FARTHER AWAY

Ps. Smile ˜ A favourite From A Priceless, Gifted & Beautiful Woman. - John Rhinem

Smile ˜ A song of hope * This is what I love to see from Your gifted, precious & amazing beauty, my dear beautiful Satish ˜ Love Always, - John Rhinem

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DEVIL’S REALIZATION

A puzzling and vivid poem.- LightH2O

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WITHOUT QUALMS

"The words spilled on the table like blood curdling bats. The candle light turns black with a guilt." Once hurtful words are spilled they can't be retrieved, only guilt follows, a very useless emotion meant only for self torture.- LightH2O

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IN OUR BREASTS

The ending is full of imagery, I can see the lava moving like a snake. -  LightH2O

Very true and powerful-  seema chowdhury

A wonderful revelation of "unbroken greed" which you describe with vivid imagery in this verse Satish.-  Fay Slimm

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STONED

Fourth stanza paints a very tragic scenario, thanks for sharing.-  LightH2O

I heartily agree with what Mr. Ryan has said and couldn't hope to improve on his words of assessment. Your friend in words, -  SaneJustBarely

Subconsciousness in its brilliance. I'm glad I don't understand. But it's in my subconscious now. -  JB

Haven't one credible clue as to the crux of this storylie, if in fact there aren't a conglamouration of themes based on a plethora of random abstract thoughts, and that you deliver to us in an esoteric style for "effect"...which is fine, as i'd be a quilling hipocrite if I I even intimated that I never delivered "power-linage" to spice an otherwise mundane work...You are consistant & passionate in what you put your pen & name to. That I respect, my friend...I just wish I could melt-down your verse more so that I might be able to appreciate the verse that much more, iz'all...Sophisticated poetics should come with its puzzles, cryptics & underlying aspects...However, at some point even the abstruse works by the likes of Dickinson, Bronte and Poe could be decrypted & understood, even if the works had multi-interpretations.....Perhaps the problem is with the Reader...ME! I am no literary analyst, however, I usually have some inkling, an idea as to what I am digesting...Your grammarical command & structural acumen is more than noteworthy...as is your graphic vernacular....Aside from that, at least up to know, I cannot say much more, as I my jury remains out as to what (overall) your words are atempting to deliver...- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR

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CHESSBOARD

Awsome write! I had to look up the word bodhisattvas. The word works well. Thanks!-  Mark Goodson

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FAREWELL

Hi Satish lovely write will be back to read more soon-  Owen Yeates

Satish, this is amazing......leaps of association incredibly accomplished...-  James Marshall Goff

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BEAST AND LOVERS

I really like this. I felt a lot and enjoyed the messages. Your always GREAT writes. Have a good Thursday, Sir.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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BITES

nearly everything
is forcefully taken

and so little
ever really
freely given -  Michael Firewalker

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ENOUGH

Morning, Sir. This write tells a lot in a few well-chosen/crafted words. Your always excellent work.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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STILLBIRTH

Dark, gloomy yet extremely entertaining.. Well done my friend..:-  Jared Pickett

Smile ˜ Rachel weeping for her children ˜ Marth, Martha, you worry about too many things but your sister Mary has found the most important of all and I shall not take from her.... * Love always, -  John Rhinem

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UNENDING

guard your wise eyes
two crystalline forts
held open all night
and lit from within
like lavender quartz
twin armories of Light-Michael Firewalker

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UPRISING

metamorphosis is
and so mote it be
fresh harmonies
felled from white
lightning night skies
the untimely rise
of unstoppable peace
from overfished seas
birthing children
undisguised
come to lead us all
joyously into this
new age of Light-  Michael Firewalker 

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HALF-CLOSED LIDS

Hello Sir. Very vivid and in-depth write. I did enjoy. Your always excellent writes. - Lady Dragonwyck

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UNDERSCORING

and so it goes
where you go then
as you endlessly sew
the torn away pieces
of gross human trauma
slowly back together again-  Michael Firewalker

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HAPPENINGS

I love the view
from the open vast
innerscape of you

little is missed
nothing surpassed
all here as it would be
where god will
everlast-  Michael Firewalker

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Milkweed

Satish Verma, I am intrigued by this poem. There are a lot of personal allusions and private references. I do not know what to say but I would like to say something. I am curious to know whether this refers to a stage performance or a sports activity. What are 'black roses'? Who or what is the 'viper'?

Out of ten or so poems I read today these words keep haunting me like ghosts. Are you rid of the unpleasant experience after writing this? I also have a similiar poem.- Sivakami Velliangiri, Pugalur

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VIBRATIONS

Probably the self search isn't stopped
It just goes underground-   sstoth0

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WANDERER

This is a beauty my friend. Keep up the good work Satish!!!-  Jared Pickett

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DECKS ARE CLEARED

Love it!-  LightH2O

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NEW KINGS

That closing sentence summarizes it perfectly.-  LightH2O

An expressive and an honest write.-  seema chowdhury

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A REPLICA

One of your most symbolic writes, well penned.-  LightH2O

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AFTER SERIAL BLASTS TO MAKE A POINT

Wow! those two lines can have various meanings, yet I wondered how you meant it? much chaos and destruction can be felt on this poem.-  LightH2O

Your chosen images and general tone accurately paints a portrait of this all to common tragedy ... somewhere a killer is hailed as a hero.-  york2frisco

pushing the like button--dark but illuminating-  spysgrandson

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HIFTING PAIN

The discontent is well felt in this poem and the ending is so true.-  LightH2O

wallmart-  leafsailor

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THE OTHER SMILE

I bet this would sound even deeper after drinking a glass of wine or smoking some pot.-  LightH2O

who is listening does not matter as what is said is of the self-  leafsailor

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THE SAME KIND

Your words and lines make a fine collage of life.-  LightH2O

My friend ,words of this world make dark poems of beauty- leafsailor

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DRAMA

This flows beautifully-  LightH2O

let us gather by the river-  leafsailor

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FIGHTERS AT LARGE

Tragic, despairing, the unstoppable march of time to our inevitable end.-  LightH2O

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EXPRESSIONLESS

Excellent opening line "A silent war with oneself devouring all the cells" your other lines are also full of wise observations, tfs. -  LightH2O

You use words so uniquely dear Satish - the message in this wonderful piece has to be need for self-understanding along with forgiveness. A thought-provoking read. -  Fay Slimm

Dear friend some good coffee is in order ,,,,love the poem dance in the words-  leafsailor

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LINEAGE

I didn't see the ending. Power piece.- The Scribe(Marlon Linton)

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CRISIS

The sun is shining bright here this morning in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and excellent writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Satish. Love,-  Carol Brown

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OF BURNING

of disintegration
'tis an art
rottenly deconstructed

bits and pieces
bloody and molding
freed naked into storm-  Michael Firewalker 

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Unbelieving

Verma ji, as usual this poem has that haunting, mystical touch of yours. Metaphorical. Warm regards, -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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AMEN

lovely..-  Destroyer ~ Poet

wow,very touching..-  Elliott Bowe

I like the form, I have yet to tackle this beast.. You have a good one here Satish..:-  Jared Pickett

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and still Moon will rise
from the plight of our ash
up the back of our shame
when midnight lies cast
in bronze on our famed
rage-blackened games
she lights our dark skies
all the same-  Michael Firewalker

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THE RETREAT

Very indepth. I did enjoy. Good, positive thoughts your way, Sir.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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RAGING SPRING

Please don't do that and the earthing will be orphaned,
Please stop doing that, the earthen boat will drown.

Sir, Well written poem, though I do not agree with certain part. Stunned and speechless, ..-  Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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A FRIGHTENING DREAM

The grandmothers look at the blue sky.The last part of this poem brings the write together. Excellent finish. I like this.-  steven cooke

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THE OTHER SMILE

who is listening does not matter as what is said is of the self-  leafsailor

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THE SAME KIND

My friend ,words of this world make dark poems of beauty-  leafsailor

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SANTHARA *

Is it “Paryushana? The period of Santhahara is fixed. However in Paryushana the period is up to his last breath. -Puttu Kulkarni, Hegde-Kumta

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One anthos

Life itself is an incessant war. We are only bonsai who crave for sky-rocketing growth. And your words flare to noon glare.-U K Atiyodi, Kandangali, Payyanur

