Monday, August 29, 2016

Friday, August 26, 2016

Fall of a Tender Doctrine

I love this one. -Malsawmi Jacob, Bangalore

Beautifully sad. I agree with the views of the poem in that death is not corrupt. -Supratik Sen, Kolkata

Wednesday, August 24, 2016

I Will Not Agree

The sermons, the prayers won't
help you become a subject―
to unseen god.

wonderful thought to proclaim that religions are the just guidance! !-V S 

Sunday, August 21, 2016

The Atavism

Yes, hardly any hope for humanity. Things are really gross. A profound piece of writing.-Nosheen Irfan

Traveling Constantly

Who allowed the novice,
third mate to steer the ship?
A beautifully conceived thought provoking poem raising very important questions.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Silent Prayer

Excellent expression shows the poets humility but at the same time his resolve to remain grounded with realities. Nice prayer. Thanks. I quote:
....I will / always fight my demons / with my broken pen.
I want to remain a human being.-Rajnish Manga

Thursday, August 18, 2016

Super Terrain

Hello,
We live in a world of truth and lies. Each one balancing the other creating dark and light. With this knowledge we each have a quest to reach our own destiny.

Thank you for sharing. ,Take care, Mr Darcy

dead bodies

Hello Satish,
I read a lot of your poetry.
Your imagery about the ”dead bodies” I’ve walked over freezes me in my tracks. I do think about dead people a lot. I read obituaries. That kind of stuff. I have a lot of feeling about many of your poems. I feel like I know you… or like I can see you speaking to me. It is horrifying and ferociously original.
I’ve been sifting through the bios listed on highonpoems.com. yours was one of the first I read. There is so much about your bio that makes me feel like a deer in headlights.

I can hardly believe how much you have written.
I’m a fan of yours Satish Verma.-Kenneth Miller 

Tuesday, August 16, 2016

Feet of Clay

I like this poem for the word selection and construction, but not able to get into it. Hope the author can help.-KPankajam, CHENNAI

Powerful images. But the "meaning" eludes me, though the poem does speak.-Malsawmi Jacob, Bangalore

Saturday, August 13, 2016

End Thinking

"where you were drowned one day in the eyes of the needle" Man.. That is awesome, Satish! - Noel Tapia

Friday, August 12, 2016

Where The Lies Are Born?

Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

In Search Of Peace

Super! I enjoyed reading your poem, "Jealousy: sand was under the nails. Now I will find the remains of an ocean in your eyes." Poetry!! - Lina Lotus

My Blue Valley Burns

Very sombre, very poignant, Satish ji. -GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Wednesday, August 10, 2016

I Will Not Come Back

You can not leap over the grass of antiquity.
Hats off for this precious nugget of wisdom. Thanks for sharing.10 + points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Some Ghosting

I'm not sure I understand it, but thanks for sharing.-Spock The Vegan

Unpretending

Unassuming and honest outlook towards life, beautifully portrayed. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Where The Lies Are Born?

Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

Tuesday, August 9, 2016

Mauled Self

Satish ji, a nice, challenging poem that takes the reader to the threshold of death. The emotional churning at that hour is expressed powerfully. - GSP Rao, Hyderabad



Monday, August 8, 2016

Wandering Jew

I especially loved: "you forget, how many fathers you have." It reminds me of the patriarchs of the bible... I don't know if that is what you mean or not, but I love the write. - Stephanie Mahlan

Saturday, August 6, 2016

REVISED VERSION

Nice verse "Meditating on the words and meaning, I read your face".-Louis Borgo

Wednesday, August 3, 2016

Where The Lies Are Born?

Beautiful! Beautiful! Your pieces are always emotion-filled, full of wonderful imagery, and I love that they are nature poems. You write effortlessly beautiful!-Mahal Ko Kuya Ko

Charity

This is one master piece. I had to read it more than 3 times to satisfy my thoughts. It has a mixture of emotions that turned my emotions into a spec of dust in a tornado. Really wonderful. Wish I could nominate it.-DarkLight

Meanness

this is powerful-authorAAA

I can't imagine where you get your ideas, but they're something to admire for sure.-abstractempo

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The Second Night

Wow .... Love your selection of words . Its was amazing.- Hamad Riaz

Monday, August 1, 2016

Body Becomes the Path

The enigma of life and death has always been insurmountable. The relentless probe continues.-GSP Rao, Hyderabad

Charity

This is one master piece. I had to read it more than 3 times to satisfy my thoughts. It has a mixture of emotions that turned my emotions into a spec of dust in a tornado. Really wonderful. Wish I could nominate it.-DarkLight