Watching A Galaxy

A  poem of great depth. Well-written.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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STILL ALIVE

Nice poem Satish...-Silent One

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REVELATION

Interesting poem...-Silent One

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Homing

I enjoy reading your works. Please continue to share.-Ken

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The Fall

Well said.-Ken

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Heavenly Guidance

Love The Interplay
of images in this one. Topical. - Stella

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No Room

Captivating!- Te'Arra Beautiful

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Deaf City

Trying to catch up on commenting which I don't do enough of. You write beautifully. I can't wait to read other works of yours. Such amazing imagery and use of words.-Dixiedaisy

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Silent Voyage

lovely.- Shelby Elizabeth

Lively.- Richard Thripp

Beautiful poem Sir. Very much enjoyed the vivid imagery. - laura duran

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The Fall

Well said.-Ken

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A WHIRLWIND ROMANCE

SATISH, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. -SKAT A 

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Fever Returns

I didn't understand a word you just said. - mychibi senpai

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Song Above The Sorrow

What a lovely poem. Well idealised. I enjoyed reading. Good work.-Busy Poet

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Across The Silence

Good expression in this write;-- Weeping willow

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Erected In My Pain

This seems to be the picture of both, the victim and the victor. Much enjoyed the sharpness.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Homing

I enjoy reading your works. Please continue to share.-Ken

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Schism

Wow. I'll read this several more times.- Xthe Owl

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Full Stop

as paintures. and so many labels of reading, meaning and nice sounds when i read this loud. feets for my view from each of many windows at my house:) you give me a lot of hope with this one. thnx-Agnieszka M. J.-Hallewas

lavels should be of course, sorry for my english.-Agnieszka M. J.-Hallewas

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Ending Of Time?

interesting piece with some intriguing imagery..-Ailill

i like it. as for me: simple and beauty. with pleasure i will read more-Agnieszka M. J.-Hallewas

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No Return

Down Tone
"...I want to say/what I did not want to say..." Nice -  allets

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Renaissance

I Read This Poem
and think of Cuba. "...The bleeding revolution has overturned./tomorrow..."-— allets

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Sparks In Woods

Beautiful, and moving poem.
Great imagery Mr. Verma.
All the Best .-J Nair

Wow...i'm mighty impressed with this poem...so drawing and complex. It beacons me to find its deeper meaning-yogi73

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Song Above The Sorrow

What a lovely poem. Well idealised. I enjoyed reading.
Good work.-Busy Poet

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Living Legend

i love it:) as for me pitty that i may give only one point here. so in comment: broken 8 :) just push this number on side and you have eternity:D or so many points from me as you wish-Agnieszka M. J.-Hallewas

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Like A Da Vinci

Excellent handling of the Da Vinci question. I especially admire your use of methapor.-gms583p 

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This Day

Interesting, A bit disfunctional but I seem to like it, its certainly a good use of words, well done....malcol-qintarra

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Dream Song

Very good. Imagery and very peaceful. - L.R. Thompson

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Brooding Silently

Very deep and mysterious qualities lie within your write. I think I can read between the lines and see a deep sadness of one very confused and messed up life. Sometimes brooding silently is the best way as not to add insult to injury. Although this world is filled with love hatred still abides as well. Hugs yourself today because you are worth it. -JacieStralkoDuca

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Becomıng Oneself

I Found This Humorous
It was serious, but seriousness has humor in it sometimes. Ha & ha - allets

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Rampage

this was way more powerful than i expected. i especially adore your last verse but the whole poem is great and thought provoking ♥ thank you.- Leila Hadi

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Nostalgia

Always a unique voice. "This was life without a hero." particularly struck me, very lyrical, very melancholy.-tony parsons

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Only Metaphors

It's been a while since I've

It's been a while since I've spent any time here. But it's refreshing to see, there are still some true poets here. I've got a few self portraits hidden in my own tar pit, that I'd rather not explore. I guess if you've been around enough, it's bound to be that way.

