IT DOES NOT MATTER

Satish, as always a pleasure to read and comment on your fine work. Best to you!-  LightH2O

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What wonderful poetry you all are sharing with us today. I have enjoyed reading yours today Satish. I hope the rest of the week finds you with much inspiration in your heart and you will continue to share your writing. Love,-  Carol Brown

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THE DEBRIS

I am enjoying reading some very diverse poetry today. I am glad yours was amongst the ones posted here that I was able to read and enjoy Satish. Love, Carol Brown

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THE CALLER

Morning reading sure does get the mind buzzing. Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry Satish. Have a fabulous weekend and I hope to see more of your poetry when I get back to the Soup Monday. Usually pretty busy on the weekends with family so don't get to read much. Love,-  Carol Brown

This poem is well titled as it Calls to me great poetic verses. Nice job-  Kevin Clark

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CHARITY

you have some very good lines in this one, my favorite one is, "The crowd thins as tall stalwarts autumn-wished, begin to shed the pretentions." Enjoyed! hugs,-  Catie Lindsey

good work..........- Patrick Cornwall

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PAIN KILLER

Thank you for sharing your poetry with us Satish. I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today. Will be back another day to read more. Love, - Carol Brown

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MELTDOWN

"Every other person a demi – god " this line says it all. This lack of humility, acceptance and love for others is the cause of much suffering in he world.-  LightH2O
mean is i drink words-  leafsailor


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Once upon...

I was still pursuing fidelity
in the rubble of meaningless life;
some deep lines!!! lovely work...- Safiyyah, UK

I loved reading it, especially the deep philosophy reflected in the end.-Baishali, Hyderabad

Images at times exotic and sometimes strange you use to decorate your themes, often touching the borders of philosophy. I have a strong liking for your compositions, Satish saheb.-Kumarendra Mallick, Hyderabad

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AGE OF THE STRAW

Which is more significant, life or nothing, or are they equal, one and the same?-  Kailashana

everything consumed in void ,in vacuum what is left is one ,one uniform without any form black hole consumed all...-   zorba

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OUTRAGEOUS

The moon comes as an image reflection and then it was gone covered… I am trying to visualize the feeling of despair, as we stop to care what is around us. The feeling that the poem gives to me is this, Evoking and powerful.-  Dolphine29 

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WHAT HAS TO STAY

I read this poem four times, and I liked it more each time. It is original, with beautiful associations and compassions for the victims. I think the second stanza encapsulates the central problem: only a stifled or unfulfilled individual would want to partake in slaughter, and the top dogs exploit this lack of fulfillment for the sake of their agenda. The last three lines are memorable. Satish, you're among the best poets on this site. Recommended. -Yacov Mitchenko

I find this stanza so beautiful and interesting, "No spinal pain for candles to burn in courtyard of sunken faith. " I enjoy reading you poem.- LightH2O

it is a form of love no less your poems bring light into a shadow mind ,i feel much better thank you-  leafsailor

Excellent! I love the depth and wording in this well crafted write! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City. www.romeodellavalle.com- Romeo Della Valle

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BY THE WORDS

Powerful words. -  LightH2O

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SULKING

I understand....I feel this way often Satish.....brilliant again....you are SO TALENTED!-  James Marshall Goff 

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FAREWELL

Satish, this is amazing......leaps of association incredibly accomplished...-  James Marshall Goff

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CALENDAR

Interesting images come alive in my mind with your poem.-  LightH2O
it makes my love laugh for your health.-  leafsailor



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SONG OF BLUE

This was so amazing, full of meaningful lines... too many to quote. May you be filled with love and harmony.-  LightH2O

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GREEN PASTURES

Oh wow what lurid metaphors and poetry
that will keep us puzzling for a while,
this is colourful.-  Ann Waddicor

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Discretion

A really great poem, really liked it.
A really fantastic write.
May i invite you to read my new poem called,
A Seamless life line.-  Dave Walker

