* YES
an eye opener
good write
-10 anjali
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Sunday, November 29, 2009
Ency Bearis
NAKED FREEDOM (A sequel to the massacre of 23rd Nov 09 in Philippines)
Thanks for your nice concern to the tragedy in the Philippines...my native country...a horrible thing due to too much politics or the power of dynasty...but pity to the innocents....a moving poem...
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Thanks for your nice concern to the tragedy in the Philippines...my native country...a horrible thing due to too much politics or the power of dynasty...but pity to the innocents....a moving poem...
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Saturday, November 28, 2009
Meggie Gultiano
NAKED FREEDOM (A sequel to the massacre of 23rd Nov 09 in Philippines)
Indeed our hearts bleeds to those innocent people who were included in that bloody day.
What kind of a person/persons are they?
I come from that place, (Mindanao) , and we cry for justice.
A touching write.
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Indeed our hearts bleeds to those innocent people who were included in that bloody day.
What kind of a person/persons are they?
I come from that place, (Mindanao) , and we cry for justice.
A touching write.
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Friday, November 27, 2009
Christopher Rollason
The selected poems of Satish Verma, under the title of BEYONDS & BETWEON, are already an impressive product of intercultural dialogue. Satish Verma, an Indian poet and Hindi native speaker here writing in English, traces a dark journey through a landscape not of this world - a burnt, stunted, desiccated inner landscape that in many ways recalls T.S. Eliot's Waste Land - and yet at the end, in a movement reminiscent of the Tagore of Gitanjali, welcomes the arrival of a transformative Guest, in an eminently Indian fashion. Christopher Rollason
Jandi
SHADOWS
They were playing hide and seek ... Fidelity of course was the decision of both ... Attitude divided the bed and kitchen That is what happens. I like the combination of words,its so beautiful.
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They were playing hide and seek ... Fidelity of course was the decision of both ... Attitude divided the bed and kitchen That is what happens. I like the combination of words,its so beautiful.
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lullaby
SYMBIOSIS
A metaphoric and interesting poem; I love the title and the lines ""Pure chemistry of love is boiling."" and ""Poetry is waiting for symbiosis.""
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A metaphoric and interesting poem; I love the title and the lines ""Pure chemistry of love is boiling."" and ""Poetry is waiting for symbiosis.""
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adeagiri
CANNOT OPEN THE LOOP
Speech does not bring solace mathematics cannot open the loop. How true. Find the inner peace. Great work. Profound.
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Speech does not bring solace mathematics cannot open the loop. How true. Find the inner peace. Great work. Profound.
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Buchi
UNREPLIED
i read this poem and read it again,i feel like i was spoken to. the stand i ought to take but didn't,the truth swallowed to let in injustice. the camouflag of human existaence,if the eye averts to face the just,deception lurks around. it is a GREAT write.
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i read this poem and read it again,i feel like i was spoken to. the stand i ought to take but didn't,the truth swallowed to let in injustice. the camouflag of human existaence,if the eye averts to face the just,deception lurks around. it is a GREAT write.
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Jandi
STUFFED SILENCE
""Everseeking a revolution, brain will find a false excuse. The archives do not give a clue""... i like that line You have done it again!
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""Everseeking a revolution, brain will find a false excuse. The archives do not give a clue""... i like that line You have done it again!
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Lombe
SLASHED WOUND
Its captivating, wonderfuly sad and filled with regret.
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Its captivating, wonderfuly sad and filled with regret.
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Wordsculptor
FAILED GOD
This has a sadness about it. The idea of 'abandonment' is not one my theology can readily accept. It is however a refreshingly thought provoking piece of writing. From a purely visual persective I'd separate this into two lines: 'A crystal depth spills in cosmos, the words scream'
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This has a sadness about it. The idea of 'abandonment' is not one my theology can readily accept. It is however a refreshingly thought provoking piece of writing. From a purely visual persective I'd separate this into two lines: 'A crystal depth spills in cosmos, the words scream'
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jackreed3
DECAYED CENTURY
Your poem is very well writen.. I read it twice and veiwed it in many different ways.. I really injoyed it... Your friend in poetry... jackreed3
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Your poem is very well writen.. I read it twice and veiwed it in many different ways.. I really injoyed it... Your friend in poetry... jackreed3
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Lombe
MAN?S DESTINY
Nice and grim. Well writen
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Nice and grim. Well writen
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Angeldeath
WAKING UP
Nightmares are horrible. I couldnt imagaine that kind of horror that haunts you. Everyone has dreams and nightmares... few surpass this. Powerful work.
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Nightmares are horrible. I couldnt imagaine that kind of horror that haunts you. Everyone has dreams and nightmares... few surpass this. Powerful work.
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Angeldeath
EUTHANASIA
This one confused me abit, but i enjoyed it. Espically ""Death was another name of birth ?"" that was great.
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This one confused me abit, but i enjoyed it. Espically ""Death was another name of birth ?"" that was great.
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Damowest
SOME QUESTION MARKS
a unique view on life, well done.
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a unique view on life, well done.
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Licia Torres
A KISS MELTS
You've chosen powerful and vivid imagery for this piece. I loved the ending lines, beautifully effective.
You've chosen powerful and vivid imagery for this piece. I loved the ending lines, beautifully effective.
Shava
THE KISS ................
Death is a hard concept to accept. We never want to say goodbye to someone we love but sometimes we have to. ~!*!~sHaVz~!*!~
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Death is a hard concept to accept. We never want to say goodbye to someone we love but sometimes we have to. ~!*!~sHaVz~!*!~
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subasbista , poewhit
TRANSITIONAL EDGE
subasbista
hi satish jee,so mature thoughts.just want say namaste 4 being your poems'lover
poewhit
' thinker was without thoughts "" - scary image of todays leaders in many position - high on DRUGS
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subasbista
hi satish jee,so mature thoughts.just want say namaste 4 being your poems'lover
poewhit
' thinker was without thoughts "" - scary image of todays leaders in many position - high on DRUGS
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Ric S. Bastasa
ALLIGATORS WERE DYING
Trees were hung upside down.
There was no suicidal note.
What an image! you deserve a medallion for this...
Satishfying indeed.
Trees were hung upside down.
There was no suicidal note.
What an image! you deserve a medallion for this...
Satishfying indeed.
poewhit
ANNIVERSARY OF FLIRTATION
Poem has weight on the shoulders
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Poem has weight on the shoulders
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wendyholln
ANNIVERSARY OF FLIRTATION
Another wonderful poem. So full of images and meanings. Loved it!!
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Another wonderful poem. So full of images and meanings. Loved it!!
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Lindylou
HOLDING THE POEMS
Something in the words you have composed appeals to me, in its sadness and simplicity. Makes me attune to the senses around me when I write a poem I like to become part of the atmosphere.
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Something in the words you have composed appeals to me, in its sadness and simplicity. Makes me attune to the senses around me when I write a poem I like to become part of the atmosphere.
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Wordview
FALLING APART
""You squat on the cinders of untruths, it was powerful dementia.""Brilliant write.
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""You squat on the cinders of untruths, it was powerful dementia.""Brilliant write.
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William Jackson
CIRCLE OF GLORY
The images here are nightmarish and vivid. War and violence against humanity, especially violence against women bring madness to all its participants, including the victims and the victimizers. Great poem here.
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The images here are nightmarish and vivid. War and violence against humanity, especially violence against women bring madness to all its participants, including the victims and the victimizers. Great poem here.
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William Jackson
CITY OF STONES
Such starkly shocking imagery. Your poetry is totally different from anything else I have read but I am touched deeply by it. It reminds me of Miroslav Holub's poetry such as 'A History Lesson' and Five Minutes After the Air Raid'.
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Such starkly shocking imagery. Your poetry is totally different from anything else I have read but I am touched deeply by it. It reminds me of Miroslav Holub's poetry such as 'A History Lesson' and Five Minutes After the Air Raid'.
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William Jackson
CLAIM FOR FAME
This poem is loaded with memorable lines. I especially like the last three lines. The tee finally gives up the claim for fame. The roots squirm. And I also like 'The journey is brutal when you arrive nowhere
striving for unsaid perfection.
Life drips. Your wounds snap the love. '
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This poem is loaded with memorable lines. I especially like the last three lines. The tee finally gives up the claim for fame. The roots squirm. And I also like 'The journey is brutal when you arrive nowhere
striving for unsaid perfection.
Life drips. Your wounds snap the love. '
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William Jackson
CLAUSTROPHOBIA
There is so much to comprehend in this poem. It is brilliant. The first stanza alone is more than I can wrap my head around on a first reading. Thank you.
I love your work.
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There is so much to comprehend in this poem. It is brilliant. The first stanza alone is more than I can wrap my head around on a first reading. Thank you.
I love your work.
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William Jackson
COLLECTIVE GUILT
This is another brilliant poem that makes me think of the poetry of the contemporaries of the generation of Mirsolav Holub who lived through the madness of Hitlers' Germany. But, your work is uniquely your own and has its own voice. I only make the comparison to give myself a frame of reference. I like your poems as much if not more than his. This is a supreme compliment.
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This is another brilliant poem that makes me think of the poetry of the contemporaries of the generation of Mirsolav Holub who lived through the madness of Hitlers' Germany. But, your work is uniquely your own and has its own voice. I only make the comparison to give myself a frame of reference. I like your poems as much if not more than his. This is a supreme compliment.
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William Jackson
COMMENTRIES
I am speechless. Another fine poem.
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I am speechless. Another fine poem.
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William Jackson
COMPARISION
This poem makes me think of the brave prisoners at Awswich and Treblinka who clung to life in the face of death.
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This poem makes me think of the brave prisoners at Awswich and Treblinka who clung to life in the face of death.
