GREEN EYES
a poem to ponder...
violence begets violence...a never-ending process
can we bring about change without violence? ...i wish
i like your poems...
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Sunday, December 30, 2007
Wednesday, December 26, 2007
ychinesepoem
VALLEY OF TEARS
In silence,to feel the muse .I like ""it is a lone journey, where centuries throw the dust on your hallowed gifts""most.
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In silence,to feel the muse .I like ""it is a lone journey, where centuries throw the dust on your hallowed gifts""most.
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Tuesday, December 25, 2007
Genevieve
O GOD ARE YOU LISTENING?
God is everywhere, always awake, never sleeps to watch over us. He knows our fears and cries when His people get astray. I know HE IS LISTENING! Wonderful write!
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God is everywhere, always awake, never sleeps to watch over us. He knows our fears and cries when His people get astray. I know HE IS LISTENING! Wonderful write!
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rizalbob
CONTRAST
rizalbob
I'm thick-headed. Can't place what you are trying to convey. Why do poets talk in vieled speeches and make readers guess what they are trying to say?
Reply to rizalbob by kantasatish@gmail.com
Is it veiled or disturbing you? Some thing is left unsaid. It shakes you to think. One world or a sentence keeps on haunting. I am not talking about myself bot of good poetry. Whole humanity is passing through a convulsive phase. We have to find the truth ruthelessly. Poem reflects the agony of uncertainty. What is the compulsion to say something? I think I am able to tell my view point.
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rizalbob
I'm thick-headed. Can't place what you are trying to convey. Why do poets talk in vieled speeches and make readers guess what they are trying to say?
Reply to rizalbob by kantasatish@gmail.com
Is it veiled or disturbing you? Some thing is left unsaid. It shakes you to think. One world or a sentence keeps on haunting. I am not talking about myself bot of good poetry. Whole humanity is passing through a convulsive phase. We have to find the truth ruthelessly. Poem reflects the agony of uncertainty. What is the compulsion to say something? I think I am able to tell my view point.
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ychinesepoem
I SEE MY OWN DEMISE
What fine poems! I'd like to read them. Share your beautiful words and beautiful stories with us, then dread has no time to bother you.
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What fine poems! I'd like to read them. Share your beautiful words and beautiful stories with us, then dread has no time to bother you.
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Sunday, December 23, 2007
mintchocol8chick
DEAD FAITH
Your use of metaphor is other-worldly. The comparisons you draw are very imaginative (for example, ""the old silence becomes teeth of a dead faith"") and powerful. I enjoy your poems.
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Your use of metaphor is other-worldly. The comparisons you draw are very imaginative (for example, ""the old silence becomes teeth of a dead faith"") and powerful. I enjoy your poems.
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Saturday, December 22, 2007
mintchocol8chick
SATURN WILL SHORTLY RISE
This is kind of bizarre and very wonderful.
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This is kind of bizarre and very wonderful.
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Friday, December 14, 2007
hedges776
SUICIDES
One could speculate that ""suicide"" is merely ""accelerating"" the arrival of the 'inevitable'. It is a certain 'shortcut' for those who are tired of waiting for their 'transistion of Energy Form' ... ... and the act is often beneficial to many (or at least some of the surviving) living Beings. By way of example only, I pose this question: ""Would it have been 'disturbing', or 'bad', if Adolf Hitler had committed suicide instead of invading Poland those many ears ago?"" Satish, YOU are an interesting Human; an interesting writer; I enjoy reading the whispering of your interesting Brain. I interpret your communicative writing in this Poem as conveying there can be valid reasons for Beings to employ that available 'shortcut'(suicide). Please correct me if my above assessemt is incorrect.