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A Cuckoo Sings

what a beautiful poem-  arushi

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FROM LIDS

Viperous flashes of colour as your verse,
that I cannot see now,
flicked its words down the page
like the brush of a powerful emperor
in ancient China, painting his canvas,
his journey of mind so strongly expressed.
I enjoyed this immensely.-  Ann Waddicor

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ONE HUNDRED LAMENTS

"A fantastic dream of soap bubbles ..." much going on here...this write reminds me of Alice in Wonderland, but the "R" rated version.- LightH2O 

yet again i wonders with you beyond words into a forest of sighs ,dancing dreams my friend ,dancing dreams- - leafsailor 

look at this sweet 'ol lady. that's the life talking. verma - good for you. add a bit of champagne and prostitute sexy men, few paintings and some rants with a pearls around your neck and silk on your legs - you've got yourself a good retirement.-  sasha nevskaya

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ADAM’S MEND

So much behind your words... I thank you for sharing.-  LightH2O

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THIS ODYSSEY

Enjoyed your poetry this today Satish, thank you for sharing love and light- vienna bombardieri

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FAREWELL

Very interesting lines, makes me think...best to you.- LightH2O 

well written verse. enjoyed it.-  heather wilkins 

I needed to read your words -

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A grand poem!...Touching my senses! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing-  Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2


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BROKEN PROMISE

Satish this is a lovely poem,bravo. - oxox hugs -Anne Lise Andresen

hmmm... somber writing. Enjoyed! Hugs,- Catie Lindsey

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ONLY BEING

I agree with Patrick, what a lovely way to start my morning Satish. It is here 6:15 A.M. as I read your words full of wisdom.-  LightH2O

This work has pleased my morning and touches my soul thoughts. I am privileged to read such wisdom in poetic verse.-  Patrick Islington

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PINK EYES

So much violence, pain and grief, but like you say, "silence. Nonviolence accepts the evil.." tfs.-  LightH2O

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JUDGEMENT

Wow! this is very strong "The rape was only your fault, you had to die." a very hard card to deal with. But nice to know the soul had left for home.-  LightH2O

this is the fire of truth,so well done . tears on your thirst-  leafsailor

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FALLING

Great observations, well penned.-  LightH2O

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A SPIRITS TALE

Interesting work..I am not sure that I understand the meaning..Sad though..-  Sara Kendrick

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PREDATORY

sO much to ponder about..powerful poem...Charma- Charmaine Chircop

I really like this poem, but i especially like the line "they were fighting with broken swords"- Kennedy Elizabeth


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CANNOT HOLD

That last stanza is so strong and deep...well penned.-  LightH2O

This gives me shivers,, it is a poem to the senses our world to day of deception and fear ,quick death justified by all,.this a way of speaking dreams ,i think this is a masterful piece of work ,but it still is completely honest,really fine-  leafsailor

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REMINDER

This is so touching, that angel taking the bullet without blindfold, purity is courageous... and then the "... gods of masses..." this title slaps me back to reality.-  LightH2O
Sure, Time must not look back...................its not meant to do so. a nice write.-  seema chowdhury

we walk the same path,this poem reaches in the lighting is there i really love your work-  leafsailor

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NEW GENERATION

the metal children how well you see them-  leafsailor

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PREDATORY

Brilliant!-  LightH2O

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RETURN ON D-DAY

I believe there is only one on this earth who writes like you.

very original

what a journey- Dan J. Mazurek 

Morning, Sir. I really liked the last stanza. I always enjoy your writes.-  Lady Dragonwyck

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A SPIRIT’S TALE

First stanza breaks my heart, that poor mother. The other stanzas paint a sad picture also. -  LightH2O 

Nice write and good flow of words to bring this message to light. -  LightH2O

So true and sad. Great write. -  allenpaulson

The wind blows/ the leaves fall./ And the bones grow/ cold in the ground/ and no-one is satisfied. A poet friend...RH Peat- allenpaulson

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FALLING

It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Satish. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, -  Carol Brown

What a poem! The world is really going to hell in a hand-basket and the devil and his demons are dancing in glee.-  Jancarl Campi

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