CROSSING TIME ZONES

The desert will return with vengeance ....................love this slice of life!- nimal p. dunuhinga 

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NOW AWAKENING

As always, a very unique and thought provoking poem from your pen.- InTheRain

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CROSSING TIME ZONES

Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem Sir!- Apoorva Raghunandan

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A HOT PATCH

When all else is lost love remains. I identify.- Rosella's Niece

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THE SHOOTING STAR

beautiful.- mamta agarwal

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STONED

Raw and haunting.- InTheRain

Fills the mind with many visions, enjoyed this read, is more like a realm in the dark of dreams, but in reality I am sure somewhere this images live, still fills the mind. - nitehawk

A horrifying, ghoulish yet fascinating poem. Sent shivers down my spine. Nicely penned. Best wishes. Eleanor - eleanor3168

The visions that you provided in this write were very dark. Poetry, in any form is as the writer sees and feels it. This was really a dark, and in depth. - JacieStralkoDuca

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MOVED EARTH

In this poem you convey strength, nobility and grace a fearless way to face death. This is exactly how I would like to face my death, in peace and having and intimate dialog and kind words of appreciation for her noble work.- LightH2O

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FOR A CAUSE

Some sad considerations here, I love the nobility expressed in the last stanza, "...and die for a cause."- LightH2O

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ART

Yes...let us, if only all art could provoke , create, or inspire such imagery.- theycallme life

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TRANSITIONAL EDGE

I agree. In was an honest read. I liked it, too.- steelrelease

Aside from your sudden shift from narrator to dialogueor in the second stanza, I enjoyed the read, albeit your usual fluxive structural movement was a bit anemic...In fact, the work actually smacked more of prose than contemporary free-verse. Perhaps the piece might be better served as one paragraph with right-margin-alignment...Either way, as I said above, I liked it.- Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR

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AWAY FROM THE HOME

Your wisdom is shown in this classic and beautiful example. Best regards, you are always in my heart.- LightH2O

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UBIQUITOUS BEING

Very inspiring. As always, your always marvelous perspective.- Lady Dragonwyck

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MUSE AND SORROW

Just Beautiful!- LightH2O

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GEOGRAPHY

Hey Girl, Only To Rise, Amid 'His' Palms So True ˜ Geography, For Me As You ? I Dig Your Beauty ˜ Happy Holidays- Johnny Rhinem

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EVENING: A SELF EXPERIENCE

Feels very in-depth and I can relate to the feelings. As always, I so enjoy your writes. - Lady Dragonwyck

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ARCHAIC HUMOUR

I meant "these"- LightH2O

Well this archaic bones certainly have humor in them. You amaze me.- LightH2O

must recommend- eafsailor

Always a wonderful voice to contemplate ,always amazing- leafsailor

Rage surges forward in the bones of archaic humour... It does. A good write. A great line.- Some Girl

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Salvaging

I feel this honest presence with your words, and you truly provoke the reader. What really caught my eye was the hestitation you have, the questions you hold about spiritualism in life and nature. I know I've heard many say religion is just an institution whereas when you are spiritual, it is a more personal relationship that can be fulfilled. Will have to read this a few more times...

The second part of the poem I feel you are aware you are being called to something and want to understand it. Whether it be the mystery of God or other religions. What truly defines reilgion? Is it our safehouse or our way out of reality, to justify actions and seek happiness?
That last image of the failing lights was unexpected. I love how you brought this image out that kind of tied in with nature, dusk perhaps, and why a day must end without answers even.

Lots to ponder in this piece. I thought this could be in the life section as well? Anyway, glad you shared this and congrats on the win!- Poet on the Piano

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TENDERNESS

The kiss of a flame,
after the perfect
sketch.

^^I like this opening. For it shows desire that
has been sparked by a beauty...in a way its very romantic too!

The geometry
ignites the ice.
It falls, fiery particles.

^^I like how you have weaved nature and human feelings into one. I've an image of a very passionate couple in love. The word, "geometry" has taken the place of a woman's physique and one leads to another. Maybe I'm wrong but the message here sets a fiery, passionate mood.

The space shrinks.
Glided slope.
How can you stop?

^^Oh yeah..I will not delve deep into this. All I will say is I've enjoyed reading this! Excellent!- Meena Krish

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Heart Of The Matter

A man,
in the shadow of a child,
walks, for the sake of
phylogenesis.

^^This opening stanza creates an image
with lots to think about. Where an adult walks
down a path in the woods where he once used
to go when he was a child perhaps..?


The Great Bustard,
was on the brink of
extinction. Somebody
was not an achiever.

^^Either this is talking about a person/or one
of nature's spot that has failed to achieve its
beauty or goal...I'm just guessing here.

Seeking,
an inborn god in thighs,
for running faster than light,
weightless, faceless.

^^An interesting stanza here. I've old mythological images playing through my mind
while reading this!

Dust will take,
dust for the dark matter
sequencing a disaster.
The animal within roars.

