FAIRY TALE

of all the poems of yours which I have been blessed to read, this is my favorite one...-  Michael Firewalker

I'm still imagining dignified shadows in motion-  sstoth0

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Unrevelling

It recalls me the words of Francis Bacon that the natives would revolt inhuman treatment by authority. -P Nasarudheen, Kasargod.Kerala

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Bouquet

very beautiful!! Congratz on the Ed's choice Sir!!-  Rupradha

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SUICIDAL WISH

Wow..deep one..- Destroyer ~ Poet

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YOUR WAKING HEAD

a meaningful write. -  seema chowdhury

This is so deep and symbolic that last stanza has me wondering. -  LightH2O

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FIGHTERS AT LARGE

Satish,,enjoyed, thank you for the lovely poem, I had much fun and thought reading your poem tonight*LUV-  Destroyer ~ Poet

Smile ˜ And Yet Some Still Seek Their Own Graves ˜ You Know, I Was Mentioning Unto Another Last Eve How That In Rome Centuries Ago, There Was A Society Within Part Whom Entertained Themselves By Watching Others Slaying One Another Whileas They Cheered Them On * Smile, Not Much Has Changed, Has It ˜ Love Always-  John Rhinem

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BEAUTIFUL

a nice write. -  seema chowdhury 

This is so interesting, "A homeless god wanders, in my garden..." -  LightH2O

A wonderful write........-  patspoems 

absorbed-  leafsailor

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RELIGION

"the darker side of continence"...
a perfect description/definition of religion through the ages...-  Michael Firewalker

Spicey.
Oh, a fitting epitaph.-  Ann Waddicor

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BROODING END

Deadpoet is right, you don't have to understand you just feel it.-  LightH2O

you don't always have to understand poetry(:-  deadpoet

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Confessional Hurt

Clothed words and unappreciative minds are the same..always feel the suffocation of identity.
Well written...Satish verma-  Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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STONED

S Verma, very deep..take care..-  Destroyer ~ Poet
I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Satish. Love-  Carol Brown

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APPLE PICKING

A great write to make me think and savor every word and come to a thousand conclusions of assumed answers to your poetic expressions.-  LightH2O

The voice of the poet... Good write thought-provoking too!-  Sandra Martyres

this is the word of many books ,scattered through out time, I will read them as you write , it is so beautiful in the unexplainable way always, my friend-  leafsailor

I planned to comment something worth reading, but my mind too foggy with sleep. My apology... I shall return again. Good evening.- Isabella Cecilia Maria

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LAKE SONG

So much mystery and imagery all wrapped up in your well penned write.-  LightH2O

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WHAT COMPARISON?

Such deep thoughts of a dear enlighten spirit.-  LightH2O

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Wearing Away

Lovely metaphors about aging.-  Ronel McCarthy

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APPLE PICKING

A great write to make me think and savor every word and come to a thousand conclusions of assumed answers to your poetic expressions.-  LightH2O

The voice of the poet... Good write thought-provoking too!-  Sandra Martyres

this is the word of many books ,scattered through out time, I will read them as you write , it is so beautiful in the unexplainable way always, my friend-  leafsailor
I planned to comment something worth reading, but my mind too foggy with sleep. My apology... I shall return again. Good evening.-  Isabella Cecilia Maria

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REASONING

wow i wish i could get into yoru head and see what is in there take care always-  Destroyer ~ Poet

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METAPHYSICAL VIEW

It looks like I understand the poem and from another point it looks different. Is it metaphysical view?
End of the day, everyone of us will ripen with hardened arteries and wait for the arrival of the arbitrator, who seems to come and play hide and seek. Satish Verma, I like this poem-  Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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A TREE WAS TALKING

she does not sleep
but turns aware
in silence deep
allowing light
to kiss her skin
to brush her hair
inside her might
she slowly rises
from our din
away from here
and old despises
now set free
into there-  Michael Firewalker

What a vision..."Death was casually running around
on charred bodies."

Interesting unusual adjectives/imagery.

I find this fascinating but am not sure I understand it completely,
but then that's poetry! it stretches the mind and lets it go again.

For me...-  Ann Waddicor

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REVOLUTION

This is unique.. I like the imagery invoked and the creative use of words to invoke it.. the way its worded leaves a lot to reader interpretation... and that adds to the piece... because readers will be able to interpret it in many different ways.. good read.. thankks for allowing me to comment..-  Ailill

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THE SIEGE

Oh, pass on a cloud
my eyes want to rain.

