Friday, August 30, 2019

By Any Reckoning

I have been away for a year but I clearly remember your poems back then. I am surprised to read this one where all of the stanzas coherently make up the poem and the title made sense in relation to the content. Not to dismerit the older poems because I have seen your craft from them but to appreciate this approach you now take. I think capturing that grasshopper moment was great and the poem is beautiful.-mossgirl19

Sacred Steps

Beautiful verse Satish ji! Loved reading it! -Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Thursday, August 29, 2019

Wednesday, August 28, 2019

Pangs Of Truth

This poem has an interesting melancholy tone. I like your word choice here: Meet me in some moonless night./I will show you a slice/of my bruises", as if the absence of the moon became the "slice" of light that was pulled down from the sky to reveal the wounds shown. Curious to hear about what inspired this!-Kay 

Last Dawn

People seem so busy with the hustle and they miss out. Tardy spirits? More like laid back spirits to take in everything. Looking at everyone’s hustle and no time to relax and see what there is to see? That’s what I got from your work. Awesome-Teresa

Embracing Dark

In the morning
I will unlock the moon
to go back its home......wonderful ideology. Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.-Kumarmani Mahakul

" The moon flowers
are in full bloom, opening
at dusk till noon"
Wonderful conceptualization. Thanks for sharing.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Whom To Sing

Very beautiful verse Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Patiala

Profound lines. TFS. -Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Tuesday, August 27, 2019

Whispering Clouds

A mystical write about whispering clouds and unblinking as we look at the clock! Nice imagery.-Aqua Flower

We have heard the whisper of cloud after reading your excellent poem. Thank you very much for sharing thiis.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Uprooting Dandelions

dandelions
Intruguing as always. Read you every night.-Morningglory

Selling Features

To Be Proven
Untouched truth - allets 

Some Hegemony

rock carving
What poets do - allets 

Forked Tongues

Mellow Mellow Mellow
"different paths" is a theme for me this year - good one,-allets

Monday, August 26, 2019

Into Dark Abyss

Strange sense of detachment from emotion except for what is created by huge natural bodies like the moon.-Julia Luber

Fading jasmines spark less fragrance but moon motivates to regain strength. An amazing poem is shared.-Kumarmani Mahakul

In Nostalgia

You Walk Like Moon

Love the language used.-Aurora RW

A subtle parallel- linish undercurrent in the entire write!-Sukanya Sinha Roy

Sunday, August 25, 2019

Thursday, August 22, 2019

Brief Answer

Great. Is this a contemporary take on some of the wonderful Saivite poems I used to read? If so, it's wonderful as well.-Miracle Beyond Me

Searching My Voice

To float in scented sky we should float in dreams. This poem is very excellently penned. An excellent sharing is done really. -Kumarmani Mahakul

Naked Truths

The fusion cracks. An amazing poem is wisely penned.-Kumarmani Mahakul

A profound poem, sir Satish...-Bernard F. Asuncion

Where To Go

Brilliant and so resonates!-Diamond

India Ink

Well said
"...waiting for the /unhappened to happen..." Well sent, well received. -allets

A Paroxysm

Intricate expressions of loss and despair. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Such a beautiful poem Satish ji! Heart touching!-Giti Tyagi, Patial

Sunday, August 18, 2019

Strange Rivalry

Such aromatic lines. Enjoyed the spice in every line. -Cherime Sangma, Williamnagar

Saturday, August 17, 2019

Inheritance

The ghost limb will slash the wrist to swallow pride. Humorously you have spoken wonderful thing. An amazing and brilliant poem is penned...-Kumarmani Mahakul

I did not get much out of this poem. Verse two was a bit problematic for me. This is not your fault. I might not be giving this its proper reading. -Luis Estable

A Complete Contrast

Killing Myself
In small poems. I like this one-djtj

Relics Of Words

Friday, August 16, 2019

Prerogative

Absence of a person creates an aura of sorrow that hurts but when sun appears this creates an aura of love and beauty. This poem is very nice and excellent...-Kumarmani Mahakul

Covered With Quills

Your closing stanza holds me captive...(Apparitions gather―to bid goodbye to the moon. A flame of the forest was due any moment.) Excellent!-MissSharon

Falling Rubble

Thursday, August 15, 2019

Arts In Telling

My muse became addicted to really bad substances and I have not seen him for years. The world is preying on him.-allets

In Depression

Hello satishverma,
A powerful super write!
Keep writing.-FineB

Summer Solstice

All desire that a butterfly should come and sit near them. You have very nicely penned this poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Wednesday, August 14, 2019

Dark Circles

Repeating some hymns everyday is very nice. This act purifies life with beauty of personality. Thank you very much for sharing this poem.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Tuesday, August 13, 2019

Straight From Dark

Skin Angels
Pain - something wrong or something overly used. -allets

Living With Grace

A true picture mirrored. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Monday, August 12, 2019

Song Of The Sky

With the wonderful imagery moon is described as strawberry. This poem is definitely an excellent poem shared here.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Friday, August 9, 2019

Thursday, August 8, 2019

Tuesday, August 6, 2019

Learning You

An imaginative poem that puts all words in the garden flowering.-Jane Campion

The Ire

Great poem. I think I'm going to have to read it a few more times to attempt to get it's meanings, though. Thanx; have a great day :) reality-reality1

Monday, August 5, 2019

Sunday, August 4, 2019

Heart Searching

Absolutely, we need some soul-searching. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore

Friday, August 2, 2019

Bewitching

A bit pessimistic (I'm an optimist) but thought inspiring. The poem leads one to re-think on actions one perform in ones life.-Guruji 

I Must Tell You

We meet to hurt each other
Well written. I especially like the last line-lizardking

The Dumps

You just won yourself a big fan.-nourayasmine

Help Me

Interesting lines. TFS.-Annapurna Sharma, Nellore