GENOCIDE

A very dark reality poem. The stark naked truths are shockingly amazing just as your imagination. You are a true poet in all the glory of the meaning of the word. Thank you for publishing on here. You are a delight to read. Diamond.- diamonddagger

you have such deep insight into the realities of life that at times it scares me but never ceases to amaze and astound me.- baj-a

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A BIG IDEA

Who Knows What Those Dirty Untinkable Words Were, Sweet Beautiful Satish ? Perhaps, They May Have Been Somewhat Similar Unto Something That Lucifer Might Have Said Long Long Ago And Far And Far Away, Right Before He And His Crew Started Tumbling From The Stars ? Either Or, Tis Wonderful To Read Your Lovely Beauty Again And Just Another Intense Painting As van Gogh By Your Treasures ˜ My Love, Always- Rachel St.Cross

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OF TIME AND CHAINS

the powerful images you make with your words leave me in awe of your ability as a writer. I especially love the line downstairs moon was sleeping... wow!- baj-a

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CONNIVED

Loved that last line... Well written- ANGEL DUST

This is a wonderful write. Congrats Verma !- WILLIAMSJI

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FAITHLESS HANDS

the entire poem is filled with truth but the last two lines are the truest of all! we do play in sand and yes, it will be hunger that decides the fate of the earth. always inspired by your poetry.- baj-a

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Give Me

Last two lines tug at my heart, I agree with Dorothy, may your memories by healed.- LightH2O

A very touching the heart verse...I send you a prayer to heal the wounds... Dorothy Singing Still- Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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UPRIGHT MIRRORS

Very interesting loved it.- SuperSlimJim

Good write, Sathisverma Congrats williamsji maveli- WILLIAMSJI

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JUXTAPOSED

magnificently sad. "by your absence I will live in the bones of tangled bodies" this is so well written that I loved reading it. I told you, I love your work. I could read it all day if I didn't have so much to do. diamond- diamonddagger

profoundly sad and strong... give me a piece of your body... wow! amazing work here!- baj-a

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CONDEMNED

"Between brothers, the greed calls for incendiary attacks, for total annihilation" ..."No night was safe from the condemned suicide. " very painful, only purest light of love can extinguish these memories, but it can't changed what happened... a loving hand in support for you.-LightH2O

Awesome! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing- Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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CITY OF STONES

Much pain and turmoil displayed- LightH2O

Vivid raw imagery.- just Arun

I cried...it hurt. I felt the thorns and can almost see my own tendons hanging off of them. I will never forget your words here...or maybe i will try to forget...they were that good.- Jenessis

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ANOTHER STROKE

the horror of the scene is so vivid in the words you write. I am so pained by the words I cannot even find words to describe how deeply it has affected me.-baj-a

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FAILURE

Profound. Reading this, I was reminded of the defaced and plundered
6th Century Buddhas of Bamiyan (Afghanistan) - handiwork of intolerant elements...
Great metaphors, great poem this Mr. Verma.- Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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FAIRY RINGS

A powerful poem containing much food for thought Satish.- Fay Slimm

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HE

Wow! very power packed poem. I felt as though I were reading about a prophet. Well written as usual.- diamonddagger

I have to agree with everything diamonddager said. this is another wow! poem.- baj-a

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PUSSYFOOT

Your poems often go over my head. They are to me, like a beautiful puzzle
that I'm not sure I want to solve.- LindaM 

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THE END

your poetry always has a deep impact. always profound. that last line is really strong!- baj-a

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NOW YOU KNOW

Pathless destiny.....- seema chowdhury

Painfully wounded, I hope is not your spirit crying with this pain and it's just a poem.- LightH2O

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ANCIENT SINS

beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!- Funom Makama

A poem written by a talented writer, Satish Verma! - Wishing you a lovely weekend in the sunshine. -Anne Lise Andresen

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LOST MEANINGS

Sir,very insightful verse.Warm regards . -E.Vishnupriya, Bangalore

Acts of violence nicely crafted in the poem of beauty. -ChandraThiagarajan, Chennai 

Amazing and insightful poem! The mindlessness and meaninglessness of violence excellently articulated. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india

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LIES

I like the ending making this almost seem like a strange dream, or maybe the awakening and realization of real life?- LightH2O

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DESTINY

Amen to that last line! nobody is blameless!- baj-a 

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MILLENNIUM CELEBRATING

Sir,most of your poems drive home hard core truth/your philosophies of life so is this poem.The second stanza of this poem is appealing. -E.Vishnupriya, Bangalore

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REMINISCENCE

your poems take me to a place that is not always comfortable but is always honest even in it's stark reality of life. very well penned!- baj-a

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ART AND DESIRE

as always a powerful and insightful poem- baj-a

I love your poetry. Very well penned. Very power filled poem.- diamonddagger

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THE VIGIL

This is an excellent work. Congrats to the author. Regards- WILLIAMSJI 

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FUTURE HIDES

Your lines capture the feelings and observations I'd had, yet they manage to escape while you're able to capture them and expose them for us to admire and recollect, almost like you would pin a beautiful and rare butterfly with it's wings opened and pinned down in display. "It should not have come early; the death, had insulted the terrible suffering" love your lines; "When nobody was there truth was walking with me..." I cannot quote your whole poem back but each line is deeply felt and appreciated.- LightH2O

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ANOTHER TOMORROW

"seeking liberty to commit a sin or feeling liberated after committing the sin" you don't mess around by getting right down to the real questions. "My journey begins into time to change into another tomorrow" That's about the extent of if, you so wisely capture these great lines time after time. Gracias!- LightH2O

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MOMENT

"False pretensions keep you alive amidst the crowd, the only art of rebellion in the depths of despair." gripping declarations a blunt truth. "A procession of self-styled prophets marched in the wrap of chosen blessed to find the antique non-movement of the moment!" It doesn't get any more true than this. TFS- LightH2O

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DAY OF JUDGEMENT

Morning, Sir. I really liked this write. Really "felt" the ending. Have a marvelous week.- Lady Dragonwyck

Wonderful use of metaphor in this splendid write.-LindaM

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SLAIN ROSES

I like the way you use words to make scenes come to life and make the reader face the reality of the world. excellent write.- baj-a

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STONED

The sad news really makes one as a stone! ! -ChandraThiagarajan, Chennaic

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FUTURITY

very effective words and well written. the end is so sad and so honest.- baj-a

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LABYRINTHS

Very compelling and beautifully crafted poem- LindaM

Many pathways taken, tried, used, and hopefully lessons learned.- Lady Dragonwyck

a good poem- sammie bagley

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FARTHER AWAY

intriguing and mysteriously delicious!- baj-a

awesome!! I especially like the second verse. It is very deep and soul searching.- diamonddagger

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EXILED

This exudes much inner pain..."exiled myself within me...learns to be silent... suffering of absurdism I am still caged in" kingdoms fall and rise all to the same old end.- LightH2O

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WITHOUT QUALMS

Beautiful write .Enjoyed much.-Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai

Blessed with poetic talent. Whatever you write has metaphorical dimensions.-UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala

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FORGIVES THE PAST

Beautiful images.- LightH2O

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LIKE A CHINESE LANTERN

Sir; very vivid, though softly written. Always LOVE your writes. Have a wonderful weekend. - Lady Dragonwyck

your poem was a good poem i enjoyed the read.- sammie bagley

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*IMPACT

Read and recorded forever. Csaste as time, interesting notion -Blacpoet

Dear Satish Verma, Ni hao. Good Women's History Month to you. Thanx for an excellent read and entry, without poets like you, where would the world be. Very generous and gracious of you, as usual, I've been known to say, poetry is of the ear, tonally or atonally embracing the heart's..., only an echo reaches the mind's eye, your poem allowed me to know we’re heard, yes, great listeners like you, who've been to their share of poetry readings, events, know; I've been to over a 100, I think that also improves the ear? Yes, that would be a beautiful upon reading collaborative poem. Thanx again. "Painting is poetry which is seen and not heard, and poetry is a painting which is heard but not seen." ~ Leonardo da Vinci. For those interested :) "of or pertaining to the morning, day :) relating to or happening in the morning or in the early part of the day ( formal ), (Mid-16th century, from late Latin matutinalis, from Matuta, goddess of the dawn.)". Thanx for all you do! Enjoy a festive eve' as you can. Ciao, for now. Matutinally Yours, james m nordlund reality (aja) :)- Request review

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FROZEN

you have such a beautiful way with words. I love the imagery of your work. to resist, rebel or kill....very powerful words. Very powerful poem. Enjoyed, have a happy day.- diamonddagger

I can only add a ditto to what diamonddagger said :-). very powerful and skillfully written.- baj-a

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ETERNITY

you have such a strong grasp on the use of imagery that your poems come to life on the page. I love the pearl drops on your upper lip... wonderfully enchanting.- baj-a

This poem is filled with beautiful imagery. I also loved the pearl drops on your upper lip....I could picture it. Well written. Have a happy day.- diamonddagger

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CHESSBOARD

Amazing write! the title drew me in as I am a chess player... very powerful poem.- baj-a

