EXITING

nice expressions, Vermaji. I solicit your comments on my poems.- Somanathan Iyer

every excellent poem..i love it- Wahab Abdul

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STAR STRUCK

Enjoyed this write!- Troylato

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New Dictionary

Satish "...the tiger has taken away the child...", your metaphoric poems rather it be of the Holocaust or war and the misuse of the so called 'supreme', brings life to the want of peace. May the heavens watch over the innocent.- Marcia Schechinger

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Weightless

weird but i like it- lee richards

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Judgement And Curse

Satish, you are a true wordsmith, mystic poet, to me your poems clamour in both love and disaffection, dischordant yet somehow alluring, like a child carrying a balloon and smoking a cigar, yet i admit, I hear where I want to. Cheers,-Dale Costello

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FALLING BRICKS

Loved this one. Keep the pen flowing!- Troylato

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THE WARS

Satish good words..- David Williams

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HISTORY WAS WALKING

This portrays so much pain, the one show of happiness which is the laughter is soon overshadowed by the body hanging on a noose. As someone once pointed out, that this world is not beautiful for how can it be beautiful when the tiger devours his pray. Perhaps we stand a chance as the spirit is liberated from this physical body. My best to you!- LightH2O

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ALONENESS OF FIRE

A meaningful write- seema chowdhury

That melody still enchants, so lovely the mystery of the sound- leafsailor 

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Earth's Intelligence

Greed seems to never die.- George Carroll

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Clawing night

A very fascinating poem wriotten in your inimitable abstract style, Mr. Verma! Thanks for sharing.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

A fascinating verse, sir. The last line- 'The slicing of time gives dividend to survivors' had one especially hypnotized. Regards, -Lasya Shashimohan, Bangalore

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ABDICATION

"A square root will find the squall, between the breaths." Enjoyed this one!- Troylato

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CROSSING THE DEAF

Satish I like your poem, but check your form ABC are consecutive letters of the alphabet...good poem though....David Williams

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ASIA AT THE EDGE

A good write Mr. Verma.. one that speaks of the truth- Sandra Martyres

Hmmm the simple truth of life well penned :)- Debs

You write the truth. Nicely put.- himanshi

we live in a world where BUDDHIST ARMY exists!- PrEmJi PrEmJi

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BALD SKY

"Without sound, I wanted to see the creation in nothing" so much said here.- LightH2O

a fine poem my friend. Thanks for sharing.- Elizabeth Squires

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KUPFERNICKLED

"Back pain will carry us not very far" that's for sure.- LightH2O

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CHASTE TREE

such deep thoughts make me wonder- LightH2O

A very profound write.. with much depth .....one that I will read again to get the full meaning.-Sandra Martyres

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Yours Only

Loved it..specially these words:

In your violet eyes
I will find a moon
for an encounter.

An alien wall comes up
between us. We cannot shed
the veils of clouds.-Vaishali

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MY TABOO

Very original. Very interesting. --David

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OF THE NEXT ZEN

Quite a deep write..Hugs- Raggedyann

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BLAZING TRAIL

beautiful- Chelium

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INTO THE LAIR

A creative Poem that's full of deep images! Thanks for sharing that on the soup... Have a good day, -Omneya Kamal

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DOVES HAD STOPPED FLYING

'solitude and silence come before the summary. I was responsible for myself.' this reminds me to spend more time with my thoughts. a poised and elegant reminder- Chelium

Doves had stopped flying. Great!- nimal dunuhinga

TFS your work.- Cat

an excellent poem on the theme of peace. Thanks for sharing.- Elizabeth Squires

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NOMENCLATURE

Hindu,,,a sage, a sadhu, a sane, never answers the call......Namaskara......- Tata

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UNRAVELLING

You poem is excellent, all this war around us, just don't make any sense. hugs, catie :)- Catie Lindsey

sounds like he was lucky to survive :) love - Elizabeth O'Driscoll

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GREEN RIVER

the color scheme is apt! any way what is green river? If i let my imagination to fly, it may knock many doors in the clouds!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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I WAS CLOSING THE WEEPING CHAPTER

you always amaze me, best to you- LightH2O

A poignant write- seema chowdhury

Ah ! This is painful to read through , yet again a fine satire from an expert slice of life .. Wow is my word.- Nikunj

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THE WHOLENESS

I have only one word for your poems Mr. Verma - profound! They sink in slowly and once they do, they hit me all over! -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india

