Sunday, December 28, 2014

SECOND-HAND EVENT

I was drawn by the title and your words surpassed anything I might have expected..."the indulgence of self becomes a second hand event"..so so profound and fit an ending to a thoroughly powerful piece of writing...yes.. this dug deep and reached far beyond.-Naajir Rashad

FALLING SEED

Morning, Sir. I felt a lot from this write. Your usual thought provoking writes. Have a great weekend.-Lady Dragonwyck

Friday, December 26, 2014

Anarchy

loved this! wonderful journey through your powerful use of imagery.-Lenny Gazbowski


Saturday, December 20, 2014

Leviathans

deep piece - great lines: 'Civil war started between the yawning wounds'... and how true:'The autocracy will belled the earth till death.- eleanor prince

Monday, December 15, 2014

Lame Duck

Wow. This really grabs, and it bites with its teeth. I like it.- Arlo Disarray

Sunday, December 14, 2014

Swan Song

Deep but full of food for thought this introspective dance to a swan song. Excellent imagery.- Fay Slimm

Friday, December 12, 2014

Very Disturbing

like it too for the imagination used. Moon seems to be your fav word. Its my sincere desire to see that work which arouses absolute feeling of happiness, bliss flowing from each of the words. I look forward to the other side of life, through your fantastic poetic imagination.-purnimamanhas

good write.-sueb
Loved this, brilliant write, great imagery.-Madeira

AFTER LEAVING THE HOME

Cool Poem.. I like the abstract imagery. It is a fun read. -Joel Thornton

Thursday, December 11, 2014

VIRTUE

I love your poetry, powerful as I enjoy because it touches something inside my walls, my gosh-Entelechy .

Wednesday, December 10, 2014

RECAPITULATION

we journey on my old friend I first read your poems years ago and was captivated , and remain so , you can take this form to new levels with such ease.-

Sunday, December 7, 2014

Choking

love the wording! - Cameron Williams

Another unmissable posting from your talented pen my friend. This write of excellent metaphor and intrigue must be Recommended.- Fay Slimm

Saturday, December 6, 2014

WHAT WENT WRONG

Very intense nice pen versa! A 7 for me! Have a lovely day! :) love and hugs! -Dorian Petersen Potter

Wow.. Really cool Satish! This is my newest favorite poem.. Very well crafted piece. That middle stanza is the impetus of the poem for me. It is just so well written I do not want to condescend by regurgitating some cliche dribble about how impressed I am.. Rated a 7 (highest rating) and tagging as a fav. Thanks for sharing, and I am excited to read more of your poetry. Joel Thornton

Friday, December 5, 2014

Committed

Flashpoint in looking for its own face will wait - - a set of stark but brilliant metaphors to open eyes and ears - -thank you dear Satish. - Fay Slimm

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

Drifting Pain

Strangely charming, well done mate.-martin james

Good write, again-Karen Fromtod 

your writings have their own unique style..keep up-Sammour
 

Climbing

Darkness sings in the valley of sun. Tongues are free to weave the moon. Beautiful presentation with nice wording really. - Kumarmani Mahakul

Monday, December 1, 2014

TENDERNESS

reminds me of a winter kaliedoscope - the patterns seems on fire - liked this one. - Lady A

Sidelined

A strong write. Beautiful language. That last stanza pulled me up sharp. Liked.-jennie charles