Wednesday, February 1, 2012

A SPIRIT’S TALE

First stanza breaks my heart, that poor mother. The other stanzas paint a sad picture also. -  LightH2O 

Nice write and good flow of words to bring this message to light. -  LightH2O

So true and sad. Great write. -  allenpaulson

The wind blows/ the leaves fall./ And the bones grow/ cold in the ground/ and no-one is satisfied. A poet friend...RH Peat- allenpaulson

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