^ I love this end so much... the whole write in general is great, but I felt like choking on this part:

An apparition
of infiniteness of agony.
Becoming one with failures.

--- I suggest you say:

An apparition of infinite
yet failing agony.- Lebanese Phoenix

A sad and touching poem, Sir. Your expressions, whatever little I understood touched my heart. Allow me to interpret the parts I understand here for our readers. And, please correct me for any incorrect interpretations.

A poem about life's misfortunes that have inspired the poet's thoughts. Aptly titled "Siege" = a state of troubles and nuances that have created a state of blockade (applied to one's life circumstances).
First stanza:

Dual fall of brass (meaning I fell twice from brass = spiritual symbolism for "goodness/grace" From the bine ( = from a climbing/twinning plant), implying from atop a height (or metaphorically speaking from a high/accomplished place;
and from the "Bliss"= state of happiness
An apparition (= ghostly figure) that I have(now) become
of infiniteness (=limitless) of agony. (=suffering, mental anguish)
Becoming one with failures. (=blaming self for all the failures.)

Second stanza:

It tends to stay (=perhaps the guilt of doing it twice)
and enters the forbidden city (the ancient forbidden city of Lhasa, also the former capital of Tibet and abode of the Dalai Lama's, which was barred to all Westerners from entering for centuries, perhaps symbolically stating that the guilt is staying inside oneself and refusing to leave.)
of endless gods.Me beseeching, imploring
to remain poor of any treasure. (despite beseeching=begging/pleading with any number of Gods, I remain poor of their treasure=affection, perhaps because of the guilt)
The mysterious pain
a trap cannot catch. (a pain from the events which have caused the guilt, for which the author is here blaming self, cannot be easily eliminated).

End Stanza: Simple and immensely touching expressions to this reader.

Oh, pass on a cloud (= mind's fog/guilt)
my eyes want to rain. (=weep)

Sir, with due respects, you have an amazing talent in metaphorical language. And, a humility to match your outstanding expressions in penning whatever went wrong in life. You deserve the front page, for this outstanding verse, in my opinion.-  A lonely soul

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Choking

Wow, you have some very profound poetry.
Of course this is just my analogy of your poem, I hope you will enlighten me as to its true meaning.

Like a quivering leaf climbing
unreachable thighs of a cloud
in naked shelter of sun.

^The first stanza starts off with the feeling of vulnerability. Perhaps it is meant to bring a feeling of being somewhere that you are forced to be. I don't know why but my first thoughts of this stanza had me visualizing someone climbing the steps to the gallows, with only the scorching sun as the shelter. The sun being the only thing between he and his maker. The title is also relevant in the first stanza, with gallows you are choked and hanged.

I lament the fall
of a colossus
who would not live in a glass house.

^^^ This stanza took me to the innocence of an individual as they are being perceived a trouble maker of some sort. Perhaps wronfully accused of a deed. Grieving the fact that a man of pride would certainly not do such a thing as accused. The insertion of "colossus who would not live in a glass house" makes me think of the old adage "Don't throw rocks if you live in a glass house". Which could lead me to believe that the accuser is just as vulnerable to such accusations and should watch their own step.

Ash smeared on face
a name walks on the book
of barefoot poems.

^^^ This part of the poem led me into a couple of directions, the first being the ash, does it represent the literal burning of someone or is it a representation of Lent, or perhaps neither. I loved the line" a name walks on the book of barefoot poems." this line made me think of that are time (lives) are set to a schedule and it should not be in mans hand the cause for demise. It also reminded me of a more Christian outlook that our names are recorded in a book and when the roll is called will we be among the entrants to Heaven.

Today I am going to morph
into a death sentence
for an uncommitted crime.

^^ This brings me back to the being sentenced to death though being innocent.
Interesting word choice being that you are going to "morph" into a death sentence. It seems so out of place but yet it seems very fitting as the body is present but the soul will die a peaceful death because it is truly innocent.

Who had lost himself
in unslept awakening
of a disaster?

^^^Interesting close for a poem to end with a question. Have we not all felt this way at one time or another, being falsely accused of something. To be innocent and accused is definitely a disaster, and that alone brings the title into play.

