The Massive Glory

so deep, even excavated line by line
this worded fountain of insightful wisdom
shan't ever be unfurled in its entirety,
testimony to how you've tamed
such a wide ranging, yet focused - study
with practised skill of brevity and conveyed sincerity
whilst managing to deliver, such acute commentary.-L. B. Mek

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Flying In Vacuum

So much In that ? Reminds me of something from native American channeling thank you!-5winds

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The River Between Us

The last stanzas sums up this poem quite well. We have to be careful the paths we decide to take.-Poetic Beauty

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Inauthentically?

Intriguing::
"don't want to be separated
from my half-eaten moon."
"Hallucinatory- be seduced for the sake of fashion."
"In anguish I watch
the terror was becoming a religion."
"Someone commands me?
to sacrifice my pen."

it seem the question mrak in last quote is a glitch. -BOB GALLO

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Love Me Again

Satish, the sun is always chasing after the moon for the pranks she plays on him. Once in a while, the moon will blot out the sun just to run and hide from him again. I’ve always seen the sun as a he, and the moon as she, and this could be why man sees the moon as romantic and the sun as unforgiving. Love on the other hand is as shaky as this history. You can't have one without the other, and both will nurture the earth and its inhabitants just like good parents.-Matthew Bill, USA

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Brooding Over You

I like be the description in this poem. The first two really caught my attention.-Poetic Beauty

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Nursing Our Hurts

I must say, now I can grasp your lines Dr Satish. Undoubtedly, your journey of witnessing so many years hasn't gone futile. This poem describes my mindset so very accurately. Never wanting to become a devil just because our Creator made us go through tests for our good. Yes diamond cuts diamond but violence only creates violence. It's a beautiful morning read for me.-Tahsin (Taah-scene)

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Mesmerized

“Wrapped up, I give
you my heart, still throbbing
without the rib cage.“

You take the most cliche, most used imagery and turn it with your magic into a captivating, original line.-nourayasmine

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Mode Of Dying

You. write. like. no. other.
I don’t even need to know what you mean, what I get from each one of your writings is a hella lotta meaning.-nourayasmine

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Pure Mundanity

Yes, I know. We all are.-nourayasmine

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Sorting Out

To me this sounds like a love that is fading, people becoming distant with each other.-Poetic Beauty

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I Was Your Destiny

that graduation of age
brown-mark tagging, shrivelled opportunity
upon once pudgy, squeezy cheeks
of untameable beginning's, to all of potential'
far too quick: we blink...-L. B. Mek

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Out of Fire

Hej, Satish, thanks for the images in your poem. I have to pause and find out what you mean. Beautifully written.-Elizabeth Olesen, Denmark

Satish, you have left me in deep thought and in a sad mood. With one high note, one match struck many times looking for the meaning of your sorrow, of a burnt-out passion. Peace be with you!-Matthew Bill, USA

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Lioness In Cloak

Beautiful expression...tears in tones
Your slanting eyes
will not drop the legacy of giving
away. It brings tears in stones.

Lovely poem Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Felled Over Yourself

lovely piece, sir-Ujjal Mandal, Ganguria

Lovely lines...
Pain was not responding
to music of night songbird

Beautiful as always Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Acid Test

What a long strange “trip it’s been” a line in a song by the Grateful Dead.-Poetic Beauty

Once again SV, wonderful imagery; surreal mystery.-John Cardwell

Hello, Satish! :)
I think I sort of get a meaning to this, but I'm not sure, it turned at section four.
I really liked the line - "you snatch away the echoes."
Thanks for sharing.-mattavelli

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Is it togetherness?

Beautiful.-rebmasters

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Don't Remember Me

 Lovely lines...

No outsider will witness
the fire of Ganges.

Beautiul poem Satish ji.-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Infatuation

'Necrosis of old arches
follows the juvenile genius'..
such a targeted use of purposed imagery, clinical in its delivery and meaningful in its brevity
a great read.-L. B. Mek

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A Moon Dance

Nice...-Padma, Hyderabad

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Poverty Was Beautiful

worded depiction of the virtues extracted, from a chosen life of simplicity
where searching humility reigns supreme
and self-love: is no mere act of vanity..
yet another wonderful read.-L. B. Mek

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The Smiles Are Disappearing

Parts of this sounds like a soldier being laid to rest. Someone who is not known to others mourns alone.
Just my thoughts on this piece.-Poetic Beauty

Hello, Satish! :)
I had trouble catching the meaning for much of this, but it reads like a storm is coming. Thanks for sharing.-mattavelli

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Pain And Endurance

"weave a dream"
Nice idea
BLACK LIVES MATTER-allets

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Glass Cutting

beautiful! thank you for sharing!-brianna jean zeiger

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Diet Of Tears

Lovely and clever poem-Mark Gittings, UK

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What Were Certainties?

Man can be destructive and judge mental.-Poetic Beauty

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Light Was Failing

I thoroughly enjoyed the poem. The flow is superb. Thanks for sharing-Wanderer

You are a master of image and mystery! I thoroughly enjoy your work. Thanks for sharing.-John Cardwell

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Capturing You

Lovely poem Satish ji!

Very beautiful expression...
Tearful I want
to unsee the black light.

I simply loved the poem!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

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Made On Earth

Beautiful write, message carried well.-Moon Fairy

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Diet Of Tears

such great imagery! poetry
of tears trapped within cacti of bitter goodbye
and when you look up
for that last threadbare ark of a guiding light:
'Myriad stars compete
with me to know my
worth in dark. A rolling
death of swans has dried up the lake.'-L. B. Mek

Fabulous imagery, feels totally novel and unexplored. Really like the creativity.-Brimelow

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No Coincidence

Satish, That’s kind of how I feel paying the electric bill.-matthew Bill, USA

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Was It A Warning?

Nice one SV! The imagery, the mystery - beautiful. I hope all is well. Take care.-John Cardwell

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Thinking Haikus

Three splendid haikus' Satish.-Pauline Miller, U.K.

As only the phosphor can do, ponder the violence of ruins ending in peace under the silence of stars I could go on forever but alas the storm is still raging in my the neck of the woods. Enjoyed!-Matthew Bill, USA

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No Tears

This line really makes me feel sad...

My life was just
like my poems written in dark.

Your poems are not written in the dark rather they fill me with great sense of hope and optimism whenever I read them. I am a very regular reader of your poems and a great fan too.

Thanks for sharing your beautiful poems always Satish ji!-Giti Tyagi, Karnal

Beautiful imagery!! Makes it to be reread again to be reread...-Bhagyashree Mishra, RANCHI

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