Friday, July 31, 2015

Exasperation

It is very hot here now too,
but some of us are talking to God,
which is quite a good idea!
Thanks for sharing!-Clarence Prince

Thanks for sharing your wealth though very little but very precious.-Abdulrazak Aralimatti

*impact

Turns me on
I will write a poem
It a wonder what that is?
Thanks for sharing, Satish Verma!-Clarence Prince

Muse And Sorrow

Such a beautiful poem that touches the heart of the reader. Many blessings......Pat

Blazing Trail

A very sad poem. But well written it draws you in and you feel the pain.-Doreen James ( @Doreen_James )

Sharks

Existence is devouring existence itself, cannibalism of souls.-Nadeem Qazilbash ( @nadeemq ) 

Sunday, July 26, 2015

Sculpturing

great imagery. - J. Robyn

Another amazing piece of writing my friend - surely your fine talent lies in the use of unique metaphor.- Fay Slimm

Saturday, July 25, 2015

No Hatred

Very nicely envisined and aptly presented. An intensive poem I like most. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Friday, July 24, 2015

Dream Landing

Your words are so beautiful and your poems feel so vast. I love the starting words "Candle by candle, you burn your dreams." It's just so beautifully said.- The Nameless

Thursday, July 23, 2015

Animation

Lovely ethereal imagery... :)-'stiltskin .

Such a potent sadness in this linguistic treat - - an unforgettable read.- Fay Slimm

Wednesday, July 22, 2015

The Wait

Wonderful poem. It's nice.-Claire Morris

Charred Mistakes

Morning Star

Love this. This is very similar to one of my poems. The surreal fiber is so real to me. It is what I call poetical reality. The platonic weave:
"Words would disappear,
only meaning will be left."
gives it a vivid poetic sensibility. The one that is out of reach in 'sensible reality.'

"The interval ceases to be" is profound reveals the arbitrary aspect of space. Though I am confused in the use of 'wasness'
Once more it is a platonic theme that death is kind of relief for the "lost childe whose burden was his taste." This works either way, whether if the taste itself is unbearable, or if regardless of being unbearable or pleasant, still, in itself, is a burden.

And perhaps the death is the morning star, a wake up in " The City of Utopia"-Gadfly

Verities

... expel of powerful blows of might living in the mind of the powerless pen, you have just extracted the venom of a mighty mind of the universe.God bless your a mindful poet Sir of this 21st century.- antonio liao

Monday, July 20, 2015

Acoustics Are Not Working

I love how your diction adds a splash of intensity to the whole canvas of your poem. What a beautiful poem! Keep writing! -Emily Liang ( @EmilyLiang )

Friday, July 17, 2015

Annex the Belief

Nice thougts delicately expressed. How evocative are the concluding lines-
"To remain human in the loneliness of ruins
I want to walk straight."-U Atreya Sarma, Hyderabad

Tuesday, July 14, 2015

Sin And Prayer

Beautifully written! I love it!- Vincent Vallerian

i like this poem. - Kantanka Addo- Osafo

Interesting ink. - adios A M l

Very nicely envisioned and presented. TFS.- Kumarmani Mahakul

Monday, July 13, 2015

Sneaking Gods

Like always your poems resound in deep emotions and meanings and concepts. Thanks for sharing, Sir.- Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

Whole Truth

Very nice write. A pleasure to read. Thanks, for sharing. Hugs.-Sue_Pinkston 

Sunday, July 12, 2015

Thin Veil

Thinly veiled excellance !-ap staunton

Yes, verses 4 and 5 beautiful.-LaceRibbon
You really can shape the most powerful imagery. Verses 4 and 5 are simply breathtaking.-Kyranadu

Undecipherable

beautiful imagery displayed here well written.- Rebecca Joy

Saturday, July 11, 2015

SPROUTING SEEDS

Satish ji, beautifully expressed thoughts of a troubled mind. Your poems are always thought provoking. Regards. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Collective Guilt

very powerful and thought provoking liked.-Kacie

So deep and rich with meaning. The conscious wrestles with life, death and the meaning of it all.-Kyranadu
I feel like I could read this again and again, finding new meaning each time.-KMaxwell

Falling Apart

Very nice. A pleasure to read. Thanks, for sharing.-Sue_Pinkston

Friday, July 10, 2015

I Am Burning My Bridges

Dark, enigmatic and philosophic – 3 words to describe this wonderful piece of art!-Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana )

Wednesday, July 8, 2015

VIRTUE

A poem of good imagery. -P Nasarudheen., Kasargod, Kerala

Asia At The Edge

I like the philosophy in your writings….Waiting for more to come! -Preeti ( @Preeti_Vandana ) 

Thoughtful reflection. It gets amusing when the religious preach loud, not witty enough to know .. that their actions are now defying the origin of the religion.-Swathi Rao ( @Swathi_Rao )

Body Script

I get a very dark vibe from this. Lovely, yet dark. - Lain

Friday, July 3, 2015

TEARS WERE NEVER SWEET

lovely sentiments....

Even though life contains agony and pain
I remain
Ever cheerful
Along with people

It is gift
That almighty sometimes shift
Showers full of fortune
And sometimes make painfully driven.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad