Monday, October 31, 2022

Concealing Metaphysics

Man evolved from the stage of tadpole but cannot go back to that stage.In the name of progress belief in science strangled the belief in God. When Metaphysics is disregarded there is no place for truth in human life. All his values are consumed in the Black Hole. A very good poem.
As usual this poet says everything by remote suggestions and never directly.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Saturday, October 29, 2022

Universal Fall

The poem is about our getting away from nature, a part of the cosmos. That is the universal fall. Moon which should give a pleasant experience gives pain. The storm puts the light out so that the mysteries in the mind of the poet may remain unknown. We keep ourselves away from the Sun and hide ourselves in darkness (artificial lights).-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Thursday, October 27, 2022

My Incompleteness

The poet seems to make an attempt to find the meaning of life. After living a passionate life death is the certainty. One who has no belief in rebirth finds life a black hole about which nothing can be said.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Wednesday, October 26, 2022

Meticulous Gothics

Consciousness does not allow you to lie. Love nourishes on praise. History repeats and blind faith leads to division and strife.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Embrace the Harm

The Sun cannot be hidden under a snow storm. So is love.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Under My Poems

As usual this is another hard nut to crack from Sri Satish Varma. I think this is about loving and losing the loved one. A part of his feeling then becomes the source of writing poetry. The title is significant.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

The flames cover the
madness. The horror speaks. Everything
was not written in the book.
Touching words indeed! A strong feeling and good expression, Satish jee!-Padma, Hyderabad

Dark Charisma

The Dark Charisma appears to be of the super powers who perpetrate strife. 'pollen from the lips of flowers' is a expression.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Thursday, October 20, 2022

Blackness of Light

"May I invite you to read my poem "I SINK IN YOUR SINS"? Thank You-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

"Fake truth" make ways to the hearts of the innocent and maligns them. Predators take over! Yes, it is time to seek retribution for the sins of others! Great truth, great poem, sir. Congratulations.-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

To Be Sincere

"You will not cry
if I hold the pen. It
is sharper than the sword, when
the words bleed." I love the metaphor within this verse. It rings true on an emotional level. Good work Satish.-Carlos Lorenzo Estrada

Monday, October 17, 2022

Purify Me

Interesting images, a storm that bends the candlesticks, a candle that withstands the onslaught of storm… life is like that! Strange as it may look, unseemly it may seem! …-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Read My Hunch

A good poem presenting the current situaton of the society. Intolerence made us restless. Pain is made to appear beautiful that one may sacrifice life with expectations of heavenly benefits. Expressions like 'red drops' from 'white clouds' is a clear suggestion of violence that is being perpetrated. Ue of words' 'dunes', 'hawks' indidcate the precariousness of life todday.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Sunday, October 16, 2022

No Negativity

Part 2. Vayalar wrote: "I lean on the great walls of the horizon and control the movement (motion) of the universe".-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

This poem of Poet Satish Verma resonates the high standards of the poetry of Great Poet Vayalar Rama Varma, who wrote in Malayalam. He wrote about the power of human thinking and his infallible gait and advancement of science and technology.-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Saturday, October 15, 2022

Light Burns In Me

Unrequited love is very painful but unmasks his innate talents.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Thursday, October 13, 2022

Melting In Cold

A touch of of pain and life falling apart.-Dennis Thomas

In My Reading

'End of horizon', 'darkness' on the sea, 'falling star' suggest a gllomy picture of future. In this context divesrsity appears to be ironic.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Tuesday, October 11, 2022

Natural Tears

Truth is always under test. ‘Hiranmayena Patrena Satyassyapihitam mukham…", says the scripts. Profound poetry.-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Open Your Wounds

A modernist poem with obsurity, deep thought and suggestive images. 'benign separation, to meet in the dead sea', 'beginning of voracious end' are beautiful expressions.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore

Sunday, October 9, 2022

In Quietude

" Was this a ruinous unlocking? " I enjoyed this extraordinarily short poem by Satishji. Insightful and profound.-Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Negotiating With Fear

very nice write Satish. especially like the line I will not pray to live in this circus.-Ken e Bujold

I love this! It definitely resonates with me as someone that has experienced religious trauma.-k.d.s

Wednesday, October 5, 2022

Were You Hungry of Raw Truth?

It isn't the End, when there is something beyond it. Alternately: Our end is just that, not the complete end of all. Good start. Thanks for sharing.-amp1972

Sunday, October 2, 2022

Walking in Shadows

Interplay of reality and shadows in life.-Rajendra Singh Baisthakur, Nellore