Deeply Upset

I love the words you have chosen. Brilliantly written my favorite stanza

The whistling pain of the

words, brings

the blood flowers.

Thank you for sharing.-Vanessa

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Repeat Sins

Beautiful lines....
Myth of invincibility
cracks, in the dawn
of miracles. The vibes take
over the song of shadows.

Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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My Dilemma

Nothingness goes beyond the valuation of freedom and we still notice that peace is needed for something. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.- Kumarmani Mahakul

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Being Grateful

Powerful indeed!-Laura

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Knowing Myself

Beautiful lines...
Your presence
sits in my poems. Do
we become human after
separation?
Thanks for sharing!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Mannerism

wow..-Rania Moallem

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Undying Existence

beasty pain is a falling in love with out of self knowledge! ! ! !-Mahtab Bangalee

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Broken Peace

Walking in dark
You have a hope. Sun will
rise soon. You will find the truth..... impressive inscription with lofty theme. Beautiful poem based on positiveness is well executed.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Another Harbinger

Bad things spring suddenly to surprise us. Truth is lost. In that sense it's a nerve chilling poem, sir.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi, May 24, 2020

Beautiful lines...
Words would suggest, but
not explain. I was
afraid of losing the truth.

Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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It Was A Trauma

Astonishing thought provoking words.-LAWLESS

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I Ask Nothing

Good concept and so soothing to hear from you, Sir! So sweet!-Padma, Khammam

This is extremely beautiful, sir. And I understood the poem. I feel sorry to say that I don't have that intellectual capacity to go beyond the layers of your poems and thus I never commented though I read all of your poems.- Sangeeta Das, Delhi


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Art Of Punishment

Your face tells the
truth of timeless pain...The art of punishment is an amazing and brilliant poem penned cleverly.-Kumarmani Mahakul


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Coding An Ocean

It kinda gets lost in itself in that third stanza. Writing is entirely dependent on the audience after all. If this has a significant personal reference to you then that is all that really matters, but as a reader I got lost there. Overall I get a message of a person who is more connected to their lover than the lover is to them. Perhaps a one night stand, somebody feeling taken advantage of after a first date.-Author Gus


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Burying The Past

Your legacy travels with you to discover the ruins. No more pain acquires the path rather joyous mood helps you to proceed. A brilliant poem is excellently penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Will You Admit?

a miracle of language.-

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Abrasions

Lovely lines Satish ji...
Scooped the dust
of ruins. Brilliant gems were
scattered by you.

Thanks for sharing!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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No Vendetta

At right hand with righteousness, we can meet our creator God with greater hope. This poem is very amazingly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Seed Money

Loved this.-WildMoonChild

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Nothing To Mend

how pretty. the virgin arms
how pretty. the virgin arms of a terrorist is so beautiful
The Southern Violinist.-Southern_Violinist

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Black Stones

My head aches, when I
think of my destiny...... outstanding conceptualization. A beautiful poem is amazingly shared. Thanks.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Irrelevantly

thank you for sharing the beauty of your words.-Herbert Witzen

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Nothingness

A highly thought-provoking verse, Satish ji. Yes, humanity will ask God whether he has always been fair to it, and if not, why? -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

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It Bleeds

Comment: Black sky breaks the eyes and before the dawn we wonderfully feel this truth. This poem is brilliantly penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Love To Learn

Nature does not tolerate violence. Nature allows life to get light of wisdom with peace. An amazing poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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When Galaxies Multiply

To create your universe
I think there was no absolute.....God's creation is very wonderful definitely. This is an excellent poem shared here.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Searching Peace

Beautiful lines Satish ji...
Wanted a brutally
honest truth, moon struck
but ready to give blond.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Let's Decide

I will not claim to understand all your imagery, but I liked the way this flowed. This was my favorite verse:
'It spills the light
for a troubled window
cracked by hail.'
I thought the image was just beautiful. My only suggestion would be to change 'for a troubled window' to 'from a troubled window' for better clarity.-Skyfire

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Bolting Dark

A nice reflection of inspiring thoughts. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Like An Oedipus

This poem is very impressive, especially the phrase "The Antarctica of pain" and the stanza it is in.-Starward

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Blood Prints

Beautiful lines Satish ji...
Moon was hauling
the night. There was no ending
of empty words.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Knowing Myself

Very beautiful and true.-Riju Bhargava, PRINCE

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Call Of Faith

A beautiful poem on trust is well executed and amazingly shared. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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Seeking Peace

Spectacular verse, as always! Beautiful lines Satish ji...
I wouldn't touch
the aura of falling star
to stitch the wounds.

Thanks for sharing! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Translating Death

I really love how you convey the images in this verse. It speaks on many things in a few choice words. I'm really impressed.-Willys Watson 

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New Religions

This is a good work to create awareness among those who think that they can do anything in the name of religion. But ye fact h ki jistne bhi traditions h jo hum follow karte h India me unka sabka ek scientific reason h and so we follow them but aaj ki generation in sabko bakwas manti h aur ye bade hi dukh ki baat h... I agree with the point that u highlighted here ki sacrificing someones life and doing all the sins in name of punya is indeed not what we call dharma..actually humne toh apna dharm kab ka tyag diya h aur in sab sacrificing lives vale rituals ke peeche pade h..But let me remind u ki jo rituals hote h unka ek significance hota h aur vo aise hi nhi kiye jaate and there are some reasons whom u coming from a spiritual country like India, must respect. Not all the rituals and the things our pandits say are lies and trash. Try to respect ur traditions and the place from where u come. I do agree that killing someone is indeed a crime but saying those words are lies is not correct. Religion has taken a terrible form in this kalyug but one must not forget that it was made to sho people correct path u can blame those who do not convey this correctly but agar teacher hi galat padha raha h toh aap school ko q blame kare...it's like that.-Aradhana 

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Talking To Spirit

Spectacular as always!-Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar

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Naked Truths

Beautiful lines .....
Muscularity of
oath melts. The fusion cracks.
You move away.

Thanks for sahring Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Inheritance

Beautiful lines Satish ji...
I do not want to
call you my yesterday. Past
takes revenge. -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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The Road

"You change the clothes,
alter the sex,
exchange the god,
and refuse to die."

Oh my god. Yes, that much we cling to life.-nourayasmine

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Quietness

You catch a simple moment, and turn into a gem of poetry. I like your philosophy.-nourayasmine

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