Matrix

Symphony
Dance steps, choreographed, have a feel of vibrant life. A little to the left, back, back, sway and recover what was in your hands all along. Look at the lines. Look, bring it before your face. Then bow, with grace. With an acceptance of what came before the note the flautist trilled thrillingly.-Lantz Pierre

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Valley Of Tears

stunning as always.-mesayers

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Constraints

I would love to know just what inspired this piece.. Left me wondering..
आश्चर्यजनक-Damaged Soul

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Aubrurn Dawn

"An auburn dawn wakes with swollen eyes.
I might find a lost child of the empty womb –
wandering in wilderness of three dimensional sorrow.
O mother! somewhere the roots are waiting!" ---- Very Nice ---- Stephen

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Voicelessly

Bone echoes soullessly. Cranial sutures require a certain level of maturity to be reached. Lacking that, a hat when it's cold.-Lantz Pierre

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Not Guilty

The trial of Socrates was a condemnation of truth. The repudiation of reporters doing their jobs is the death sentence of democracy.-Lantz Pierre

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After The Ceremony

The witnesses all wore blindfolds. Not because Medusa danced, but that the ointment might work. Might give respite. That sight, while the pupils were out driving in a rented Bugazzi, might find the brake.-Lantz Pierre

Once again you have amazed me with your lyricism your faultless word useage and the ebb and flow of your words thanks-Paul Brookes

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Dark Moonlight

Very unique and interesting word-smithing and fluidity. Love it.-Alissa Rogers

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What A Wrath

The French have a phrase for just such judgements: La petite mort. Something like the petty mortician. Never let a living thing stand in the way of imagination.-Lantz Pierre

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A Blackbird Will Not Sing

One more time the masses dance around each other, conjoined without embrace, held by science and released by love. Dang, this is such a sweet, heavy piece of resistance and assimilation.-Lantz Pierre

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Expanding

I love how you tie in this expansion, and even though dark matter and its effect on expansion remains theory, it just slams me as interesting. I too believe there will be no big crunch.. The metaphors are fabulous.-Damaged Soul

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Temple Of Hope

The tragic position of humanity is I feel brought to life here by your amazing imagery friend. A read which needs more than a glance as it deals with the state of guilt the masses have now attained.
-Fay Slimm

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*on 100th Birthday Of Alan Turing

well written. a respected tribute. thanks for sharing.-Madhabi Banerjee

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For Whom The Sky Weeps

You do not want to live in poverty
Comment: The richness of life infuses the silvered words stilled for a moment on the page, on the screen. This is sublime, as it reaches from the depths to the very heights, like from my dirty feet to the hair on my head that I will soon need to comb. Thank you for this pretty picture. I will frame it in a locket woven from green branches and wear it over my heart.-Lantz Pierre

very good.wellwritten poem.-Madhabi Banerjee

A complex poem. +++10.-Robert Murray Smith



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When Night Weeps

Gorgeous portrait moving through language to reveal what is within and examine the details that are not.-Lantz Pierre

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Tenderness

The space shrinks very amazingly here. Wisely penned poem!-Pintu Mahakul

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I Am Thinking

I enjoyed every word, but would like to know what inspired this work?-Damaged Soul

It's beautiful.. rich too-Albani

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Improbabilis

To believe in a utopia in a dystopian age is hard. Give love to your enemy or a hand yo your oppressor. Peot see with penetrative glance and you see more sometomes than most a vivid poem enjoyed thanks-Paul Brookes

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Snaky Paths

As usual a deep and interesting write making the reader consider each line. The jigsaw then comes together and the meaning then becomes clear. Your verses are a continued joy, thanks-Paul Brookes

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Pulsating Moods

A triplet of four stanzas.
Well written piece.
Thanks for sharing!

