AFRAID OF UNKNOWN

unknown is scary... well said.- seema chowdhury

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AWAY FROM HOME

thanks for sharing.- Poet Destroyer A

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BOAT CAPSIZES

The girl friend of my youth!- leafsailor

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BLACKENED CROZIER

A meaningful write.- Seema chowdhury

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MOURNING

wonderful... Do you have a blog? or website?-viviane leite

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DEBTS OF GRATITUDE`

Keep on writing, thanks for sharing.- LightH2O

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KLEPTOMANIAC

we all are kleptomaniacs! we like to have the game but not the name?- nimal dunuhinga

there is a little KLEPTOMANIAC in us all it seems.- spysgrandson

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SCHISM

What horrific scene in the last stanza! still it is interesting to note the imagery of the poet!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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FROM DUSK TO DUSK

Another sad poem Satish. I pray you are well.- emilou

Some very grim images...- LightH2O

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GIVE ME SOME POISON TO LIVE

Sad, painful and perfect!- emilou

Oh yes, "the rose petals hurt now" When emptiness talks back it curses what wasn't done. But would you, could you have done anything any different to reach this point now? Darkness closes in now and the shadows of the trees in the night whisper the unforgotten into the deaf ears. The memory is sometimes like a sharp knife that cuts with precision. You must bleed in the end to be free of it. A poet friend...- Ron Poet

Simple pain of sadness complete- leafsailor

I hear you, I'm going through the same.- LightH2O

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INTROSPECTION

Your poetry moves me, you are very talented.- Kahlia Mazacalletti

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*DEPRESSION

Great poem.......moving and the words have such meaning.-Kahlia Mazacalletti

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DEATH ON GRASS

"Sometime, somewhere I will break into many moons" I love this line, it's mind boggling. Best to you!- LightH2O

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Rampage

Drag out the light. Great. thanks.
I invite you to read my poems and comment.-Gajanan Mishra

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LIVE BAITS

Nice write... feel a certain empathy ... liked the images... - Mehnaz Veetil

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IN INWARD ALONENESS

So sad, this inward lonesomeness is as winter, which burns everything inside. A good promise of the beach of immortality gives some hope.- LightH2O

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WORDLESS SILENCE

I've been reading most all of your poems. This one I put near the top. It's good. Quite often it's wiser to watch the 'walk' and not listen to the 'talk'... Talk is cheap - unless it's poetry of course :-louis gander

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OF A VIRGIN GOD

A solemn view of the incommensurable creation of your mind.-LightH2O

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FROM DUSK TO DUSK

Some very grim images...-LightH2O

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A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

As usual your images and words go deep into the bone and spirit.- LightH2O

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FROM A DOT

Very nicely said.- justgs

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EACH THORN WAS CRYING

Original and interesting imagery on your lines. - LightH2O

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MANIA

this piece grows on me even though I am still deciphering it.. But I really like the last line.. 'I still follow the laws of kindness in filling the extended empty cups.' it speaks of hope, duty, and kindness even when the world around seems absurd and cruel..- Ailill,

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Speechless

You start spitting everywhere and on the face of God. good poem. thanks.- Gajanan Mishra

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DO NOT THROW DUST ON THE GRAVES

A beautiful deep write.- emilou g:)emotions in words

Deep!- LightH2O

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THE ECHO REACHES THE WHOLE SKY

You are such a gifted poet! You truly impress me with your writes!- emilou g:)emotions in words

Impressive work- Kibrom Habtu

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CAN YOU TAKE ME TO MY HOME?

Such deep heart felt lines.- LightH2O

Great penning with strong images.- narain, jay p.

"can you take me to my home, into abeyance" beautiful suspense! Amazing poem, I loved how it returns to somewhat the pass, then to the present, almost as if it were together ! truly brilliant !- esmeralda15

What a beautiful imagery you've made in this poem! Great write!- emilou g:)emotions in words

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COURTING FIDELITY

Satish,, good form and image...... enjoyed stopping by tonight~Always-Poet Destroyer A

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DEATH WAS VERY GENIAL

Keen observations of a deep feeling soul, "One has to pay for touching greatness" sending lots of good energy your way.- LightH2O

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I AM BURNING MY BRIDGES

Sad but an awesome write as always.- emilou g:)emotions in words

This is so sad, and the last stanza makes me wish you don't ever burn our bridges. Thinking of you and wishing you the best.- LightH2O

This is very powerful and so truthful in the metaphor of whats been written here...recommending.- Kaila George

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WITH LICORICE

Wow..I really like this write. The hierarchy will keep taking to become rich, leaving us to take only scraps..Loved your write and a keeper for me..Peace..- Mike Mezz

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A NAME OF CLEMENCY

Agree Sir. Old age doesn't deserve any clemency - it has to simply pass off - for one to pass away...! Thanks for sharing.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india

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VAPORIZATION

A very nicely phrased poem, love the last stanza, especially the last line and "pink sun". The structural reading confused me a bit, but I think that could just be a margin issue, if you widen the margins in the set up it might help. Enjoyed the read.- Shabetei

Well written. Very much enjoyed!- Troylato

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OTHER GOD WAS SLEEPING

Painting some pretty intriguing images.- LightH2O

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ACTUALIS

You're a master in your own game, which keeps me perplexed and coming back for more. TFS-LightH2O

The dance of the words on the meanings ,sparkle in sweet incoherence yet I see so completely, only you can do this.- leafsailor

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DARKNESS AT NOON

it's splendid. keep it up.- eyitayo lizzy

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