Loftiness

Lovely poem Satish ji! beautiful lines:
You wash your feet in
Milky Way.-Giti Tyagi , Patiala

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Green Waters

The imagery in this piece are clearly projected into the mind. Sounds like being stranded on an island but could also be the feeling of being isolated by a friend or a partner in life.-Poetic Beauty 

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MORATORIUM

Images of darkness looming overhead. Thanks sir for a metaphorical rendition.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Nicely portrayed verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi , Patiala

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The Fabrication

Dark, deep, beautiful.-stormingdance (Jessica)

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AHAM ASMI, I AM, I AM

All emotions embedded within the 'I'. Thank you sir for a philosophical perspective.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Feb 23, 2020

Lovely verse Satish ji!
Beautifully expressed :
I am the fire
and I am the gale.-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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BRILLIANT STROKE

Beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Barreling Down

“buried alive unnoticed”
I read these lines and just take a deep breath of living, Satish.-allets

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Watching The Lethality

Conjunction of empirical and ideal world, in the language of Platonism. Homelessness of a one, that see the history as a perpetual and not exactly purposal change. I sincerely regret, that so many forgot the metaphysical view at history and the matters of everyday - here, in radically indivdualised, solipsistic, alienated West, where is no false and no truth, but banality of hedonistic existence. In other words: horrible retreat in the face of seriousness, that can be found only in Silence. Namaste, dear Satish Verma. We in Poland also had our fight, but now it is forgotten by liberalism.-a.p.,

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All You Know

"Life will treat you in beauty when you're ready to meet the future", why'd you have to say something so beautiful and inspiring? It ceases to amaze me!-Cyclone

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Show Me Your Jewel Box

For me, as it differs a bit from exact sense, someone with dirt by the nails can have better understanig of human depths, even if he or she does not try to take it into language proposition. Once I heard a motto, that a simple man knows the same as the philosopher, but in different way. Ofcourse, it is some kind of sacral poetry - if we agree, that human's deepest self is sacred. That is a matter of belief, and not obviositiy, and that is the point of the innear fight, as I see it from Christian perspecitve. And at least this world is but a scene, where one realises his best - or worst - potency. PS: Our polish movement "Solidarność" was strongly about Ghadism, and I hontestly respect this way of thinking.-a.p.,

Polish. Differences in grammar.-a.p.,

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Asking No Mercy

I fell in love with the struggle so long ago and I still struggle to pay everything, but I'd hate to become rich overnight. Awesome. -Cyclone

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What A Galaxy

I admire Your poetry,You're very deep and original poet.-Anna Banasiak

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UNBLEMISHED

Beautiful verse Satish ji!
Loved the poem especially these lines:
Words not weapons
were needed to heal after
the cannibalism.-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Humanity at its best when you say words not weapons are needed to heal...-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Hurricane Lamp

A most intriguing write!-Frances E McClelland

Beautifully Chaotic-Persephone

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My Angel

The shrine does not exist in us.-LAWLESS

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STAR STUCK

Lovely verse Satish ji!
Beautiful lines:
The glass eye breaks,
enters the tomb of the orb
sheltering the darkness. -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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A BANQUET TABLE

Beautiful verse Satish ji! Profound and thought provoking lines:
It was not the question
of bread and butter:
we were talking of clean air. - Giti Tyagi, Patiala

An insightful verse resonating the relation between man and environment. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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POINT BLANK

A beautiful verse Satish ji!
Especially loved these lines:
Brick by brick we had
made the levee.
Now the river of rage
has broken the embankment.-Giti Tyagi, Patiala, Feb 09, 2020

An in-depth analysis. Agree with Gitiji. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, NELLORE

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This Happened

Mountains and a pagoda, the sage does not exist.-LAWLESS

I really enjoyed your words on grief and the journey it can take you on. A wonderful write.-Daydream Believer

The climb to one's final abode; how intriguing! Most ordinary mortals like me see the journey to the final abode as a descent. Profound write.-Seek

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NOT ON CRUTCHES

Lovely verse Satish ji!
Especially loved these lines defying the traditional outlook and embracing the changed mindset:
Touching the feet?
No I don't submit to body.-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Walking Out

Thanks sir for an interesting composition. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Lovely composition Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

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Into Her Deep Eyes

I marvelled at your stanzas Sir!
In such a right time read this, can call it "just what I needed!"
Thanks for sharing.-Tahsin.Z

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So Many Half-Truths

Very cleverly constructed poem.
Enjoyed.-Unsub

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Now I Speak

Hard hitting! Thanks for an apt portrayal of contemporary society. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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Groundwaters

this is such a good poem... i'm wondering, who's "you" when it's burning?
thanks
amazing, but u knew that. lol-wickedqueenk27

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With No Apology

Many symbols here. It can be too cold for broad-leaved tree, and be accurate for Christmas tree. Because it is needle-leaved, or because it is a sort of symbol. If snow makes it gold, than we are about philosophy of Darwinism.-a.p.,

Because, against popular interpretation of Darwinism, the one, that will win, is not "the strongest", but "the best associated". As in Tao Te King, where the great trees fall under strong wind, and there remains those more flexible. Philosphia Pereniis at it's best.-a.p.,

Although, this sword has two blades.-a.p.,

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For Others

Difficult to comprehend... TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

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