Good read from the master of abstract. Loved the mesmerizing metaphors. -Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad, india

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DOWNPOUR

the shadow cast so the light is known- leafsailor

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THE CALLER

Loved the second stanza of your poem very much, Mr. Verma! Thanks for sharing this powerful poem.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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Dreaming

Nice, but slapping the thoughts! Good!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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DILEMMA

I will say this is full of expression of much pain,good to get it out;]- Weeping willow

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ECSTASY

Am I reading too much into this? hope not!- LightH2O

only you can do this ,this way .cool!-leafsailor

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THE DEBRIS

Scattered debris - well pieced together and nicely presented, Mr. Verma. Thanks for sharing.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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A LONE WARRIOR

well penned :) -Enchanted Raven

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SHARKS

Faraway a cuckoo sings a saddest song. I could hear from here and thanks!- nimal dunuhinga

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BURNS OF HATRED

Those painful burns of hatred alleviated only by those tulips in full bloom.- LightH2O

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SHAME AND FEAR

A most touching write, from all pain portrayed, I choose to focus on "Lilies were growing between the graves."- LightH2O

Thank you for sharing this.- sonnet130

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WILL YOU MARRY ME?

Such vivid creation, best regards to you.- LightH2O

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Judgement And Curse

Satish, you are a true wordsmith, mystic poet, to me your poems clamour in both love and disaffection, dischordant yet somehow alluring, like a child carrying a balloon and smoking a cigar, yet i admit, I hear where I want to. Cheers,-Dale Costello, Australia

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THE BUDDHA WAS GOING TO WEEP

Destruction... well written Satish!- Negative_TheFallen

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It does not matter

And the wheels rotate
along the path of history
mute witness to facts
a poet is thus born! -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala

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LISTENING TO FORGIVE

Thanks for sharing this powerfully worded, meaningful poem Mr. Verma. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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TALL CLAIMS

Interesting write Satisi, love elizabeth- Elizabeth O'Driscoll

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Shadows

Struggling with it. Held my attention. - Steve .

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DEGENERATING

Deeper than deep once again Satish. Love grappling with these ones.- Steve .

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TOELESS JOURNEY

S., , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) - Poet ~ Destroyer

I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Satish. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, - Carol ~Sunshine~ Brown

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HISTORY

Very well written, enjoyable read .- Adri

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SHAME AND FEAR

Thank you for sharing this.- sonnet130

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FAILED PERFORMANCE

Satish, I am 19 years old and I know exactly what you mean with this- sonnet130

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UNREADABLE

An excellent write that I enjoyed reading today Satish. I hope to have more time in the future to read more. Love,- Carol ~Sunshine~ Brown

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Melt down

Amazing and profound, Mr. Verma. Respects. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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BY THE WORDS

A profound piece of poetry Mr. Verma - a commentary on terrorism in the Valley and other places...Thanks for sharing... -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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A VERY HURT POEM

Made me pause to reflect. Thank you- Don

thought provoking imagery. Yep, the streets are ripe with violence these days. Earth has posted a very unwelcome sign in massive block letters that have squashed all the dandelions. Excellent write my friend.- Nightowl

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BRAIN-DEAD

Need a bite
to eat
then wash it down
with little bits
of thirst- sstoth0 

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BY THE WORDS

A profound piece of poetry Mr. Verma - a commentary on terrorism in the Valley and other places...Thanks for sharing...- Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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A PAIN WITHIN PAIN

Amazing poetry you have shared with us Satish as always. I have enjoyed reading it this morning thank you. I will be back Monday to read more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love- Carol ~Sunshine~ Brown

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ENUNCIATION

Satish .... you really have something to say, but unless you explain some of your poetry, everything will be misunderstood or even missed completely. This poems cries of an anguish that can not be heard by many because we all live in different worlds and people don't see the pain in yours. Having written my last comment and having received your reply, this poem I can understand better where you are coming from. Here, in the USA, we don't have those exact problems so to many of us ....they simply do not exist. You, however, know they exist because you live them daily. You need to open the world's eyes.

Please, comment on your poems and show people what you are saying.- e. Gene Myers

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SUICIDE NOTE

" Death walked in a sensual style" ... nice, real nice. You've captured the one element present in every suicide.- york2frisco

This is a dark and morbid piece...- Sandra Martyres

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ARCHIVES

Another great write... have a Happy Halloween...lol LightH2O

As always, your richly textured writing leaves me satisfied ... nd chilled. Well done.- york2frisco

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