Tuesday, July 31, 2018

Innumerable

Shooting Stars

I like the deliberate pacing and delicate brush strokes you use to create your poetry. A mystery and yet not.
Take care.-Mr. Darcy

Sunday, July 29, 2018

Loose Threads

A tremendous canvas. Connecting to land.
Loose threads is a deep gallery.
Great writing.-charlie

Sisyphus

This piece...
I'm not sure how many times I just read this but it made me read it over and over.
Looked up Sysyphus and really related to the kind of loop one can get caught up in.
Makes me think.-sootyash

Monday, July 23, 2018

I Demand

Satis,
very intricate piece with some magical complexities to unravel too.
Totally enjoyed this one.-Unsub

The Claudication

"...Too/Many boats in the sea of eyes."
The world watches as migrants drown - I can not stop thinking of helpless flounding boats and bigger boats ignoring them. Immigrants murdered to prevent contamination of nationalist maritime doctrines and policies. Italy has closed its doors and won't take any refugees profered by Spain. These little scenarios escape the media. The drama is tragic and too real - allets

Thursday, July 19, 2018

Wounded Veils

Beautiful and well flowing write!-Troylato

Beautiful and well flowing write!-Troylato

http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/ 

This Was Cobra Night

This Sounds Like
Trump & Putin. I could be wroing. I'm usually wrong. Apropo and topical thugh.- allets

https://www.postpoems.org/ 

Debating Point

Excellent point of view!-Laura

https://mypoeticside.com/ 

Gliding

As always your poems are fascinating. Well done-Brenda

Beautiful words.
Interesting ones too, i loved the use of "altruistic" and "requiem".
Take care.-Fenrir

Tuesday, July 17, 2018

A Wrong Turn

Thanks for the insightful share. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Saturday, July 14, 2018

Loftiness

You play beautifully with words and gift us little treats...thanks so much☺!!-Tahsin.Z 

A Bruised Memory

Memories need not necessarily be happy, some times laced with pain, they could be most abhorred. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Friday, July 13, 2018

Untold Journey

"A child will ask, when my father will return? There was no answer. The tide has brought back the ashes. " This last line is so true for some. Great write!-Troylato

Sulking Alone

Wednesday, July 11, 2018

Stone Hearted

That first stanza really packs a punch. It seemed so spontaneous.-Sara Fielder

Tuesday, July 10, 2018

Moratorium

"The museum of skulls" is very evocative all by itself.
One can't help but get a sense of irony, with "Civilisation had come very far." (complete with capitalisation).
It looks like you're getting closer to refining this style.-charlie 

Monday, July 9, 2018

No Vilification

An interesting share. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Sunday, July 8, 2018

Fangs Open

Oh, this is a bit of poetic class, my friend. I understand every word and their meanings. Brilliant metaphor. Good work.-kevin browne

Abstract Thoughts

obsessed w/ the 1st stanza.-eleven_eleven

This Happened

I love the context of third verse!-Zaft 

Lips Will Measure

I really enjoyed reading this piece. Great metaphors.-Cindy

Well lined piece, great write.-DarkLight

Saturday, July 7, 2018

Ink Fall

I really, really like the last stanza. It seems ethereal, but has weight, too.
"aurora of stainless" is an interesting turn of phrase...-charlie 

Friday, July 6, 2018

Caged Bird

Don't die on me yet brother. I still have much to learn.-Lawless

Endless Search

Great write on Friday eve! Truly enjoyed.-Troylato

Good to see words appreciated from your pen!-Debera

Defying Time

Wonderfully put.-Jayesh

Soaring High

So brilliant. I have been wrestling this question myself of late. You have carved this into the most beautiful question.-Tanya Southey


Wow, this poem is amazing.-Bless_Poet

Congrats on the win!-mossgirl19

Congrats on the win!!-Ren

Congrats!-Mark

It is hard to find a place in the world when all around you is bad.
Nominated.- Ben Pickard

Day Of Anxiety

An interesting read. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Wednesday, July 4, 2018

The Vinegar Test

Oh my, you've stepped it up.
You are my favorite poet next to Robert Goslin. You are probably more recognized.-Lawless

Tuesday, July 3, 2018

Unmaking Me

Your article is detailed, thanks to it I solved the problem I am entangled. I will regularly follow your writers and visit this site daily geometry dash.-ellascottgm

The best of of a life - Moving on...
Many absurd tasks are offered by the brain to wrap up the betrayer or depression...still a good intention rises somewhere...Thanks for sharing this!-Tahsin.Z

What A Scenario

Simple and Beautiful.-R R Gandikota , Kakinada

Monday, July 2, 2018

Assaying

Love starting a Friday with a great write. Loved this one my friend!-Troylato

Brilliant Stroke

I want to start out by saying this is a very odd and unique piece. Not in a bad way whatsoever, I just wanted to let you know you really have a different way of writing. Your works always feel like they're in an alternate world entirely. The second the readers take in that first stanza they're sucked into your world, a world that you have created whether you realize it or not. Each poem seems to be in a different world, a different time. When you write you bring something truly magnificent and well, genius to us. Your perspective on your surroundings and life in general are really a fascinating subject. You seem to have no problem showing these perspectives and you are very good at showing who you are as a person through your writing. Amazing, I look forward to more from you.-Eve 

No Hatred

How do you do it?
No answer needed.-Lawless