Sylva-Onyema Uba.-Sylva-onyema Uba

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The Mysterious Fire

i was a poem!
Comment: wow...i mean this is so beautifully penned....the personifications are so amazing here n eloquently written
Breaking the silence
I will reclaim the groped
virginity of stones, which
had witnessed unparalleled assault.
brilliant lines! ! !-Jaya Das

Another beautifully penned poem the line flow like honey it has an undercurrent and an edginess to it Great write Thanks-Paul Brookes

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Ultimate Death

Beautiful, powerful poetry. -Prabhu Bharathan, USA

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Crib Of Sun

I love the words in your poem: ". . . Indeed, he saddled himself with luxury
of oblivion. The success around him was most obstinate. . . . " very nice .-fbrew

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Hear My Voice

The house in on fire? Hm...i think the poem has really good potential. It is not specific and yet very specific and that is quite fascinating and will get any good readers to think more and that is very good. I would say also, make the last stanza four lines to make it look cleaner, but some poets like to make the last stanza a little more vague or sudden so it's okay if you don't want to add two more lines. Poetry is not limited to rules always. I really love the piece and would say keep writing, but perhaps organize the thoughts more.- nina 

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Improvising

'Like a snake girl,
the black tresses trailing
behind the heels.'

a rare beauty, time kept decades long tresses.-Terry Craddock

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MESSAGE from Paul Brookes (manchester United Kingdom

I hope I'm noy being too presumptious but ahvingI have been spent a most pleasent half hour reading some of your poems I cannot say what pleasure the have given me and how glad I am to have discovered your poetry talent. You have a wonderful way of weaving your words and the reader is never disappointed. I've written here because it would take to long to make individual comments on each work as the site is very slow at the moment. Thank you for the joy your poems have given me personally and I look forward to more from your golden pen Yours: O) Andy-Paul Brookes

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The Thinning Faith

This poem blew away my thoughts it is so profound and so well written it was a joy to read thanks-Paul Brookes

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Ripple Effect

Every verse resonates with this very day.
Specifically the second one, seeing as I'd earlier been perceiving the beaches sand; the Sun exposing its true caramel and gray, then the lack of Sun - when a cloud came by - taking on a beige, a black and a gentle blue.

You must be a shaman.-abstractempo

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No Vilification

Now, I don't cry over spilled milk but...
This was interesting. I could try to assess this logically all day but I won't get any where. The ambiguity adds to the charm. I could imagine this being part of some sort of short, abstract film or a part of a movie that's repeated to show significance to the plot. I did enjoy the mystery of trying to figure this out. The line "Golden knife?" seems to stand out to me for some reason.--OGTheGreat 

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Improvising

'Like a snake girl,
the black tresses trailing
behind the heels.'

a rare beauty, time kept decades long tresses-Terry Craddock

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Some Question Marks

If question marks have to leave, let them. I enjoyed reading the poem. Time and again I remind myself of those who make ezines like these possible with their unobtrusive contribution...cannot thank you enough.-Supratik Sen, Kolkata

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Unmoving

Indeed, poetry is an investment for posterity.
Good imagination, good thought, good poetry. -Sylva-onyema Uba

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The Stings

Momma told me
Just at the moment that things get really hot is the moment when one must wonder if they are or are about to regret that awesome, atomic infusion of energy. Or whether the pit viper will strike. I wonder.-Lantz Pierre
This is an imaginative poem replete with imagery.-Robert Murray Smith

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Half – Being

Very good questions finalize this lament against alienation. Another compelling read from your talented pen Satish.- Fay Slimm

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All The Empty Hands

The Moon

and a bottomless lake - a cross-sensational image permeating spectra of time and the elemental - wondrous line - allets

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Ninth Month

Such an interesting write, lots of food for thought as all your writes are-well done.-Brenda

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Pick Up The Dawn

I liked this quite a bit. It had a very earthy vibe to it. Which, considering the category it was submitted under, is quite fitting!-Kurt

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Faces

A lot of food for thought-well done.-Brenda

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