Thursday, August 31, 2017

Unheading

Wonderful. Enticingly thought provoking. What a beauteous musing missive. Thanx for sharing, for all you do and don't. Keep up the great work, please. "Where there are two or more gathered in his name, there is love". Have a nice day. Ciao, for now. reality-reality1

Splitting The Night

Making Overtures

"The pain eases, when memory fails." No regrets comes across as coming to terms with reality. Clever usage in the last line.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Sunday, August 27, 2017

Measuring The Scales

The saddest lips will
not tell the violence of uncluttered
words, that had wounded the heart.
Beautiful line..Nice work.10+++ for it. -Subhas Chandra Chakra

Beautiful poem Satish
Thank you for sharing.-Mario, Lucien, Rene Odekerken

Blackened Seeds

Intriguing but cannot decipher...can you help this uneducated soul...because I really like your work!-Martina Lynch

Oversighting

Nice composition Satish Sir.Very thought-provoking.-IFTEKHAR AHMED, KOLKATA

Thursday, August 24, 2017

The Wax Palace

Yes, I think there is smoke all around...and what a haunting atmosphere it has created.-mossgirl19

The Stings

Ours is rather a crazy world and these stings are everywhere...especially in our heads!

This was a real captivating write.-mossgirl19

Pantheon

The vagueness here is enjoyed in a good way.-mossgirl19

A Moth Speaks

considerate and well-considered Satish-Douglas Scotney

Ziplocked

Good one Satish ji!-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Wednesday, August 23, 2017

A Bird Song

Come, sit beside me
holding my hand.
We will look at the moon..... // Lovely expression of togetherness. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

Wonderful reiteration of the eternity of love. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Tuesday, August 22, 2017

Unforgiving

I feel like I could chew on this for awhile. Excellent imagery. It seemed to end a bit abruptly, but then, perhaps you were going for a fade out image of bared trees. In which case, it works. Cheers!-SaintdeSales 

Into The Lair

The amazing haunting feeling fills the air again.-mossgirl19

Drift Wood

The first piece of love I read from you. There is a heavy feeling of sadness in this piece. The last stanza is definitely fantastic.-mossgirl19

Words are mine

I liked the third stanza immensely.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Sunday, August 20, 2017

Standing Alone

The meloncholic pain well expressed in these thoughtful verses.-Iftekhar Ahmed, Kolkata

A poem filled with melancholy and isolation. A nice read sir.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Repeating History

Satish Sir you have poignantly expressed your sorrows. In fact it is the harshest reality of life which none can shirk by any means. Very nicely composed. -Iftekhar Ahmed, Kolkata

A stirring composition. TFS. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

Saturday, August 19, 2017

Recollection

I faved these...I like to keep reading them...I am still trying to figure out the first...The third with the help pf a dictionary and the second I am guessing! these are really clever!-Martina Lynch

Friday, August 18, 2017

Yellow Roses

Oh this is beautifully written, really appreciate that first verse...It is so neatly folded...no blurring of the lines! Wonderful piece.-Martina Lynch

Thursday, August 17, 2017

Waiting To Blink

I like this a lot. Well played.-Nicholas Browning

Without A Title

we are lost and will wander around looking for conclusion :D - enjoyed this one. Particularly: "...I wanted the sacred smell of dark heaven/which was dispensing the forgiveness..." and "Deliberately I cleaned my room twice/to welcome the instincts..." -allets

Tuesday, August 15, 2017

Doom’s Day

Just hauntingly great.-mossgirl19

My respect!!-Frank

I love this and it captures the horror of what has happened today. Thank you!-Nobody

The Wars

This felt like a dream - or rather, a nightmare - where so many different images seem to violently cut into each other as each stanza switched to another. It was powerful and raw, with little drops of poetic air.-Bradley Peter

Blew me away, again!-mossgirl19

Monday, August 14, 2017

Like Rosetta Stone

White holes
in black teeth.
An empty truth bleeds.