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DROUGHT IN RIVERBED

beautiful said, and insightful- Anthony DiMichele

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BETWEEN THE NAMES

Lines bearing deep meaning... I love it sir.-Utpal Moran

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BEAUTIFUL

This poem, like all your others is so eloquently written.- LindaM 

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BURNING IN

dang...- carol montgomery

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ODE TO LONELINESS

A very good command over your vocabulary, an excellent way to desribe- Arya

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WOODROSE

Wonderful piece.- Blake Hightdudis

Beautifully crafted and worded.- LindaM

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SYMPHONY

powerful strong images created with your words! I can feel sadness and despair in every line.- baj-a 

very deep and powerful poem. I enjoyed it very much. Well written. have a happy day, diamond- diamonddagger

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FRACTURED TIME

The imagery and wording is beautiful and on point. Great work!- abbylovesf

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DEPARTURE

truly and amazing and provocative write. so many feelings wrapped up in your beautiful words.- baj-a

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SLEEPING BUDDHA

your poetry humbles me! you writings are only what I can dream and aspire to accomplish some day. so beautiful and gentle and yet so powerful.- baj-a

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LIFE’S TOAST

Beautiful poetry.....- Kahlia Mazacalletti

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ENIGMATIC

Perhaps One Day You Shall Stand Amid The Highest Heaven Within 'Their Loving Arms,' Sweet Beautiful Satish ˜ Then Your Beauty Shall Have Truly Met, 'God.' ˜ Yet, I Do Relate Quite Deeply Unto Your Precious Heart's Profound As Applicable Verse; Kudos ˜ My Love, Always- Rachel St.Cross


KEEP WRITING TO ATTRACT THROUGHOUT POEM FROM FIRST TO LAST.YOU HAVE STARTED WITH FLOW BUT LOST AT LAST SIX LINES THOUGH IT IS GOOD.BUT IT WILL BE ATTRACTIVE WHEN POEM MAINTAINS FLOW FROM FIRST TO LAST WITH R THYME,FLOW AND RHYMES.OPEN VERSE POEM IS NOT FOND OF ASIANS.- sarojkumar khan

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ANOTHER NAME

A passionate verse! I hear the echo of your tears... Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing- Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2

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YOUR WAKING HEAD

you are so good with your words in your writes i enjoy reading your poems- sammie bagley

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A Saint Between Us

I like it. Interesting & poetic no doubt though I do not understand it fully.- Sharbaaniranjan Kundu

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RAGING KINDNESS

what a powerful and poignant write! exceptional work here! that last line is very strong and emotional. well written!- baj-a 

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LISTENING

Good poem. Sometimes we want to close our ears to these screams, because they are part of a living nightmare...- David de la Croes

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Salvaging

Great write, I like it. Pls read my poems and comment- Babatunde Aremu

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I TRUST

"I do not exist" ~ I recently wrote these words myself. Excellent poem.- Anthony DiMichele

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WANDERER

wow! poignant write! you really draw the reader in with the power of your words.-baj-a

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APPLE PICKING

i liked this a good poem-sammie bagley

Sir: I read this several times and each read went deeper into my Soul. I sincerely "felt" this write. - Lady Dragonwyck

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CIRCLE OF GLORY

Weaver, faked skin...orange...mmm .... Fake tan as no sunlight? ... Or fake by day, real by night.... I love poems like this.... It reminds me of another poem about living a lie- Some Girl

"The shadow was a terrorist on the terrace" I can identify with this line. Some lines are very clear but others make me wonder, wishing I could know exactly what you had in mind. Like who or what is the "weaver of faked skin?" knowing that would shed more light into this poem. TFS- LightH2O

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A CLEAN MURDER

and the purpose of it all?? Hopefully, to protect the rights and liberties of the innocent. Otherwise, it is indeed futile and blatantly wrong...- louis gander

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ODE TO LONELINESS

As always, I am awed by the sensitive connectivity of ideas and structural sound migrations and collisions - Blacpoet

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BON VOYAGE

The staircase is broken" and so am I, always so nice to read your work, thank you for being there for me my dear friend.-LightH2O

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Ending War

heralding the new moon. good poem. thanks.- Gajanan Mishra

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FOOTFALLS

Much food for thought, gripping lines. Thank you for all your assistance. Blessings!- LightH2O

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WHAT COMPARISON?

This write, as most of your others, are thought provoking and leave
me pondering your words. 'The walking trees start swapping the roots.'
I find that line most intriguing but can't say that I fully understand it.
The last two lines of the poem are very effective.- LindaM

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AWARENESS

Enjoyed your very expressive and creative work..- Sara Kendrick

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LAKE SONG

Very interesting and nicely done! - Last Temple Knight

i loved your poem.- sammie bagley

wow. very interesting write. Love.- heart song

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