I hope my analogy of your poem does not offend and was not too far off your target of intent. I have greatly enjoyed reading it and look forward to reading more of your work. - Dixiedaisy

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TENDER RAGE

This is terrific, so well seen and expressed, how I enjoyed it.-  Ann Waddicor

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JILTED

Thank you for adding your spices to the soup today Satish. I am enjoying reading all the appetizing poetry posted here today. Have a wonderful week. May inspiration hit the tip of your pen and never let go. Love,-  Carol Brown

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BODY GAME

Absolutely adore this poem! -Kailashana
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Forgotten Hills

Fantastic sir ! - flame

Beautiful composition! - Kanchan Bhattacharya


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FOR A DENIAL

it is on the edge of knowing to let go ,but waiting.a wicked thing was done ,with out reason you are so correct in this , and there will be no reward -  leafsailor

Sounds like the rain put your in a deep and reflective state, considering leaving your country, yet you're thoughts are brought back and you renounce the idea.   LightH2O
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SWARMING

yes...that is exactly how it is...- Michael Firewalker

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ANOTHER CREATION *

"It hurts when I think between choice and will." ..."I will watch the rise of hundred suns." your Spirit never ceases to amaze me. -  LightH2O

I like this ....It can be done with "Poetry" From Sunny to Blue Rains...then back to sunny ! Great Poem ...I like it well ! -  Philip


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WISDOM

Wery well written Satish, good!Have a lovely weekend! - Anne Lise Andresen
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THE LOST GENERATION

So heart felt in such depth to discover god in particle, subatomic, expanding is the ultimate!...thanks for this gem. -  LightH2O


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A PRIMATE IN DISTRESS

This poem sure puts lots of images on my head..."...and I will remember sadness and sugar" a very bitter sweet experience.-  LightH2O
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FURY OF JUGGLER *

"The sky was stepping down from heaven..." one of many great lines in your fine poem.-  LightH2O

powerful imagery. A captivating read. - Nightowl
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THE WHOLENESS

A poem of reflection and discovery. -  LightH2O

The abrupt, violent language is vintage Verma. -  Yacov Mitchenko

Touching pain and listlessness of life... -  sensebreeze

your poem calls the dreams out and interestingly responds to my afternoon... peace be with you.-  leafsailor

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IDOLATORY

That last stanza shows feelings of impotence in a world were the wrong party rules. -  LightH2O

we wish for destruction and call it love is the harmonic I hear , your poems are free gifts ,they exact no price-  leafsailor
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STONES IN CRYPT

Such devastation and the originality of your lines keeps me coming back for more. -  LightH2O

the war rages in my heart peace my friend send the sky to talk for me, love your poem-  leafsailor

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AN UNBORN PRAYER

I agree with leafsailor, you write so clear a message yet it keeps its mystery which makes me read over and over.-  LightH2O

the shifting beyond verbal mind is so satisfied with this rare gift of yours ,to write this form of poetry and have the underlying message clear ,yet staged in mystery is a true gift, When I read your work my mind is enriched ,when I let go and write in a similar way ,it is as a child ,but I am learning. -  leafsailor

Some very vivid images reflected in this thought -provoking piece poem-  Sandra Martyres

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PEACE AFTERWARDS

A dark write with very vivid imagery.....-  Sandra Martyres

Raw and gripping.- LightH2O

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LABYRINTHS

Many of the lines here are indeed poetic, ingenious, and unusual...something rarely encountered.-  Leo Larry Amadore

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LISTENING

Love is not for dabblers
Love is not for the indifferent- sstoth0 

Everyone listens, but to what?
To how little or how much?-  Dick

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PEACE AFTERWARDS

A dark write with very vivid imagery.....-  Sandra Martyres

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A NAME OF CLEMENCY

Acceptance, dignity and wise resignation displayed in this nice write.-  LightH2O

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Love is not for dabblers
Love is not for the indifferent-  sstoth0

Everyone listens, but to what?
To how little or how much?-  Dick

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THE WHOLENESS

your poem calls the dreams out and interestingly responds to my afternoon... peace be with you -  leafsailor

Touching pain and listlessness of life... -  sensebreeze

The abrupt, violent language is vintage Verma.-  Yacov Mitchenko
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CLAWING NIGHT

You leave me perplexed... your words are mesmerizing. -  LightH2O

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INVISIBLE PARTICLES

As time passes and age makes her impressions stronger each passing day , we tend to give in . I like the expression " mind rejects the peaks". Metaphors of a baked sky is too grand to comprehend . This poem spins a divine web and i am stuck with its spiritual awe. -  Nikunj

yup!... you aint whistling dixie love to let your poems sink into my being and stay!!!!!!!! -  leafsailor

I love the last two lines, soo deep!-  LightH2O
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Ungoing

I love this, it takes you along.-  Bella Forrest

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CONTRAPTIONS

clouded are my mind,
if nothing interesting to find! !-  Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

