A rebel being born

'Eyes tell it all'
The strangest and the concretest thing that shows human beings learning disability is history repeating itself.
Excellent read! Thanks for sharing this.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

Rebel is born.. nice poem
Love reigns supreme
I followed and believed in theme
That is how I loved to be admirer

Of all flowers brought up by Gardner-Hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

wonderful poem....admirably reflective, my dear poet.-partha sarathi paul, guskara- burdwan

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SYMBIOSIS

Wonderful, this type of writing reminds me of Ric S. Bastasa-Some Girl

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………….. Afraid of whom?

Especially love line.-Ginger Blue

Introspection on life can severely test faith and being left "blind" can cause more pain. Deep thoughts here Satish and thanks for sharing them.-Fay Slimm

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ANONYMOUSLY

Very unique. Wonderful economy of words! I really like!!- David Wegman

Nice descriptiveness.- Robert Pettit

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A LOVE STORY

Fascinating- Ginger Blue

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HEART OF THE MATTER

A deep and well written poem, Satish !! - Anne Lise Andresen

Very descriptive and expressive work..- Sara Kendrick

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………….. Afraid of whom?

Especially love line 10 and 11- Ginger Blue

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SANE DEPARTURE

It's as if
I were sitting
in the front pew in church
and the pastor
was speaking to me....ii- Is It Poetry

Beautiful expression! ! !- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi http://www.poemhunter.com/

ABDICATION

Hey old friend, it is nice to see your wonderful poetry again! There were a lot of great lines in this and I liked your play on words. Well done Satish!!-Jared Pickett

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VIRTUOUS OR VICIOUS

I am the master of "dirty";-) I can help you with that, we can collaborate. LOL!! Real talk though, I loved this quaint little ditty...-Jared Pickett

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Catastrophe

Catastrophie... Nicely portrayed

Few industries create health hazards
What shall we look for future from now onward?
Is it safe to breath pure even?
No, now we have been desperately driven

We are facing starvation deaths
We are facing natural wrath
We are dying with un natural fury
What kind of this is misery?-Hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

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Temple of Hope

... mysteriously beautiful as always, unexpected images on a flawless flow. Your poetry is like a Rorschach ( always worth a read ).- york2frisco
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Peace fot the Living People

I really love the part about people becoming insects. Great poem.- winterktwink

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A living soul

I cannot hold a reality.
We were playing with each other. Nice poem

Can any one come and explain?
Why should I be fearful and remain?
My life does not belong to me in person
I have no more desire to express it with reasons

The world has progress and grown in new dimension
Certainly yes but more in apartness and deterioration
It has brought us together but taken lives apart
We feel it no more as genuine life to feel part.-hasmukh mehta, ahmedabad

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Not Quite A Prayer

A compelling read.- gopal

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NON - DUALITY

It is horrible to have life ripped from us one limb at a time. But at least we can still write poetry so long as we can speak. Thanks for sharing.- Eternal Singer

Great ending. Makes me think.- Bengieske

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Tonight

simply beautiful....!! really awesome...-Bhaskaranand Jha Bhaskar

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Chastity

I am magnetised by the vesatility of the poem. Meaningful to the core , succinct and compassionate too. The last stanza is mind blowing.-Nikunj

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FIXED FLUX

Interesting write. Found this a pleasure to read. Keep penning your writes as I would truly love to read more.-  Sue_Pinkston

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PAPER THIN

An interesting write. One correction is needed: replace "unconceived" (not a word) with "inconceivable".- Robert Pettit

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Edge of Revenge

That's what I thought too.- ND@RK H€@RT

My own interpretation, could this be about "abortion' that's what I get out of this if so very well said I agree. Sorry if its about something else haha.6 minutes ago by nutshellgmw1

Like 51 seconds ago by Hannah's Night

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BUYING TIME

If you bought time, I hope you got a bargain. This is a decent write.- Robert Pettit

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Power Lines

Wonderful poem written with maturity and imagery. Keep writing.- Babatunde Aremu

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UNFINISHED

"In a sauteed orgasm" WOW, powerful word play there my friend! This is what I have been missing!! This beauty, my welcome back.- Jared Pickett

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INVENTION

Very dark poem. Gave me chills. Thanks,for sharing.- Sue_Pinkston

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Revelation

I really like your style...- sidtoyou

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RECALCITRANCE

This makes one stop and wonder what relationships really are about. A very good write for sure.- will karry

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TRAIL OF BLOOD

Ah and you will find him alive and well! love you for ever my friend.- leafsailors Ghost

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On this shore of life

It speaks the truth of life.....-Vandana, New Delhi

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THE ESSENTIAL

the brewing of the issues..as usual nice..thank you for sharing..-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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THE JUDGEMENT

I like this poem, very emotional Satish, EDDIE.- Edwin Jepson, UK

Beautiful poem. Well painted emotion. Keep writing. - John Onyeme, Nigeria

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A BROKEN PRIDE

This is very rich in thought. Nice poem. - John Onyeme, Nigeria

Most of the times we let this pride rule over our mind even in our hearts, a broken pride will open new journey into one's heart... God bless us all..- Roche Rosos, Philippines

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Mystery

Nice poem.-John Onyeme

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OPEN YOUR BOWELS

this is amazing.- laurenelizabeth97

If she didn't cry, we wouldn't have life. That's why mars is still dead. - Hannah's Night

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CUP OF ELIXIR

So wonderful this is, Great use of the elixir.- Mr. Frivolous

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HUSHED WITHDRAWL

this is beautiful, I look up to you as a poet.- chloeisaraggedyone

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AFTER LEAVING THE HOME

very nice poem sir......
i also invite u to read mine and give suggesstions.......- Shraddha The Poetess

boundaries of scent, good one, thanks.- Gajanan Mishra

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CANNOT OPEN THE LOOP

But death can. But there's different kinds of deaths. The death where one soul is born into a new body. The death where the soul leaves and returns to the body. Spirual possession, an open eye is the gate way to a persons soul. If they look into each others eyes..soul exchange...it's not really death persay..but the movement of ones spirit from one body to another. Whether it be the astral plane or the earthly plane...Or the dream plane. Some people live in dreams and nightmares until another spirit wakes them to a higher plane. When dealing with death..nothing can beexplained by science..it has no evidence to prove its own existence..apart from the eye of man. Eyes can be fooled..just need a crafty magician. One who can pull a fast one on the lofty eyes. Nice poem.- Hannah's Night

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