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PRIDE OF VALLEY

very nice..-  Elliott Bowe

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NAKEDNESS

Nice rhythm and flow in the delightful verse my friend.. Your words are so powerful and I am intrigued every time I read.. Well done my friend!!.-  Jared Pickett

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AFTER SERIAL BLASTS TO MAKE A POINT

Your chosen images and general tone accurately paints a portrait of this all to common tragedy ... somewhere a killer is hailed as a hero -  york2frisco

pushing the like button--dark but illuminating-  spysgrandson

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RAGING SPRING

''Was it a hymn to drink
the religion of rage?
The men sitting in the glass vases
worshiping the rising sun in awe
with folded hands. ''

Very good saying, though the poem is full of wisdom...........................-  Wahab Abdul

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STARDUST

This made me think of Clash of the Titans!! With the gods and the wrath.. What a great poem this was Verma.. I have so missed your creativity my friend, you will see my name in you comment box more often now.. Good to see you again my friend....-  Jared Pickett

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LOVING A STREET

Morning, Sir. I like this write and especially the last paragraph. Hope your Day is going beautifully.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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STUNNED

salted dynasty can not be revived,
still hold with it and amused,
brainless generations of
great grandpa, a grandma,
a father not enough,
do we need a grand son,
to continue with the tradition,
another hundred years?
Don't come back home,
to rest and relax,
wake up the sleeping people,
to make up our country.-  Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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JUST BEAUTY

I definitely saw the beauty in this poem my friend.. Well done, very vivid and well written.-  Jared Pickett

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NO-MANS-LAND

Very well written, like it Satish. -  Anne Lise Andresen

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BROKEN DAM

Magnificent write, exquisite imagery.-  Mister Kite

A passionate verse...Teary! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-  Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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PUSSYFOOT

The absurdity of it all...such is life at one of it's many angles.-  LightH2O

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UNLESS

Inquisitive poetry. "Inquiry leads to Discovery, and Discovery leads to Experience...Experience validates Truth.-  Cyn BuhainBaello
So deep it hurts!-  LightH2O

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LIFTING

Debastating!-  LightH2O

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PLEADING

Clothed words and unappreciative minds are the same..always feel the suffocation of identity.
Well written...Satish verma, ,- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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IN OUR BREASTS

nice one Satish!!!!!!!!!........- sashi prabhu

VERY COOL WRITE-  EYE of THE storm

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WISDOM

I feeling of longing and sadness as I read this "The silence leads to nothingness."-  LightH2O

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WHO WAS FAITHFUL?

You use the moon so beautifully,
its yellowness,
its ability to leap over you,
and such a special kind of poem this,
lovely.-  Ann Waddicor

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WORDS OF NEVER BEING

Filling your glass with a liquified moon,
so silken and silvern, soft and so beautiful.
The whole expression of this poem is beautiful.-  Ann Waddicor

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Climbing

Words of real weight and insight my friend, you truly feel the images that you write.-  Pete the Poet (nightpoet)

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Confrontation

"Every morning I wake, the town weeps for the dead" - a heart-touching poem.-  pradip chattopadhyay

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UPRIGHT MIRRORS

The last two lines are very strong. Love your writes as always.-  Lady Dragonwyck 

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IMPERFECT PRESENT

What a scary poem. This one scares even me. And it wrings compassion from my eyes. Lots of terrible truth packed here, delivering a painful punch to the heart. The world is indeed in an imperfect present, and you have made the case with poetic skill and power. Such a world is either a mystery with unknown answers, or else all is futility, eternal injustice, and tragedy. --Michael LP. -  poetwithcancer

The imagery you bring out in this lyric is both desolate, eery and has a devastating beauty to it. As harsh and with open questions as life itself. -  rain

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A Grave Reminder

Touching in such a way that leaves me speechless.-  LightH2O

Stunning...I wish I knew what else to say...except perhaps beautiful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-  Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

A thought provoking write -  seema chowdhury

I have been away ,to long,-  leafsailor

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IN THE NAME OF ………

" which would you like,
nouns that hurt?
Or verbs that heal? "

WOW .... I call this poetry ...-  Darya

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DAY OF JUDGEMENT

I love the rich wording and rich imagery embedded in this well crafted write! Wisdom breathes through this amazing write! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always!  Romeo Della Valle -NYC

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