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Yann Rolland
Circle of Glory
Hello there are beautiful images and metaphors in your poem...I like it very much...
Thanks
Yann
Hello there are beautiful images and metaphors in your poem...I like it very much...
Thanks
Yann
Ariel Escalona
EXPERIMENTS
then..the theory of lies...is directly proportional to the wealth of a being...
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then..the theory of lies...is directly proportional to the wealth of a being...
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Goldy Locks
CREATIVE SHAME
your delibate display of decadent verse, thickly layered, as a testament/tribute to your creativity, is not done out of shame; nor does it lend credence to ill repute - but rather exemplifies an honorable intuition and further validates that your moral standings are something to be revered. have missed reading! xxsjg
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your delibate display of decadent verse, thickly layered, as a testament/tribute to your creativity, is not done out of shame; nor does it lend credence to ill repute - but rather exemplifies an honorable intuition and further validates that your moral standings are something to be revered. have missed reading! xxsjg
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E Planz
I AM WALKING ON SHARP EDGES
A powerful opening stanza.... I am led to the end whereby I walk onwards to a perimeter of time...
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A powerful opening stanza.... I am led to the end whereby I walk onwards to a perimeter of time...
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Pramod Khilery
I AM SMILE WITH TEARS
Flutes lie broken in bottom of the pond,
I love the pace of history walking on the back
of alligators. It does not die.
A poem that lives up to every definition of poetry. The three lines I singled out leaves their sound behind their utterance for enough time to finally become a shadow for the wayfarer of literature.
Pramod
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Flutes lie broken in bottom of the pond,
I love the pace of history walking on the back
of alligators. It does not die.
A poem that lives up to every definition of poetry. The three lines I singled out leaves their sound behind their utterance for enough time to finally become a shadow for the wayfarer of literature.
Pramod
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Jan Wid A Life
I AM SMILE WITH TEARS
a poetry living in a timeless world. truly amazing..
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a poetry living in a timeless world. truly amazing..
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Goldy Locks
I AM DRUNK ON THE HEMLOCK
Satish, the 2 collections you sent me in the mail arrived last week. I can't put them down! They are stunning & blowing me away. :) I will more than gladly post some in the forum, at your consent.. that is if they are sure to receive the respect & utter appreciation your poems so deserve (which may be a lot to ask) ...meh.
xxbest care, keep on. i heart your words to an incredible degree. ~ susan jane
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Satish, the 2 collections you sent me in the mail arrived last week. I can't put them down! They are stunning & blowing me away. :) I will more than gladly post some in the forum, at your consent.. that is if they are sure to receive the respect & utter appreciation your poems so deserve (which may be a lot to ask) ...meh.
xxbest care, keep on. i heart your words to an incredible degree. ~ susan jane
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Goldy Locks
MILK BATH
it lingers after piercing deeply within the soul crevices and conjuring up questions of eternal youth, and self-examination (with respect to the gods, of course!) .
what is `it'?
Satish Verma's poetry!
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it lingers after piercing deeply within the soul crevices and conjuring up questions of eternal youth, and self-examination (with respect to the gods, of course!) .
what is `it'?
Satish Verma's poetry!
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oldy Locks
LIVING LEGEND
you inspire to no end, at least there's no end in sight for this audacious female poet.xxsjg
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you inspire to no end, at least there's no end in sight for this audacious female poet.xxsjg
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illiam Jackson
AFRAID OF UNKNOWN
Brilliant piece as always. Well done! I like your work. It forces me to consider man's inhumanity to man and how fortunate and blessed I have been to avoid the sorrow of war and intolerance that is prevelent in so much of the world.
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Brilliant piece as always. Well done! I like your work. It forces me to consider man's inhumanity to man and how fortunate and blessed I have been to avoid the sorrow of war and intolerance that is prevelent in so much of the world.
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Catrina Heart
* YES
wow Satish dear thanks for this stunning profound poem....I have written 'The Horrible Scene' and 'Day of Mourn (Maguindanao Massacre) ' regarding this dreadful injustice made...Thanks! ! !
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wow Satish dear thanks for this stunning profound poem....I have written 'The Horrible Scene' and 'Day of Mourn (Maguindanao Massacre) ' regarding this dreadful injustice made...Thanks! ! !
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Thursday, November 26, 2009
Xraided
Death is Not a Ceremony
I like the freewrite form, and I love "air will kiss the lips of fire" I really quite like how you can tell a story and be poetic at the same time. To a lot of people poetry is just ryhtming words together, when it really isn't. I love the way you put words together and I must admit I am impressed with your choice in vocabulary. I give you kudos. Awesome write.
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I like the freewrite form, and I love "air will kiss the lips of fire" I really quite like how you can tell a story and be poetic at the same time. To a lot of people poetry is just ryhtming words together, when it really isn't. I love the way you put words together and I must admit I am impressed with your choice in vocabulary. I give you kudos. Awesome write.
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Samara Reyn
Tears Were Never Sweet
Beautifully sad
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Beautifully sad
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paul claxton
Prozac
different,but so good,u have a good collection of poems,interesting
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different,but so good,u have a good collection of poems,interesting
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C. McGovern-Bowen
INTERPOLATIONS
Siteto unlearn as a road to the return of inner peace...
listen to those silent voices...
another mesmerizing write, satish.
much enjoyed.
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Siteto unlearn as a road to the return of inner peace...
listen to those silent voices...
another mesmerizing write, satish.
much enjoyed.
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Steve Chering
THE SWAN - SONG
A little like wordsworth' I like your swan. Check out my hamster Cedric when you have the chance.
well done, Satish
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A little like wordsworth' I like your swan. Check out my hamster Cedric when you have the chance.
well done, Satish
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Peter Schlosser
MOCKINGBIRDS
Wonderful poem.
"Moon god to moon god
under the swaying palms
man still cannot bring the house in order."
Brilliant finish!!!
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Wonderful poem.
"Moon god to moon god
under the swaying palms
man still cannot bring the house in order."
Brilliant finish!!!
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jude forese
OBTUSE MYSELF
Beyond insanity lies the phantom zone
where you hang upside down your faith
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Beyond insanity lies the phantom zone
where you hang upside down your faith
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Peter Schlosser
THIS ODYSSEY
Incredible poetry
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Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad
Your poem, Satish, gives a strong message that the wheel should not stop, it should move on ever and ever... even a new born child comes out alive from a rail track after the train has whistled past it with high speed. Life is indomitable. You follow a modern style to compose your poems. Best regards
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Nalini Hebbar, Nellore
Like Sisyphus we too are in a viscious circle called life...doors are hard to come by and if it does, is it the right one?...thank you for this deep one.
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K K Srivastava, New Delhi
You have epitomized life's philosophy in a few words, Satish. Thought provoking, indeed. Regards,
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Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad
Satish, you poem carries a very deep meaning with the scars of the present time - political and social. It is all because we have lost touch with ourselves. Best regards,
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Tuesday, November 24, 2009
richard cederberg
AGAIN FALLING IN LOVE
fellow-travelers - yes all in this together - yes each of us sharing our hidden gardens - yes LOVE, the most powerful force in the universe - yes I like the elliptical aspects of this; it begins
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fellow-travelers - yes all in this together - yes each of us sharing our hidden gardens - yes LOVE, the most powerful force in the universe - yes I like the elliptical aspects of this; it begins
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C. McGovern-Bowen
HYPNOSIS
would it not be simplier to just remain hypnotized...?
a truly magical write, satish.
cg
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would it not be simplier to just remain hypnotized...?
a truly magical write, satish.
cg
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Joyce Bell
SUBSTANTIAL SHADOW
SOME SAY THE BOTTLE IS HALF EMPTY...SOME SAY IT IS HALF FULL. THIS IS A TERRIFIC WRITE, WITH GREAT IMAGERY AND PHRASES. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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SOME SAY THE BOTTLE IS HALF EMPTY...SOME SAY IT IS HALF FULL. THIS IS A TERRIFIC WRITE, WITH GREAT IMAGERY AND PHRASES. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
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Eugene Williams
LINEAGE
Beyond the norm in all it reveals a poem that when understood by the masses will make us all cry for the shame we have caused to each other.. I like It!!!!
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Beyond the norm in all it reveals a poem that when understood by the masses will make us all cry for the shame we have caused to each other.. I like It!!!!
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Steve Chering
IDOLATORY
ghly entertaining!! I read it over and over, and it seems to take on a new image every time, very clever stuff Satish' you're a wizard writer. But I reckon you must know by now.
Steve Chering
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ghly entertaining!! I read it over and over, and it seems to take on a new image every time, very clever stuff Satish' you're a wizard writer. But I reckon you must know by now.
Steve Chering
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Monday, November 23, 2009
Rafique Farooqi
SMALL TALK
a beautiful abstract poem
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a beautiful abstract poem
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Goldy Locks
DRAGGING
Fully developed poem, Satish. Deep, meaningful, satisfying; as your work tends to be! ! I love your loyalty and your new collection: gave the second copy to a well-known art dealer in my area! ! ! ! Thank you so much :) :) Goldy
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Fully developed poem, Satish. Deep, meaningful, satisfying; as your work tends to be! ! I love your loyalty and your new collection: gave the second copy to a well-known art dealer in my area! ! ! ! Thank you so much :) :) Goldy
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Carolyn Devonshire
CUDDLING
Compelling write, Satish. Guess the mind skips "to and fro" between the sunset and sunrise. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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Compelling write, Satish. Guess the mind skips "to and fro" between the sunset and sunrise. Very nice! Love, Carolyn
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Carol Brown
IMMORTALITY
Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Satish. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Thank you for starting my new day out with some excellent reading Satish. May this week find you in good health and your pen be overflowing with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Saturday, November 21, 2009
Goldy Locks
DRAGGING
Fully developed poem, Satish. Deep, meaningful, satisfying; as your work tends to be! ! I love your loyalty and your new collection: gave the second copy to a well-known art dealer in my area! ! ! ! Thank you so much :) :) Goldy
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Fully developed poem, Satish. Deep, meaningful, satisfying; as your work tends to be! ! I love your loyalty and your new collection: gave the second copy to a well-known art dealer in my area! ! ! ! Thank you so much :) :) Goldy
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Tuesday, November 17, 2009
oxygon
“SPIRAL DESCENT”
This is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful verse, a lyrical outpouring of astonishing depth and breadth! Just the mere act of reading and hearing, and taking in the “mind” of the speaker, is affirmation of the poem’s worth. You are to be applauded for this splendid composition!highest regards,
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yann rolland
“SILENCE OF DOORS”
Thank you for the magnificent title and the thoughtful poem.yann
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yann rolland, oxygon
“STRANGE ENEMIES”
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oxygon
“TRAMPLING”
I think that only a “healer” can perceive the wounds as you have described in a language that does not lend itself to a cursory reading.
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oxygon
“COMPARISION”
Ah, to what great, incomprehensible heights can one go into heavenly, cosmic things, and to what heights in meditating on things earthly—the point is well made, to detest the “comparison of heights”. “Like stars we are sailing/in our separateness.” I like the feeling, how alone the solitary star among a myriad of countless stars!
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oxygon, Nitish shubhankar
“BLACK AND WHITE”
- oxygon Says:
Sheer lyrical beauty, Satish; expressive language that is pleasing to the ear and mind—the life heat of the sun melting the very context of one’s being—powerful!
Regards,
art
- Nitish shubhankar Says:
hello satish sir!……………r u listenin?………no u dont………….coz never u seem to comment on our comment………..but it will not stop me from reading and commenting on your efforts of enrichments of enlish launguage………..again a gg8 one…..
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oxygon, RAY LUCERO, Ida Werrett
“BOUQUET”
- oxygon Says:
Sublimely beautiful, hauntingly, sweetly forlorn, but smoldering with hope; I love it, Satish!
art
- RAY LUCERO Says:
Satishverma,
Elegant, romantic and sentimental…a beautiful write indeed.
Peace,
Ray
- Ida Werrett Says:
This is a beautiful and romantic poem, Satish and the title is just right for it.
Ida
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yann rolland
“D-DAY”
the thoughts drifted out,visibility became poor
and ending of pain came soon.
thank you for sharing these thoughts, our mind can make suffer us…I don’t know the logic of it…..
yann
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Tiffany
“D-DAY”
stillness had a vocabulary,and the words hummed a silence
Those are beautiful lines. Maybe it was the opening but I keep thinking of Dante’s Inferno. Must be the mood I’m in tonight. I really enjoyed reading this.
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Rayhan Rhyne
'Crossing The Bar' Once Again...
It is time to leave the waiting room, but i have come and will come again with all my sorrows, fears and happiness, someone will hold my hand, perhaps the same one.
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It is time to leave the waiting room, but i have come and will come again with all my sorrows, fears and happiness, someone will hold my hand, perhaps the same one.
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Rajagopal Haran
The Socratic Existence
NEXT TO LOVE PHILOSOPHY TAKES THE DRIVERS' SEAT IN GETTING GOOD POEMS... nicely written sir
NEXT TO LOVE PHILOSOPHY TAKES THE DRIVERS' SEAT IN GETTING GOOD POEMS... nicely written sir
Sunil Uniyal
Freedom At Last
When 'the grief has ripened... I am free'- Great words, Sir, and excellent poetry. Congrats!
When 'the grief has ripened... I am free'- Great words, Sir, and excellent poetry. Congrats!
Asma
Freedom At Last
nice poem... i loved the last 2 lines - 'my sun baked grief has ripened / in ruins of desires. I am free' regards, Asma...
nice poem... i loved the last 2 lines - 'my sun baked grief has ripened / in ruins of desires. I am free' regards, Asma...
Renu Rakheja
Freedom At Last
In ruins of desires. I am free
Lot of punch!! Good work
In ruins of desires. I am free
Lot of punch!! Good work
Akash
Feedom At Last
You can say a lot in so few words, the best line have just one or two words!!!
You can say a lot in so few words, the best line have just one or two words!!!
Preeti Datar
Hieronomo!*
I agree with Renu. I like how you hint at something, but let the leader decide what you're talkign about. It's almost like a readre's poem!
Keep Writing!
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I agree with Renu. I like how you hint at something, but let the leader decide what you're talkign about. It's almost like a readre's poem!
Keep Writing!
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Renu Rakheja
Hieronomo!*
I am starting to enjoy your signature writing style. You leave very few clues and weave up a bewitching web of words and leave the reader caught and mystified. Well done!
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I am starting to enjoy your signature writing style. You leave very few clues and weave up a bewitching web of words and leave the reader caught and mystified. Well done!
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Preeti Datar
Dancing Eyes
I'm glad you shared your poems here... I'm already your fan! loved this line- "Sun is pink and ashamed!"
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I'm glad you shared your poems here... I'm already your fan! loved this line- "Sun is pink and ashamed!"
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Preeti Datar
Burning Train
Satish, this is a great Ode to those who lived on after the attack, and those who did not!
I like the subtlity in your poem for the gruesome details have also been described with slightest care keep writing!
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Satish, this is a great Ode to those who lived on after the attack, and those who did not!
I like the subtlity in your poem for the gruesome details have also been described with slightest care keep writing!
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William Jackson
SUICIDE NOTE
Gosh! That was thoroughly depressing and yet well done. The body fails and the mind too I suppose. Still, the thought of suicide, and no note either is sad. I guess it does happen, although it would be nice to be like Moses who continued to walk with a spring in his step and a twinkle in his eyes even when he became ancient.
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Gosh! That was thoroughly depressing and yet well done. The body fails and the mind too I suppose. Still, the thought of suicide, and no note either is sad. I guess it does happen, although it would be nice to be like Moses who continued to walk with a spring in his step and a twinkle in his eyes even when he became ancient.
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Abha Sharma
FAILED PERFORMANCE
An intelligent mind suffers _
in ther era of hoaxes and contradictions.
it is not just a poem but a lament on today's scenario....God knows when such petty conflicts would die...
The satire is the last line is admirable...
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An intelligent mind suffers _
in ther era of hoaxes and contradictions.
it is not just a poem but a lament on today's scenario....God knows when such petty conflicts would die...
The satire is the last line is admirable...
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Abha Sharma
DOVES HAD STOPPED FLYING
Earth refuses to conceive –
fire in veins.
Doves had stopped flying.
................the modern picture is well dipicted here...the sentiments are deep and true....the last line has it all....
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Earth refuses to conceive –
fire in veins.
Doves had stopped flying.
................the modern picture is well dipicted here...the sentiments are deep and true....the last line has it all....
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Kee Thampi
THE BUDDHA WAS GOING TO WEEP
a poetry tell us a didactic story
..... Burnt-out shrine will tell a tale.
......They were diluting silence of walls,
.....blood stained by the crash of towers.
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a poetry tell us a didactic story
..... Burnt-out shrine will tell a tale.
......They were diluting silence of walls,
.....blood stained by the crash of towers.
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Gold for USA
Bottom of a Doorway
You personify grief excellently. Almost make it a thing to envy. Bam! your writing has such force, i love it. It's addiction to me. keep on friend, sjg
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You personify grief excellently. Almost make it a thing to envy. Bam! your writing has such force, i love it. It's addiction to me. keep on friend, sjg
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Sathyanarayana M V S
A Rebel Being Born
A deep as sky. Human introspection digs out all filth and fills the soul with gold.
great poem
sathya narayana
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A deep as sky. Human introspection digs out all filth and fills the soul with gold.
great poem
sathya narayana
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Goldy Locks
BOTTOM OF A DOORWAY
You personify grief excellently. Almost make it a thing to envy. Bam! your writing has such force, i love it. It's addicting to me. keep on friend, sjg
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You personify grief excellently. Almost make it a thing to envy. Bam! your writing has such force, i love it. It's addicting to me. keep on friend, sjg
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Carol Brown
Ecstasy
It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today. Thank you. Love, Carol
It has been a pleasure to read your excellent poetry today. Thank you. Love, Carol
Abha Sharma
A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW
Imagery is quite picturesque... enjoyed reading the lines...thought provoking...
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Imagery is quite picturesque... enjoyed reading the lines...thought provoking...
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christopher higgins
Genocide
Very powwerful write. The images in this piece are so powerful that I had to go back and try to get it all. Your writing speaks volumes to the world and its shortcomings. I hope you will continue your journey of writing and exploring the world.
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Very powwerful write. The images in this piece are so powerful that I had to go back and try to get it all. Your writing speaks volumes to the world and its shortcomings. I hope you will continue your journey of writing and exploring the world.
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christopher higgins
WILL YOU MARRY ME ?
How talented are you..you have a great gift of words. Your metaphors are very strong and they make your piece very entertaining to read.
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How talented are you..you have a great gift of words. Your metaphors are very strong and they make your piece very entertaining to read.
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John Heck
Flowering Of The Thought
Hi Satish - Wonderful poetry. Such excellent style and form.
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Hi Satish - Wonderful poetry. Such excellent style and form.
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Goldy Locks
Flowering Of The Thought
forever and a day, is how long your poetry will last. surviving, standing, negating the test of time. xxxsjg
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forever and a day, is how long your poetry will last. surviving, standing, negating the test of time. xxxsjg
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Indiguin82
Claustrophobia
"the collage of purity has the innocence of sorrow." "darkness lowers the wheels between muscles and bones."......Love it!
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"the collage of purity has the innocence of sorrow." "darkness lowers the wheels between muscles and bones."......Love it!
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Heavens Angel
Unspoken Secrets
Very thought provoking write that I truly enjoyed reading and have read more than once. Every line says so much. Very powerful insights. Thanks, for sharing.
Cari.
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Very thought provoking write that I truly enjoyed reading and have read more than once. Every line says so much. Very powerful insights. Thanks, for sharing.
Cari.
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Buchi
Sunrise
this is good as in many of your works, it is for the next sunrise to provide for us a better beginning if lessons of yesterdays are truely learnt. good write Verma.
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this is good as in many of your works, it is for the next sunrise to provide for us a better beginning if lessons of yesterdays are truely learnt. good write Verma.
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Coyote Poet
Lunar Touch
Brilliant!
You are INDEED a fine poet!
I really enjoyed reading such quality!
Thank you!
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Brilliant!
You are INDEED a fine poet!
I really enjoyed reading such quality!
Thank you!
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Lullaby
LIke A Moonbeam
I like the title, the use of words and the metaphors in this poem. I especially love the last stanza with the autumn leaves, petals of purple bruises and the touch of moon beam...
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I like the title, the use of words and the metaphors in this poem. I especially love the last stanza with the autumn leaves, petals of purple bruises and the touch of moon beam...
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Lullaby
Bouquet
I love the lines "Some unsung lines have been left on our lips... Sadness was stuck /in our reddened eyes. /Layer by layer /I want to wipe it."
A touching poem with words left unsaid and a sad note lingering on...
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I love the lines "Some unsung lines have been left on our lips... Sadness was stuck /in our reddened eyes. /Layer by layer /I want to wipe it."
A touching poem with words left unsaid and a sad note lingering on...
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Kesab Easwaran
One Hundred Moons
strong emotional out flow... touching poem, satish...
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strong emotional out flow... touching poem, satish...
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Lombe
Street Fighting
I like the first line.
i always need to read our writing three times to get a grasp of it.
i like it though, sometimes confusing but nice all the same.
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I like the first line.
i always need to read our writing three times to get a grasp of it.
i like it though, sometimes confusing but nice all the same.
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Lombe
Separated Our Lives
Amazing writing.
i like the 'random tears disturbing the heart beat', i think am familiar with that.
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Amazing writing.
i like the 'random tears disturbing the heart beat', i think am familiar with that.
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lullaby
My Poems Wept
A poem with deep feelings of pain and anguish and such a touching title "my poems wept"...
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A poem with deep feelings of pain and anguish and such a touching title "my poems wept"...
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Lombe
The Air Was Scented
Sounds like the work of a goddess. Nicely written.
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Sounds like the work of a goddess. Nicely written.
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Lombe
Face of Truth
Some times the truth may take a whole night, a life time even. Interesting and active.
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Some times the truth may take a whole night, a life time even. Interesting and active.
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Monday, November 16, 2009
Carol Brown
CLAUSTROPHOBIA
Outstanding writing. Looking forward to reading more of your writings. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Outstanding writing. Looking forward to reading more of your writings. Please continue to write and share your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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John Heck
FLOWERING OF THE THOUGHT
Hi Satish - Wonderful poetry. Such excellent style and form. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Wishing you all the best in your writing endeavors! Have a great weekend. Peace always, John
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Hi Satish - Wonderful poetry. Such excellent style and form. Welcome to PoetrySoup! Wishing you all the best in your writing endeavors! Have a great weekend. Peace always, John
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christopher higgins
GENOCIDE
Very powwerful write. The images in this piece are so powerful that I had to go back and try to get it all. Your writing speaks volumes to the world and its shortcomings. I hope you will continue your journey of writing and exploring the world.
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Very powwerful write. The images in this piece are so powerful that I had to go back and try to get it all. Your writing speaks volumes to the world and its shortcomings. I hope you will continue your journey of writing and exploring the world.
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christopher higgins
WILL YOU MARRY ME ?
How talented are you..you have a great gift of words. Your metaphors are very strong and they make your piece very entertaining to read.
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How talented are you..you have a great gift of words. Your metaphors are very strong and they make your piece very entertaining to read.
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Carol Brown
FROM A DOT
Excellent..............Please keep writing and sharing your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Excellent..............Please keep writing and sharing your poetry with the world. Love, Carol
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Kristin Reynolds
THE BUDDHA WAS GOING TO WEEP
What a powerful piece, well written, and very moving. Peace, Kristin
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What a powerful piece, well written, and very moving. Peace, Kristin
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oxygon
“SPIRAL DESCENT”
This is absolutely breathtakingly beautiful verse, a lyrical outpouring of astonishing depth and breadth! Just the mere act of reading and hearing, and taking in the “mind” of the speaker, is affirmation of the poem’s worth. You are to be applauded for this splendid composition!highest regards,
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yann rolland, Oxygon
“STRANGE ENEMIES”
- yann rolland Says:
It was not worth trying… It seems to me like a bit of nihilism…Sartre would surely appreciate….Very interesting readind…
regards
yann
- oxygon Says:
I can see in this the mind of the physician who deals with the gray matter of the mind, and the spiritual aspect of the mind, and I can see how the two can be like enemies (or enmity—one to the other) in that each are on opposite poles, insofar as we understand them. I hope I have made some sense, as this is a test of language’s ability to communicate between minds.
art
oxygon
“TRAMPLING”
I think that only a “healer” can perceive the wounds as you have described in a language that does not lend itself to a cursory reading.
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oxygon
“COMPARISION”
Ah, to what great, incomprehensible heights can one go into heavenly, cosmic things, and to what heights in meditating on things earthly—the point is well made, to detest the “comparison of heights”. “Like stars we are sailing/in our separateness.” I like the feeling, how alone the solitary star among a myriad of countless stars!
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Chlorophylled Planz
Fixed Flux
I will hide the kernel under the mud by stealth... No sky could hold my head...
(Ve).. wow... immotility fluid... I will vanish on this...
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I will hide the kernel under the mud by stealth... No sky could hold my head...
(Ve).. wow... immotility fluid... I will vanish on this...
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Abby Koning
Invention
Wow. This is so wonderful. I feel as if it has captured some of the very issues I've been struggling in my life lately. Thank you for this.
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Wow. This is so wonderful. I feel as if it has captured some of the very issues I've been struggling in my life lately. Thank you for this.
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Matthew Robison
WAKES THE BLOOD
I like this writing because it embodies what poetry is suppost to sound like. It is good because it speaks of real feelings that come from the soul.
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I like this writing because it embodies what poetry is suppost to sound like. It is good because it speaks of real feelings that come from the soul.
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Goldy Locks
The Wait
gritty description. makes me want to chew my nails, and i don't do that! You have the ability to conjure up strong and provocative imagery, inciting an ardent repsonse from your reader. keep on -~- sjg
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gritty description. makes me want to chew my nails, and i don't do that! You have the ability to conjure up strong and provocative imagery, inciting an ardent repsonse from your reader. keep on -~- sjg
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yann rolland
“INVERTED BODY”
After all, the narration
cannot deliver the meaning of death.
Excellent verse…Somber poem indeed.
yannl
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oxygon
“DEAF CITY”
These lines are a pleasure to read and savor. I like the narrative flow, how easy one complete thought bleeds into another. This has a wealth of images that are truly remarkable, as in:” . . . searching/our destines amidst the ruins/and life hangs like an empty frame. Truly transcendent language, Satish. My congratulations!
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Goldy Locks
"Hieronomo!*"
Perhaps you'd be delighted to know - i took your books to the beach and to the bay today. Read a few to strangers. They loved. be well xx sjg
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Perhaps you'd be delighted to know - i took your books to the beach and to the bay today. Read a few to strangers. They loved. be well xx sjg
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derrick burton
"BLISS OF ANOTHER SELF "
wow,that was so good I am making it a favorite poem.Where did get that from it flowed right thrue you like water.
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wow,that was so good I am making it a favorite poem.Where did get that from it flowed right thrue you like water.
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yann rolland
“WAILING WINDOWS”
I like the atmosphere of your poem even with the dark ideas it conveys.yann
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yann rolland
“LIPS WILL MEASURE”
As always Satish, powerful and meaningful versesThe dialogues with stones
do not bring comparison.
Movement of fear begging
for unbuckling the dark
A perfect solution
was never found
thank you for the poem.
yann
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“A KISS MELTS”
[…] wilderside wrote an interesting post today onHere’s a quick excerptTurning me blue blithe thoughts had come like snakes wriggling, biting, leaving tooth marks. I remained holding a dew drop on the blade of grass. Essence was untouched. Night will change its dialect after a casual death. I contrive no more assemblage. No condolence for the razed home. The flames will leap again from words to describe the inspiration, as the sprouts break the earth. When the logic ends a kiss melts on the lips of fire. The rainbow pierces the clouds At the interface of sky. SATISH VERMA […]
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“ROSE UPON ROSE”
[…] wilderside wrote an interesting post today onHere’s a quick excerptLet me put back the rhythm to the song of broken limbs. To arrest the speed of sun-set, for a meaningful dialogue with the verse of moon. The poison of floodlit city grazes my house. The innocence of the dark suffers. The white stillness of empty hands lifts a failure my heart lives with a death Intimately. Where the birds have gone? I chase the wings. The otherness of love, the vulnerability of darkness stays with me. The thirst of ocean is very large. Mechanical imitation of aloneness for a ripe death it is nostalgia of past history. Deep in thoughts I run for my green childhood. A strange metastasis from remote guilts. A rose upon rose piled up to form a signature mode. SATISH VERMA […]
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oxygon
“HOLDING THE POEMS”
Another great read, Satish. You have an excellent command for vivid, expressive language that seethes with stunning metaphors.
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Ida Werrett
“PATH OF DESTINY”
Yes Satish, Powerful indeed and bold like a van Gogh. ( hope I spelled that right)
Ida
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Raynette Eitel
Kahe Ri Nalini Tu Kumlahni...
I really like this, Satish... wish you would write me and explain the title. Your images are superb.
I really like this, Satish... wish you would write me and explain the title. Your images are superb.
Aryaindia
'...Roots That Clutch...'
The depth of your poem is mesmerising and haunting in its eloquence and power of reach. I enjoy this sort of poetry that makes one think and think endlessly. God bless and keep you. Arya
The depth of your poem is mesmerising and haunting in its eloquence and power of reach. I enjoy this sort of poetry that makes one think and think endlessly. God bless and keep you. Arya
yann rolland
“NON REAL”
Hi Satish, every turn something happens, that’s how sound your poetry….It is very enjoyable to read and it creates powerful images for the reader…thanks again
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oxygon
“NON REAL”
“The moon will grab a cloud,creating a music of eternity.
the non-real will become a solid absolute.”
This is transcendent language belonging to the voice of a poet! It is a fitting conclusion to a narrative of such profound beauty, filled with emotions only the poet alone can fully appreciate. This is a song of visions of darkness and light, and I am held in the grasp . . .
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Stacey Haislop
Anniversary of Flirtation
Satish, I am going through a very trying time in my life right now and this poem is more than a glanced at reading. This poem draped itself over my heart with its pain and honesty and reality. A pitless gloom. Stacey
Satish, I am going through a very trying time in my life right now and this poem is more than a glanced at reading. This poem draped itself over my heart with its pain and honesty and reality. A pitless gloom. Stacey
Stacey Haislop
Mud Path
I love this poem. Thank you for that mud path I am in such need of right now. The introspection and simplicity and discovery in your work is guiding me so much at this time. Thanks you for these poems... Stacey
I love this poem. Thank you for that mud path I am in such need of right now. The introspection and simplicity and discovery in your work is guiding me so much at this time. Thanks you for these poems... Stacey
Stacey Haislop
Immovable
You can't know the tears this one brings me. Salty tears helping me to hopefully heal. My sorrow burns also like a candle... Stacey
You can't know the tears this one brings me. Salty tears helping me to hopefully heal. My sorrow burns also like a candle... Stacey
Araennie
Dirty Mirrors
i dont know exactly what you were trying to mean but the beauty of poetry has made me find a meaning in your poem. i like the words, "and when battle lines were drawn, the guns were not ready" they make me sense some luck of preparedness when doing something. thank you.
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i dont know exactly what you were trying to mean but the beauty of poetry has made me find a meaning in your poem. i like the words, "and when battle lines were drawn, the guns were not ready" they make me sense some luck of preparedness when doing something. thank you.
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Oxygon
“HOLDING THE POEMS”
Another great read, Satish. You have an excellent command for vivid, expressive language that seethes with stunning metaphors.
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Oxygon
“A HOME IN MY HOME”
“A white moon starts bleeding/under the weight of wingless stars”, a remarkable line, and expressions like this makes this a splendid poem. I enjoyed reading and meditating on the thoughts and images—
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Nitish shubhankar
“THE ANODYNE”
ur poem only strengthens my opinion for beauty in absurdity!………….its ur experience which comes handy in th portrayal of events in such a hair rasing way……nd one more thing the descending vultures only a villages of India can understand……………i hav a samll complain to you sir,u dont seem 2 replin 2 th comments section
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clematis
“FOR A CAUSE”
the closing lines are great!your poem is for a cause..very powerful!
oxygon
“FOR A CAUSE”
A very dark vision of the world’s dissolution, its frightening, and I hope humanity can be frightened into its senses! You keep spreading your message through the voice of poetry, Satish; perhaps someone who can make a difference will hear.Thanks for sharing this fine poem—
Nitish shubhankar
“FOR A CAUSE”
Sir,
the last para was simply touching………otherwise chokin the drains attacks population eruption followed by riot……claps
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yann rolland
“NIHILITY”
The first truth remains the last truth.it would mean that our child’s truth become our final truth….I can agree with that, the more we learn, the less we know….However there are things that we discover….Finally they don’t matter more….
I love your poem.
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oxygon
“DECAYED CENTURY”
Your poems are a poignant voice on the perils and suffering we face in today’s madness. I applaud you for having the courage and wherewithal to keep these grave matters before us in aroused consciousness.Thanks,
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clematis
“PSYCHOLOGICAL DYING”
wow! this is powerful & pulls at the heart & soul!great work satish!
love every line! & how true!
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oxygon
“SUSPENDED EXECUTION”
This is a powerful expression of emotion in the words of a poem, and you have succeeded in conveying a sense of that to the reader. Thanks for the wonderful contribution, and it’s a contribution that we need in order to not forget the power and pain that memory can bring.
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Nitish shubhankar
“SUSPENDED EXECUTION”
while deliverin a baby wht pain my mother underwent i cant evn think of but those pangs of nostalgia sometimes pricks so hard tht i shiver nd just close my eyes………….this is wht ur memories can do…..hope u r nt felin th same..
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Nitish shubhankar
“ABSURDITY”
hey u know 1 thin satish………..thr r few ppl in th world who dont get th kind of recognition they deserve…………i feel sorry 2 say tht u r th 1!……….once thomas edison said”i have found 10000 ways of not doin a thin” when somebody said drop ur experimentation plan 4 th bulb………..next day he discovered th idea!………..th day i relogged on this site there was a sence of freshness…..now i can say why…….keep up th g8 work man!
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Pramod Khilery
Outsider
Escapism garbed in heart tuching verses. Dejection robbed in beauty of poem.
create images, form sounds and birthes on canvas an emotion ridden painting conveying what it was meant for. Loved it.
Escapism garbed in heart tuching verses. Dejection robbed in beauty of poem.
create images, form sounds and birthes on canvas an emotion ridden painting conveying what it was meant for. Loved it.
Oxygon
Claim For Fame
Powerful imagery, an eerily haunting lyric-really enjoyed!
Powerful imagery, an eerily haunting lyric-really enjoyed!
Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad
Arrival
A very sensitive composition. The "Arrival" that you call, in fact, is a funeral procession for mankind. If the present trend is not checked, the earth will turn into a giant Mall with no sellers, no buyers and no products! Best regards
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A very sensitive composition. The "Arrival" that you call, in fact, is a funeral procession for mankind. If the present trend is not checked, the earth will turn into a giant Mall with no sellers, no buyers and no products! Best regards
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Renu Rakheja
Byzantium-2
Aha... awesome ending!! Loved the poem
Aha... awesome ending!! Loved the poem
Rassool Jibraeel Snyman, South Africa
... must unbelieve
Satish.. a nice read.. tied to the realities and vagaries of life and the shiftiness of the mancreature.
In many ways we must "unbelieve" the religions that are twisted at the behest of ambitious and manipulative men in order to reach the universal truths and God. I like the usage of the term "unbelieve" as we all need to "unlearn" our prejudices, class attitudes, religious hatreds and all the other flawed human constructs and find God in each other and in the ways of children.
Religions and God may not necessarily be the same thing!
"trading in the flesh of carved saints" so true so true. nice read.. enjoyed it immensely, Warmest regards
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Satish.. a nice read.. tied to the realities and vagaries of life and the shiftiness of the mancreature.
In many ways we must "unbelieve" the religions that are twisted at the behest of ambitious and manipulative men in order to reach the universal truths and God. I like the usage of the term "unbelieve" as we all need to "unlearn" our prejudices, class attitudes, religious hatreds and all the other flawed human constructs and find God in each other and in the ways of children.
Religions and God may not necessarily be the same thing!
"trading in the flesh of carved saints" so true so true. nice read.. enjoyed it immensely, Warmest regards
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Sunil Uniyal, New Delhi
...must unbelieve
Sir, I'm delighted to see and read your poems in Muse India. Your poems are quite original, refreshing and thought-provoking. My congratulations and regards.
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Sir, I'm delighted to see and read your poems in Muse India. Your poems are quite original, refreshing and thought-provoking. My congratulations and regards.
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Rassool Jibraeel Snyman, South Africa
Sharks
Satish..... good work! evocative imagery raised. Warmest regards
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Satish..... good work! evocative imagery raised. Warmest regards
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Priyal
Comparison
d originality n abstractness of ur work makes a mark, yet not a single word is wasted
d originality n abstractness of ur work makes a mark, yet not a single word is wasted
Priyal
Dancing Eyes
"The sacred whore who liberates herself from the flesh." deep...with all its meaning
"The sacred whore who liberates herself from the flesh." deep...with all its meaning
Apoorv
Black Hole
i never imagined someone can potray emotions using somethings as scientific and "not-related" to literature as a black-hole.... and actually be good at it... just makes me correct myself tht maybe thrs nothing tht's not related to literature.
i never imagined someone can potray emotions using somethings as scientific and "not-related" to literature as a black-hole.... and actually be good at it... just makes me correct myself tht maybe thrs nothing tht's not related to literature.
Jon London
Golden Throne What an amazing creation... perfect in fact...
Thanks for sharing. All the very best.
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Thanks for sharing. All the very best.
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Afua, United Kingdom
Benediction
The darkness and unfairness of death is really shown here well done.
The darkness and unfairness of death is really shown here well done.
Renu Rakheja
The Socratic Existence
Reminds me a bit of Keats with hemlock and cup being full...
As always .... your closing line is full of punch
Reminds me a bit of Keats with hemlock and cup being full...
As always .... your closing line is full of punch
Ezna Stephna
………….. Afraid of whom?
good poem......keep writing.....
afraid of whom as there all are...
human as you and me
so why afraid of whom.....
wonderful expression of life truth......
thanks for sharing 10++
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good poem......keep writing.....
afraid of whom as there all are...
human as you and me
so why afraid of whom.....
wonderful expression of life truth......
thanks for sharing 10++
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Sunday, November 15, 2009
Dr. Michael Sharkey
Satish Verma's poems are so unusual to me that I am initially thrown out of all expectation, and must return to them again to see how they work this effect!
Dr. Michael Sharkey
Associate Professor
School of Arts
Faculty of Arts & Sciences
University of New England
Armidale NSW 2351 Australia
Dr. Michael Sharkey
Associate Professor
School of Arts
Faculty of Arts & Sciences
University of New England
Armidale NSW 2351 Australia
DeWaal
“WHERE HE WAS”
#
Greetings Satish
I have read both your poems and would like to make some comments on this one.
“Meditation was futile.”
This I find an immensely strong beginning to the poem. My reading here is that the speaker in the poem is adept at meditation and is used to the beneficial influence it has on the mind. But even this - meditation - has failed. We read on to discover why meditation was futile.
“He turned his back
from the green prayers”
Syntax: he had been occupied with the green prayers, then he turned his back FROM them. The reader here wonders whether the more conventional “he turned his back ON them” would be more suitable? Or was the poet aiming at another meaning?
The poem proceeds in a stately procession of denials and vicissitudes. The speaker is a heroic figure among landmines and falling stones and in the end we encounter these beautiful lines:
where he was
others were absent
The poem has a dark mood that narrates of suffering and failure, but also of a heroic facing of “the slings and arrows” of misfortune.
I must admit that one line evades me completely. I cannot make sense of “Syntax was rising”.
It is kind of you to share your poetry with us. Thank you.
Regards
De Waal
# satishverma Says:
November 29th, 2007 at 1:23 am e
Dear DeWaal,
I am sorry for the delay in responding as I could read your comments after 3 days due to my various occupational duties. I am intensely impressed by your critical appraisal of my poem. I always appreciate the probe. I must explain your points.
He turned his back.
from the green prayers.
1. Here ‘from’ indicates a difference, indicating separation. ‘On’ shows the contact & support.
2. Syntax was rising – The pain, the black mood starts pouring out the verse, the muse from the extrasensitivity of the poet.
Always
Satish Verma
# DeWaal Says:
December 2nd, 2007 at 8:08 am e
Greetings Satish
My turn to apologise for being tardy in response. I’m happy that you found my critique somewhat useful.
Thank you for the above explanations. I know you realise that your poetry emanates from a different cultural background than the American or European, or for that matter, my own, the South African. Due to these differences, readers from these latter backgrounds may find your poetry difficult to understand.
For instance, I do not understand the significance of “green prayers”.
I have begun to place annotations at the bottom of some of my poems. I find that making possibly abstruse information more readily available to readers, helps them to enjoy the poetry more.
Kind regards
De Waal
# satishverma Says:
December 4th, 2007 at 8:55 am e
Dear De Waal,
Again thanks for the comments. In India majority of them, Hindus worship the green trees. Pray under them, around them, for wishrags, for blessing of a son, for long happy married life, for the safety of the husband etc. Light the earthen lamp to please the deity living in the green plant. Hence the green prayers.
Always
SATISH VERMA
# DeWaal Says:
December 5th, 2007 at 3:45 am e
Hello Satish
Thank you for this explanation.
Here in South Africa I do not worship trees, but I’m very fond of them! My house is surrounded by trees and I have about 120 bonsai trees in the garden. Trees are to me very meaningful. There is possibly not all that much difference between the veneration your people have for trees and the relationship I have with them.
Regards
De Waal
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#
Greetings Satish
I have read both your poems and would like to make some comments on this one.
“Meditation was futile.”
This I find an immensely strong beginning to the poem. My reading here is that the speaker in the poem is adept at meditation and is used to the beneficial influence it has on the mind. But even this - meditation - has failed. We read on to discover why meditation was futile.
“He turned his back
from the green prayers”
Syntax: he had been occupied with the green prayers, then he turned his back FROM them. The reader here wonders whether the more conventional “he turned his back ON them” would be more suitable? Or was the poet aiming at another meaning?
The poem proceeds in a stately procession of denials and vicissitudes. The speaker is a heroic figure among landmines and falling stones and in the end we encounter these beautiful lines:
where he was
others were absent
The poem has a dark mood that narrates of suffering and failure, but also of a heroic facing of “the slings and arrows” of misfortune.
I must admit that one line evades me completely. I cannot make sense of “Syntax was rising”.
It is kind of you to share your poetry with us. Thank you.
Regards
De Waal
# satishverma Says:
November 29th, 2007 at 1:23 am e
Dear DeWaal,
I am sorry for the delay in responding as I could read your comments after 3 days due to my various occupational duties. I am intensely impressed by your critical appraisal of my poem. I always appreciate the probe. I must explain your points.
He turned his back.
from the green prayers.
1. Here ‘from’ indicates a difference, indicating separation. ‘On’ shows the contact & support.
2. Syntax was rising – The pain, the black mood starts pouring out the verse, the muse from the extrasensitivity of the poet.
Always
Satish Verma
# DeWaal Says:
December 2nd, 2007 at 8:08 am e
Greetings Satish
My turn to apologise for being tardy in response. I’m happy that you found my critique somewhat useful.
Thank you for the above explanations. I know you realise that your poetry emanates from a different cultural background than the American or European, or for that matter, my own, the South African. Due to these differences, readers from these latter backgrounds may find your poetry difficult to understand.
For instance, I do not understand the significance of “green prayers”.
I have begun to place annotations at the bottom of some of my poems. I find that making possibly abstruse information more readily available to readers, helps them to enjoy the poetry more.
Kind regards
De Waal
# satishverma Says:
December 4th, 2007 at 8:55 am e
Dear De Waal,
Again thanks for the comments. In India majority of them, Hindus worship the green trees. Pray under them, around them, for wishrags, for blessing of a son, for long happy married life, for the safety of the husband etc. Light the earthen lamp to please the deity living in the green plant. Hence the green prayers.
Always
SATISH VERMA
# DeWaal Says:
December 5th, 2007 at 3:45 am e
Hello Satish
Thank you for this explanation.
Here in South Africa I do not worship trees, but I’m very fond of them! My house is surrounded by trees and I have about 120 bonsai trees in the garden. Trees are to me very meaningful. There is possibly not all that much difference between the veneration your people have for trees and the relationship I have with them.
Regards
De Waal
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yayo
“…… MUST UNBELIEVE”
hi Satish Verma
I enjoyed your poem it is really great
we have chosen it as example of modern poetry we the members of the ENGLISH SOCIETY in faculty of ARTS KHARTOUM UNIVERSITY SUDAN
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hi Satish Verma
I enjoyed your poem it is really great
we have chosen it as example of modern poetry we the members of the ENGLISH SOCIETY in faculty of ARTS KHARTOUM UNIVERSITY SUDAN
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oxygon
“THE SPIRIT”
I loved this odyssey of the temporal life of difficulties as the body and spirit moves ever closer to nirvana!
Art
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I loved this odyssey of the temporal life of difficulties as the body and spirit moves ever closer to nirvana!
Art
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oxygon
“TRACKS”
Very engaging in the mind. I like the sense of dark finality in the last line—time stopping in it tracks! Great imagery and use of metaphor!
Art
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Very engaging in the mind. I like the sense of dark finality in the last line—time stopping in it tracks! Great imagery and use of metaphor!
Art
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oxygon
SMASH THE BOOK
Your anguish is chilling to my own soul. I can’t begin to imagine the depth of your feelings in order to even pretend to share in them. You have expressed this despair so deeply and profoundly well. I hope your poetry will help to heal the wounds of the heart, and that you rose to a new and hopeful sunrise after enduring the night in trembling.
My very best wishes,
Art
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Your anguish is chilling to my own soul. I can’t begin to imagine the depth of your feelings in order to even pretend to share in them. You have expressed this despair so deeply and profoundly well. I hope your poetry will help to heal the wounds of the heart, and that you rose to a new and hopeful sunrise after enduring the night in trembling.
My very best wishes,
Art
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yann rolland
SATURN WILL SHORTLY RISE
Very beautiful, I feel sadness and some verses are wonderful.
In the human drama
no dialogue ends.
Was it a spiritual failure of a man
to become an animal effortlessly ?
and how difficult it was
to change the street’s crowd ?
tahnks to you
yann
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Very beautiful, I feel sadness and some verses are wonderful.
In the human drama
no dialogue ends.
Was it a spiritual failure of a man
to become an animal effortlessly ?
and how difficult it was
to change the street’s crowd ?
tahnks to you
yann
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the howling
HOWLING
[…] HOWLINGThe solace of harvesting the dreams was thin. A terrible shadow of a futile creation. Hopes always lied hollowed by anesthesia of truth. A surrogate womb trims the love. My garden was always green. Howling was generating the heat.
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[…] HOWLINGThe solace of harvesting the dreams was thin. A terrible shadow of a futile creation. Hopes always lied hollowed by anesthesia of truth. A surrogate womb trims the love. My garden was always green. Howling was generating the heat.
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Oxygon
Burning Train
This is a poem of enormous power, told with a passion and sensitivity that reflects fo effectively the horror of the tragedy-difficult indeed, and as clematis points out-so bravely and well done!
Best wishes, and I thank you for writing and posting along with the heavy responsibility of administering a hospital!
This is a poem of enormous power, told with a passion and sensitivity that reflects fo effectively the horror of the tragedy-difficult indeed, and as clematis points out-so bravely and well done!
Best wishes, and I thank you for writing and posting along with the heavy responsibility of administering a hospital!
Clematis
Burning Train
difficult poem to write indeed!
you've done it very bravely!
very effective.
difficult poem to write indeed!
you've done it very bravely!
very effective.
kandis salasar
Dirty Mirrors
'Humanity stinks when infected hands
handle the peace. I splash the truth
on your face,
to see the sun clearly.'
true....
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'Humanity stinks when infected hands
handle the peace. I splash the truth
on your face,
to see the sun clearly.'
true....
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Tiffanie Lau
INFERNO
//Toothache hurts. Caries are very deep.
Pray that it stops. I cannot chew the words
great write there! loved this ending of yours =)
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//Toothache hurts. Caries are very deep.
Pray that it stops. I cannot chew the words
great write there! loved this ending of yours =)
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Joseph Daly
DESPERADO
Satish, this is excellent. The narrative is beautifully and imaginately put together.
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Satish, this is excellent. The narrative is beautifully and imaginately put together.
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Stacey Haislop
Talking Tree
Satish, let me just say this poem went through me physically like an electric shock in slow motion. I still feel as if I were punched in the stomach and my eyes are still blurry with tears. You have written much more than poetry here. This is amazing... Stacey
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Satish, let me just say this poem went through me physically like an electric shock in slow motion. I still feel as if I were punched in the stomach and my eyes are still blurry with tears. You have written much more than poetry here. This is amazing... Stacey
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Seema Chowdhury
WELCOME SIR!
a good poem. you have put together nicly your scattered thoughts in these beautiful lines.
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a good poem. you have put together nicly your scattered thoughts in these beautiful lines.
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Oxygon
The Kiss ...............
A timeless theme for all generations, my friend. You've posed the question we all ask, but can't really know until that awesome moment is upon us. I think we all want to kiss and be embraced with bravery and dignity suffering humanity. Great work!
A timeless theme for all generations, my friend. You've posed the question we all ask, but can't really know until that awesome moment is upon us. I think we all want to kiss and be embraced with bravery and dignity suffering humanity. Great work!
Oxygon
Parthenogenesis
This is very interesting use of the process of proceration that is not peculiar to humans. I sense some strong sense of detachment from another-"My god is lying dead" and other allusions such as the absence of a placenta between two entities. I'll have to read this more.
Thanks for shring,
This is very interesting use of the process of proceration that is not peculiar to humans. I sense some strong sense of detachment from another-"My god is lying dead" and other allusions such as the absence of a placenta between two entities. I'll have to read this more.
Thanks for shring,
Oxygon
Valley of Tears
A powerful existential motif, with a grand, historical sweep! Could really feel the heartbeat of this poem-well done!
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A powerful existential motif, with a grand, historical sweep! Could really feel the heartbeat of this poem-well done!
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Yann Rolland
Another Journey
Great work, perhaps one of your best to my point of view...
Time avenges, burns the grass the lips, the retina, the black walls and white numbers powerful verses
Thank you--- yann
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Great work, perhaps one of your best to my point of view...
Time avenges, burns the grass the lips, the retina, the black walls and white numbers powerful verses
Thank you--- yann
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Deepti Agarwal
TRANSMIGRATION
absolutely amazing picture you portrayed here... felt very good myself..
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absolutely amazing picture you portrayed here... felt very good myself..
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Kristin Reynolds
ANNIVERSARY
That was a very deep read, full of truth. The first 2 stanzas I understand very well - machine had failed me...3rd eye of the sun...key's chasing unbroken latches...yup...gotcha - awesome. Blessings, Kristin
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That was a very deep read, full of truth. The first 2 stanzas I understand very well - machine had failed me...3rd eye of the sun...key's chasing unbroken latches...yup...gotcha - awesome. Blessings, Kristin
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Kristin Reynolds
BLACK WALLS
I love your truth filled poetry. From the imagry to the wording, paints a very dark, and very real and very sad picture for the one on those stairs. Blessings to you, Kristin
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I love your truth filled poetry. From the imagry to the wording, paints a very dark, and very real and very sad picture for the one on those stairs. Blessings to you, Kristin
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Preeti Datar
The Finale
Your typical style is very appealing…
each line is crafted with care..
Keep Writing!
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Your typical style is very appealing…
each line is crafted with care..
Keep Writing!
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Pramod Khilery
Outsider
Escapism garbed in heart tuching verses.
Dejection robbed in beauty of poem.
create images, form sounds and birthes on canvas an emotion ridden painting conveying what it was meant for. Loved it.
regards
pramod
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Escapism garbed in heart tuching verses.
Dejection robbed in beauty of poem.
create images, form sounds and birthes on canvas an emotion ridden painting conveying what it was meant for. Loved it.
regards
pramod
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christopher higgins
GENOCIDE
are so powerful that I had to go back and try to get it all. Your writing speaks volumes to the world and its shortcomings. I hope you will continue your journey of writing and exploring the world.
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are so powerful that I had to go back and try to get it all. Your writing speaks volumes to the world and its shortcomings. I hope you will continue your journey of writing and exploring the world.
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christopher higgins
WILL YOU MARRY ME ?
How talented are you..you have a great gift of words. Your metaphors are very strong and they make your piece very entertaining to read.
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How talented are you..you have a great gift of words. Your metaphors are very strong and they make your piece very entertaining to read.
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Kristin Reynolds
THE BUDDHA WAS GOING TO WEEP
What a powerful piece, well written, and very moving. Peace, Kristin
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What a powerful piece, well written, and very moving. Peace, Kristin
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Saturday, November 14, 2009
Anjali Sinha
'Man becomes a bee assaulting a rosebud' The theory of Karma--- where God and beast meet in dark.
Rinzu Susan Rajan
I want to walk in mist and snow over the bridge, on the bals clouds. BEAUTIFUL WISH...
Lee Crowell
I like poems that are absract enough that the reader can apply some of their own meaning to the lines. Very nice. You might like reading one of mine titled 'the greatest'
k k iloduba jnr
u creat emotions with words. it s a pity that this work is not drawing attention.i ve noted u.cheers. kk iloduba jnr
k k iloduba jnr
u write deep impressions. ur words are full of images.eyes like beanna` s are noticing you too.how do u draw inspirations? i ve written so much about roses,yet it never occured to me that they could be bloodied and wounded.i love the blood of your pen. cheers! kk
k k iloduba jnr
`the stars are blinking', ` the moon does not cry', `u unravel the last of roses'........satish, these lines are unforgetable.they ve electricity. why does not the soupers read stuffs like this and comment?kk
Denis Joe
The atmosphere of this is great. I like how it reads as a narrative of a personal relationship and of a relationship to events, with the emphasis on a lack of control. Yet the poem shows great restraint. There is no hyperbole and the creation of images such as that of the tossed coin are brilliant and gives hyper layered meaning to the poem as a whole.
k k iloduba jnr
certain as d blood of ur pen....death always comes.nobody knows the craft of imageries like u do. i feel u on this one just like d others.ciao.kk iloduba jnr
Allen Steble
nice write Satish, if its one thing we learn from history and disaster is we do listen, we do learn, but on a general level, we want to forget all the trajedies of this life and the past echo's wonderfully penned:)
Andrew Parking
Satish Verma's collection is again handsomely produced by ARAWLII publications and comprises two sections of peoms as indicated by the two parts of the title. Satish Verma is a mature poet, commanding the sudden surprise of the image in all its rightness and presence: "The traffic of private tears/will begin to move" or "Deep in my throat/a cuckoo sings for a queen of darkness,/ to invite the mists and clouds." He is a master of the complex feeling made manifest, suddenly there, always luring the reader into complicity with his moods and thoughts. This is the poetry of lived life. There is no fine style for the sake of fine style. His poems "Rear Mirror", "Listen", and "Slanting Truth", just to take three examples from a rich book, are poems one would not want to be without.
Goldy Locks
an exuberant burst of wondrous creativity~~! ! ! Satish, anything from your pen is worth reading and ABSORBING. best care xx sjg
Reshma Ramesh
brilliant............!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
oxygon
To pluck the flowers from the garden, or to pluck them from the vase—the garden is plucked by human hands, from the vase the hand of death—a seeming contradiction, but justly so.
John Rhinem
Oh, the sorrows of bitterness' and war--"Hello Precious Satish Verma! Such a profoundly soulful and heart-felt write here; filled with hopes and longings for peace and betterments--Compassions breaths, amid the saddened truths--penned within expressions so very very well! Love & Warmth To You Dear, John! Bye:
Goldy Locks
Alrite, maybe i didn't think this deserved a ten, Satish? But i was just so thrilled to see you posting... Your books, are an inspiration man. This piece, however, so succinct, to the point, it roughs me. It's incomplete. ~~~sjgxx
yann rolland
very touching and biblical….thanks for the poem…
yann
yann
yann rolland
I find your poem very dark….But beautiful.
best wishes
yann
best wishes
yann
yann rolland
Thank you for the questionning and powerful verses….Some times if there is not considering of hope, there is either not of despair cause these two are the two sides of a same sensation….
regards
yann
regards
yann
oxygon
The shadows of sunrise grow shorter with each tick of the clock, the shadows of evening grow longer until the shadows are absorbed in the darkness. It is as if the the earth and the sun tells the story of life with each revolving moment. I really like the though that when alone, you were not alone, for truth walked beside you. A magnificent poem, Satish—Thank you,
Erastus Marugu
Humans forget that even, that which is not yet born, is life, and with selfish motives we engage in this barbaric act, foeticide. Excellently expressed. God bless
Cherry poppins
i like this
its sound pretty
i wasn't sure first with the name of it
then i read and it and sound quite mystical
keep up the good work.
its sound pretty
i wasn't sure first with the name of it
then i read and it and sound quite mystical
keep up the good work.
Keisha Samlal
wow, that was...wow.
its the way you've said without actually saying it.
its the way you've said without actually saying it.
Chitra Lakhera
Ah this stirred my mind very well. Great poem and all the thoughts that wondered in my brain, you just can't believe. Gave me a great time. Love, Chitra
George Anos
Inspiring theme you explored with such depth here Satish! Brgds. George
yann rolland
Thank you for the questionning and powerful verses….Some times if there is not considering of hope, there is either not of despair cause these two are the two sides of a same sensation….
regards
yann
regards
yann
oxygon
The shadows of sunrise grow shorter with each tick of the clock, the shadows of evening grow longer until the shadows are absorbed in the darkness. It is as if the the earth and the sun tells the story of life with each revolving moment. I really like the though that when alone, you were not alone, for truth walked beside you. A magnificent poem, Satish—Thank you
Michael Jordan
Satish - Very deep poem - The ending was very unique in every way - Great poem & God Bless
Jamie Puhi
you touchy upon a chancy topic but you some how manage to steer thoughtful words into a clear message. keep the writing up, your work interests meh. :D
oxygon
This seems to speak of an enormous injustice, men who sit in high places while the powerless ones of this world are cast about like fodder, and the graves of the downtrodden speak in a mute voice that recalls no remembrance of any God. This touches me deeply.
oxygon
I follow you down the dark and sometimes lit pathways of imagination, and I am always at the core of a dream I cannot fathom, but I am delighted to see, and hear, and touch and taste, and smell the flowers that grow in a garden I cannot enter, except from a vantage point outside the gate.
Magnificent writing—
Magnificent writing—
Thad Wilk
A capturing read Satish ! Brilliantly expressed - I could not plug it , a hole in memory ; eloquent !
Best wishes!
Friend Thad
Best wishes!
Friend Thad
yann rolland
Hello Satish this is so beautiful, you really inhabit poetry…I love all the images of the poem.
yann
yann
yann rolland
He cared too much of things and people around him,
I really love these verses, I can feel the dangerous temptation of it…. regards
yann
I really love these verses, I can feel the dangerous temptation of it…. regards
yann
RAY LUCERO
Satish,
Tremendous metaphor in this passionate write.
Peace,
Ray
Tremendous metaphor in this passionate write.
Peace,
Ray
yann rolland
Hello Satish, I like plenty of ideas you rise in your poem, As always images are beautiful :
Your face has become an empty vase.
Text was smaller than life.
The stones, flowers and wings separated our lives.
rich poetry indeed…Thank you for the poem.
yann
Your face has become an empty vase.
Text was smaller than life.
The stones, flowers and wings separated our lives.
rich poetry indeed…Thank you for the poem.
yann
oxygon
I will not seek to know the mind of the poet, but will extol the beauty of the song!
oxygon
“The moth eaten rags cover the polarities of words.” amazing! Have you read the American poet, Wallace Stevens, who wrote the famous poem “The Emperor of Ice Cream”? Your imaginative language conjures up thoughts of his dictum—poetry is the power of the imagination to see things not as they are, but as you will them to be—from “The Man with the Blue Guitar”.
I enjoy your daily submissions—
I enjoy your daily submissions—
oxygon
The images are like a veil that both shields and then opens to reveal what is meant—an adventure of the word caught up in the winds of imagination, and encrypting what the imagination perceives! This reminds me of the great poet, Wallace Stevens.
Friday, November 13, 2009
Marty Owens , Carolyn Devonshire
I enjoyed reading this..very nice...Marty
Great poem filled with unique and clever images. I especially like the way you describe the mushrooms popping up and wearing "white caps to see the game." Also, there is much truth in the way books can open "a museum" to the reader. Well done, Satish! Love, Carolyn
Great poem filled with unique and clever images. I especially like the way you describe the mushrooms popping up and wearing "white caps to see the game." Also, there is much truth in the way books can open "a museum" to the reader. Well done, Satish! Love, Carolyn
Catrina Heart
Vultures and tigers have eaten the flesh
Juicy and fresh as blood still dripping out
Under the sizzling rays of afternoon sun
Sanitizing
Bacterium and viruses germinate
As creature of darkness to immunocompetence
Wolves play their harps to the extinct ethic minority
Slaughtering sliver of innocence and feelings
Your piece have inspired me to write this poem..............CT
Juicy and fresh as blood still dripping out
Under the sizzling rays of afternoon sun
Sanitizing
Bacterium and viruses germinate
As creature of darkness to immunocompetence
Wolves play their harps to the extinct ethic minority
Slaughtering sliver of innocence and feelings
Your piece have inspired me to write this poem..............CT
srishti shrivastava
abstract feelings sculptured..liked it
Carol Brown, Sara Kendrick
Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Satish. Wishing you a great week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
Interesting thoughts put to pen. Keep writing. Sara
Priyanka Bhowmick
wonderful lines Sir...and the script has been excellently penned down.
christopher higgins
Very powwerful write. The images in this piece are so powerful that I had to go back and try to get it all. Your writing speaks volumes to the world and its shortcomings. I hope you will continue your journey of writing and exploring the world.
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
NOW I"M CRYING. Thanks for sharing. With Love, Dane
Congratulations, Satish, on having your controversial poem featured this week. It was interesting and somewhat painful to read. The third gender or hermaphrodite, about which you write. IS NOT MYTH. My Ingrid is a true hermaphrodite. Not quite male and not quite female. XXY chromosomes, and a genius. Having lived a life of painful harassments and society forsaken equalities, life has become somewhat settled in Ingrid's later, years. But scars, stares, and gossip remain. Lovingly, Dane
Congratulations, Satish, on having your controversial poem featured this week. It was interesting and somewhat painful to read. The third gender or hermaphrodite, about which you write. IS NOT MYTH. My Ingrid is a true hermaphrodite. Not quite male and not quite female. XXY chromosomes, and a genius. Having lived a life of painful harassments and society forsaken equalities, life has become somewhat settled in Ingrid's later, years. But scars, stares, and gossip remain. Lovingly, Dane
Carol Brown
I am so happy that your excellent poetry was included in my day of enjoyable reading. May you have a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
Stacey Haislop
I am taken aback...you have created a beautiful world in this poem...wakeup the moglittering...I will try that tonight...this is magic!
James Marshall Goff
Satish, this poem pulls me in and treats me with many thoughtful images to ponder.
L'nass Shango
You have the greatest sensibility, and sweetly exploit the delicacies of love, one of my favorite.
James Marshall Goff
feelin' resentment, outrage, violence, but somehow, I can't quite pin it down, your wonderful opening line wonderfully spins my brain! great poem, again! Jim
Ruben Ortellao
Your poems are very abstract, complex, intriguing. You play with the readers leaving them stupefied, confused, amazed, impressed. I like it! I want more. Continue sharing. Ruben.
Carol Brown
Excellent Sunday morning poetry reading Satish. Sometimes I have to read more then once to get my brain cells rotating.Thank you for sharing your poetry. Love, Carol
Carol Brown
I have enjoyed reading your splendid poetry today Satish.Thank you for sharing it here at PoetrySoup, where you have become an asset to the site and to us other poets as well. Love, Carol
Adeleke Adeite
This is a wonderful, awesome… poem,.; I love your style. You are such a great poet. Please keep writing and congrats on your poem being featured this week. Hope to read more of your wonderful poems. You are great friend! Adeleke
James Marshall Goff
Hi Satish....your fine poem can translate to many cultures with truth....I can see this to represent the plight of the Northern Plains "Sioux Nation" Native Americans who were rounded-up after the (so-called by the pale-faces) 'Sioux Uprising' and hung in Mankato towards the end of the 19th. Century....Jim
James Marshall Goff
there is a place on the shores of Lake Superior in Minnesota called 'Split-Rock-Lighthouse' where I have seen such a fog roll right over me & my Daughters this last summer!...nice!....lines 3 and your last line are among my favorites in this amazing poem!...jim
Tuesday, November 10, 2009
Priyanka Bhowmick
HOMECOMING
wonderful lines Sir...and the script has been excellently penned down.
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wonderful lines Sir...and the script has been excellently penned down.
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Saturday, November 7, 2009
Sara Lokken, Marty Owens
MOODS
Sara Lokken :Beautiful, agonizing....this must be your inner child. -Sara
Marty Owens :Nice...Enjoyed....Marty
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Sara Lokken :Beautiful, agonizing....this must be your inner child. -Sara
Marty Owens :Nice...Enjoyed....Marty
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Thursday, November 5, 2009
Catrina Heart
SECRET WAKE
Savage
Vultures and tigers have eaten the flesh
Juicy and fresh as blood still dripping out
Under the sizzling rays of afternoon sun
Sanitizing
Bacterium and viruses germinate
As creature of darkness to immunocompetence
Wolves play their harps to the extinct ethic minority
Slaughtering sliver of innocence and feelings
Your piece have inspired me to write this poem..............CT
http://www.poemhunter.com
Savage
Vultures and tigers have eaten the flesh
Juicy and fresh as blood still dripping out
Under the sizzling rays of afternoon sun
Sanitizing
Bacterium and viruses germinate
As creature of darkness to immunocompetence
Wolves play their harps to the extinct ethic minority
Slaughtering sliver of innocence and feelings
Your piece have inspired me to write this poem..............CT
http://www.poemhunter.com
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It was not worth trying… It seems to me like a bit of nihilism…Sartre would surely appreciate….Very interesting readind…
regards
yann
I can see in this the mind of the physician who deals with the gray matter of the mind, and the spiritual aspect of the mind, and I can see how the two can be like enemies (or enmity—one to the other) in that each are on opposite poles, insofar as we understand them. I hope I have made some sense, as this is a test of language’s ability to communicate between minds.