^^Hmmm..you know this poem has got my mind working really hard to grasp the meaning behind these words. Reading this to me it shows that patience has limits..whether it refers to human or nature.

All in all a very intriguing read that has gotten me to think deep into it...good one!- Meena Krish

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The Woods Are Burning

A very interesting write. The images in each
stanza is vivid and I guess it talks about how the
beauty of mother nature is been ravished by
greed..at least that is what I got from this write.
Liked the read.- Meena Krish

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Overwhelming

One who has renounced everything and gives himself to nature by protecting and trying not to kill any small living thins yet with the very simple things he steps on dies..once again I'm guessing here..- Meena Krish

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I AM THINKING

I'm reading this and wish I could comment on it without sounding stupid! For your poems hold something more deeper than what it says and that makes this write thought provoking as well as sentimental to some level...- Meena Krish

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BIRTH UNTAINTED

Tis Obvious As Wonderful, Knowing, That Many Lives About This Globe Worship, Our Heavenly Holy Father, Amid Different Lights Yet A Light All The Same * Faith, Speaks In Truth Yes, That One Day 'His Children,' Shall Be Gathered Together Amid Love's Arms ˜ No Shadows Nor Squeeking Doors Haunting Passages Sceaming, Babies Waking From Nightmares. You Are Very Special And Your Poetry, Profound Of Beauty ˜ Happy Life To You, Better, 'Happy Holidays' - Johnny Rhinem

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UNZIPPED

cool- labchaddy

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SUICIDAL WISH

An Interesting and Cryptic dark poem. Enjoyed the read.- Starry Knight

Lovely vivid images you portray here, almost as if I can see them right before my eyes. An ever changing canvas for all to enjoy.- Sue_Pinkston

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CUP OF DARKNESS

I Absolutely Love This Piece. You are a Deep, Vivid Writer.- Lindz

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FIGHTERS AT LARGE

that was amazing. wonderfully penned.- Nilla

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THE WHEEL

Onward we march to our destination and hopefully final rest after we complete and repair our past lives. - Lady Dragonwyck

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VOYAGE

Well crafted- seema chowdhury

Amazing metaphor used in this gem of verse Satish. That perfect last line reminds us of your masterly way with the pen.- Fay Slimm

Dear Satish I like the rhythm and flow of the poem. Moreover, your choice of words is amazing.- omer

Wonderful write, sir. Thanks as always for sharing with us.- cjblaze

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DRAMA

what a beautiful poem you have penned. I really enjoyed reading this, Thank you, for sharing your words.-Sue_Pinkston

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UNBELIEF

I like the last few lines especially. Thanks.- cjblaze

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WITH APOLOGIES

what is in a name? what is in a name? Most of the names have some meaning in many of our languages., but the modern names are hard to be understood..Nice poem with lots of good flavors..- Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

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UNBELIEF

I like the last few lines especially. Thanks.- cjblaze

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DIRTY HOMES

Nicely expressed;- Weeping willow

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BETWEEN FEAR AND COURAGE

like- labchaddy

Beautiful sir as various thoughts Keep wriggling out as I read this write thanks for sharing- Rohit

Sublime, profound and thought-provoking. Excellent penning!-Mountaineer

I second that comment by Nikunj to the letter.-cjblaze

A wonderful dialouge that poses questions , stirs the mind and conscience through a versatile poetic effort . It's a privilege to read this poem.-Nikunj

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WHOLE TRUTH

Man has become superior to god. A pleasant line!- nimal p. dunuhinga

for so long.- leafsailor

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HOPE AND BANALITY

Quite heavy and deep in subject matter- RonaldLearner

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REASONING

you have caught the moment of time......and the directions of the winds...very well!- malinikadir

Beautiful,and so well penned. Exquisite,Sue- Sue_Pinkston

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LAYERED ACHES

If there is no witness there is no crime.- Ultra Violet 

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A REPLICA

Wow. Just an array of gems, line after line. An endless
game, where it loses itself and takes on another shape.
The source of it, ah! That's the catch. Just a portion of what I took from this. Loved it Mr. Verma. Excellent write Friend.- bubblegutzbrown 

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JILTED

I liked the opening lines. Very clever. Very reality based, you can find these scenarios in contemporary headlines. And as always, you've a very creative way in expressing yourself. , Respect.- bubblegutzbrown 

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NON REAL

Gripping! the last stanza ends this is a softer note.- LightH2O

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BROKEN DAM

Your poetry is both beautiful and challenging.- InTheRain

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FALLING APART

"You squat on the cinders of untruths" - I love it.- Cindy

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CURVED IN

This is so tender, I just love this incredibly beautiful poem - Thank you Satish !! - Anne Lise Andresen

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LIFTING

nice write. very inspirational...- Mister Supernova

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SYSTEM

A vivid write sir! Good metaphors in this poem also. Thanks for sharing!- cjblaze

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