Flirting

A piece full of imagery and well written Satish,
'come to me, my cloaked enemy
a sweet lover of, in the milky hours'
great verse.-Michael

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The Whispering Silence

Beautifully written..Thank you so much for sharing. -Derena

A magical beautiful poem..-Floreann Cawley

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Moonless Night

Love it great write.-Tony36

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Mortal Blues

Every aspect of this piece oozed with emotion and personality, there was no doubt in my mind that this would reach the hms (at minimum) this week, and I'm so glad to see that I was not wrong. Even if the choices did get close towards Friday. I think what I love the most about this piece is that despite the overwhelming sorrow I was able to stop and really contemplate the different directions of this piece and how incredibly penned each element was. The flow to this was perfectly conversational while the word choice was a little more dressed up than the average conversation, and I absolutely adored the short stanzas and how despite their length each was paced with information or imagery.-lueJay

Honestly, I feel like the diction in this piece is what carries it along. Without such a precise sense of vocabulary this piece would not have been nearly as interesting to me. So fantastic job making this tale your own!-BlueJay

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Backtracking

A visually stimulating poem. I like the contrast between man and nature. I think you are one of the most underrated poems on P&Q. your poems deserve more exposure. Yes they are deep but if you delve into them they are full of hidden treasure. Well done.-Nicko

While I feel like there are a lot of powerful emotions bubbling beneath the surface this piece feels relatively and remarkably calm. I think that was important in balancing all the harshness of this piece out though. Especially since the title plays such an important role in clarifying what this piece is getting at without any specific incidents or names. There are countless instances of contrast and balance within this piece, which really, is what I feel is the selling point of this piece this week. It is elegant and thought provoking while still having voice and fire. Everything about this one is just so captivating, especially when you break down how precisely stunning each stanza is on it's own as well as within the entire poem. Great write, definitely my favorite this week.-BlueJay

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Heritage

Very attention grabbing; great write i loved the theme.-Missy Panda MayheM

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Peace for the living people

Thanks for sharing. Keep writing and responding to other posts. -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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Moonless Night

Love it great write.-Tony36

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Altruism

We are sitting on tree tops when we read the poem. Philosophical!-Rajendran Muthiah

There was slaughter in the
sea of demons. I do not survive.
I do not die.

Enigmatic and mystical, a work so well versed in imagery it demands concentration. Altruism is the act of the highest humanity rising above the animal instincts of our beastly forms. Fantastic work!-Kevin Patrick

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Not You. Not Me

Exquisite expression. Very insightful. Thanks.
You were not there
in crowd, when I fell down
and people went running over me. -Rajnish Manga

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Temple of hope

Yes, let hope prevail. Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to reading your insightful responses to other posts. As I am sure we all budding writers will benefit from your cognitive outlook. -Jasneet Kaur , New Delhi

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Stray Colors

Wow! Miss Satish
What an enjoyable and wonderful piece to read. Love the imagery in this.
'can you start a salvage chemo' Fab! -Michael

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In Deep Anguish

Thinking of relation, of
connectivity between love
and hate, war and peace in my
tumultuous mind― //.... The poem is a reflection of acute pain and disgust of a soul left to fight for its place in this unkind world. Very heart touching expression. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

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After Leaving The Home

All of your verses are deeply gorgeous, and leave me to ponder their meaning.-Heather T

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Bruised Spots

I enjoyed this satishverma. Succinct but clear communication of each image.-Frank Prem

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Barreling

Great write-Tony36

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The Prodigal Son

This poem of truth shines a light on myths.++++10 -Robert Murray Smith

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Unforgiving

Splendid write. I love the wording.-kathyhall

Nice!-Diamond

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Edge of Revenge

Poignant! Killing.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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The Condemned

Yes I agree, that is perhaps the only way, kissing the condemned. There are no foreigners now, it is true in some context, in every context, for there are no foreigners. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

A thought-provoking and emotional write, Satish Verma Sir. Your condemnation is powerful as you 'wrench the emotions out of the poem'. -Leonard Dabydeen, Brampton, Ontario, Canada

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Crowding

Astounding work as always-Em

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Coming Full Circle

There is something very mystical that overwhelms the reader's sensibilities. Thanks. I quote:
Transfixed I enter / the still life. You come
out with bound hands / to say goodbye.-Rajnish Manga

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Flying The Names

There were no tears / no pangs. No agony / Peace.
Were you jinxed? / I would never know.
@@@ Surrealism just as in arts. Fine expression. Thanks for sharing.-Rajnish Manga

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Downward Spiral

Amazing expression. It reflects the anguish of a man who is concerned with killings and spilling of blood of innocent children, women and men in the world today. Thanks, Verma ji.
Cannibals. All the gods
were cannibals, devouring.... their progeny.-Rajnish Manga

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We Shan't Die

Not damaged
by untruths, remaining
entirely human, among
the wolves and brutes.
I set my foot for a new journey.
@@@ Amazing philosophical poem seeking to unravel the mysteries of human existence. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

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After Leaving The Home

All of your verses are deeply gorgeous, and leave me to ponder their meaning.-Heather T

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Layered Aches

Beyond Mere Pain
"layered aches" - familiar with those on many levels -allets

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After Leaving The Home

All of your verses are deeply gorgeous, and leave me to ponder their meaning.-Heather T

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Arrogant Curves

Now Hear This
"I confront the sad poems/stained by blood..." Why I read you. - allets

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Arrogant Curves

Now Hear This
"I confront the sad poems/stained by blood..." Why I read you. - allets

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Fault Line

This is so wonderful, Satish. Thank you so much for sharing. Surrealist, yes, but I think that's were lies the best in poetry. I look forward to more of this goodness!-Vink Kozira

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Edge of Revenge

Poignant! Killing.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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In The Spin

This poem is added to the list of my favourite poems. It is such a masterpiece. You have got such a delicate brush with which you paint mysterious realities of life. Thanks a lot, Satish Verma ji.
I did not want to / remember you in twilight / of dementia.
You had become.... a river without a bed.-Rajnish Manga

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My Muse

Delicate expression of love in a Platonic backdrop. Loved it. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

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Tarantula

A good read. TFS. Keep sharing your thoughts here at 'Your Space'. -Jasneet Kaur , New Delhi

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Parthenogenesis

Yes we have become compulsive liars, we lie between lies. There is no copulation between the two truths and reproduction is happening without fertilization with the foetus dying in the womb. A good share, as always.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Sidelined

This left me in very deep thoughts. The imagery was great.-mossgirl19

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In The Spin

This poem is added to the list of my favourite poems. It is such a masterpiece. You have got such a delicate brush with which you paint mysterious realities of life. Thanks a lot, Satish Verma ji.
I did not want to / remember you in twilight / of dementia.
You had become.... a river without a bed (Report)-Rajnish Manga

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Short Memory

Excellent! In a way it's good the world has short memory, much better than those who have selective amnesia. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Bravo! -Jasneet Kaur, New Delhi

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My Muse

Delicate expression of love in a Platonic backdrop. Loved it. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

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So Many Half-Truths

Amazing overview of the present day gory developments vis-a-vis those of the past. Thank you, Sir.-Rajnish Manga

Awesome expression through and through. I quote:
Thinking beyond thoughts―
the void, the space, the time.-Rajnish Manga

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Song Of Unquiet Spirit

I love your nature metaphors,
I have for years and I dont think I've ever told you until now...
Mercy I love reading your poetry... this one is beautiful!!!-Maple Tree

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