Reply to hedges776 by Satish Verma
Suicide is a dialogue with death, a confession of guilt, the atonement for the crimes of society. I know about my small city in India. The uneven growth has spurted the suicides. The lake is real, the deaths are real. Hitler was a paranoid. It could have been much better, had he gone earlier. I endorse yours views. Thank You edit
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One could speculate that ""suicide"" is merely ""accelerating"" the arrival of the 'inevitable'. It is a certain 'shortcut' for those who are tired of waiting for their 'transistion of Energy Form' ... ... and the act is often beneficial to many (or at least some of the surviving) living Beings. By way of example only, I pose this question: ""Would it have been 'disturbing', or 'bad', if Adolf Hitler had committed suicide instead of invading Poland those many ears ago?"" Satish, YOU are an interesting Human; an interesting writer; I enjoy reading the whispering of your interesting Brain. I interpret your communicative writing in this Poem as conveying there can be valid reasons for Beings to employ that available 'shortcut'(suicide). Please correct me if my above assessemt is incorrect.
Reply to hedges776 by Satish Verma
Suicide is a dialogue with death, a confession of guilt, the atonement for the crimes of society. I know about my small city in India. The uneven growth has spurted the suicides. The lake is real, the deaths are real. Hitler was a paranoid. It could have been much better, had he gone earlier. I endorse yours views. Thank You edit
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Angeldeath
SUICIDES
This is a bit disturbing, but in a good way. Suicide is not the way to solve anything. It only causes more problems for everyone else. Another good write. Angeldeath Adam
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This is a bit disturbing, but in a good way. Suicide is not the way to solve anything. It only causes more problems for everyone else. Another good write. Angeldeath Adam
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Wednesday, December 12, 2007
Buchi
SEARCH
I read this poem of yours several times trying to bring before me the event you portray there. pain is event and existence of gangerene which could mean amputation reminds me of my stories and the tears people have had to live with. great poem.
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I read this poem of yours several times trying to bring before me the event you portray there. pain is event and existence of gangerene which could mean amputation reminds me of my stories and the tears people have had to live with. great poem.
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Wednesday, December 5, 2007
Poetica
TRACKS
I was reminded of words from the Bible when I read this piece....The imagination of man is evil continually, they had become wicked and destructive which is why God destroyed them, but he preserved a remnant... very thought provoking.
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I was reminded of words from the Bible when I read this piece....The imagination of man is evil continually, they had become wicked and destructive which is why God destroyed them, but he preserved a remnant... very thought provoking.
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Tuesday, December 4, 2007
nitepoet
BELL?S PALSY
I have been in the clutches of Bell's Plasy recently. Luckily it is the tail end of this horrible nightmare as my facial feautres are finally close to being back to normal. The drooping has cleared, the eye can now close on it's own and no more eye drops are needed. and today the doctor said the twitching will soon disappear..
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I have been in the clutches of Bell's Plasy recently. Luckily it is the tail end of this horrible nightmare as my facial feautres are finally close to being back to normal. The drooping has cleared, the eye can now close on it's own and no more eye drops are needed. and today the doctor said the twitching will soon disappear..
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Monday, December 3, 2007
Roger Cornish
A TEAR DROP
Thank you so much for a Wonderful Poem.
Your truly gifted!
Roger.
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Thank you so much for a Wonderful Poem.
Your truly gifted!
Roger.
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Sunday, December 2, 2007
Shava, Angeldeath, Shiralley arzish
NO ANSWER
Shava
Losing someone can be hard. Especailly when you never find out why the left in the first place. Makes me sad though because I'm going through an emotional time right now and everyones writing poems about losing people but I liked it. ~!*!~sHaVz~!*!~
Angeldeath
This is a very intresting poem, I like how you played out the words, I too wonder... Where did the moon go. Great write Angeldeath Adam
shiralley arzish
you are good at words .loved the poem. regards sherry
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Shava
Losing someone can be hard. Especailly when you never find out why the left in the first place. Makes me sad though because I'm going through an emotional time right now and everyones writing poems about losing people but I liked it. ~!*!~sHaVz~!*!~
Angeldeath
This is a very intresting poem, I like how you played out the words, I too wonder... Where did the moon go. Great write Angeldeath Adam
shiralley arzish
you are good at words .loved the poem. regards sherry
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