Mode Of Slaughtering

A picture of hopelessness formed in my mind. There is a critical battle being fought here and the search for truth is ending in bleak places. Mercy seems to be losing out to coldness. The dismembering of deities presents a powerful picture. Well done.-DIVYA

I'm with Carl on this, it kind of took me into a flame lit tomb where secrets are carved into the stone and truth is a forgotten feeling. Nicely done-willweb

that was a nice little if bit of scary trip ( , put me in mind of tomb raiding. Especially liked this stanza in and of itself.
"Thinking of truth
was difficult. Your footsoles
develop blisters. No home
was in sight."
The pursuit of truth is difficult and the the steps taken to find it can be blistering and seemingly no home in which to rest seems on the horizon. Thanks for the post - carl

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Naked As Moon

Full *****-Rajan T Renganathan

Excellent poem, your title to the poem drew my attention.-Rajan T Renganathan

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In Short Life

If a poet’s pain is understood he is a fulfilled man. When in love all pain is forgotten.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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I Apologize

Who will touch my poverty? Your prudent inquisition needs serious introspection dear poet.-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Let Me Say

Powerfully painful. Emotive write. The big questions always leave you prayerful. Thank you for composing. Hugss
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SSmoothie

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Describing Life

Life is a series of experiences, some unique, some ordinary. Living a life of empathy and love is divine.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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Rebelling in Dreams

When one identifies with the whole, bad at any place hurts. Searching for remedy at a wrong place is of no use. Ignorance/ darkness is about engulf the world. When one can’t do anything there wil be rebellion in dreams only.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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When The Rains Stop

To stitch again my gaze
Really clever ways to express ideas w creative phrase and tapping into metaphors without bending to cliche’-Bobby O

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Throw Something at Twilight

Everybody repeats what he heard about truth or speaks with his own creative imagination about the Unknown. But twilight is the half truth one understands.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Don't Inhale the Gas

Inhaling gas is deadly. Humanist approach towards transgender is requested for. Though trees fall in the storm, blades of grass stand as they do in the Sun.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakurr, Nellore

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Myth Of Golden Love

This is a beautiful poem.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Light Does not Matter

For a broken heart all things look dark. In spite of moonlight only the fireflies attract attention. To light the world man should become a torch. For one in ignorance suffering brings enlightenment.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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Before Sleeping Pills

One prepares oneself to be remembered after death. Beauty in life is missed by giving importance to insignificant rituals.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore, AP

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Fall and Death

When thought, speech and deed are similar there is no difference between inside and outside. That is the true way to live. Without that temples and gods are of no avail.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Ceremony of Darknes

When one does not understand there is irritation and anger. Separated lovers will experience invisible pain. The buzzing of cricket appears to be a more sorrowful sound.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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You Go Back In Wombs

Your flesh is disappearing to expose the bones of our culture....meaningful expression dear poet.-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Acoustics

People are insensitive to things. In a way they are with the evil doers. Consequently those who can guide are also disappointed to see the innocent not being able to enjoy even important things.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Why You Say, I Am A God

A wonderful poem dear poet.... I like it-Dr Dillip K Swain

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Revolutionary

Abundance gave only more pain and fear. Conscience makes us feel guilty. Attachment makes us suffer. Be a revolutionary to free yourself from attachment.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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Why You Say, I am a God

My home is lost in
you, without teaching. The
school is closed. It gives relief.

The point of view
disappears. The eternity of one
moment, will bring the god to tears.

Everyday I feel pain.
The cleanliness of mind will
give you freedom to dig a black hole.

Satish Verma

Do Not Throw The Moon

The language and the imagery in this poem are incredibly powerful.
Enjoy effulgent days, and exquisite nights,
unto the exultations of Heaven.-Starward

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Pain Always Moves

Modern life has become hollow without necessary emotion even in prayer. You carry consequences of your actions beyond death. A nice poem with meaningful imagery.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

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