Saturday, February 27, 2016

Some Question Marks

Morning Sir: I really enjoyed this write and felt myself there. I always enjoy your posts and pleased you continue to grace Creative with your writes.-Lady Dragonwyck

Suspended Execution

Morning Sir. Very profound and thought provoking. Always enjoy your writes. -Lady Dragonwyck 

The Ending

Morning. I felt a lot from this write. I usually read your posts and really enjoy. -Lady Dragonwyck

Holding The Poems

Absolutely amazing...Nicely penned...-Randhir kaur

Nominated.5/5. Goodluck.-DarkLight

Friday, February 26, 2016

Disconnection

Genius or madman, I find your style mesmerizing.-Kelly Kurt

A Family Dust

a failed thirsty town harvested the moon and changed it into a reservoir for tears! ! what a pitiful state of my country and the countries alike, producing family dust! ! The poem makes me to be slightly sad and brave when digging the meaning of the lines down, Satish Vermaji..and it is the effect of your mesmerizing thought and writing. Thank you so much..Congratulations...-V S

Wow! What a unique way! Like walking into meditative circle to feel the essence of life.-Savita Tyagi

A unique concept written within a brilliantly woven imagery. Perfect 10. Thoughtprovoking poem.-Uzefa Rashida M.a

Heartiest Congratulation for Poem Of The Day.
A beautifully conceived meaningful and thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.10 + points-Ratnakar Mandlik

Poor and hungry! Thanks for sharing.-Edward Kofi Louis

Matter Of Fate

I have never heard things said quite the way you say them.-Kelly Kurt

I Will Write A Poem

Your writing intrigues me. Like being in an altered state. Peace-Kelly Kurt

A Family Dust

This poem took me for a wild ride!-Kelly Kurt

By Any Reckoning

Beautifully conceived poem with the help of minute observation and flight of imagery. Thanks for sharing.10 points.-Ratnakar Mandlik

Where Dreams Live

A poet could not be stood blind on world affairs and poem pertains to the subject.-Gangadharan Nair Pulingat

The Raging Storm

stone pelting becomes the daily ritual with a song! ! what an imagination! as usual amazing, Poet!-V S

Before The Sunset

If reading a good poem makes a morning worthwhile this is one of those morning for me. Thank you for sharing such a beautiful poem.-Savita Tyagi

*depression

A profound poem with many metaphors.-Howard Savage

Sting's Betrayal

A deep and well written poem...thank you for sharing :)-Abhilasha Bhatt

*impact

A collegium will stitch up the wound.
Once upon a caste the country will go.

beautiful poem...-Aarzoo Mehek

Blood Stained

The pains of life. Nice work.-Edward Kofi Louis

It Was Not Vicious

There are much things to learn about in this life. Nice work.-dward Kofi Louis

After Meeting God

Love should be a desirable thing; when we seek for peace. Nice work.-Edward Kofi Louis

Confronting The Unknown

Spirit and water! With the muse of creation. Nice work.-Edward Kofi Louis

The Daphnia

Niche poetry with fine free flow....Very touchy.-Mohammed Asim Nehal

The Daphnia

The other face; but, with the hope of life. Nice work. Thanks for sharing.-Edward Kofi Louis

The Rarest Thing

Lovely poem, the poem is composed with beautiful words and images, thanks for sharing-Shakil Ahmed

Cracked Open

Stepping out, from the
grave of body― you will throw
a reflection, of the nerves,
in a wreath.- -Beautiful lines from a great poet, i enjoy reading your poem, thanks for sharing.-Shakil Ahmed

Skirting The Book

I climb up the blue,
to unsolve the murder and go
into deep meditation to reject
the gods. The gold mine was flooded
by unprecdented rains of hands and footsteps. Beautiful lines, thanks for sharing.-Shakil Ahmed

A Space, A Dot, A Line

As the river of darknes squirms
You must face the dying earth -
Sustained - on prayers only
This poem is a lovely piece of work done by you, Satish Verma!-Clarence Prince

A Riddle Unsolved

Beautiful poem. Enjoyed the various aspects of the riddle. Thanks for sharing.10 points. -Ratnakar Mandlik

Crash-Landing

Verily, the chaste know how to preserve their chastity.-Abdulrazak Aralimatti

Gold Coins

well-composed poem, last stanza is beautiful- 'Shutting the lamps. No moths
will descend on the books― no
bleeding of the verse, so
you can become empty of arithmetic.-Shakil Ahmed

‘crossing The Bar' Once Again...

