Deadbeat

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.-Kumarmani Mahakul

To live again! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

I really didn’t mean it-Coltron07

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.-Anil Kumar Panda

I’m sorry dude I’m really am.-Coltron07

A brilliant poem! I liked your last stanza most! Top score!-Dr Dillip K Swain

Congratulations on your poem being chosen as the 'Member Poem Of The Day'!
The last stanza of the poem is thought provoking.-Khairul Ahsan

The only thing immortal is dust, and the memory lost in the wind. Thoughtful and meditative work, it lingers in the mind. Well chosen for poem of the day.-Kevin Patrick

A concise and insightful verse.
A witty philosophical reflection.-Chinedu Dike

An outstanding poem rightfully selected as poem of the day, congratulations.-Bill Cantrell

I ask the dust, when
did you slip from the moon
to kiss immortal? What a wonderful imagination my dear poet. tony.-Dr Tony Brahmin

To live again, I will not come after dying for you. Resurrection? Congratulations.-Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair

as usual, this poem takes us to greater height to Moon, as the dust slipped from it to kiss the immortal.. Thank you for sharing...Congratulations!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

A philosophical introvert and intriguing poem with deep meaning. Congrats on selection as poem of the day second time.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Deadbeat
epitaph slipping from the moon
to arrange anniversary...............congrats..........-Mahtab Bangalee

To beat to the drum of Om we are not reborn.-Robert M Smith

A meaningful and thought provoking deadbeat. Congrats on poem of the Day.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary............What a profound message to the society! Great stuff. Congrats on your positioning-Jayatissa K.Liyanage

Great poem indeed. Touching....Congrats.-Anil Kumar Panda

I’m sorry dude I’m really am.-Coltron

Thanks for sharing this poem with us.-Edward Kofi Louis

I really didn’t mean it.-Coltron


Don't leave a cut
on the sandstone to mark
the anniversary. in a very gentle way and in simple style you wrote a fine poem full of imagination. tony-Dr Tony Brahmin

Beautiful poem. Thanks and congratulation for being chosen as the member poem of the poem of the day.-Kumarmani Mahakul

Your last stanza is outstanding.-Jane Campion

death
cannot touch
the dust immortally!-Mahtab Bangalee

Congratulations for being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A thought provoking poem. -Sylvia Frances Chan

A interesting read, congratulations on poem of the day.-Matthew Holloway

Well done, impactful with lesser words but powerful profundity. Congrats on POD poem of the day....-Butch Decatoria


You raise great thought with your words.
If I may say....may I not return.-Lyn Paul


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