“I am careless about my height amidst tall peaks” - that is a lovely line.- Spinoza

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Of Language

"...heydays of thorns..."
the idea explodes in quantities of pain - miraculous image - Stella

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Good Morning

Lovely- Gekko Cyan

Beautiful dawn wonderful morn so during the day no need to mourn ========= IF I may say........................happiest evening ever. Wonderful poem, loveliedt dsid. Thank you for sharing.- Sylvia Frances Chan

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Vigilance

It is Always good to be vigil. Perfectly said. Thank you for sharing this thoughtful poem.-Sylvia Frances Chan

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Aconite

We call aconite "monkshood" here, a late autumn flower - and very little blooms here in late autumn. Beautiful thing, with lovely leaves as well as flowers, a beautiful blue color, and again, a rich blue is unusual in flowers here. In any event, "Roaches are scuttling like rats with wings. Their country." is quite effective, quite striking - like William Burroughs in a away. Interesting read.-tony parsons

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Decks Are Cleared

The first two lines itself got me hooked. Beautiful.-shalini singh ( @shalini_singh )

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After Serial Blasts To Make A Point

Poignantly moving poem. Incisive comments on the state of affairs. Brilliant satire. Kudos !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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My Fault

Time's Passage
"...How far was the moment of dust?..." a death reference? Verses for pondering - Stella

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Shifting Pain

Powerful poem. Brilliant write..-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Terrifed

ORIGINALISM

a new word for me to contemplate - cool write - slc- allets

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Unabused

Mellow Line

"...to find you/in a vein of green water..." I got stopped there and read it several times, mesmerized. Cool write -  allets

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DRENCHING

"...There was no ghost..."

Some lines cut across multiple strata - enjoyed reading this one - over 1000 poems on PostPoems - glad you came -  allets

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Hating To Do

All of your work is superb. I don't comment much but I read you all the time.-schmuckjones

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Moon Walk

A nice work satishverma..........- Ramin Ara

Lovely write;-}- Weeping willow

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Suicidal Wish

This poem has many layers of thoughts synchronized in the body of poetry. Powerful one.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Expressionless

A good powerful write. As usual, nice poetry. -Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

A powerful poem. As usual, thoughtful one too.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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All I Unread

Wonderful reading.-hemaidy 

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Insight

Nice diction and use of pause's. Beautiful write.- Nate Miles

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Spring Was Mauled

Njoyed it .

liked the term Debris of the dream.-J Nair

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Drama

As usual a good powerful poem in inimitable style.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Wet Landscape

Loved the last stanza and closing lines..!-Amit Agarwal, MEERUT

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Another Journey

Almost as if we are like a tree. Exciting poem on rebirth.-Thecraig

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Lacerations

"...the imputence of make-believes..." bravo! -  allets

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Damned

Always a pleasure to read you - allets

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Listening To Rwanda Genocide

Very moving an excellent piece of work.-grange_m

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Reminding

Well told satishverma .- Ramin Ara

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Eternal Drift

As beautiful as it is , I rarely understand your work. This piece however is more direct I feel, possibly about recent life experiences, maybe cathartic or an acceptance of illness?
Whatever the meaning your words themselves always hold an abstract beauty, always a joy to read. -Gene Gary

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IMPERSONATION

Nice write Satish..-Silent One 

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Kava Kava

There is consistent death-consciousness in all poems of Satish. Death comes in all forms, it has become a reference point His philosophy of life does not interfere with the poetry of the piece. Muse is wondrous here.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Black Walls

I get a sense of anger in this. Perhaps struggle? At any rate,this is well structured. -heritage 

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Devil’s Realization

A beautiful image has emerged out of despondency. Nice write.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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In Our Breasts

Apart from tenor of pessimism and consequent poignancy, a hope of redeeming is peeping through. Good execution.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

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New Apartheid

Brilliant. Great imagery, great vision .-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Millennium Celebrating

As usual. it is passionate, poignant and great poetry !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Moving Shadows

Contemplative write...thought provoking. Well written, .- Pristine Poetry

Wonderful images.- Weeping willow

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Resilience

splendid tone... quite good.- Keely Barton

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Stoned

A ruthless , poignant poem vibrating with passion. Excellent cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Without Qualms

Images galore with excellent treatment. Stylized expression. There is always a bit of poignancy in Satish’s poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Another Stroke

Excellent cadence. Brilliant execution.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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He

In this poem, Satish seems somewhat to come out of his usual pessimistic world-view. An excellent poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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The Dilemma

Very nice! An excellent bit of ink! - Sean Scribbles

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Reminiscence

An wonderful psychological analysis turned into a beautiful poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Pandering

An intriguing piece, an enjoyable read.-Gene Gary

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Heart Unsnaps

Good poems come from an abnormal state! I read it twice.-unnikrishnan atiyodi pm, Payyanur

