AFRAID OF UNKNOWN

unknown is scary... well said.- seema chowdhury

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AWAY FROM HOME

thanks for sharing.- Poet Destroyer A

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BOAT CAPSIZES

The girl friend of my youth!- leafsailor

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BLACKENED CROZIER

A meaningful write.- Seema chowdhury

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MOURNING

wonderful... Do you have a blog? or website?-viviane leite

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DEBTS OF GRATITUDE`

Keep on writing, thanks for sharing.- LightH2O

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KLEPTOMANIAC

we all are kleptomaniacs! we like to have the game but not the name?- nimal dunuhinga

there is a little KLEPTOMANIAC in us all it seems.- spysgrandson

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SCHISM

What horrific scene in the last stanza! still it is interesting to note the imagery of the poet!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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FROM DUSK TO DUSK

Another sad poem Satish. I pray you are well.- emilou

Some very grim images...- LightH2O

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GIVE ME SOME POISON TO LIVE

Sad, painful and perfect!- emilou

Oh yes, "the rose petals hurt now" When emptiness talks back it curses what wasn't done. But would you, could you have done anything any different to reach this point now? Darkness closes in now and the shadows of the trees in the night whisper the unforgotten into the deaf ears. The memory is sometimes like a sharp knife that cuts with precision. You must bleed in the end to be free of it. A poet friend...- Ron Poet

Simple pain of sadness complete- leafsailor

I hear you, I'm going through the same.- LightH2O

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INTROSPECTION

Your poetry moves me, you are very talented.- Kahlia Mazacalletti

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*DEPRESSION

Great poem.......moving and the words have such meaning.-Kahlia Mazacalletti

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DEATH ON GRASS

"Sometime, somewhere I will break into many moons" I love this line, it's mind boggling. Best to you!- LightH2O

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Rampage

Drag out the light. Great. thanks.
I invite you to read my poems and comment.-Gajanan Mishra

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LIVE BAITS

Nice write... feel a certain empathy ... liked the images... - Mehnaz Veetil

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IN INWARD ALONENESS

So sad, this inward lonesomeness is as winter, which burns everything inside. A good promise of the beach of immortality gives some hope.- LightH2O

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WORDLESS SILENCE

I've been reading most all of your poems. This one I put near the top. It's good. Quite often it's wiser to watch the 'walk' and not listen to the 'talk'... Talk is cheap - unless it's poetry of course :-louis gander

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OF A VIRGIN GOD

A solemn view of the incommensurable creation of your mind.-LightH2O

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FROM DUSK TO DUSK

Some very grim images...-LightH2O

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A GREEN PRIDE HAS NO AMBITION NOW

As usual your images and words go deep into the bone and spirit.- LightH2O

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FROM A DOT

Very nicely said.- justgs

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EACH THORN WAS CRYING

Original and interesting imagery on your lines. - LightH2O

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MANIA

this piece grows on me even though I am still deciphering it.. But I really like the last line.. 'I still follow the laws of kindness in filling the extended empty cups.' it speaks of hope, duty, and kindness even when the world around seems absurd and cruel..- Ailill,

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Speechless

You start spitting everywhere and on the face of God. good poem. thanks.- Gajanan Mishra

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DO NOT THROW DUST ON THE GRAVES

A beautiful deep write.- emilou g:)emotions in words

Deep!- LightH2O

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THE ECHO REACHES THE WHOLE SKY

You are such a gifted poet! You truly impress me with your writes!- emilou g:)emotions in words

Impressive work- Kibrom Habtu

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CAN YOU TAKE ME TO MY HOME?

Such deep heart felt lines.- LightH2O

Great penning with strong images.- narain, jay p.

"can you take me to my home, into abeyance" beautiful suspense! Amazing poem, I loved how it returns to somewhat the pass, then to the present, almost as if it were together ! truly brilliant !- esmeralda15

What a beautiful imagery you've made in this poem! Great write!- emilou g:)emotions in words

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COURTING FIDELITY

Satish,, good form and image...... enjoyed stopping by tonight~Always-Poet Destroyer A

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DEATH WAS VERY GENIAL

Keen observations of a deep feeling soul, "One has to pay for touching greatness" sending lots of good energy your way.- LightH2O

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I AM BURNING MY BRIDGES

Sad but an awesome write as always.- emilou g:)emotions in words

This is so sad, and the last stanza makes me wish you don't ever burn our bridges. Thinking of you and wishing you the best.- LightH2O

This is very powerful and so truthful in the metaphor of whats been written here...recommending.- Kaila George

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WITH LICORICE

Wow..I really like this write. The hierarchy will keep taking to become rich, leaving us to take only scraps..Loved your write and a keeper for me..Peace..- Mike Mezz

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A NAME OF CLEMENCY

Agree Sir. Old age doesn't deserve any clemency - it has to simply pass off - for one to pass away...! Thanks for sharing.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india

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VAPORIZATION

A very nicely phrased poem, love the last stanza, especially the last line and "pink sun". The structural reading confused me a bit, but I think that could just be a margin issue, if you widen the margins in the set up it might help. Enjoyed the read.- Shabetei

Well written. Very much enjoyed!- Troylato

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OTHER GOD WAS SLEEPING

Painting some pretty intriguing images.- LightH2O

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ACTUALIS

You're a master in your own game, which keeps me perplexed and coming back for more. TFS-LightH2O

The dance of the words on the meanings ,sparkle in sweet incoherence yet I see so completely, only you can do this.- leafsailor

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DARKNESS AT NOON

it's splendid. keep it up.- eyitayo lizzy

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EXITING

nice expressions, Vermaji. I solicit your comments on my poems.- Somanathan Iyer

every excellent poem..i love it- Wahab Abdul

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STAR STRUCK

Enjoyed this write!- Troylato

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New Dictionary

Satish "...the tiger has taken away the child...", your metaphoric poems rather it be of the Holocaust or war and the misuse of the so called 'supreme', brings life to the want of peace. May the heavens watch over the innocent.- Marcia Schechinger

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Weightless

weird but i like it- lee richards

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Judgement And Curse

Satish, you are a true wordsmith, mystic poet, to me your poems clamour in both love and disaffection, dischordant yet somehow alluring, like a child carrying a balloon and smoking a cigar, yet i admit, I hear where I want to. Cheers,-Dale Costello

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FALLING BRICKS

Loved this one. Keep the pen flowing!- Troylato

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THE WARS

Satish good words..- David Williams

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HISTORY WAS WALKING

This portrays so much pain, the one show of happiness which is the laughter is soon overshadowed by the body hanging on a noose. As someone once pointed out, that this world is not beautiful for how can it be beautiful when the tiger devours his pray. Perhaps we stand a chance as the spirit is liberated from this physical body. My best to you!- LightH2O

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ALONENESS OF FIRE

A meaningful write- seema chowdhury

That melody still enchants, so lovely the mystery of the sound- leafsailor 

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Earth's Intelligence

Greed seems to never die.- George Carroll

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Clawing night

A very fascinating poem wriotten in your inimitable abstract style, Mr. Verma! Thanks for sharing.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

A fascinating verse, sir. The last line- 'The slicing of time gives dividend to survivors' had one especially hypnotized. Regards, -Lasya Shashimohan, Bangalore

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ABDICATION

"A square root will find the squall, between the breaths." Enjoyed this one!- Troylato

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CROSSING THE DEAF

Satish I like your poem, but check your form ABC are consecutive letters of the alphabet...good poem though....David Williams

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ASIA AT THE EDGE

A good write Mr. Verma.. one that speaks of the truth- Sandra Martyres

Hmmm the simple truth of life well penned :)- Debs

You write the truth. Nicely put.- himanshi

we live in a world where BUDDHIST ARMY exists!- PrEmJi PrEmJi

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BALD SKY

"Without sound, I wanted to see the creation in nothing" so much said here.- LightH2O

a fine poem my friend. Thanks for sharing.- Elizabeth Squires

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KUPFERNICKLED

"Back pain will carry us not very far" that's for sure.- LightH2O

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CHASTE TREE

such deep thoughts make me wonder- LightH2O

A very profound write.. with much depth .....one that I will read again to get the full meaning.-Sandra Martyres

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Yours Only

Loved it..specially these words:

In your violet eyes
I will find a moon
for an encounter.

An alien wall comes up
between us. We cannot shed
the veils of clouds.-Vaishali

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MY TABOO

Very original. Very interesting. --David

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OF THE NEXT ZEN

Quite a deep write..Hugs- Raggedyann

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BLAZING TRAIL

beautiful- Chelium

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INTO THE LAIR

A creative Poem that's full of deep images! Thanks for sharing that on the soup... Have a good day, -Omneya Kamal

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DOVES HAD STOPPED FLYING

'solitude and silence come before the summary. I was responsible for myself.' this reminds me to spend more time with my thoughts. a poised and elegant reminder- Chelium

Doves had stopped flying. Great!- nimal dunuhinga

TFS your work.- Cat

an excellent poem on the theme of peace. Thanks for sharing.- Elizabeth Squires

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NOMENCLATURE

Hindu,,,a sage, a sadhu, a sane, never answers the call......Namaskara......- Tata

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UNRAVELLING

You poem is excellent, all this war around us, just don't make any sense. hugs, catie :)- Catie Lindsey

sounds like he was lucky to survive :) love - Elizabeth O'Driscoll

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GREEN RIVER

the color scheme is apt! any way what is green river? If i let my imagination to fly, it may knock many doors in the clouds!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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I WAS CLOSING THE WEEPING CHAPTER

you always amaze me, best to you- LightH2O

A poignant write- seema chowdhury

Ah ! This is painful to read through , yet again a fine satire from an expert slice of life .. Wow is my word.- Nikunj

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THE WHOLENESS

I have only one word for your poems Mr. Verma - profound! They sink in slowly and once they do, they hit me all over! -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, india

Good read from the master of abstract. Loved the mesmerizing metaphors. -Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad, india

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DOWNPOUR

the shadow cast so the light is known- leafsailor

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THE CALLER

Loved the second stanza of your poem very much, Mr. Verma! Thanks for sharing this powerful poem.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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Dreaming

Nice, but slapping the thoughts! Good!- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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DILEMMA

I will say this is full of expression of much pain,good to get it out;]- Weeping willow

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ECSTASY

Am I reading too much into this? hope not!- LightH2O

only you can do this ,this way .cool!-leafsailor

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THE DEBRIS

Scattered debris - well pieced together and nicely presented, Mr. Verma. Thanks for sharing.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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A LONE WARRIOR

well penned :) -Enchanted Raven

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SHARKS

Faraway a cuckoo sings a saddest song. I could hear from here and thanks!- nimal dunuhinga

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BURNS OF HATRED

Those painful burns of hatred alleviated only by those tulips in full bloom.- LightH2O

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SHAME AND FEAR

A most touching write, from all pain portrayed, I choose to focus on "Lilies were growing between the graves."- LightH2O

Thank you for sharing this.- sonnet130

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WILL YOU MARRY ME?

Such vivid creation, best regards to you.- LightH2O

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Judgement And Curse

Satish, you are a true wordsmith, mystic poet, to me your poems clamour in both love and disaffection, dischordant yet somehow alluring, like a child carrying a balloon and smoking a cigar, yet i admit, I hear where I want to. Cheers,-Dale Costello, Australia

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THE BUDDHA WAS GOING TO WEEP

Destruction... well written Satish!- Negative_TheFallen

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It does not matter

And the wheels rotate
along the path of history
mute witness to facts
a poet is thus born! -UK Atiyodi, Kandangali,Payyanur, Kerala

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LISTENING TO FORGIVE

Thanks for sharing this powerfully worded, meaningful poem Mr. Verma. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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TALL CLAIMS

Interesting write Satisi, love elizabeth- Elizabeth O'Driscoll

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Shadows

Struggling with it. Held my attention. - Steve .

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DEGENERATING

Deeper than deep once again Satish. Love grappling with these ones.- Steve .

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TOELESS JOURNEY

S., , thank you for sharing your poem, always :-) - Poet ~ Destroyer

I am not a pro on any form of poetry but...I know when I read a poem if I have enjoyed it. Now I have read yours and I have indeed enjoyed it Satish. I wish you a wonderful weekend and hope you find much inspiration to continue with your writing endeavors. Love, - Carol ~Sunshine~ Brown

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HISTORY

Very well written, enjoyable read .- Adri

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SHAME AND FEAR

Thank you for sharing this.- sonnet130

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FAILED PERFORMANCE

Satish, I am 19 years old and I know exactly what you mean with this- sonnet130

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UNREADABLE

An excellent write that I enjoyed reading today Satish. I hope to have more time in the future to read more. Love,- Carol ~Sunshine~ Brown

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Melt down

Amazing and profound, Mr. Verma. Respects. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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BY THE WORDS

A profound piece of poetry Mr. Verma - a commentary on terrorism in the Valley and other places...Thanks for sharing... -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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A VERY HURT POEM

Made me pause to reflect. Thank you- Don

thought provoking imagery. Yep, the streets are ripe with violence these days. Earth has posted a very unwelcome sign in massive block letters that have squashed all the dandelions. Excellent write my friend.- Nightowl

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BRAIN-DEAD

Need a bite
to eat
then wash it down
with little bits
of thirst- sstoth0 

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BY THE WORDS

A profound piece of poetry Mr. Verma - a commentary on terrorism in the Valley and other places...Thanks for sharing...- Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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A PAIN WITHIN PAIN

Amazing poetry you have shared with us Satish as always. I have enjoyed reading it this morning thank you. I will be back Monday to read more. I wish you a wonderful weekend full of sunshine and inspiration. Love- Carol ~Sunshine~ Brown

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ENUNCIATION

Satish .... you really have something to say, but unless you explain some of your poetry, everything will be misunderstood or even missed completely. This poems cries of an anguish that can not be heard by many because we all live in different worlds and people don't see the pain in yours. Having written my last comment and having received your reply, this poem I can understand better where you are coming from. Here, in the USA, we don't have those exact problems so to many of us ....they simply do not exist. You, however, know they exist because you live them daily. You need to open the world's eyes.

Please, comment on your poems and show people what you are saying.- e. Gene Myers

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SUICIDE NOTE

" Death walked in a sensual style" ... nice, real nice. You've captured the one element present in every suicide.- york2frisco

This is a dark and morbid piece...- Sandra Martyres

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ARCHIVES

Another great write... have a Happy Halloween...lol LightH2O

As always, your richly textured writing leaves me satisfied ... nd chilled. Well done.- york2frisco

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Shadows

Struggling with it. Held my attention. - Steve .

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DEGENERATING

Deeper than deep once again Satish. Love grappling with these ones.-Steve .

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THE BRIGHTENED FIRE

I do not believe that God wants us to treat His world with the disrespect that we do. We are the ones who desecrate His creations, not Him.

Satish,

I have trouble commenting on your poetry because I don't know where you are coming from in your writings.; the issues you are addressing, the life styles you are describing. It might help me, and others, if you would take time to explain your poems in the Author's Notes window just below the window where you post your poems. If I can't understand them, I can't comment on them. I enjoy reading them, I just don't understand them well enough to make an intelligent comment.- e. Gene Myers

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FROM THE CHERRY BLOSSOMS

amazingly written- PillowQueen

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ALONG THE SORROW

I loved this poem.My best wishes to you:)- Irena

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A FAMILY DUST

Strangely fascinating,
tossed from the silkiness of petals
to the desperation of pain...- Ann Waddicor

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SMELLS MURDER

You write wonderful , Satisverma
but this one doesnt really make sense to me

Why is this for you sacred poetry ?

Of course, thats a whole discussion by itself, but it would be wonderful to enter it!

For me this sounded a bit too dark,
indulging in the energies of destruction itself.
I know that murder happen.
I have always wondered why.
Why bad things happen.

I understand that life is decay and spring at once,
but like to talk about it, like to understand.

with love
~ eldyheart

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O LOVE

Very powerful and moving poem.- uncia2

Interesting write this morning..I have to take some time to contomplate (sp) this one..Hugs - Raggedyann

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ENTRANCED

HI Satish, an enjoyable read, Eddie, 5 stars,- Edwin Jepson.

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COLLECTING MILKWEED

Satish your title milkweed drew me as that is the poisonous plant but also gives a lot of soft cotton..well wriiten it is karma that what you do comes around. love and regards - Rita Singh.

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INTIMIDATION

Brilliant, give it to the world- Dale Costello.

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SOMALIA CALLING

A wonderfully strong poem SATISH. While I may not accurately interpret every line, I do appreciate the quality of the writing. Kind regards, - Linda Lee.

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THE WHEELS

Satish, it's sad when religion is used as an excuse to cause fear and havoc. Your last phrase, 'Religion was a proxy to kill ...' got to me- Jacinta Ramayah

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Praying Hurriedly

Satish your stark and realistic poems of war and the Holocaust are true visions of a scene so graphic and sorrowful that one can relate, even for a moment, to such madness. As always I bow before your 'exposed heart' and thank you for opening the scenes that we might reflect on those who died needlessly. Humbly yours, - Marcia Schechinger. 

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AFTER THE STORM

. . . the fallen seeds of night . . . each line is clarity and reaches out to touch - beautiful imagery, a nice place to walk - Blacpoet

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MOURNING BAND

Insight, being welcomed into the afterlife. Well written!- Scribe Marlon Linton

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BABY GOD

Interesting and diverse images, makes me wonder.- LightH2O

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TRUNCATED

hE HAS SPOKEN.. AND SPOKEN WELL,-Steve Chering

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THE TWILIGHT

So sad and interesting read this morning..-Raggedyann

Your images are painted with a fine brush and the shadows actually move for me - you are in a good place right now, seems - Blacpoet

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RAGING MOON

Enjoyed...well penned :) -Enchanted Raven

Enjoyed the read this morning..Hugs - Raggedyann

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INWARD JOURNEY

Each line so gripping and full of meanings that makes one think deep.-LightH2O

A bitter truth-seema chowdhury

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PACEMAKER

Gripping perceptions- LightH2O

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PROGNOSIS

The images are more cohesive for us lay persons out here . . . summer whispers. . . very beautiful way to be profound - Blacpoet

forgot to bookmark. this one is special - Blacpoet

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DISCLAIMER

A streak of clarity, on the surface, the view from the deep belongs to you yet - Blacpoet

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UNENDING

You have, of course, written your autobiography. I've outlined mine and filling in--alighting--a favorite word of mine in verse. Sensuous, this one - Blacpoet

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OD OF BLESSINGS

caldron of acrimony~~the absence of the plural caldron(s) creates a shorthand that pushes the reader elsewhere between the expected...troubling poem, lovely images and vocabulary - Be well and keep writing for us - Blacpoet

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AN ACID RAIN

A very sad situation indeed it is...!- T A Ramesh

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BLEMISHES

Each verse is a puzzle in itself for the reader to unravel.- George Carroll

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AGONY

That third stanza says so much, deep waters yet so clear.- LightH2O

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FORGETTING

Wow, interesting wordplay and theme! Very much in sync with my state of mind, i like how you twist these words together- Justin Debrosse

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BROODING

I lack the words but I'm listening.- LightH2O

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SICK TIMES

A universal tragedy that can be applied here and there.- LightH2O

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Adam's Mend

Verse befitting the great work of art. Thanks for sharing your skills in poetry which are always at their best, Satish ji. -Seshu Chamarty, Hyderabad

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GENERATION

I come from a blameworthy generation
We were sure the radio
would always play our music
We were sure the laws
would change in our favor- sstoth0

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A TUMULTUOUS WELCOME

I like your style of writing.
Very well done - Adri

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TIRELESSLY

wa'y to go Satish- Steve Chering

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PURE STEEL

Lovely and gripping, Satish! Some very 'exciting' phrases, like 'reaching the edge of poetry. I ask you to clamp my name' and 'the gash on the book was bleeding'. I love that, in a saddened, morbid se- Erin Kelly-Moen

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Wounded Path

The birth can be expressed this way! ! as usual nice!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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THE DEAD TIGER

Mindblowing sir... Short of words to comment...- Indranil Bhaduri

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WHO WAS SEEKING THE LIGHT?

Your wisdom is ahead of the times- LightH2O

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UNDERSCORING

The title points to the i.q. to create emphasis, no way to assess, o take note, to mark, to not achieve...it does what a title should - Blacpoet

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FREEDOM AT LAST

An excellent write.- Some Girl

What a freedom to enjoy after liberating the imprisoned past. Well penned Sir.- John Thomas Tharayil

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SHELLING UNCOUNTED

What a sad piece you have penned, yet, it is written very well. Thank you for sharing.- Kimber Turpin

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INTERRUPTED

Stanza 4 my fave!- James Marshall Goff

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HUMILITY

Satish...stanza 2 ends in genius fashion! - James Marshall Goff

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Acrimony

Wonderful images yet so sad. Kudos, Vermaji.- versetile

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UNDOING

Written with beaitiful abandon! Satish!  James Marshall Goff

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VIBRATIONS

I am a bit past the middle, I think, descending, yes - Yours In Writing,- Stella

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GOLDEN THRONE

Touching! best to you.- LightH2O

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DAY DREAMING

This is so beautiful, wishful and lovely.- LightH2O

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WINTER STORY

A sweet winter poem my friend- Varna Salunke

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NAMELESS

beautiful and thought provoking poem as usual! thank you for sharing!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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NO GRAND LANDING

This is very sad, you capture the emotion, but fantastically written.
Fantastic job!-Adri

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INADEQUACY

nice write Satish.- Richard Palmer

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THE PREDICAMENT

Really liked "a god mourns in fading light" -- great write; very soulful. Always enjoy your writes.- Lady Dragonwyck

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TOXIC

Sad portrail... lots of good wishes.-LightH2O

it is bad fighting against evils we can't see.. sometimes the battle scars us deep.. nice poem.. -Cat

Havoc wreaked in the name of god , mankind pays the price .-Nikunj

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EARTHLY WOUNDS

A scintillating thought that renovates my mind- rajat kumar

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JUGGLING

Very nice... A thought provoking write.- kash poet

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ONLY BEING

A thought provoking poem Satish. Thnks for sharing- Avril Meallem, Jerusalem Israel

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UNENDING WAR

Felt a lot of emotion and fear. As always, your excellent writing comes forth. -Lady Dragonwyck

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Pink eyes

A very powerful poem Satish. Thanks for sharing-Avril Meallem, Jerusalem Israel

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UNTILL I ARRIVE

...the glaciers decided not to melt away...at so many levels - nice line for me tonight..- Blacpoet

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LONGEST ECLIPSE

I just want to keep reading and reading your offerings - Blacpoet

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GOLD-TIPPED

Suicidal Gods, Batman! I blow away like winds of winds - Blacpoet

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WORDS OF NEVER BEING

my shadow will sit beside me and we will drink the pain~~solitude and beauty in one, alluring and illuminating for an okay writer..-Blacpoet

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COUPLING

The background selections are lovely - so are the synapes firing well and fine...-Blacpoet

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EVEN THE PLANETS

An interesting combination of words to render a surrealistic view of our surroundings.- Robert Pettit

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RELIGION

Thought provoking!-uncia2

So dark and absent the opposite for balance, tilted lines...unanticipated equals. My my...-Blacpoet

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CLUSTERED

Quite an interesting write. Your use of metaphors is great.- Robert Pettit

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IN THE NAME OF ………

Such a sad write...-Raggedyann

Tonight, nouns that hurt, healing requires too much energy...Stella

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JUDGEMENT

Very sensational judgement indeed! Thanks and regards.-K Pankajam, Chennai

Amazing Judgement...! Thanks for sharing Mr. Uniyal.-Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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FALLING

Dear Sir, Truth having become almost extinct, fakes have now reared their urgly heads. Redundancies or residue of fakes and slogans make morale extremely low.

The scenario of the present day has been portrayed well in the poem. Thanks for sharing. -K. Sadasivan, Chennai

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The Moon-ed ‘I’...

Nostalgic-LightH2O

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Guiled ‘me’...

Such gripping words and deep thoughts, blessings to you.-LightH2O

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AWARENESS

And such are the spoils of war. Even in its end, the pain never stops. Always a winner, always a loser. Maybe the wars would stop if everyone broke even. All dead ... no war. Certainly .... no winners. They only breed more wars.-e. Gene Myers

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ARTFUL PINCERS

Very well written piece, I really enjoyed reading the piece-dri

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WHAT ENDING

Very good work, Satish-Paul Judges

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IN ABEYANCE

excellent - A PAX

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Mask unmasked

A well-inked verse on a profound theme with an impressive title.-Gita Ashok

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REMINDER

Amazing, incisive poem, Mr. Verma! Respects. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P

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WHO WAS FAITHFUL?

Wwo intense write..Eva

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PREDATORY

Wow! - Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P, India

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I CANNOT WEEP

This is sad and makes on think...Huggs- Eva

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CATASTROPHE

last poem of the night to read, only the sea really knows salt so we go ask- leafsailor

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LIBERATION

I wanted to scream. Seeking a freeze on past.Future was stretching its arms. A calling.Erratic explosions? What a storm..Hope it ends soon..Smiles-  Eva

That last line, amazing!-uncia2

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Ancestral Present

poets have tasted the bitternes of the truth and this beautiful that is confirmed again thank you-Twistedchild

because you were necessary for my existence. What a great line!-nimal dunuhinga

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PROZAC

You have such a way of making everything sound so beautiful, "A beautiful collection of anxieties adorned on the shelf of life." "A cuirse in veins..."-LightH2O

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A LIVING SOUL

This is just so amazing you have so many great lines on this one. "I am, what I am not"...love the last 2 ending lines also.LightH2O

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IN THE NAME OF ………

Such a sad write...Eva

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A SEARCH BEYOND QUEST

You go beyond the beyond... so deep!-LightH2O

To fin remaining life..... well said.-seema chowdhury

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FAIRY TALE

INTERESTING FAIRY TALE HERE..mAKES ONE THINK..HUGGGS -EVA

Something a little different from you. Loved the opening strophe.-uncia2

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CONFERRED GUILT

Liked the last line. Interesting write...Eva

A very delicate touch in this powerful poem.-uncia2

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THE FROST

Do you think the day will come, when people will see that there is no need to search from an empty table?
I like this poem, it makes me see the seed of change is moving.-Dolphine29

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FOR THE CLOTTING

So very deep and sad...I could feel this one. -Raggedyann

Indeed, a lot of depth to all your poems.- uncia2

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SCULPTURING

The river between your poetry and my understanding is raging and there's no bridge that can get me to the other side. -Ronald Hull

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NO COMPLAINT

A great poem, as usual Mr. Verma. Thanks for sharing. -Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P 

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MOLTEN ANGER

As always, a fascinating poem. "shadows were losing their skeletons" - a line to really think about.-uncia2

Wow an intense poem here..Great job..Hugggs-Raggedyann

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PARADIGMS OF PROGRESS

So gripping and deep as usual, best to you.-LightH2O

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RELIGION

Thought provoking!- uncia2

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Can die

Your profound poem has so many layers Mr. Verma. I read it several times. Thanks for sharing. - Padmaja Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P 

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SOMALIA CALLING

A wonderfully strong poem SATISH. While I may not accurately interpret every line, I do appreciate the quality of the writing. Kind regards, -Linda Lee

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THE WHEELS

Satish, it's sad when religion is used as an excuse to cause fear and havoc. Your last phrase, 'Religion was a proxy to kill ...' got to me-Jacinta Ramayah

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Praying Hurriedly

Satish your stark and realistic poems of war and the Holocaust are true visions of a scene so graphic and sorrowful that one can relate, even for a moment, to such madness. As always I bow before your 'exposed heart' and thank you for opening the scenes that we might reflect on those who died needlessly. Humbly yours,-Marcia Schechinger

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DREAM LANDING

VEry nicely done, love how you put this one out there for the readers imagination to work on... -Felix Perry

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Non - ‘I’

Very expressive-seema chowdhury

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DIVING

The lilies must have been hippiastrums...they often have the colour of a blush about them. Smiles, love & blessings...-cherryk 

Very original and such a pleasure to read.-uncia2

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ON THIS SHORE OF LIFE

"Death will not wait... I want eternity" striking lines.-LightH2O

The world in a bright light, again behind the mind splendid-leafsailor

How far you will go? Earth was collapsing. Great!-nimal dunuhinga

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NEW GENERATION

Each becomes alien here, Sir. -P Nasrudheen, Kasaargod. Kerala
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REMEMBRANCE

Profound, insightful and thought-provoking. Thanks for sharing, Mr. Verma. -Padmama Iyengar, Secunderabad, A P

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THE TEAR OF THINGS

Tears say many things- Jvl narasimharao

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PERFECTION

I t is hard and impossible to reach that plato of perfection..Expecially in love...Nive write -Raggedyann

A stunning and memorable poem!-uncia2

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TEASING

Hauntingly beautiful and very ethereal.-uncia2

Very deep...Sensual and mysterious..-Raggedyann

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A SOUL DIES

This is truly beautiful. Thank you.-PegasusWhiteRose

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‘CROSSING THE BAR' ONCE AGAIN...

Oh a poignant write.-seema chowdhury

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TENDER RAGE

loved the oxymorons .... But always enjoy your reads-  afallenangel/h...

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GENEROSITY

Very well written, I enjoyed the read.
The last line pull it all together. -Adri

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A TREE WAS TALKING

DEEP POEM FOR A TREE TALKING..SMILES - Raggedyann

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TH REALITY SHOW

A gripping reality to ponder about.- LightH2O

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THE BIRTH OF A PUBLIC STANCE

I see and feel such oppressors and their dark power over humanity, a cry from an enlightened soul.- LightH2O

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2007! SO WHAT! !

"the freedom of anonymity" being thinking about these line for a while now. "Two thousand seven, and still our angular limbs cannot move the time." This last quote is so true and sad, it's sad to see such things go on.- LightH2O

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TENDER RAGE

This was a very deeep poem...Not sure I got the meaning out of it you wanted but none the less it took me to a place of bing lost..- Raggedyann

"waiting to cut the cord of resistence"..powerful-deep write...thank you for sharing-  seelie

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SHAMEFUL

Some very gripping imagery here, but I felt it was a bit disjointed. Still, I'm glad to have read it.
blessings,-  Sensual Sorceress 

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GYRATIONS

Makes me wonder what Buddha was reincarnated as? -Ronald Hull

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Breaking Dawn

is it an elegy? nice to read!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi


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Quenching

a lot of good message hidden as the seeds in the pomegranates. Good! I enjoyed reading this poem!-Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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Dirty Mirrors

so rebellious to issues- Nasarudheen.P.

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