Perhaps One Day You Shall Stand Amid The Highest Heaven Within 'Their Loving Arms,' Sweet Beautiful Satish ˜ Then Your Beauty Shall Have Truly Met, 'God.' ˜ Yet, I Do Relate Quite Deeply Unto Your Precious Heart's Profound As Applicable Verse; Kudos ˜ My Love, Always- Rachel St.Cross
KEEP WRITING TO ATTRACT THROUGHOUT POEM FROM FIRST TO LAST.YOU HAVE STARTED WITH FLOW BUT LOST AT LAST SIX LINES THOUGH IT IS GOOD.BUT IT WILL BE ATTRACTIVE WHEN POEM MAINTAINS FLOW FROM FIRST TO LAST WITH R THYME,FLOW AND RHYMES.OPEN VERSE POEM IS NOT FOND OF ASIANS.- sarojkumar khan
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