Thursday, December 6, 2012

CAN YOU TAKE ME TO MY HOME?

Such deep heart felt lines.- LightH2O

Great penning with strong images.- narain, jay p.

"can you take me to my home, into abeyance" beautiful suspense! Amazing poem, I loved how it returns to somewhat the pass, then to the present, almost as if it were together ! truly brilliant !- esmeralda15

What a beautiful imagery you've made in this poem! Great write!- emilou g:)emotions in words

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