Wholeness

I am re-reading Laurell K. Hamilton Vampire Hunter novels--8 re-done so far this summer--ate em paperbacks 200 pgs. A group of Vampires is a Kiss Of Vampires-allets

Fantastic imagery, really made the poem seem more tangible than just words. I really like this one.-Starward

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Why Love Is Called Flame?

The most sought after aspect of love and it's vast power on the person in love discussed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

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Taking Sand Bath

Although I am not sure I am correctly reading the poem's implied back story (that is my fault, not the poem's), its sheer evocative power compensates for any misreading on my part. I really like the mystery provided by the evocation.-Starward

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Saviour Was Sad

Beautiful lines..
First poem was
written for unborn you
in my turbulent life

Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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Priest Writes On Wall

Never read anything so beautiful about pain dying... Good work sir...-SHWETA VASHISHT, Delhi

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Watching A Miracle

Beautiful lines...
Be strong to honor
the dignity of the human
patience in flames.

Lovely verse Satish ji...as always!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal, India

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How To Decipher

"Man simply is" like a god.-Greg Wilson 

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Strange Privacy

How many more
will have to die?-Laura

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Leaves Are Changing Colors

Loved the lines :
Vestigial pain
was insulting. You always
feel a presence.- Ujjal Mandal, West Bengal

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Reciting The Fake Poem

you joined the bomb squad
of poems.

Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle 

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Undressing

Beautiful poem.-Starward

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Reciting The Fake Poem

you joined the bomb squad of poems.
Your line breaks are very unsettling to read. It gives a very unnecessary awkward pause when the entire stanza is just a sentence without proper cutoffs. It's also a bit of a strange read in general. My guess would be that the poem is about the meaninglessness of life in the face of death(?) but even that is a stretch. Would love to hear the meaning of the poem from you though.-MantaStyle

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Going Insane

A smoke signal is all it needs.-Rini Markle

To perceive
And to be perceived
Are two faces of the same coin
Only difference is
One is visible
And the other is hidden.
Respecting each others word
Honours every human being
And looking good over bad
Always makes matter cool
Win or loss is not the matter
Just changing angle is needed
To work things better.

Very true Sir things go insane that way only.-Varsha M

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The Earthen Death

For the most part, I read your poems but most of the times I’m not sure what they are about. :(
All I know is that some of them capture me. Thanks for sharing with us.-Everlasting

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History Repeats

A bit confused on what it means. Is it about a vampire? I'm very curious to its meaning.-MantaStyle 

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Abrasions

...a poem ache....-shamamama

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Blinking Lights

I like the feel of this, the way it flows and the conclusion which I think we all already knew!!-Catriona Abrahams

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Cuckoo Will Sing Again

I like this time traveller poem, it feels comfortable and familiar. I guess that's what poetry really is. All poets telling the same story, just using different words.-Catriona Abrahams

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Lost Home

God, I will never
understand you. What happened
when you were present everywhere? .....wow great expressive; like this piece.-Mahtab Bangalee

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Diving In Shallow Water

The power wants to celebrate the dark.. this line leads the poetic meaning in deep thought...well penned-Mahtab Bangalee

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I Remember

Wounds inflicted by a person is unforgettable. Lovely poem, sir.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi 

Every past moment that hurts teaches us a lot! Lovely lines...
Soon I will pick
up bloody path of learning,
what I am, I was
Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Human Tragedy

Touchy poem sir. We all do out of our own understanding but we fail to respect other's efforts. This confusion ruins all. Yes when humans stop to communicate tress and stones have to call out loud
" Can we seal the borders of pain.'
Well expressed poem. Admirations Sir.-Varsha M

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The Man And God

Liberation and love – all creatures of the Earth seek these two. Loved the poem, sir.- Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Deadbeat

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.-Kumarmani Mahakul

To live again! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

I really didn’t mean it-Coltron07

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.-Anil Kumar Panda

I’m sorry dude I’m really am.-Coltron07

A brilliant poem! I liked your last stanza most! Top score!-Dr Dillip K Swain

Congratulations on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'!
The last stanza of the poem is thought provoking.-Khairul Ahsan