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Ambulating Pain

I thoroughly njyd reading.. It ws vry vivid and ncely penned.-Kaur

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In Reverse

Sad but true in some cases, this one makes me think, how lucky most of us are
there are two sides to life happy or sad. I know which I would rather have. great heart felt write tho` as I say it makes me think.-Divena

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Darting Pain

Expressive and a thought provoking write.- Seema Chowdhury

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The Escape

A reflective and an expressive write.- Seema Chowdhury

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Destiny

It is frenzied utterances really ! But what a force is there ! You can search out a message of great import there.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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No-man’s-land

As usual, Satish, in his inimitable style. His poignant, pessimistic world-view strikes a chord in our heart. We are saddened but we are charmed by the sweetness of that melancholy.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

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Mockingbirds

Passionately expressed. Well executed.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Locked Door

A tell-tale poem. Brilliant. Balance is incomparable.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Lost Meanings

Brilliant imagery evokes vibrant visuals.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Failure

The poem somewhat depressive but still it is of intensive, poignant beauty-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Just Beauty

A poem of intense beauty !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Face To Face

As usual, he is intensely original. The poem is strikingly bitter and pessimistic but It is a great piece of poetry.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Passage To Unknown

We're verbal creatures, we discribe the world using words. Death of a truth could be interpreted as a death of language, because it's just an expression. And it's published on the site for "art of comunication". Beautiful irony, isn't it?-Varret

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Blast

Powerful visuals are evoked. Wonderful !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Sweet Revenge

A sort of staccato rhythm.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

It enhances terror & evokes eerie feelings.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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My Battle

a beautiful exit. Very nice. - Green eyed Blues

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Pink City

A dismal, poignant poem still it has certain sad beauty. Enjoyed reading.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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I See My Own Demise

Hauntingly deep thoughts here.But oh how well you weaved words and stanzas in this pen.-JacieStralkoDuca

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Rags And Riches

A Fine poem.Imagery is beautiful.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

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Fixed Flux

A continuum of Journey of human civilization expressed par excellence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Killing Zone

A particular world-view expressed well. Consummate skill over the language.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Disaster And After

A cynic but fiercely original out look.. Great poem. Diction is so good.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Hanging Garden

Oh amazing! I ever find out the hanging garden. Thank you Sir, for indicating. - BIPIN CH RABHA

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Unasked

Poem like inevitable fate of a human being working for survival and his mission of dream draws us inevitably to the realm of poetry. Great !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Nothing Verse

Well-balanced. past mastery in use of language.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

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Nakedness

The poem reveals rarest sensitivity . Fine piece.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Wavering

The poet has got a philosophic turn of mind. It gives poems certain depth without losing poetry of the piece. Also satiric way of telling things. Enjoyable piece.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Black Magic

The poem is aphoristic but beautifully so !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Aham Asmi... *

Satish - Aham Asmi is a Spiritual connection to the self - inner conciousness.

I really enjoyed reading this one.
It reminded me of a poem written by Zen master Adyashanti
The Awakening http://www.vrolijkverlicht.nl/77-stories-of-awakening/62-awakening-adyashanti-poem. Thanks for a great read.-J Nair

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Neutral

We cross paths again
And if our eyes meet
Are we to understand
Or is it just the craziness
Of desperation
That make the eyes speak ?- KindredSpirit

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Till This Day

Completely beautiful!- Blue Soul

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Laughing Skull

Each word helps the other to create such a beautiful and uplifting poem. Thanks, for sharing this well penned write.-Sue_Pinkston

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A Paragon

The poem is a superb creation, i enjoyed reading the following lines
Unorthodox. The nature
reveals its move― in the galaxies.
The earth is in―
mid-life crisis.-Shakil Ahmed

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The Right Moment

A masterpiece! I just bow to your write! Thanks for sharing!-Sofia Kioroglou

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Toxicity

A very beautiful poem, i enjoyed reading the poem, well-write, thanks for sharing, if you find time please read some of my poems and leave your comments.-Shakil Ahmed

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Change Of Life

Very gifted poet, I sincerely enjoyed reading your poetry. It's beautifully painful, real and also shaped by history, time and human experience.-Agatha Eliza

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Irony Of Gist

With no ring on your finger -
you fell free, but life lingers.-Liza Sud Russia

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Change Of Life

 Verily, facing by standing in times of challenges can only change life.-Abdulrazak Aralimatti

