Powerful piece, the depth of this message just leaves me speechless.. love your word display.... well done~-
Maple Tree
Well written. I feel as though its slightly held back from what it could be... Could it be the flow of the poem? No.. Maybe its just how its described..
I feel almost as if there is a veil over my emotions suppressing them. You havnt quite unlocked them in this piece, but your close.
For me, the whole piece does become unlocked around the last stanza which makes me feel it all at once. Which is a good thing but before then It was a bit difficult for me.
You can deffinetly understand what your trying to get across (as Maple Tree said). Its truly inspiring and different from other types of poems.
Still i feel as though you have not captured me yet.
Very well written. Thank yo ufor sharing- JustNei
I feel almost as if there is a veil over my emotions suppressing them. You havnt quite unlocked them in this piece, but your close.
For me, the whole piece does become unlocked around the last stanza which makes me feel it all at once. Which is a good thing but before then It was a bit difficult for me.
You can deffinetly understand what your trying to get across (as Maple Tree said). Its truly inspiring and different from other types of poems.
Still i feel as though you have not captured me yet.
Very well written. Thank yo ufor sharing- JustNei
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