A lesser light
fights the darkness in a ring.
There was no excuse
for harmony.
- - - - - - - A profound poem with stunning imagery- - - - - -Darkness in the ring- - A breach in harmony- - -Bharati Nayak

Sunday, August 13, 2017

Who Was Me?

Wow, another great write here Satish. You always take me somewhere with your great imagery and unique tone.-mossgirl19

The imagery had me on the edge of my seat. Dark, straining, reaching. Exquisite piece of work!!-Jessica

Bare Tongue

This is beautiful and haunting to the bones!-mossgirl19

The thought process you had when writing this eludes me but can I just say I love it for what it is, suppose that's the beauty of poetry.-Aries Rising

To be honest I don't even know what you are talking about, but I love it. Blue clouds? Empty cauldron? Robot leading a revolution maybe? This poem remind me of the scene in the 2011 (I think) of the reboot of freddy kreuger nightmare when at the beginning he was dreaming of all the weird things and pigs in the pots on fire in the kitchen. This poem also for some reason makes me think of heronymous bosch and one of the paintings, thinking what kind of fable is being depicted here. Great poem. And please don't be offended I'm writing on instinct ha.-Milo

The Ink Did Not Stop

The ink did not stop / I was writing alone. This you have done admirably and with remarkable diligence always. Your obsessions to express your most profound thoughts consistently, is indeed very inspiring, Satish ji.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Friday, August 11, 2017

Self-Deception

"Goddess of ruin"---oh what an amazing usage! Nice poem. -R R Gandikota
KAKINADA

Wednesday, August 9, 2017

Courting Fidelity

This just exploded! In my mind, it did. So powerful!-mossgirl19

Courting Fidelity

This just exploded! In my mind, it did. So powerful!-mossgirl19

Howling

Seamless.
Thanks for sharing another creative piece from your pen.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

Tuesday, August 8, 2017

Reaching Out

The emotions have been captured in your poem in a very careful and precise manner.
Can you read from the stains of an empty
cup of tea? My life had been like that. These lines are really relatable by many since their life is also no different from that of yours.-Gurleen Kaur Narang

Monday, August 7, 2017

Arithmeatic

I enjoyed this poem, the imagery you created was nice.-lostinthewaves

please tell me what your poem name means.
simple and cute poem.-Abraham George

The Shooting Star

Powerful Images
"By transforming the obsession
into the wholeness of a metaphor,
don’t you externalize the center,
of a theme?"
When I want to read the finest poetry I've encountered anywhere in a long time - I read 10 or so of your work and rethink why I became a poet when the world has you. - Marvelous writing - enjoyed twice :-allets

Of Unknown Roots

There is something very special in the poem- a search, a probe or a study of reality of life. Thanks.
Tying loose / threads / to become sane.
The book remains incomplete / I have come to meet the prince of
pranks. There was a / mystical touch.-Rajnish Manga

Cupidity

Really like this...I love the imagery you have created!-Martina Lynch

Howling

Seamless.
Thanks for sharing another creative piece from your pen.-Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

Existential Dilemmma

Oh, wow. You amaze yet again in this piece, Satish.-mossgirl19

Saturday, August 5, 2017

Knowing Thyself

No one knows who they are. This is the nature of mind full of electro-chemical neurons that pulsate unceasingly all of life. See my Our Fascinating Minds.-Robert Murray Smith

Friday, August 4, 2017

Black Walls

True, things have been deteriorating fast, faster than we can imagine. But there is hope. Always a star of hope in the dark sky blinking away without our notice. Do we care to notice? An interesting read sir. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Thursday, August 3, 2017

Without A Name

This poem seems to have borne out of dissatisfaction of not having achieved much in life, and talks of defeats in life. The mind is also agitated at time running out. While this is reality with most people, it will be better to remain positive and try to do something worthwhile in the remaining time of life. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

A loser becomes a nameless hero, much like the thought all will be well in the end. Stimulating read. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata