Saturday, July 23, 2022

The Sunday Ritul

Belong to yourself in?....This does not make any sense in sentence structure or flow of written/spoken English, correct coherent English, that is.
And to be frank nor does the rest of your poem. It's a mish mash of eclectic poetry.
And what does Ritul mean? Surely you mean the word Ritual.
And this was selected, viewed, chosen and won. Ye Gods!
Those are my honest thoughts regarding this poem.
Anyway, salutations to you.-Shaun Cronick

Monday, July 18, 2022

Loneliness

 Haunting and sad. As poetry is meant to be. Thank you for sharing.-lalalaEulalie


Friday, July 8, 2022

Thursday, July 7, 2022