Brilliant write! Good ink!-Sofia Kioroglou

Karmic Influence

At the door; but, with the works od the truth. Nice work.-Edward Kofi Louis

Sunday, February 21, 2016

A Nonsensical Poem

"I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells."~Dr.Seuss :):):) Good job in fine tradition...- Kerry Reynolds

Saturday, February 20, 2016

ABSURD MYTHS

Satish, it was a pleasure reading. -Poet Destroyer A 

WORDS PLAY

wow, this one cuts deep...love it-Poet Destroyer A 

PARALYSED

Satish, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE-Poet Destroyer A 

GODS WERE CHANGING

I agree with you. -Poet Destroyer A 

Powerful write Satish... -Silent One 

A LONE JOURNEY

Satish, interesting...-Poet Destroyer A 

Well written Satish...-Silent One 

UNDERBELLY

love the imagery.-Poet Destroyer A 

So dark and symbolic Satish -Kelli White

Great write Satish..-Silent One 

INCINERATED

ouch... however reborn... Enjoyed. -Poet Destroyer A 

deep and dark my friend....-Silent One 

A LABYRINTHINE PASSAGE

WOW, that was EPIC... Poet Destroyer A 

Great write Satish...-Silent One 

THE NECTARINE BLISS

This is nice, I think it's a free verse... they read like senryu... -LINDA

great write Satish..-Silent One

THE SECRET PATH

deep and epic write... -LINDA

nice write Satish..-Silent One 

DISORIENTED

oh, yes the moon, I am a slave too. Awesome poem. -Poet Destroyer A 

A Call To Murder

This so cleverly worded, the poet presents the basic for a perfect murder, then finally blaming...This is like EAP in sententious format. Oh EAP? That stands for Edgar Allan Poe. Sir, this poem looks easy, but to create it it is not easy. This is indeed A Call To Murder, because of that unending scream. I like this intriguing poem very much, thank you for sharing.- Sylvia Frances Chan

Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Without Bargaining

I loved it, but really we need to know the price before we start bargaining. Honestly made me think about my life and the work for the corps ive done.-HumanInATree

Monday, February 15, 2016

Options

Real cool poem, I just felt I was robbed. Waiting and waiting on the end that never came. Great poem though. VaV-VOOM! -Vicky A Chai-Brocato

Losing Again

A beautifully poignant poem piercing the Bull’s eye. Bravo !-Aloke ( @Aloke_Mukherjee )

Saturday, February 13, 2016

Thursday, February 11, 2016

UNDERBELLY

So dark and symbolic Satish -Kelli White

Great write Satish..-Silent One 

Here Lies The Queen

I really enjoyed that thank you. You hold a lot of care in your words , keep the fire going . - Lucid dreamer

Resonates so strongly, becuase...Tears in my eyes shine for this, "dog eat dog", race of mine...Which share a hunger, I can't pretend... - Kerry Reynolds

*because.- Kerry Reynolds

Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Glitches

Just an awesome read! The imagery brought me to a point of such joyful enthusiasm; then in an instance, I saw it? (Damn) There was nothing left on my plate! Great read thanks. Write On!Vicky A Chai-Brocato

The Scream

I loved reading this. "Chasing a mysterious silence. The scream". This was wonderfully written.- Ace Sargent

I am sure you once heard often my silent screams. Bastard!!- Don Nguyen

I abandon my blog, just stick around here to blow it up, a just retribution. - Don Nguyen

Wednesday, February 3, 2016

Ancient Address

thought provoking poem. Is this about blindness and once being able to see?-patH