Alta H Mabin

The Essence

Such a perceptive piece of work, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

" All the comings
and goings were vague
who will stand the ground."
An intricate life song, philosophical as also intriguing. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Hurricane Lamp

An interesting story of the lamp... TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Friday, September 27, 2019

To Be Human

Ha! Very interesting, sir. I like the way you express your art.-Cascade

Classical Entry

If this doesn't win, I'll be very, very. I dunno. mad.-nourayasmine

Nostalgic Return

Hmm, interesting portrayal of nostalgia... TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Thursday, September 26, 2019

My commitment

Interesting commitment. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Wednesday, September 25, 2019

Monday, September 23, 2019

Don't Touch The Black Sun

Hope has no flesh in the black sun and we should not touch. You have penned an excellent and wonderful poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

I Will Speak

Very good poem, Varma Ji-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

Good, found at least a way to release the locked up emos...TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Sunday, September 22, 2019

Nothingness

Were you loyal
to humanity? What was
religion of god? the religion of God. dear Satish Verma, you are redifining God and religion with this simple question. thank u dear .. -Drtony Brahmin

Thursday, September 19, 2019

Avatar

though forgetting self
but the revelation
yeah; its pull the self out to the.........../// wonderful expression.-Mahtab Bangalee

Wednesday, September 18, 2019

Truth Hides Behind Sun

Profound and very well penned. I really like this one very much....Peace..-Mike Mezz

Deceiving Self

Learning any art with responsibility is important. Death is truth and learning this art is also excellent...10-Kumarmani Mahakul

Arts In Telling

A question is always a question. An answer is never an answer.-James Michael

Monday, September 16, 2019

Believing In Myths

Arrival of spirit is noted by time. An excellent poem is very brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Against The Tide

amazing thoughtscape
There is a world "between snow and sleet" - beauty indeed lives here. -allets

This is beautifully written, sir.-Cascade

The Blessings Fail

Redefining and finding.-James Michae

Unwritten Affair

Stretching from the extraordinary to a prison of ordinary!
Superb piece!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

As If Life Has Stopped

 pray for a swift death
I supose there will be long harshness and real prayers for pain's ending.-allets

This is a fine expression of artistry-Cascade

Sacred Horse

In depth lines... TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellor

Friday, September 13, 2019

Straight From Dark

AH ! HIDE & SEEK* ! THE ATTEMPTED - MEASUREMENT* of ETERNITY* = ( MAYA ) ! . . . . . . .-OUTBACKS

Incompleteness

we all hurt,sometimes-word_man

No Epilogue

sense the depth in this piece..
I lack the context though, to understand.-Thomas S I

Sell The Mocking Birds

Perhaps selling the mockingbird is a more serious offence than ' killing' it! Explosive write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

Courtesies

Intrigue of intrigue
I never know quite what to say. I just keep reading you everyday. And I always reread what you've had to say.-Morningglory

Fall In November

Profound lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellor

Thursday, September 12, 2019

The Crescent Moon

A streak of light breaks the myth and The Crescent Moon motivates poetic mind. An excellent poem is well penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Wednesday, September 11, 2019

Myths Of Ariel

Deep.
gravity the cause of our demise,
pulling and dragging us down
to look into its eyes
bring us down to it's size.....
life.-Faizel Farzee

Not A Dream

i have to come back and read many time to understand this one. i will leave comment soon-Truth Bringer

Being Alone

sometimes the journey is not important-Truth Bringer

Monday, September 9, 2019

Friday, September 6, 2019

Motionless

A short but most intimate trip down the memory lane. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Not Like Anybody

I really like this free form verse. Short, but deeply moving.-Willys Watson 

Preternaturally

A painful and disheartening themed poem!
An exceptional write as always!-Laura

Proclaming

i am loving the line fishing in an aquarium was prohibited. how are you coming up with strokes of genius?-Truth Bringer

Wednesday, September 4, 2019

Real Me

Wonderful sense of mystery and poetic majesty and secret.-Julia Luber

Exodus

An Exceptional write...
as always!
There’s always a price...
to live one’s life!-Laura

At The End Of Game

The fools create their drama
they offered me free entry and participation
I kindly deferred their offer, said I had prior arrangements
they said you must come for its all about you
but you know me not, I replied in earnest, for indeed they don't
don't know any of you from Adam and I don't care to know
oh!, never mind that, they replied...we made it all up
we're good at fabricating, distorting and creating fake news
and so its our drama and we'll have it, with or without you
Do whatever you like, I said to them
I do not have the requirements or qualification to participate
in a Fools Drama by Fools.........-Yenson I Can't.....

Love...
I hear your words
And my heart feels
How I wish love was always real!-Traveler

I Will Write A Poem

Congratulations I really enjoyed this.-Star

Every Moment

Time has the
wings of golden eagle. It
flies on the peaks of thoughts - candid shot. An insightful read. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Tuesday, September 3, 2019

Convulsions

Death is a natural process. It comes on way. Death is truth for all. This is a very brilliant poem well penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Your Tresses Of Night Shade

When we meet at the end of the road, may our faith not be separated by ‘the headstones’! May we be enriched by that ‘bronzed man’!-Laura

Beautiful words from you. We shall all meet with the truth one day and accept everything.-dusk arising

Miracles Happen

Life is definitely athe poet's best muse ! Beautiful!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

Uprooting Dandelions

Interesting
Intriguing title.
Poem blew my mind.-vjochum

dandelions
Intruguing as always. Read you every night.-Morningglory

Monday, September 2, 2019

Opening A Window

Oh, I love this. It’s brief and haunting and real.-Hyacinth 

The Solemn Pledge

First two stanzas: portrayal of an immense space and fleshless- ness!
A truly wonderful take on spiritually!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

The Land Pulls

An exceptional write as always!
Accepting our failures as well as we do our accomplishments...
is an accomplishment!-Laura

Crucifixion

Violence read between the lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Sunday, September 1, 2019

On Naked Paper

A perceptive poetic expression, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

Dwarfing

We have become stupid with our pursuits. The sculptor creates art, where others fail to grasp its beauty.

I just never know where my mind will go when I read your poetry. Poetry being the key word. Something lost at times in this chat room which I selfishly enjoy.-James Michael