The house in on fire? Hm...i think the poem has really good potential. It is not specific and yet very specific and that is quite fascinating and will get any good readers to think more and that is very good. I would say also, make the last stanza four lines to make it look cleaner, but some poets like to make the last stanza a little more vague or sudden so it's okay if you don't want to add two more lines. Poetry is not limited to rules always. I really love the piece and would say keep writing, but perhaps organize the thoughts more.- nina
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