Tuesday, November 28, 2017

Sunday, November 26, 2017

Still Alive

A though-provoking poem, Satish ji. The idea of gender-bending to give man some of the basic genes of a woman and make him more compassionate, certainly could lead to a better world.-GSP Rao

Yes we will survive everything, but wars, stubborn wars will become worse; we will die a thousand deaths without any 'different' birth therapy, but not succumb. We are destined to witness and withstand wars. -Supratik Sen

Tuesday, November 21, 2017

A Mauve Wound

A wonderful poem reflecting the bearing of panting pain in life.
Loved this delicate portrayal. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

Who Gives Up?

Insightful and contemplative reflection of the world within a faithful soul. Thanks.
The heartbeats miss.... with every skip of god's name.
Slices and maneuvers ― become the right of day.-Rajnish Manga

Expanding The Sky

The poet has really a unique style of expressing his innermost feelings.
Thanks for sharing. I would like to quote:
Something unsaid
will remain between the words.
I pick up the dots.-Rajnish Manga

Diet Of Tears

The words suck
the essence of unspoken
grief, when life turns
around to say goodbye.... //.... Feelings of the heart nicely expressed. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

Talking To A Friend

From unknown to unknown / I am the self / I am the known beautifully summarises everything - our life, what we know and what we cannot. -GSP Rao

Monday, November 20, 2017

A Mauve Wound

A wonderful poem reflecting the bearing of panting pain in life.
Loved this delicate portrayal. Thanks.-Rajnish Manga

Counting The Steps

This is a mysterious offering full of death images. The last two lines are particularly enigmatic, as though the speaker was dealing with some deeply held guilt. It is almost as if t he/ she was in the midst of a dream. Beyond this I can tell nothing.-John the Baptist 

Friday, November 17, 2017

Rains Are Coming

"Like centipede, fear crawls in deep blind cave".
Nicely phrased.--Stephen

Tuesday, November 14, 2017

Sunday, November 12, 2017

Saturday, November 11, 2017

Secretly

To Stay
"in the house of truth" is residence and a promise - nicely woven ambiguity - enjoyed, as always.-allets

Sacrificing Oneself

Austerity is great path to get fragrant life. Brilliant poem is beautiful.-Kumarmani Mahakul

The Myths Of Lies

We are but zero, nothing, dust. More? No.
I am amazed.-James Michael

Friday, November 10, 2017

Contentiously

You are a mysterious writer of which I appreciate you don't give much away which makes your writing much more special and unique.-Em

As always you write with so much mystery, it's mesmerising.-Brenda

How genuine of you Brenda!!-ddavidd

Wednesday, November 8, 2017

A Whirlwind Romance

You are a very special poet overlooked. -James Michael

satishverma, I wish only two things: One, that I could accept myself now, and two, that I could write as well as you do.-FredPeyer

Still Alive

satishverma, I have read your excellent poem already four times, but I think I need a few more readings as well as some time to think. But am not sure if I will understand it.-FredPeyer

Slanting The Picture

Wonderful Hiku my friend.-MissSharon

One of Your Best I have read Inspirational.-SuperSlimJim

Depending on me

Very nice poem Mr. Venu Gopal, Karuna Sri's "Pushpa Vilapam" comes to my mind. As a student of Botany, I liked your poem very much.-R R Gandikota

Thanks for the interesting post.-Jasneet Kaur

Tuesday, November 7, 2017

Saturday, November 4, 2017

Eternality

Thanks for sharing a thoughtful read. Keep writing and responding to other posts.-Jasneet Kaur

Friday, November 3, 2017

The Hostage

I really like this. You used very powerful imagery and force your reader to think about their meaning.-PotbellyPleb

Wednesday, November 1, 2017

Economics

"...to seek nothing..."
All corporeal acqisitions are nothing, god(s) do not exist on this plane equals nothing - I like walking around in dichotomies and ambiguities in end lines, Satish.- allets

Flying In Dark

Interesting as usual. You explore inner truths and come up with the strength of your ego which seems mighty important So where are you, the apple once bitten goes brown and dissolves, implodes. The twin is the mirror inverse is that person less an egotist or more. I wonder.-Paul Brookes

It Was Time

Love this-so much for food for thought in this write.-Brenda

Satish
An incredible piece which has your name all over with great metaphors and story
well done.-Michael

"Leaky ethics" ... love it! Great poem Satish.-Kitty Cat Lady

Satish...this write is mystical and engaging. Amazing poem about time.-mossgirl19

Blown away:
O, watchmaker,
trapped in your own shadow,
you were yourself a fugitive.-ddavidd