  A really great poem, like it, a great write.
May I Invite you to read my new poem called,
The Holy Man.- Dave Walker

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Song Of Unquiet Spirit

Enjoy the word flow, thank you for sharing-Howard Moore

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Enigmatic

God is the pillar of hope during our emotional issues. If we overcome our emotions, we may overcome our dependance..Nice poem..- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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Cannot Say

I'm speechless.... this poem has a beautiful display of metaphor's.... the depth of this message is powerful... well done-  Maple Tree

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TWIST MY HEART AGAIN

Oh another gem.... this stanza really does pack a punch in word display....
"Breaking fast unto death
for releasing the doves
in sky of hymns. "
^^^ Beautiful......
well done-  Maple Tree

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SUCKING BLATANTLY

I feel sorrow within this powerful poem.... again, I adore your style of writing.... powerful...powerful....powerful....
your ending line.... wow!
"The untouchable moon
was laughing."
Brilliant ending-  Maple Tree 

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Ungoing

Powerful piece, the depth of this message just leaves me speechless.. love your word display.... well done~- Maple Tree

Well written. I feel as though its slightly held back from what it could be... Could it be the flow of the poem? No.. Maybe its just how its described..
I feel almost as if there is a veil over my emotions suppressing them. You havnt quite unlocked them in this piece, but your close.
For me, the whole piece does become unlocked around the last stanza which makes me feel it all at once. Which is a good thing but before then It was a bit difficult for me.
You can deffinetly understand what your trying to get across (as Maple Tree said). Its truly inspiring and different from other types of poems.
Still i feel as though you have not captured me yet.
Very well written. Thank yo ufor sharing-  JustNei

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MAY I SAY

Great write. You so capture and express so much in your writes. I especially liked ..."humanity walks with bent head listening nothing".-  Lady Dragonwyck

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IDOLATORY

we wish for destruction and call it love is the harmonic I hear , your poems are free gifts ,they exact no price-  leafsailor

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WHAT CONCLUSION WAS LEFT?

Your questions are interesting and make me think. I love the ending line and it's romantic allure.- LightH2O

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THE DEBRIS

"Life slaps the illusion" she sure does! "Life has no favorites, sooner or later each one of us must be tested"-  LightH2O

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LAKE SONG

Smile ˜ Wrapped Amid This Perpetual Night In Something Melancholy ˜ O Ye Of Little Faith & Even Lessor Sight In Vision * Love-  John Rhinem

Satish, you have a amazing poem here, thank you for sharing it. -  Anne Lise Andresen

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THE CALLER

Strong metaphoric use puts this work in a first rate position to edge reders' minds further to see when truth needs to be spoken. Thanks for this posting Satish. -  Fay Slimm

Power filled! Wonderful versing. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-  Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Nice use of metaphor and deep symbolism.-  LightH2O

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A SOUL DIES

Sadness but I felt a "renewal" with the line "ashes were sent to the lake".
I do enjoy your writes. Have a good day, Sir-  Lady Dragonwyck

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WATCHING A GALAXY

Thank you for always sharing your amazing poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Satish. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read. Love-  Carol Brown

enjoyed reading your poetry today! Prayers were flying alot I bet when that ship sank the other day.-  Doris Culverhouse

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FACSIMILE

This is rather fascinating,
I see the strangest images and see what you are trying to say,
it gives the imagination of the reader quite a task.-Ann Waddicor  in Norway.

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THE GLASS HOUSE

I don't quite understand all this, but I have done something with your poem
which you must be pressed to ignore, if it worries you at all.


Not yet, courage waits as
the curtain falls,
to disappear in awakening.

crucial, love of absence,
the scythe
of the eclipsed moon.

Suspense, the tall image,
slow turn of thighs,
lips reach the galaxies.

the first cry of a new born
pleads guilty,
whispers never the same.

my fault, the animals feet,
carrying the burden of straw,
words brought grief.

In triangular fight......................could you not say flight here?
my son, my god, my father:
I stand in the centre.

I just felt it was...well it was, so that's my idea.
I felt it was worth trying anyway.
They could each become a haiku in their own right too perhaps.
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A DREAM AFTER THE DEMISE

‡ My God & Heavenly Father * Is An All Consuming Fire * 'And The Heavens Shall Melt Away...' ¥ Great Poe?? ¥ Luv, - Rachel St.Cross  ‡

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ANOTHER CREATION

Ashort visit to read yours poem today Satish, and I am gald I did it.Have a lovely day! -  Anne Lise Andresen 

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