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Faraway

your poems are superb! Give me a few reasons why I like your thoughts, which are sometimes wild as the victorious tiger and otherwise tamed river..Thank you for sharing your wonderful imagination here Satish Vermaji! !-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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Unheavenly

trust a man, fine message sir, namaskar..-Gajanan Mishra

Brilliant capture, I hope humanity answers those unheavenly deities in steadfast determination.loved the image of vultures, made the scene all the more gruesome.-Miraj Raha

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A Soul Dies

Liked great write.-Dark Wolf

I really like this.-John Holmes

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Pebbles In The Pond

Deep with imagery to sigh for my friend. Murder when translucent indeed has much sadness.-Fay Slimm

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Ode To Loneliness

Ah - so profound this read about loneliness - the phrase "mossed in misery" did it for me - thank you for sharing such depth of description Satish.-Fay Slimm

Great last verse.-Nobby66

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Descending

Fabulous writing. Liked much x. -Helenmatherrogers

Great poem a lovely read.- Kacie

Magnificent!-Boutheina

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Consumption

utterly pretentious and empty.-Imrie

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

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Unasking

Fantastic almost apocalyptic imagery, loved & liked - Arturon

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In Sleep

Great write liked.-Dark Wolf

Very clever poem Satishverma.-hutch

Awesome!-Boutheina

Beautiful write! Liked!-Wanderer

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Nightmare

Nicely written.-Dark Wolf

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Faithful

Liked.-Dark Wolf

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Yielding

Superb poem. Liked.-John Holmes

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Laughing Skull

Several good lines in this. The last stanza being the best. Good job here.-heritage

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Self- Annihilation

Of course, Mr. Verma is intensely original in his thought, diction,and cadence. A praiseworthy attempt.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Aham Asmi… *

Advaita philosophy turned into a good poem. Nice execution of rhyme and rhythm-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Heterosexuality

I like the feel and the mystery of the poem.
I would add a question mark in the first stanza, after "harpoons." -ChicagoSojourner

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Historical Grief

Beautiful imagery.
love these lines-
I step outside the house of thoughts.
The death begins the counting and
jasmines start crying.

I hear the over-worn desert
blowing the sand.

Night melts in hissing sounds,
time becomes a paper weight.-J Nair

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To Be Nothing

this is deep, really deep and exotically painful.-Urbanpoet Hader

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Between Two Centuries

Good job!
Very thought provoking piece.
Take care-Cindy

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Deliverance

Use of quaint phrases makes an unique expression. Mr. verma a style of his own which leaves an indelible mark on readers’ mind. -Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Fireflies

Deep thoughts and speculation about human nature and world at large. Some fine lines fibrant with poetry like, ” come, stand beside me, sadness is going to find me again.”-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Knuckled Down

Great poem. I enjoyed.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Claim For Fame

Your expression is quite exquisite.-FLETCHER

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On The Gallows

Miracles falling like hurricanes would be welcome - world status is not worse it is just faster in reaching the populous via satellite aka internet. Free Press - a cure and a curse: nukes and parasites - luck and survival. -allets

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ONE MORE ANNIVERSARY

Beautifully done without one word about the loss suffered.-Dan Cwiak

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Contrast

Interestingly penned down (Y) -Subhashani ( @Subhashani )

A love poem of interesting nuances . Good cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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You Become A Stranger

So lovely....
It is her charm
That makes me to feel all the time warm
I wish her to prepare for final d-day
And wait for the wedding day

The journey has to stop somewhere
For more meaningful venture
I am sure to be stranger
But she has accepted it like bright future.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

Nice, and wonderful to read and the sense is palpable.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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Logistics

You've painted a picture with your words.- Azalea Hazel

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On The Brink

Oh the roses were bleeding due to carelessness.- CITY OF SAILS

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Stillbirth

A surrealistic attempt but poetry is not lost.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Home Coming… Hypothetics

A smart wise love poem. Enjoyed reading.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Song Of The Last Siren

Poet has deep understanding of nature and mankind. Somewhat prophetic, of epic grandeur.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Historical Grief

Beautiful imagery.
love these lines-
I step outside the house of thoughts.
The death begins the counting and
jasmines start crying.

I hear the over-worn desert
blowing the sand.

Night melts in hissing sounds,
time becomes a paper weight.-J Nair

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Suddenly So!

Wow !Enjoyed reading your poem.
Great opening-
Your truth always happened at wrong time
You were guilty of telling lies to death

nice imagery:
*jumping up and down in a stinky swamp,
one day you were caught behind the epigram
encysted in perversity
* Some of the days
burned like dry wood-J Nair

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Moth-Eaten

Yes, 'you still cannot read the eyes'. However, the poems will continue to burn. A stimulating read. Best. -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Welcome Sir!

An universal truth, nicely painted by Satish Verma, an impressive poem!-Akhtar Jawad ( @Akhtar_Jawad )

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A Living Soul

An exquisite thought process woven into fine texture of a poem. Consummate skill over manipulation of language.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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The Birth Of A Public Stance

Great reading of history and a great poem. Fine cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Breaking Dawn

Great penning sir.- Bewitched First

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FOR A DESIRABLE WORLD

Very well written and expressed Satish...-Silent One 

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Singing Woods

"...The autumn was praying for the/well-bing of pine needles in fog..." To obscure (fog) that which has died (pine needles) with a season for dying back - the new Sandburg. :D -allets

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Blood Draped

"...false ceilings..." -allets

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The Candle Burns

As always. ...Spreading the wetting/ agent between the eyes..." was especially haunting. - allets

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UNDER THE CLOUD

I really enjoyed reading your poem, Satish...Nicely done! My regards! :)-john fleming 

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Flickering

Lovely tfs.- Angel mia LOVE

"the dialect of contours"; "the lap of a dandelion" -- Beautiful imagery, my friend.- Raymond scott.

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Flowering

Excellent poem! - Chris G. Vaillancourt

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Timeless Affair

May your timeless affair with yourself be one that will lead you a place of joy and inner peace. A very profound poem.-Avril Meallem, Jerusalem, Israel

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Heights

A completely different expression of your words ... the emotion came through with startling clarity...-Debera

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Trail Of Blood

Deep write, but well penned...-listener

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MASCULINITY

A pen is a small instrument but in your hand it becomes a very loud voice! I like listening to it…John Wulf 

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TIME WILL TAKE REVENGE

Powerful write! May the victory some day shift…-John Wulf 

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New Dictionary

I truly wish I understood this because it sounds so profound... - Stiltskin's Gold 

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The Difference

Beautiful imagery.Simple romantic picture touched with an alluring pang. A dismal beauty of highest order.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Celibate

I like how this is really quirky. The first verse drew me in then the rest is making me ponder your inspiration for this! Love it! :-)-Liquid Poetess

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Shadows Are Thinning

A very powerful, deeply moving poem.-Avril meallem, Jerusalem, Israel

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In The Intermittent Love

Too many images Satish. But so what...the content is clear from various shades, and yet you say metaphors didn't kiss, but I guess you are right, they wouldn't when hate would have to be the topic.
Your poems tempt me to do a stylistic analysis; something that would help readers in understanding how objectively a poem can be viewed or reviewed; some day maybe I will...when my show-off feathers will fade. In the interim, do keep posting. Yours.-Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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My Poems Wept

What a wonderful write, dripping in wonderful imagery. Well done indeed!
All the very best,-Ben Pickard

A beautifully sad poem filled with imagery one can feel
while it was been read. I liked the links between nature and human emotions..it flowed and walked hand in hand..lovely write.-Meena Krish

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Egocentric Wind

Beautifully written.-Busy Poet

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Timeless Affair

I like this. I sense the existiential, "void/no-mind" inspiration behind it. Maybe it is because of this I find it hard to understand the flow or meaning.
The words themselves are abstract and painting. The colour of this poem is purple. (for some reason or another :)-Mason Robb

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Unfog The Sky

Another accomplished piece of writing from you, Satish. Well done.-Ben Pickard

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Catch The Sunset

What a beautifully written piece. Read twice and enjoyed immensely.-Ben Pickard

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Buddha Sleeps

Expressive and a meaningful write. - Seema Chowdhury

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Dying To Live

Fine poem with a pervading consciousness of death.His sense of outrage and violence has also mellowed down in the meantime.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Another Blossom

Hi Satish
when we reach away from what life has given us we do so in hope and certainty
that it can change and we will fly away like the swans to a new day.
your words paint bright pictures, some sad but most hopeful and inspiring.
May your flight be fruitful and you find what it is you seek.-colin skilton

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Waking Is Painful

Hi Satish
strong words and thoughts here, as always the cold light of dawn gives the truth in all its coldness and serenity and sometimes its that reflection that leads us to the truth of most situations and we embrace its clarity so that an answer or begin again to find an answer that is truthful.
Thank you for sharing with us. A good poem.-colin skilton

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Full Stop

Hi Satish
a three way split on this one road in the sense that the writer is looking at three ways to find solace and understanding and then concludes there is only the one path that lies not in the deep trench of life he once was ready to turn over and sow the seeds of love an life he once treasured for so long
now he is looking elsewhere and the words change once more with the mood of the story as he moves further away from what he has held dear and now wishes to return to a home enviroment that he hopes to find and return to, no more commas needed because there will be no more full stops either as he walks fully prepared to find that goal and realises that pain and jealousy will not solve anything so he moves away from their thorny side . Interesting write my friend and enjoyable.-colin skilton

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Spider

Very thought provoking write. I always enjoy your writes.
Have a marvelous day and week.-Lady Dragonwyck

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Faithless Autumn

Satish
autumn is nearly upon us and your words bring on that feeling we get, what will it hold, what will
it take away from us and we yearn for spring but know winter will come upon us.
enjoyable poem and well written and enjoyable.-colin skilton

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Answered…”

Deep insight.Fire borne on congealed tears. Brilliant powerful composition.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Omar-2

Good poetry. Nice imagery.A sense of resentment pervades, verging on poignancy.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Roots That Clutch

A beautiful passionate write !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee ) 

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Helix Now Uncoils

It's a privilege to read this poem. Thank you for sharing this. Best. -Supratik Sen, Hyderabad

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Topical Now…

A cleverly worded write creating resonance.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Hypnosis

An poetic insight into the depth of human nature and world. Wonderfully expressed.Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Collective Death

I love the beginning; and just how it turns from a singular experience to a collective one. The first three stanzas could stand by themselves in my opinion.- jinka fass 

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Windows Are Not Supporting

Very late in life.. good poem...

It is human tendency
That is marred by its frequency
It finds no end with desire
That puts everything on fire

It becomes too late
To understand the consequences of fate
Time comes to wind up the show
In fact no time is granted to know what actually happened.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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Composing

Nice composition...

It is common fact
That people are making escape goat
At each word you shall smell lies
Despite being persuasive try

Only few may survive such bid
And try to lead
Different life in deceptive path
Till the end of life with death.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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From Death To Death

Nice one... No loss of time....

Instead of dying and longing
It must be made full digging
Till it comes out with full satisfaction
And matching with resolve and action

So we seek
And speak
Each time
With no loss of time.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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Baby God

I am not going to forgive you……….
……….you have made my eyes wet…..-ramakrishnan chatakondu ( @ramakrishnan_chatakondu )

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Fastening

Bravo! Love this style satishverma!!!- Redbarchettadrive 

The imagery of "writing my name in water" is unique and plays like Ping pong in my head, love it!- Lina Lotus

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Smash The Book

This Verse is worth the Feel of a higher calling, justified in saying that you must have said, I Am, I Will and I Recall Every Monent that Led to these Words. Damn, you shook the ground and spoke it in your own tone. Thanx for being Poet, -warrior poet

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Ubiquitous Being

Fine poem. Excellent imagery. Beautiful cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Prometheus? Mon Frere? ?

Death consciousness becomes somewhat dramatic here but Intense passion and poetry pervades.
Excellent write.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Catch the Sunset

Make it glorious... catch the moment... nice one

The sun was at peak
But life did not pick
With suitable place
You were pushed out of race

You need not worry
And carry forward
The mission
And prove it was an accomplished admission.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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From Death To Death

Nice one... No loss of time....

Instead of dying and longing
It must be made full digging
Till it comes out with full satisfaction
And matching with resolve and action

So we seek
And speak
Each time
With no loss of time.-Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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Ravaged

Nicely put forward................

We have invaded everywhere
And ventured enough
To destroy the entire natural concept
The time is not far off for us to be wept

Ecological balance is threatened
Even though it is always condemned or criticized
But where are we today as part of civilized world?
We wish it to be clearly told -Hasmukh Mehta, Ahmedabad

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EXTOLLING

Good question Satish :))-Maharani Phool 

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Tale-bearer

An intensely passionate poem. Poet beautifully emoted with exquisite imagery.-Aloke

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An Agonised Prayer

A poignant poem but it is beautiful in its poignancy. Death seems to be a staple penchant of the poet.
Cadence is good, wonderful imagery.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Shambhook…*”

Poem is heavy. Bu what an eloquent and elegant way of conveying it !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Mum Is The Word…

Wonderful. We can feel the resonance and warmth, Passion and skill work together to make a vibrant poem.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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NEW PATHWAYS

Just loving the title and then the meaning of the poem.very good.-Miraj Raha 

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Deleting

Fascinating word choices. Interesting tone.- Nico Reznick

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BETWEEN LOVE AND HATE

epilation and stumilate
stumilate (simulate?) epilation: hair removal - the unflowing river could needs stimulation. Decapitation - not a word encountered often in modern times but great as a metaphor or reference to barbarism in 20th-21st Century (or wishful thinking).- allets

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In Transit

Powerful ending

and I was amazed
by the idea captured
in great talons
and released
as or from or because
or into prophecy (magic & faith images)
enjoyed the surprise ending - allets

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The Wars

"...you know..."
an aside or a request for shared knowledge - The Wars - everywhere for everyone.- allets

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Acrimony

"...like sorcery..."
Got snagged on this line. The last verse/stanza defines poeting (& any creativity) for me.- allets

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A Sickened Craft

"plucked"
the finest word-choice for dismantling metaphysical or metaphoric stars .- allets

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A Wall Painting

"Contours of a dimmed tunnel." -- Ah Satish, you hit me where I live in this offering - allets

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The Untitled Erotica

A powerful write.- Seema Chowdhury

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Slaughtered Dreams

Intense write here. Hells fires rage throughout many cities destroying much in their way. I hope this write is not about you. JacieStralkoDuca

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Non – ‘I’

Nice imagery. Beautiful word play.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Cracking The Code

very deep, great write "Liars will tell the story of honour killing. We were tired of listening" My favorite lines.- Lucid dreamer

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Featureless and White

as usual the poem touches my heart...what shall we do to rectify the current issues? -veeraiyah subbulakshmi, Thanjavur

Marvelous write, stirs up some gory yet familiar images in the contemporary scene.-Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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Transmigration

Wonderful cadence. Past master in weaving a filigree of beauty of thought and imagery !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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The Tear Of Things

Brilliant in cadence and imagery. Consummate skill in manipulating language to convey passion. Awesome with stirring emotion and scathing remarks.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Cultural Drift

The beauty of music, of song, is that it stirs the heart. I remember hearing a childhood song in my later years that stirred up a faith in me when I needed it most. Your writing is so expressive. I have been reading it for quite some time. It takes honesty in self examination to write from the depths of your heart as you do. -AbbasEwe

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A Rebel Being Born

That’s a poem that stands on powerful legs.-Bill Peeler ( @konpreah )

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Unblaming

continuation was a little off but the overall effect and tone was pleasant.- Tyler Williams

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Waking Up

I truly enjoyed reading your poem. Your talent shines. Thanks, for sharing. -Sue_Pinkston

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Dirty Mirrors

Great message is conveyed beautifully in this poem. Mr. Verma has shown his wizardry in manipulating words and thoughts.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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But Truth Will Not…

Characteristic originality is showing in the verses. Good cadence.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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On This Shore Of Life

It is so much poignant, An intense hopelessness pervades the poem. But it is still beautiful in its imagery and wonderful diction woven together.-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

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Strange

This poem is great. It flows nicely though it has little to no rhyming words. You wrote this extremely well. A deffinition of art is something that makes you feel emotion: this my friend, is art.- Jacob Naccarato

A free verse poetry.... Nice to read... Tfs- Salim R Javed

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Deserted Wasteland

Such a soulful expression of the raw truth and angst of life, Sir Satish Verma.-Madhumathi. H, Chennai


Really beautiful...

We are helpless
But keep gloom on face
Who can show bravery over the issue?
If we sincerely evaluate and view

Let us not go so deep
And keep
Our selves totally seized
When it is really not faced.-hasmukh mehta , ahmedabad

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GOODBYE

Sad, and heart felt poem. Short but say so much. But there is another way out.-Milton Robertson 

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Welcome Sir!

An universal truth, nicely painted by Satish Verma, an impressive poem!-Akhtar Jawad ( @Akhtar_Jawad )

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