The only thing immortal is dust, and the memory lost in the wind. Thoughtful and meditative work, it lingers in the mind. Well chosen for poem of the day.-Kevin Patrick

A concise and insightful verse.
A witty philosophical reflection.-Chinedu Dike

An outstanding poem rightfully selected as poem of the day, congratulations.-Bill Cantrell

I ask the dust, when
did you slip from the moon
to kiss immortal? What a wonderful imagination my dear poet. tony.-Dr Tony Brahmin

To live again, I will not come after dying for you. Resurrection? Congratulations.-Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

as usual, this poem takes us to greater height to Moon, as the dust slipped from it to kiss the immortal.. Thank you for sharing...Congratulations!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

A philosophical introvert and intriguing poem with deep meaning. Congrats on selection as poem of the day second time.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Deadbeat
epitaph slipping from the moon
to arrange anniversary...............congrats..........-Mahtab Bangalee

To beat to the drum of Om we are not reborn.-Robert M Smith

A meaningful and thought provoking deadbeat. Congrats on poem of the Day.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary............What a profound message to the society! Great stuff. Congrats on your positioning-Jayatissa K.Liyanage

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.-Anil Kumar Panda

I’m sorry dude I’m really am.-Coltron

Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

I really didn’t mean it.-Coltron


Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary. in a very gentle way and in simple style you wrote a fine poem full of imagination. tony-Dr Tony Brahmin

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Your last stanza is outstanding.-Jane Campion

death
cannot touch
the dust immortally!-Mahtab Bangalee

Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A thought provoking poem. -Sylvia Frances Chan

A interesting read, congratulations on poem of the day.-Matthew Holloway

Well done, impactful with lesser words but powerful profundity. Congrats on POD poem of the day....-Butch Decatoria


You raise great thought with your words.
If I may say....may I not return.-Lyn Paul


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Jumping The Wall

Loved these lines, sir...

'I will
wear the hijab of moon
to meet my lover.' - Sangeeta Das, Delhi

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Changing Vocabulary

I have got to read more of your poetry! This poem has an awesome bite to it. Definite; y a 10+++ and onto my fav list.-Susan Williams

Now you will sleep
in my poems, and I sleep on your lips..........sueprb there lover and beloved in peaceful mind though thousands of dissimilarities in habits........-Mahtab Bangalee

You used to say, I
was your accident, but you smiled...An amazing expression of this poem scribbles mind.-Kumarmani Mahakul

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On Naked Paper

You blend sexuality and poetic creativeness well. The last 3 lines are especially original. To my mind, you're among the 10 best poets on the site. Isn't your first name "Satish"? Unless my memory is playing tricks on me, I think it is.-Yacov Mitchenko

Such beautifully expressed words ;-}-Weeping willow

So beautiful!-Ifumi - poeticifi

Wow Love this -JaxSpade

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Humanized Pain

Loved these lines..
In a sacrifice
ritual. Blue lines are
appearing on my hands.
Thanks for sharing Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Like Haikus

Fractured Haiku
Nestor ~S~ - allets

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Not To Annihilate

Nice composition which talks about love and expression, Sir!-Padma, Khammam 

If we believe in the doctrine of rebirth it indeed peels of our pain of being a mortal.
Wonderful concept crafted beautifully, sir.-Sangeeta Das, Delhi

Beautiful lines...
A chance to learn
the mystical Pythagorean
shift of love's angle
Thanks for sharing Satish ji! -Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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On Naked Paper

You blend sexuality and poetic creativeness well. The last 3 lines are especially original. To my mind, you're among the 10 best poets on the site. Isn't your first name "Satish"? Unless my memory is playing tricks on me, I think it is.-Yacov Mitchenko

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How To Think

Wow! You have some very
Wow! You have some very striking ways of expression. " You rustle the hair of unknown pain", " nightmares hiss"! Unique and grabbing!-Cascade

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